The Instigator
Sylux
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The Contender
omelet
Con (against)
Winning
49 Points

Feverish Rap Tourney Round 2: Sylux vs. omlet

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Started: 1/25/2010 Category: Miscellaneous
Updated: 7 years ago Status: Voting Period
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Sylux

Pro

First and foremost, I'd like to introduce myself. I'm Sylux, but not really Sylux. More like a new guy with an old name.
I look forward to battling you, omelet. Voi! Let's make this a gritty one!
omelet

Con

Alright bro, whenever you're ready.
Debate Round No. 1
Sylux

Pro

I like cutting it close.

Captain Sylux, reporting for duty
Got myself together, I could stand up to Gucci
Or any wack-arse rappers that come at me,
I'll just smack 'em around a little, and swat 'em like a flea

I've shaped up a little, like self-molding clay
Even though there's no such thing... but, hey,
What I'm trying here to get across to you is
That I'm back in black, and I'm back in the biz

I'm a lyrical genius, an offensive master,
And I'll be handin' you your arse on a silver platter
So I advise that you prepare yourself for me
To front with this you'd better have some top-notch repartee

So you better watch out, and watch your back,
Because I'm mean and I'm lean and I ain't cuttin' no slack
I'm like a relentless cool, calm, steady flame
And I'll look good while burnin' you and puttin' you to shame

And you're gonna realize; you can't win it
'Cuz I'm all ready to go even though it's just been a minute
Since my last rap battle tournament round,
But I assure I ain't gonna back down this time around
omelet

Con

I'm an egg with the cheddar or maybe the pepper jack
You can tell that I'm better and this other fella's whack
I could barely hear his rhymes, when I did they were limes
To make this battle interesting I'ma pick up the slack

Couldn't miss you removed all your profile info
At first I wondered why, the explanation's simple
You're running from your past, but it's hard, must have a limp, though
you haven't gotten far, getting smacked like a pimp's ho

The infnite overlord, the master of rap
That's what I am, when you hear my flow you'll want to react
But you, you'll probably run, you're a coward, a cronie
I ain't known you too long, but I can tell that you're phony

You're in the wrong game, homie. You're very unmatched
Tryna scribble out your past like you could just scratch -
it off but here it doesn't really work like that
Make one wrong move and it'll bite you back

Even if you step to me
Or even if you don't
You know you'll lose this battle, see
You won't be kept afloat
I hear you need some help vs. me
Come help you though, I won't
Not as badass as you think you be
Your rhymes are such a joke

A lyrical genius? More like a fool
Tryna come at me like you think that you're fu**ing old school
But I realize that you - don't know how I do it
Like your last rap battle, shoulda just said screw it

I'm doing it to it. I'm killing this beat
I'm a motherfu**ing omelet that you don't want to eat
So go 'head take a seat. And learn from the best
But you'll need a lot of studying to pass this test

If you fail, then it's only you who's taking the blame
Although I hear you promised me to put me to shame
Just don't make this the same - as your other battle son
Cuz you'll need to provide us a little more than round one
Debate Round No. 2
Sylux

Pro

Yo, you're comin' at me
Like you think you're some kind of badass, but as you can see
I got you're number here, and it's easy
to point out how wack your last act was I laughed so hard my @ss fell off my chair and I fell on the floor and I think I might have peed

So you think that you're an omelet? Well you're pretty delusional
Think you're full of pepperjack? Well I say that you're full of bull
Think you can front with me? I've got something for you:
You're rap was so disgusting it was practically cruel

Man, my ears are still bleeding, and my sense of beat is still off
You're stuff is so softcore it's more suited for a bake-off
Broseph, you're failing so hard at trying I'm suppressing a scoff
Wait, no I'm not... Anyways,

Anyways, let's go down the list
And assess all the things the word "wack" may have missed
Your "thing" was so fvcked up, it can't even be summed up by words
But I'll try it out by tellin' them "rhymes" off for what they really were

BRR!
It's cold in here, but only because it's snowing
Did u c wat I did thar?
I kept everything flowing
With something unrelated, re-inflated, congregated together and whatever I'm all out of time.

Yeah, I'm basically backing down on this one. I gave it my all, but it seems that every time I have a debate I'm at my dad's house. Okay, that's not entirely true, I've only missed one debate due date due to being at my father's, and that was my very first debate. This one because I don't have my software or my equipment. That, and since this is my stepmother's computer, I could only use it while she was at work. And she's home now, and wants her computer back. I apologize, but I really did run out of time.
omelet

Con

Eyo, it's the omelet with the most
Takin on this bitch, the invisible ghost
I was looking around, couldn't find his last video
'Less he's changed a lot, guarantee it would be shitty though
"Omelet, I think your rhymes are wack," he said
Tryna start a bake-off cuz I'm making the bread
Like the bread I have risen
So sit down and take a listen, let my lyrics marinate in your head
This guy's dead, he admits it himself
His used up rhymes should be back on the shelf
You've prolly noticed I ain't using a beat
No need versus sylux to ensure his defeat
Just like he said, my rhymes are cruel
They're slaying him merciless, he's an upset tool
I wondered - how'd he come across my number?
Then I realized he prolly got it from his mother
The hereditary adversarial sage
Now he's tryna run like a bird from a cage
This guy says his sense of beat is still gone
Course he never had it so for once he's not wrong
I'd like to say to sylux good luck in the next round
But unfortunate for him, I've left him under the ground
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
Uh, I wasn't really dissing myself. Must've been a misunderstanding. Geo said I "came up with some wack lines," and I was just joking around, kind of building on what he said. Ahaha, but thanks anyway, guys ^_^
Posted by mattrodstrom 7 years ago
mattrodstrom
"I'm a pretty wack dude"

hey man, at 14 anyone with a brain is depressed.

Embrace what engages you, and work at what you like; don't worry about losing in a rap tounament to some dude on the internet,

If that's the kind of thing you like to do then just work at it put your all into it and enjoy it for what it is.
Plus something tells me that if it's not workin out you can probably find something else that engages you.
Posted by feverish 7 years ago
feverish
All points to Omelet for for fairly obvious reasons, especially the forfeited round. A more detailed RFD will be given if requested.

Congratulations Omelet, you are the first to earn a semis place, by-passing the play-off stage.

Sylux, don't diss yourself, I thought you showed some genuine potential.
Posted by GeoLaureate8 7 years ago
GeoLaureate8
Not really, it's just that you don't complete your rounds.
Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
I'm a pretty wack dude.
Posted by GeoLaureate8 7 years ago
GeoLaureate8
RFD:

Lyrics: omelet. Sylux dissed himself "Man, my ears are still bleeding, and my sense of beat is still off." omelet predicted Sylux's blunder in the first round "Just don't make this the same - as your other battle son, Cuz you'll need to provide us a little more than round one." Sylux had some wack lines like "BRR!, It's cold in here, but only because it's snowing, Did u c wat I did thar? I kept everything flowing" Lol.

Flow: omelet. Sylux definitely stepped it up, but his beat was too loud. omelet came with another great flow, on beat, and a well executed and catchy chorus. It was a smart move not to put effort into the final video given that Sylux had none at all. Better to save the good material for later rounds.

Disses: omelet. See Lyrics.

Presentation: omelet. Had two videos, good quality. Sylux had one video.
Posted by philosphical 7 years ago
philosphical
Good job guys. The vote goes to omelet on all counts for best flow, rhymes (disses), presentation, lyrics. However, Sylux, I want to give you props for steppin' up and doing this and not backing out. Your first rap was pretty good.

Good job, both of yall!
Posted by philosphical 7 years ago
philosphical
Good job guys. The vote goes to omelet on all counts for best flow, rhymes (disses), presentation, lyrics. However, Sylux, I want to give you props for steppin' up and doing this and not backing out. Your first rap was pretty good.

Good job, both of yall!
Posted by Cody_Franklin 7 years ago
Cody_Franklin
Sylux could potentially have done a pretty fantastic job if his beats hadn't drowned out his lyrics in Round 1, and if he had gone with Video in Round 2.
Posted by Xer 7 years ago
Xer
Great job omelet.
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