Vi vs Geo Round 1 Feverish Rap Battle Tournament
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| Started: | 1/13/2010 | Category: | Entertainment |
| Updated: | 7 months ago | Status: | Voting Period |
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 Pro Check it, my flow be flawless For Diamonds rain without rest This is why they call me Neptune My beat stellar, yours a mess Introductions aren't required For Geo has found me out Galileo-scoped my route Now he believes, with no doubt I'm the puppeteer, you see Swing the threads of string theory Rhymes so gravitational my big bang makes them chicks weary Check this vibrational Your big clang not for the hearing Slow like black holes, flow don't end This can't be natural, let's not pretend Do they like you where you're from? The the real world don't want them some If you're happening in Vegas Then you better stay there, Son I'm so killah', I'm so smooth Operator here to seduce You're so wack your trippin' face You just can't keep with ma' pace Geo, see - you know the deal Clown sees aliens - for real They said take me to your leader So he took them straight to me, here  Con Yo, this is the cosmic rebirth of the greatest MC The stellar mage performin chemical alchemy Levitatin the seven seas and drownin all of my enemies The entered apprentice initiated into the mysteries I know you be thinkin cynically, but I'm not even finished see I know it's a tragedy, don't get mad at me, rhymes are hazardly Uttered emphatically, impacted drastically, eradicate the fallacy The psychosomatic, the post-traumatic Rhyme acrobatic esoteric flowmatic Never been able can't kick the habit, this is madness, it's tragic I know Rhymes slaughter millions like an apocalyptic cyclone The tight flow raging psycho versed in tai bo, this a no fly zone You might get picked out of the sky by my verbal projectiles Checkin the hidden repository of secretly kept files The power to control your mind like Illuminati Drivin around findin a place to dump ya body, nobody saw me Peep me creepin the reaper never stop sleepin I'm deep in, yo bloody body be leakin This is the death defyin, leave you cryin, master rhymin monster You ain't a worthy competitor, you eliminated from the roster You thought I was jokin when I said I would destroy you, but this is for real I'm a professional assassin rakin the cash in, burnin you with liquid hot steel Chasin you with a knife, I'm snatchin and hatchin ya life Dare to battle me again, you outta be thinkin twice I'm decapitatin yo head and stuffin it the blender Try rappin now, get rejected like retern-to-sender, me no pretender I'm aimin a optical blue ray and it's headin your way I'm sendin a tropical hurricane right in front of your door way I don't care what you say, I'm the arbiter deliverin doomsday Your bloody body was depicted dismembered in the diagram So I'ma complete my mission and continue rippin out your diaphragm If you really wanna get at me then we can go I be pickin up your body and slammin to the floor I don't even know why you wanna battle me, I'm incredibly lyrical I'm the greatest contender really, even though you can't hear it though So many have tried, many have died But my rappin technique is unparalleled I'm finna make this lyrical battle a maniacle scary hell This is a new kind of vernacular, far more spectacular I'm findin new ways of attackin ya, let me get back at ya My flow be floodin you with a deluge of epic proportions This new type of rhymin is energetic like torsion My rhymes are beyond sophisticated, imbeded with equations This is the Grand Unified Hip Hop Theoretical dissertation |
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Pro (No music) What should we chalk that s*** up to? Schizophrenia, hyperventilation? You sound like you're shay-ken Good gracious, I couldn't understand a single correlation Please! Put that nut up in a space station! Earth can't possibly be the place for him! Are you serious, Neo - damn I mean Geo You sound like you're telling me fortunes, Should I be paying you quarters, Miss Cleo? The only flow you've got is from PMS Your distress and wrath don't impress you need to progress to fluid beats for success boy just listen to some real finesse the only way into a girl's panties is with a steady caress Quit the Aggression, slow it down proper fashion smooth and steady is how you make some real passion (Music) This is how you make love with the beat hip hop is a woman and you've got to be sweet Everyone's riding my melody, steadily You're only supplying nightmares like you're Freddy The only thing going "brrring brrring" is my telephone they all got the hots for me, asking me bring um home Where you from, Scotty? Beam you to the moon? You're a monsoon? Correct, you blew more than Monica, typhoon For give me for bangin' away at this beat as you sway Don't topple over like London bridge on that ridge, from the "edgy" you think you ah' you'll just fall, down the cliff, oh boy, if only if, something saved you from this, disastrous diss Could of swore you were Courtney Love, from above so f***** monstrous, please don't empty you're whole cartridge all you'll be smokin's cigars for this making you roll like you took a hit I'm ecstasy, while versing me you get freaky, and then you plea with your talk of gutting and cutting my gut-see for going up against this sexy lady MC Cuz I got my mind on the money, and money's on my mind! people just love gin and juice, cuz it's quite the excuse to seduce these girls, and get girls for use And crowd loved my first verse, and, this is the sequel well everyone except for that f***** Leethal Who's too much a p**** to submit his own spit He couldn't excel, so he got crushed by L Your lines so abhor-us, you sound like thesaurus please Geo, don't! Please don't bore us! ease off the hardcore rush And try to sound a lot more like me, and brush- that dirt off your shoulder Con Yo, it's the merciless Copernicus, certified and murderous You ain't ever heard of this, you certainly could learn from this It's the rhyme sayer, mind bender from the time chamber My lines greater, deadly instrumental like Slayer The hip hop God of cosmogenesis You askin how, so I present evidence Ever since then, I've never had a nemesis Nevertheless, I rip these raps, tippin hats I'm lockin and loadin and flippin these gats Masterin language, no anguish, I'm slangin these raps Intensive scientific experiments prove I'm the best So come and test, and you'll find I'm above the rest, nothin less My astronomical anatomical, library of raps and chronicles The Leviathan deliverin lines that make you die again Wanna live forever, I'll freeze you in my cryogen Rhyme accelerator, my style's hella greater You can come into my space station via elevator Visions of illusory hallucination mind polluted from a deluded nation Population suffers from mass hypnosis and cognitive psychosis I know this, the transcendental power of time gnosis Electrifying rhymes extremely high voltage Discover the secret doctrine from inside the box I keep it locked in I'm mixin new rhymes and beats for this rhythmic concoction My rhymes are infinite, you limited, beyond historical Remote viewing the future, ahead of time like oracle Strollin through the park every now and then with the wisdom of Tao and Zen Too many divisions have been brought upon man I'm the wisest of all among them This orchestrated chaos was designed to rip your face off I've been workin hard for this, it will definitely pay off Explore the profundity of nothingness Hip hop music, I can't get enough of this Let me take you on a serpentine odyssey, no need to act modestly Honestly, these are the greatest times to be alive, unearth the archive Combined the greatest minds, our aim is beyond the mission to survive The fountain of knowledge leaves me reinvigorated Expandin my mind, dogmatic doctrines incinerated Innovative rhymes are prolifically cryptic My journey takes me on the path of the ecliptic I terraform all the galaxies across the cosmos The light bearer, illuminated anthropos My flow is fluid like Venetian, the Druids and Phoenicians The attainment and elucidation of the mysterium Wakin the sleeping masses out of delirium This is the peak of classical literary art Architectually subtle geographical arch Dialect monistic framework of polarity I'm a beast, but please don't be scared of me Ambient serenity, you ain't ahead of me My rhymes are heavenly multiplied by seventy Now let me take you back to the pre-deluvian era One more time, before I unleash Peruvian terror My technique is lawless, flawless with no error This verse is an immaculate galactic shift You've been dismantled can't hold a candle to this |
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Vote Placed by C.Artificavitch 5 months ago
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Vote Placed by Paris 5 months ago
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-Correction to my previous comment-
Most judgements were extremely even, one judge being a notable exception (no, not Leet who never gave me a proper RFD.)
The points just go to Vi but I think I would perhaps still have gone for another round with the results so close.
Vi's banning makes the whole issue pretty insignificant though and Geo is in the next round anyway.
Lyrics: Vi - Geo certainly seemed to use as much of the thesaurus as humanly possible, but big words aren't the only thing to make a rap battle; While Geo's lyrics were better in Round 2, it was too little too late; Vi's lyrics were consistently relevant, funny, and rhymed well.
Flow: Vi - Vi was riding the beat nicely in both rounds, and her voice seemed very melodic and confident, almost taunting, in both rounds. This made her verses all the more hard-hitting, as her disses were reflected not only in her lyrics, but in her vocal style. Geo, on the other hand, seemed rushed much of the time. His Round 1 was extremely fast, and very off-beat; there were also many instances in Round 2 in which he was not following the beat, though his speed improved. It's hard to appreciate the beauty of his multi-syllabic rhymes when he doesn't provide enough time for them to wash over one's ears - also, Geo had a greater tendency to make the novice mistake of putting unnecessary strain on the wrong syllables, especially on the words at the end of each line; while Vi made this mistake a few times here and there (especially in Round 2), it was hardly noticeable compared to Geo, where every instance stuck out.
Presentation: Vi - This was decided in Round 2 for me: Vi's initial and closing comments are one of the things that did it for me. While Geo went straight through the rap and stopped, Vi took the time to make those little stylistic tweaks, like the no-beat rap at the beginning of Round 2, for another example. Additionally, Geo's sound quality was absolutely awful all throughout the battle. Even had his speed been consistently acceptable, the condition of his recording equipment would have made listening to him more a burden than a blessing.
Disses: Vi - Most of Geo's lyrics were irrelevant to the battle. Honestly, I couldn't really pick up on any solid disses on his part. Vi had a lot of good one throughout, though, that were specifically t
Lyrics:
This one goes to Geo. He had more complex rhymes and concepts and had immense creativity integrated into his verse.
Presentation:
Tied. Both were on the same field as far as presentation of the video goes.
Disses:
Vi_Veri. She had many more personal disses which I feel are more difficult to make and, perhaps consequentially, harder hitting then generic battle rhymes that I felt Geo used.
Flow:
Vi_Veri. She stayed on beat in both of her raps while Geo really only stayed on beat in Round 2.