DDO Advanced Rap Battle
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| Started: | 1/28/2011 | Category: | Entertainment |
| Updated: | 2 years ago | Status: | Voting Period |
| Viewed: | 4,078 times | Debate No: | 14555 |
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 Pro  Con You must be outta practice cuz your talent's stagnant like a freeze frame It's outta habit that I fvck people like rabbits up in these games Think you'll de-throne me? Let's make it clear - when I rhyme I am Elizabeth Can't own me - next to you I'm Shakespeare and you're illiterate No you're a little bitch who prolly stinks just like a litter sh!t Why else would you start a conflict just to pu$s away from it? Now you expect me to respect thee after this battle you've issued? That's BS dude and PS you make it too easy to diss you Here's the empirical evidence - I've got lyrical eloquence You'll need a miracle against my strategical reverance You scream you need a remedial second chance - Your menial verses ( vs. ) my congenial reference Escalator, test the hater - take you to a higher level Can't fake the fire like a liar when I'm hot as the devil Revel in my - sensational syllables Schooling you like an educational principal First lesson's you're less than me with the pencil In hand understand I flow transcendental The beast that arises through my lyrical lines is At least as high in the sky as signs on high-rises I'm undefeatable - it's unbelievable I'm good all year round like a heated pool With a spectacular vernacular I'm nefarious Delivering criticisms in witticisms - hilarious I demand tricks like hand stands with semantics Dismantle your chance quick as high bandwith You can't advance when Geo this man spits My wit persists - he knows I lift like a bandit No tact: in fact you're a watered down Macklemore You'll be back I'm sure; for now you're an amateur I'll attack you as fast as fat whores snatch food off the floor With my syntax even the Buddha can't relax anymore Let me guess - you'll try to impress, finesse with big words I suggest you accept that I'm the boss - I don't need work I'm bright as a meteor - you can bet it's for metaphor Ahead when I'm beating ya, you'll still beg me for more I seize the beast inside, give peace of mind - yoga Kicking it wit' em I emit infinite wisdom like Yoda A toast to this roller coaster life I'm living It's fitting to make the most of what I've been given Don't be mad though cuz you're in my shadow Just when I battle I feel at home like a chateau You think you're better or even half as clever as me? Never see - I'm a veteran ahead of the scene I'm so sick I might need some medicine themes Whatever I deem flow-worthy it seems Festers in dreams... A go-getter, a goal setter's scheme Is to reign this regime in a sweater and tight jeans I maintain I'm supreme cuz you're plain and extreme Your raps all sound mainly, insanely obscene You wanna talk about the universe with unique verbs? I can speak those words til it hurts - kick you to curb I got analogies wrapped up my sleeves So I hope my lap-top don't freeze This miss is vicious - opponents I dismiss em I make em my victims when I own em - just listen Witness as my fitness puts me in the position To fix sh!t quick within this like a prescription So I don't know if you've listened since the beginning But any battle I christen is a battle I'm winning... Good luck |
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Pro . . Verse 1 I'm like Charles Manson, I kill everybody without layin a single hand on you I'mma smash on you and spray radioactive gas on you You better think quick cause I'm about to spit some sick sh!t on a real tip I lash you with my futuristic electrode-combustible whip, I'm fvcking untouchable b!tch I've got the mind of a psycho-analyst, philosopher philanthropist that'll make you slash your wrists My rhymes are as sick as cancer is I'mma get fvckin violent on you like a Black Panther activist Now let me astral project with my land rover jet Hand over my check before I run over your neck I'm the mothafvckin rap giant, half lion, leave you f@gs cryin in Iraq dyin That's what you get for denyin the Protocols of the Elders of Zion So quit tryin, I'm a rebel on another level, hotter than a blue devil Hot enough to melt the most solid metal, hyper as fvck and I won't settle I got the precise myopic, wired up fiber optic aimed at ya when my cyber-glock spit You don't know how much I got in this clip but I'm about to show you when I start rockin n sh!t Rhymes grander than the entire Multiverse You sufferin fatal blows cause my multis hurt I've got the Eastern holistic cognition I leave blisters on you when I go ballistic, now give me my recognition My rhymes out the speaker reverberate and straight murders these fakes I leave you runnin from a murderous chase The court will have never even heard of this case Cause I'm your worst nightmare straight out of a fvckin horror movie Michael Myers, Jason, and Freddy combined into one person with a submachine Uzi Slice up your guts with a knife, machete, and claws make you feel all woozy I'm true to the streets, I cruise over beats, I leave your damn crew dead on the beach I spark up the heat and mark your defeat, I'm fvckin elite now bow to my feet This battle ain't even fair, but you're really starting to test my patience Now I'm at the Nevada test site releasin shells to let out my frustration I'mma rip you and leave you dead at the bus station Then toss you to the bottom of the ocean with the crustaceans Cause my guns blazin, swift like a ninja star Asian who emerged from the Florida basin Your flesh is what I'm cravin, so I might find ya remains in a cake tin in my safe haven And to make matters worse, the roof of your house just caved in cause I came in Got a wrecking ball and straight maimed the sh!t cause you didn't give me my last payment b!tch I'm angry as sh!t and it's about to get dangerous But I'm done for now, I just confounded your mind like angel dust Con Danielle forfeited this round. |
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15 votes have been placed for this debate. Showing 1 through 10 records.
Vote Placed by AlwaysMoreThanYou 7 months ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - |  | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | | - | - | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | | - | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 4 | 0 |
Vote Placed by 1dustpelt 9 months ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | | - | - | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | | - | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 4 | 0 |
Vote Placed by Lordknukle 1 year ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 3 |
Reasons for voting decision: Con had a better rap..
Vote Placed by headphonegut 1 year ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | | - | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | | - | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 3 | 2 |
Reasons for voting decision: simply because although L was lyrically ok geo was better So I read it again for acussation of v bomb Credit I due where it due
Vote Placed by socialpinko 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | | - | - | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 1 | 3 |
Vote Placed by Vi_Veri 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | | - | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 4 |
Vote Placed by Loserboi 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | | - | - | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | - | | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 1 | 0 |
Vote Placed by Danielle 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
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| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | | - | - | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | - | | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | | - | - | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 3 | 0 |
Vote Placed by Sieben 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | | - | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | - | | - | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 4 |
Reasons for voting decision: Comments section!
Vote Placed by BlackVoid 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Agreed with before the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Agreed with after the debate: | - | - | | 0 points |
| Who had better conduct: | | - | - | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | - | | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 1 | 0 |
Reasons for voting decision: This is one of the better rap battles I've seen. I love the rhyme choices by both sides, really flows naturally without sounding like you're coming up words just to make them rhyme. Ultimately it just comes down to the forfeit.
"It all comes down to subjective crap anyway. I judged based on the way I heard it in my head. Maybe your style was so complex that my inferior brain couldn't process it. But that's totally unverifiable, so what am I supposed to do?"
See, when I say that, I'm wrong. Which is why I need someone superior to me to correct my vote.
1) I don't care about forced multis. I judged it favorably based on the rhythm, not grammatical correctness.
2) I know using "of" twice is not a grammatical error. My point is that it disrupted the flow of the sentence.
3) Yes. I gave her conduct because she spaced her paragraphs. It makes it much easier to read. That is a kindness to the readers.
4) It all comes down to subjective crap anyway. I judged based on the way I heard it in my head. Maybe your style was so complex that my inferior brain couldn't process it. But that's totally unverifiable, so what am I supposed to do?
Considering the battle wasn't completed - I dunno it just feels weird for me to be winning (it's not like a debate where someone forfeits and you put a lot of work into it; we both put equal work into it).
Also, you know I was against "personal battles" but I've been giving it some thought and I don't think I care (in the future) if it comes down to that lol. I'm prepared to hear the d*ke talk and I think it could be kinda funny :P I like themes too though.
Why did you vote for me if you thought yours was superior?
Anyways, yeah I could've written a verse criticizing yours, but personals just aren't my style, plus I didn't want the verses to be out of order.
And your explanation of that line still doesn't make sense of that bar. "strategical reverence" it doesn't make sense to be strategically honored. Anyways, I'll admit, some of my multis were forced as well, but I disguised mine which isn't necessarily a bad thing.
And no, I don't agree that proving your line to be nonsensical would boost my verse from inferior to equal, honestly I don't think that's a major factor to begin with. I look at it as a whole and I find mine to be superior.
You'll need a miracle against my strategical reverence =
You don't have a chance at winning against what I write; I'm revered because of what I organize (strategical word play)
But anyway, I'm not interested in your criticisms, because if you really didn't like what I wrote then it seems you could have easily just written another verse about it... and you still can.
If it makes you feel better I will vote in your favor despite my genuine opinion of it being inferior. Apparently I'm not allowed to have that opinion lol o well ~ c'est la vie! Thanks for the challenge anyway -- people should bring back battling more often.
You praised her for the line "You'll need a miracle against my strategical reverence," but that doesn't even make any sense! Think about it and go look up the word reverence. It's a forced multi. That whole bar that you posted was filled with forced multis, but I wouldn't expect you to know about that because you probably don't know anything about hip hop lyricism as evidenced by your RFD.
Then you penalized me for using the word "of" twice in the middle of a line?! Are you fvcking kidding me? That happens all the time in the English language and it's NOT an error. I'm sure you can find the same thing in her verse as well but it doesn't matter cause it's irrelevent.
And then you gave her conduct vote for spacing her bars? This is a rap battle, not a poetry contest! Rappers don't write their lines spaced like that. A verse is written just how I wrote mine.
And if you wanna talk about rhythm and flow, mine was much more complex and was written for a rapid delivery. Hers flow was more like a poem, not a rap verse.
So Sieben, if you wanna give L the win by a landslide, you better have proper reasons. I thought you were a smart guy, but apparently not.