The Instigator
mariahjane
Pro (for)
Losing
3 Points
The Contender
DakotaKrafick
Con (against)
Winning
6 Points

Love Poetry

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after 3 votes the winner is...
DakotaKrafick
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 3/10/2012 Category: Arts
Updated: 4 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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Debate Rounds (3)
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Votes (3)

 

mariahjane

Pro

First round is acceptance. Write your own poems. They have to be your original. YOURS. This is just a fun "debate" and a chance to write what you feel.
DakotaKrafick

Con

Let's see what you got, Romeo.
Debate Round No. 1
mariahjane

Pro

You were there one minute
Gone the next
You promised me forever
But forever came and went

But my heart's still beating
Yeah, it's beating for you
The butterflies in my stomach still flutter
They fly for you

I fall into your deep blue eyes
I could fall over and over
I fall for you again

I miss the way you kiss me
The kiss of goodnight
I miss the way of love
The love that lasts forever
Our forever...
DakotaKrafick

Con

Two Halves (written for Brittany Koritzer)

Another lonely day
Another grey dream
Will I ever wake up
With you next to me

Are the walls that separate
Us in our minds
Does love conquer all
Can I find the lines

To show you how
You turned my life around
You set me free
Put me back on solid ground

With the love that you taught me
Now I can see
I know what I was missing
I know what I need

I need it to be always you and I
Every day and every night
Hand in hand watching the sunset and sunrise
And as we both stare at the sky

The sky will stare back
And see from high above
Like the heaven and the earth
We are two halves of one love

Debate Round No. 2
mariahjane

Pro

Aww. Cute.

I'll give you my heart
There's just three conditions
Leave it as a whole
Leave it beating
Leave us loving

I gave you my heart
There was just three conditions
You broke it in two
It struggled to stay beating
I lost the meaning of love

I gave you my heart
You broke my conditions
But it's now back as one
It's now beating
I love like never before

I gave you my heart
You broke my conditions...
I'll give you my heart
I'll eliminate the conditions
For one more chance at loving you
DakotaKrafick

Con

Mirrors (also written for Brittany Koritzer)

I look into your eyes and see
The reflection of my eyes staring
Back into your eyes at me

Like two mirrors
Reflecting each other
Infinitely

Are we lost?
I hope so


Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by kyro90 4 years ago
kyro90
I totally should have accepted this! I wrote like dozens of poems about Mandy.... :P
Posted by IFLYHIGH 4 years ago
IFLYHIGH
Of course, that poem is about destruction and end of the world instead of love....
Posted by IFLYHIGH 4 years ago
IFLYHIGH
My favorite poem is fire and ice by Robert Frost. I would vote but can't because I have to confirm my identity first.
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Vote Placed by 1dustpelt 4 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: con wins.
Vote Placed by 16kadams 4 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Pain > love Pain as in <\\\\\\3
Vote Placed by SuburbiaSurvivor 4 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: I liked Pro's cuz his were about love and not heartbreak.