The Instigator
GeoLaureate8
Pro (for)
Winning
30 Points
The Contender
Danielle
Con (against)
Losing
26 Points

DDO Advanced Rap Battle

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Started: 1/28/2011 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 2 years ago Status: Voting Period
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GeoLaureate8

Pro

Traditional style text rap battle. My opponent can set it off in the first round. There will be two battle rounds, two raps for each opponent. The final half of the third round will be blank.
Danielle

Con

Verse 1

You must be outta practice cuz your talent's stagnant like a freeze frame
It's outta habit that I fvck people like rabbits up in these games
Think you'll de-throne me? Let's make it clear - when I rhyme I am Elizabeth
Can't own me - next to you I'm Shakespeare and you're illiterate

No you're a little bitch who prolly stinks just like a litter sh!t
Why else would you start a conflict just to pu$s away from it?
Now you expect me to respect thee after this battle you've issued?
That's BS dude and PS you make it too easy to diss you

Here's the empirical evidence - I've got lyrical eloquence
You'll need a miracle against my strategical reverance
You scream you need a remedial second chance -
Your menial verses ( vs. ) my congenial reference

Escalator, test the hater - take you to a higher level
Can't fake the fire like a liar when I'm hot as the devil
Revel in my - sensational syllables
Schooling you like an educational principal

First lesson's you're less than me with the pencil
In hand understand I flow transcendental
The beast that arises through my lyrical lines is
At least as high in the sky as signs on high-rises

I'm undefeatable - it's unbelievable
I'm good all year round like a heated pool
With a spectacular vernacular I'm nefarious
Delivering criticisms in witticisms - hilarious

I demand tricks like hand stands with semantics
Dismantle your chance quick as high bandwith
You can't advance when Geo this man spits
My wit persists - he knows I lift like a bandit

No tact: in fact you're a watered down Macklemore
You'll be back I'm sure; for now you're an amateur
I'll attack you as fast as fat whores snatch food off the floor
With my syntax even the Buddha can't relax anymore

Let me guess - you'll try to impress, finesse with big words
I suggest you accept that I'm the boss - I don't need work
I'm bright as a meteor - you can bet it's for metaphor
Ahead when I'm beating ya, you'll still beg me for more

I seize the beast inside, give peace of mind - yoga
Kicking it wit' em I emit infinite wisdom like Yoda
A toast to this roller coaster life I'm living
It's fitting to make the most of what I've been given

Don't be mad though cuz you're in my shadow
Just when I battle I feel at home like a chateau
You think you're better or even half as clever as me?
Never see - I'm a veteran ahead of the scene

I'm so sick I might need some medicine themes
Whatever I deem flow-worthy it seems
Festers in dreams... A go-getter, a goal setter's scheme
Is to reign this regime in a sweater and tight jeans

I maintain I'm supreme cuz you're plain and extreme
Your raps all sound mainly, insanely obscene
You wanna talk about the universe with unique verbs?
I can speak those words til it hurts - kick you to curb

I got analogies wrapped up my sleeves
So I hope my lap-top don't freeze
This miss is vicious - opponents I dismiss em
I make em my victims when I own em - just listen

Witness as my fitness puts me in the position
To fix sh!t quick within this like a prescription
So I don't know if you've listened since the beginning
But any battle I christen is a battle I'm winning...

Good luck
Debate Round No. 1
GeoLaureate8

Pro

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Verse 1


I'm like Charles Manson, I kill everybody without layin a single hand on you
I'mma smash on you and spray radioactive gas on you
You better think quick cause I'm about to spit some sick sh!t on a real tip
I lash you with my futuristic electrode-combustible whip, I'm fvcking untouchable b!tch
I've got the mind of a psycho-analyst, philosopher philanthropist that'll make you slash your wrists
My rhymes are as sick as cancer is
I'mma get fvckin violent on you like a Black Panther activist
Now let me astral project with my land rover jet
Hand over my check before I run over your neck
I'm the mothafvckin rap giant, half lion, leave you f@gs cryin in Iraq dyin
That's what you get for denyin the Protocols of the Elders of Zion
So quit tryin, I'm a rebel on another level, hotter than a blue devil
Hot enough to melt the most solid metal, hyper as fvck and I won't settle
I got the precise myopic, wired up fiber optic aimed at ya when my cyber-glock spit
You don't know how much I got in this clip but I'm about to show you when I start rockin n sh!t
Rhymes grander than the entire Multiverse
You sufferin fatal blows cause my multis hurt
I've got the Eastern holistic cognition
I leave blisters on you when I go ballistic, now give me my recognition
My rhymes out the speaker reverberate and straight murders these fakes
I leave you runnin from a murderous chase
The court will have never even heard of this case
Cause I'm your worst nightmare straight out of a fvckin horror movie
Michael Myers, Jason, and Freddy combined into one person with a submachine Uzi
Slice up your guts with a knife, machete, and claws make you feel all woozy
I'm true to the streets, I cruise over beats, I leave your damn crew dead on the beach
I spark up the heat and mark your defeat, I'm fvckin elite now bow to my feet
This battle ain't even fair, but you're really starting to test my patience
Now I'm at the Nevada test site releasin shells to let out my frustration
I'mma rip you and leave you dead at the bus station
Then toss you to the bottom of the ocean with the crustaceans
Cause my guns blazin, swift like a ninja star Asian who emerged from the Florida basin
Your flesh is what I'm cravin, so I might find ya remains in a cake tin in my safe haven
And to make matters worse, the roof of your house just caved in cause I came in
Got a wrecking ball and straight maimed the sh!t cause you didn't give me my last payment b!tch
I'm angry as sh!t and it's about to get dangerous
But I'm done for now, I just confounded your mind like angel dust



Danielle

Con

Danielle forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 2
GeoLaureate8

Pro

This will now just be a one round battle.
Danielle

Con

Aww! I wish we coulda done two, but c'est la vie.
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by Greyparrot 2 years ago
Greyparrot
I liked it except for the Elizabeth, illiterate rhyme.
Posted by tvellalott 2 years ago
tvellalott
Profit, profit, theLwerds got it.
Everybody knows she's a motherfvcking monster.
Posted by Danielle 2 years ago
Danielle
Ok so that sounds good. My gf went home to visit her parents this weekend (and took our car), and my roommate also went home to visit her parents, so I'm stranded in my apartment since all my friends with cars have road tripped to NY this weekend for some Democracy Matters meeting (lol hush). Sooo I won't have much to do tonight. I just accepted 2 debates. I'll write those 2 rounds and then get to this one probably by tomorrow.
Posted by GeoLaureate8 2 years ago
GeoLaureate8
Sorry, I changed it from 3 rounds to 2, but I forgot to change some of the wording.
Posted by Danielle 2 years ago
Danielle
Okies. So let me ask you - "There will be two battle rounds, three raps for each opponent."

So I'll post my first verse in R1, you post your first in R2, I post my second verse in R2, you post your second verse in R3, and then I leave my R3 blank. Correct? So that's 2 raps for each opponent - not 3, right?
Posted by Cody_Franklin 2 years ago
Cody_Franklin
I realize that omelet beat L. I cast a tiebreaker vote (reserve judge) and I gave the round to omelet because of delivery, which was important in the type of competition it was. If we're talking content, though--just raw talent, I guess--L definitely wins.
Posted by GeoLaureate8 2 years ago
GeoLaureate8
Haha, L you know my style. I don't think I've ever made one single personal diss in any of my DDO battles. And usually I lose points for not using personals, but whatev.
Posted by Danielle 2 years ago
Danielle
1. In regards to omelet, don't let other people's opinion sway you regarding his talent. See for yourself and come to your own conclusion. Here's a video example of his audio skills without equipment, and here are some of his lyrics from the battle in which he beat me:

"Which is pretty fucing sad, cuz I'm an egg
Well maybe a bit more, but I'll break your fucing leg
And what I said, I meant that in a literal sense
But you're dense, you prolly thought of the other sense instead"

Eh, not my personal preference of style - but he's awesome. He has a good voice and with his equipment and production he's really good. I think if I had equipment I could make my horrible rapping voice sound a lot better lol (I'm a white girl*... not a good excuse, but an acceptable one :P ). I have a lot of ideas for music/production. I *might* come into some money when I move back to NY next fall, and if so Vi and I might buy some DJ equipment cuz she's into that sorta stuff and I have a lil background in composition. We really love trip hop, electronic, dub step, funk, trance, etc.

2. Okay so about the challenge -- Geo, what kind of battle will this be? Typical diss each other battle? Eh c'est possible. I mean I'm in a high, happy place right now lol... I'm not sure how much I want you to start ripping on typical subject matters: my sexuality/gf, me being overrated/cocky, me fighting with that ******* mongeese, etc. That's negative energy haha I'm not in the mood for bad vibes, man *passes bowlskeez* Did you have a format idea, or perhaps other concept or way to avoid that like one on one hostility that a battle usually entails? If not then whatevs I'll probably accept the battle anyway lol it's not too big of a deal. Thoughts?
Posted by badger 2 years ago
badger
can i take it?
Posted by GeoLaureate8 2 years ago
GeoLaureate8
@loserboi

Omelet probably won cause of his flow. It was a video rap battle. People are saying Lwerd is the best cause of her lyrics, not flow.
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Reasons for voting decision: Con had a better rap..
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Reasons for voting decision: simply because although L was lyrically ok geo was better So I read it again for acussation of v bomb Credit I due where it due
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Reasons for voting decision: This is one of the better rap battles I've seen. I love the rhyme choices by both sides, really flows naturally without sounding like you're coming up words just to make them rhyme. Ultimately it just comes down to the forfeit.