The Instigator
GeoLaureate8
Pro (for)
Winning
38 Points
The Contender
Danielle
Con (against)
Losing
32 Points

DDO Advanced Rap Battle

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Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 1/28/2011 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Voting Period
Viewed: 5,375 times Debate No: 14555
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GeoLaureate8

Pro

Traditional style text rap battle. My opponent can set it off in the first round. There will be two battle rounds, two raps for each opponent. The final half of the third round will be blank.
Danielle

Con

Verse 1

You must be outta practice cuz your talent's stagnant like a freeze frame
It's outta habit that I fvck people like rabbits up in these games
Think you'll de-throne me? Let's make it clear - when I rhyme I am Elizabeth
Can't own me - next to you I'm Shakespeare and you're illiterate

No you're a little bitch who prolly stinks just like a litter sh!t
Why else would you start a conflict just to pu$s away from it?
Now you expect me to respect thee after this battle you've issued?
That's BS dude and PS you make it too easy to diss you

Here's the empirical evidence - I've got lyrical eloquence
You'll need a miracle against my strategical reverance
You scream you need a remedial second chance -
Your menial verses ( vs. ) my congenial reference

Escalator, test the hater - take you to a higher level
Can't fake the fire like a liar when I'm hot as the devil
Revel in my - sensational syllables
Schooling you like an educational principal

First lesson's you're less than me with the pencil
In hand understand I flow transcendental
The beast that arises through my lyrical lines is
At least as high in the sky as signs on high-rises

I'm undefeatable - it's unbelievable
I'm good all year round like a heated pool
With a spectacular vernacular I'm nefarious
Delivering criticisms in witticisms - hilarious

I demand tricks like hand stands with semantics
Dismantle your chance quick as high bandwith
You can't advance when Geo this man spits
My wit persists - he knows I lift like a bandit

No tact: in fact you're a watered down Macklemore
You'll be back I'm sure; for now you're an amateur
I'll attack you as fast as fat whores snatch food off the floor
With my syntax even the Buddha can't relax anymore

Let me guess - you'll try to impress, finesse with big words
I suggest you accept that I'm the boss - I don't need work
I'm bright as a meteor - you can bet it's for metaphor
Ahead when I'm beating ya, you'll still beg me for more

I seize the beast inside, give peace of mind - yoga
Kicking it wit' em I emit infinite wisdom like Yoda
A toast to this roller coaster life I'm living
It's fitting to make the most of what I've been given

Don't be mad though cuz you're in my shadow
Just when I battle I feel at home like a chateau
You think you're better or even half as clever as me?
Never see - I'm a veteran ahead of the scene

I'm so sick I might need some medicine themes
Whatever I deem flow-worthy it seems
Festers in dreams... A go-getter, a goal setter's scheme
Is to reign this regime in a sweater and tight jeans

I maintain I'm supreme cuz you're plain and extreme
Your raps all sound mainly, insanely obscene
You wanna talk about the universe with unique verbs?
I can speak those words til it hurts - kick you to curb

I got analogies wrapped up my sleeves
So I hope my lap-top don't freeze
This miss is vicious - opponents I dismiss em
I make em my victims when I own em - just listen

Witness as my fitness puts me in the position
To fix sh!t quick within this like a prescription
So I don't know if you've listened since the beginning
But any battle I christen is a battle I'm winning...

Good luck
Debate Round No. 1
GeoLaureate8

Pro

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Verse 1


I'm like Charles Manson, I kill everybody without layin a single hand on you
I'mma smash on you and spray radioactive gas on you
You better think quick cause I'm about to spit some sick sh!t on a real tip
I lash you with my futuristic electrode-combustible whip, I'm fvcking untouchable b!tch
I've got the mind of a psycho-analyst, philosopher philanthropist that'll make you slash your wrists
My rhymes are as sick as cancer is
I'mma get fvckin violent on you like a Black Panther activist
Now let me astral project with my land rover jet
Hand over my check before I run over your neck
I'm the mothafvckin rap giant, half lion, leave you f@gs cryin in Iraq dyin
That's what you get for denyin the Protocols of the Elders of Zion
So quit tryin, I'm a rebel on another level, hotter than a blue devil
Hot enough to melt the most solid metal, hyper as fvck and I won't settle
I got the precise myopic, wired up fiber optic aimed at ya when my cyber-glock spit
You don't know how much I got in this clip but I'm about to show you when I start rockin n sh!t
Rhymes grander than the entire Multiverse
You sufferin fatal blows cause my multis hurt
I've got the Eastern holistic cognition
I leave blisters on you when I go ballistic, now give me my recognition
My rhymes out the speaker reverberate and straight murders these fakes
I leave you runnin from a murderous chase
The court will have never even heard of this case
Cause I'm your worst nightmare straight out of a fvckin horror movie
Michael Myers, Jason, and Freddy combined into one person with a submachine Uzi
Slice up your guts with a knife, machete, and claws make you feel all woozy
I'm true to the streets, I cruise over beats, I leave your damn crew dead on the beach
I spark up the heat and mark your defeat, I'm fvckin elite now bow to my feet
This battle ain't even fair, but you're really starting to test my patience
Now I'm at the Nevada test site releasin shells to let out my frustration
I'mma rip you and leave you dead at the bus station
Then toss you to the bottom of the ocean with the crustaceans
Cause my guns blazin, swift like a ninja star Asian who emerged from the Florida basin
Your flesh is what I'm cravin, so I might find ya remains in a cake tin in my safe haven
And to make matters worse, the roof of your house just caved in cause I came in
Got a wrecking ball and straight maimed the sh!t cause you didn't give me my last payment b!tch
I'm angry as sh!t and it's about to get dangerous
But I'm done for now, I just confounded your mind like angel dust



Danielle

Con

Danielle forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 2
GeoLaureate8

Pro

This will now just be a one round battle.
Danielle

Con

Aww! I wish we coulda done two, but c'est la vie.
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by F-16_Fighting_Falcon 3 years ago
F-16_Fighting_Falcon
How can some people vote for themselves and others can't?
Posted by Danielle 3 years ago
Danielle
Maybe you wouldn't give off that impression if you weren't such a cry baby. Wah :'(
Posted by m93samman 3 years ago
m93samman
So would most gullible people.
Posted by Danielle 3 years ago
Danielle
Ha. I believe it.
Posted by m93samman 3 years ago
m93samman
I'm so offended. Dear, oh dear, to whence hath my mum disappeareth? I require to nestle in her bosom.
Posted by Danielle 3 years ago
Danielle
Here, allow me to yell at Vi for you, and then after doing so we will be even...

*** Vi_Veri! HOW DARE YOU! Why would you vote on this debate?!?! You gave me 3 points (standard) for arguments because you thought I had the better verse?! Well that is simply unacceptable! You are stupid and childish and immature! In fact, you are never getting laid again! This was WRONG for you to do. ***

So, samman, we are even.

Oh and don't you DARE tell me to stfu and expect me to care/listen to a word you say. I'm still talking... go cry about it. Go write a thread about how you told me to shut up and I didn't.
Posted by m93samman 3 years ago
m93samman
http://i53.tinypic.com...

He's 12, in case you're wondering why I reciprocating childishness with him. The whole "noob" thing is something that makes him laugh. And laugh at me, that's fine. I enjoy my brother more than you would enjoy laughing at us, by far.
Posted by m93samman 3 years ago
m93samman
Did you not see the screenshot that I publicized that has me telling him not to do it?

Oh wait, you're omni-awesome and it doesn't matter because you know everything.

Again, stfu.
Posted by Danielle 3 years ago
Danielle
And by the way, I find it absolutely hilarious, samman, that you had the audacity to talk about "vote bombing friends" when tvellalott pointed out to me that your BROTHER vote-bombed in your favor on YOUR rap battle. I see you didn't correct his vote, so essentially, you're just a scathing hypocrite (I didn't tell Vi to vote on this debate either). So, what say you? Should I make a thread about it calling everybody's attention to how lulz you are? Or should I let it go? Hmm.
Posted by Danielle 3 years ago
Danielle
By "correcting your vote," I meant I was making it back to a TIE again since Geo and I mutually agreed to discontinue to the debate. You just chose to get butt hurt about it and attention-whore yourself in a thread. Similarly, I voted for Geo to keep it a TIE. Cry about it.
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Reasons for voting decision: even though con forfeited, she still had better lines and better delivery. She had more creative imagery while pros lines were uneven
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Reasons for voting decision: Pro bodied her. End.
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Reasons for voting decision: Both were great! Tie.
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Reasons for voting decision: Con had a better rap..
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Reasons for voting decision: simply because although L was lyrically ok geo was better So I read it again for acussation of v bomb Credit I due where it due
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