DDO Advanced Rap Battle
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| Started: | 1/28/2011 | Category: | Entertainment |
| Updated: | 2 years ago | Status: | Voting Period |
| Viewed: | 4,229 times | Debate No: | 14555 |
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 Pro  Con You must be outta practice cuz your talent's stagnant like a freeze frame It's outta habit that I fvck people like rabbits up in these games Think you'll de-throne me? Let's make it clear - when I rhyme I am Elizabeth Can't own me - next to you I'm Shakespeare and you're illiterate No you're a little bitch who prolly stinks just like a litter sh!t Why else would you start a conflict just to pu$s away from it? Now you expect me to respect thee after this battle you've issued? That's BS dude and PS you make it too easy to diss you Here's the empirical evidence - I've got lyrical eloquence You'll need a miracle against my strategical reverance You scream you need a remedial second chance - Your menial verses ( vs. ) my congenial reference Escalator, test the hater - take you to a higher level Can't fake the fire like a liar when I'm hot as the devil Revel in my - sensational syllables Schooling you like an educational principal First lesson's you're less than me with the pencil In hand understand I flow transcendental The beast that arises through my lyrical lines is At least as high in the sky as signs on high-rises I'm undefeatable - it's unbelievable I'm good all year round like a heated pool With a spectacular vernacular I'm nefarious Delivering criticisms in witticisms - hilarious I demand tricks like hand stands with semantics Dismantle your chance quick as high bandwith You can't advance when Geo this man spits My wit persists - he knows I lift like a bandit No tact: in fact you're a watered down Macklemore You'll be back I'm sure; for now you're an amateur I'll attack you as fast as fat whores snatch food off the floor With my syntax even the Buddha can't relax anymore Let me guess - you'll try to impress, finesse with big words I suggest you accept that I'm the boss - I don't need work I'm bright as a meteor - you can bet it's for metaphor Ahead when I'm beating ya, you'll still beg me for more I seize the beast inside, give peace of mind - yoga Kicking it wit' em I emit infinite wisdom like Yoda A toast to this roller coaster life I'm living It's fitting to make the most of what I've been given Don't be mad though cuz you're in my shadow Just when I battle I feel at home like a chateau You think you're better or even half as clever as me? Never see - I'm a veteran ahead of the scene I'm so sick I might need some medicine themes Whatever I deem flow-worthy it seems Festers in dreams... A go-getter, a goal setter's scheme Is to reign this regime in a sweater and tight jeans I maintain I'm supreme cuz you're plain and extreme Your raps all sound mainly, insanely obscene You wanna talk about the universe with unique verbs? I can speak those words til it hurts - kick you to curb I got analogies wrapped up my sleeves So I hope my lap-top don't freeze This miss is vicious - opponents I dismiss em I make em my victims when I own em - just listen Witness as my fitness puts me in the position To fix sh!t quick within this like a prescription So I don't know if you've listened since the beginning But any battle I christen is a battle I'm winning... Good luck |
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Pro . . Verse 1 I'm like Charles Manson, I kill everybody without layin a single hand on you I'mma smash on you and spray radioactive gas on you You better think quick cause I'm about to spit some sick sh!t on a real tip I lash you with my futuristic electrode-combustible whip, I'm fvcking untouchable b!tch I've got the mind of a psycho-analyst, philosopher philanthropist that'll make you slash your wrists My rhymes are as sick as cancer is I'mma get fvckin violent on you like a Black Panther activist Now let me astral project with my land rover jet Hand over my check before I run over your neck I'm the mothafvckin rap giant, half lion, leave you f@gs cryin in Iraq dyin That's what you get for denyin the Protocols of the Elders of Zion So quit tryin, I'm a rebel on another level, hotter than a blue devil Hot enough to melt the most solid metal, hyper as fvck and I won't settle I got the precise myopic, wired up fiber optic aimed at ya when my cyber-glock spit You don't know how much I got in this clip but I'm about to show you when I start rockin n sh!t Rhymes grander than the entire Multiverse You sufferin fatal blows cause my multis hurt I've got the Eastern holistic cognition I leave blisters on you when I go ballistic, now give me my recognition My rhymes out the speaker reverberate and straight murders these fakes I leave you runnin from a murderous chase The court will have never even heard of this case Cause I'm your worst nightmare straight out of a fvckin horror movie Michael Myers, Jason, and Freddy combined into one person with a submachine Uzi Slice up your guts with a knife, machete, and claws make you feel all woozy I'm true to the streets, I cruise over beats, I leave your damn crew dead on the beach I spark up the heat and mark your defeat, I'm fvckin elite now bow to my feet This battle ain't even fair, but you're really starting to test my patience Now I'm at the Nevada test site releasin shells to let out my frustration I'mma rip you and leave you dead at the bus station Then toss you to the bottom of the ocean with the crustaceans Cause my guns blazin, swift like a ninja star Asian who emerged from the Florida basin Your flesh is what I'm cravin, so I might find ya remains in a cake tin in my safe haven And to make matters worse, the roof of your house just caved in cause I came in Got a wrecking ball and straight maimed the sh!t cause you didn't give me my last payment b!tch I'm angry as sh!t and it's about to get dangerous But I'm done for now, I just confounded your mind like angel dust Con Danielle forfeited this round. |
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Vote Placed by Guy_D 5 days ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | - | | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 0 |
Reasons for voting decision: Both were great! Tie.
Vote Placed by AlwaysMoreThanYou 8 months ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 4 | 0 |
Vote Placed by 1dustpelt 10 months ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Who had better conduct: | | - | - | 1 point |
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 4 | 0 |
Vote Placed by Lordknukle 1 year ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 3 |
Reasons for voting decision: Con had a better rap..
Vote Placed by headphonegut 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | | - | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | | - | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 3 | 2 |
Reasons for voting decision: simply because although L was lyrically ok geo was better So I read it again for acussation of v bomb Credit I due where it due
Vote Placed by socialpinko 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 1 | 3 |
Vote Placed by Vi_Veri 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 4 |
Vote Placed by Loserboi 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Total points awarded: | 1 | 0 |
Vote Placed by Danielle 2 years ago
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| Total points awarded: | 3 | 0 |
Vote Placed by Sieben 2 years ago
| GeoLaureate8 | Danielle | Tied | ||
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 4 |
Reasons for voting decision: Comments section!
If you want to talk about quality, I can sit here all day and rag on how your lyrics made no sense (talking about Iraq out of nowhere?) though I would have much preferred to do that in the second verse of the battle which unfortunately you declined. Now you're not the only person to say random sh!t while rapping (see: November Has Come by the Gorillaz) but in the battle context it makes no sense; forced rhymes with no coherence = lack of cleverness.
Speaking of lack of cleverness, a lot of your rhymes were trite and blatant rip-offs, such as the dangerous / angel dust thing used in hmm let's see -- Gimme da Loot by Biggie; Spit Your Game by Biggie; We Be Steady Mobbin by Lil Wayne; Murder by Bizarre... shall I continue?
If by triplets you mean 3 syllable rhymes there are only these:
- combustible whip, untouchable b!tch
- analyst / philanthropist / slash your wrist / cancer is / activist
- murderous chase / heard of this case
- bus station / frustration / crustacean
- recerverate / murder these fakes
- dangerous / angel dust
Now as you said, I had more of these but that's neither here nor there. I think I had much better quality than you too (obviously we'll disagree; we're competing).
My lines have multi's all throughout - even line by line:
"I demand tricks like hand-stands with semantics"
- deMAND, HAND, STAND, SEMANtics)
- TRICKS, semanTICS
Contd...
Dismantle your chance quick as high bandwith
You can't advance when Geo this man spits
My wit persists - he knows I lift like a bandit
- disMAN, CHANCE, BANDwith
- adVANCE, MANspits
- Geo, he knows
- wit persists, lift, BANdit, etc.
Anyway, "when you have time" you let me know and we'll try this again :D
I liked Geo's rap better, end of story.
A multi is any rhyme longer than 1 syllable.
"I just checked and I had about 3x as many as Geo (no offense - it's just a fact... I don't even think they're of paramount importance anyway)."
You had 60 bars, I had 37 bars, of course you had more, plus, if you counted the two syllable multis, it would be a lot closer. Not to mention, it's not the sheer number of multi's that count but the quality, the way their used, and how their incorporated into the structure of the rhyme.
"I structured my flow into 4 line-verses because battles are rapped to a beat and I wanted to reflect that via text. It looks longer than the way it would sound because of the way I spaced it."
Sure, but many of the lines didn't actually flow well when spoken/rapped aloud.
i.e. "Think you'll de-throne me? Let's make it clear - when I rhyme I am Elizabeth
Can't own me - next to you I'm Shakespeare and you're illiterate"
"I seize the beast inside, give peace of mind - yoga
Kicking it wit' em I emit infinite wisdom like Yoda"
etc.
"Plus, the fact that the rhymes keep going on for more than a a couplet is a PLUS and shows that I could continue with a rhyme scheme for more than just a couplet."
Actually, I had mostly triplets and towards the end there was even a 7 bar rhyme that was filled with internal rhymes and multis. I think the usage of so many internal rhymes more than make up for the use of couplets.
"I'm sorry but samman doesn't seem to know what he's talking about. Geo can vote however he wants, but I'm cancelling out samman's vote. I could give an RFD but I won't unless really pressed to; otherwise I see no need."
I don't remember exactly what samman's RFD said cause it got overwritten, but I'm pretty sure it was legit.