The Instigator
ShadowKingStudios
Pro (for)
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7 Points
The Contender
Truth_seeker
Con (against)
Tied
7 Points

Lyrical Games #4 (Alliteration Series #1 only with Letters B, G, R, S, & W)

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Started: 8/23/2014 Category: Miscellaneous
Updated: 2 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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ShadowKingStudios

Pro

Qualifications:
Must have 10 or more debates.
Prefer 18 years or older unless your win percentile is 80%+

Rules:
1. Miscellaneous Lyrics
a. religion, sex, money, women, fame, yourself, insults, put downs, censored profanity *(limit 5 per verse as to not offend most readers)
b. original compositions
2. up to 16 bars TWO ROUNDS ONLY
3. Con begins R1 with his First Verse
4. Judges you will be grading which opponent you clearly understood the most AND/OR which one had the most entertaining lyrical presentation.

This is a test of lyrical proficiency & superiority. 2 verses, 16 bars each. If you cannot establish yourself as lyrically dominant with an industry standard of two 16 bars, then this debate is too complex for you. Lyrical Masters don't need 3, 4, & 5 rounds to "prove" they are dominant wordsmiths.

Now enter Alliteration Series #1.
Truth_seeker

Con

Bible blacks out burdens, brings back bright beginnings
Breakin' bags as i'm bloggin' bout beggin' with bangins
Bass boomin', broken brooms, and unpaid billins

God givin' as i'm grinnin' grippin' the good as it glistens
Grateful i gotta a gate full of gleanin' gremlins all givens
Gettin' it till i'm greedy n' gladly goudin' great griffons
Gougin' out goofy groupies, grabbin' goodies n' gibbons

Rememberin' as i reflect, revise, repent, n' recognize, on to remissions
Rhymatically reachin' for recons n' ruthlessly request reconditions
Rheumatically runnin' from ruthless requisitions n' recycled repetitions
Realistically really ruinin' repugnant reproven ruckus from retransmissions

Slowly slaughterin' Shadow sadistically, get into submissions
Seducin' slayers into sexually stringent slick n' sick superstitions
Systematically slappin' sorrows from surrealistic n' silly seditions
Significantly slammin' slangin' singin' n' sinnin, screamin' suppositions

Women whisperin' wishin' i would welcome em well with wholesome wordplay
Debate Round No. 1
ShadowKingStudios

Pro

Whimsical weather wrecked my weed-smokin' weekend so I wrote a war game wilder than the World of Warcraft
Wandering werewolf-witches welding witchcraft wage warfare with wayward Welsh warlocks on a warpath

Got the goofy gaming idea from a genteel, gymnastic GED-gained Girl Scout named Ginny Genie Gypsy

She grew up in Germany garnering good grades despite gaining global glamor as a gangster named Gutsy

She socializes on Saturdays with scandalous, schizophrenic, syphilis-packin' sociopathic statesmen

While spending several stacks of scrilla from her Swiss savings account set up by a syndicate of Saudi servicemen

Better be bold & brazen with ya broadcast ya brutish, brutal or brightly, brisk brilliant bars of blaspheme
Brando, baby, was born blissful with bravado & breath-takin' blurbs like I baptized in bling

Racist rabbis read riddles to rectify a righteous right-wing revolution to restore religious retribution
Realistically this ridiculous like a redneck Republican practicing Ramadan & sippin' root beer as a resolution


NOTE TO VOTERS: I meant to change the proposition to 1 verse 1 round, not 2. That's why I'm only able to post one verse. But still keep the "up to 16 bars". Seeker you can "write pass" or submit. If you-all count it against me, no harm, no foul. But keep your votes based mostly on Rule 4.




Truth_seeker

Con

Writin' n' willing winnin' n ' workin' wonders from last workshop
Women whether whorin or wishfully worshipin' wit me on a whiptop
Wreckin' it til it withers, wrestlin in weathers n' got a writ, the whistle-drop

God's great in his grace gruesomely gracefully grantin' me graciousness
Gods' gate are like grapes ghoulishly grievously grindin' false greatness
Govs gape for grand glades gladsomely generously glidin' greedy grandness

Rods rape in rages ruthlessly racially, rationally rantin' for me to reek repayments
Ramrods rate rampages rudely ration-fee, recklessly, rampin to the replacements
roughshods rake restages ruefully regularly relentlessly replantin retracements

Baseless basements with bassin breakin' n' bakin beats because it's blatant
Baseness of bracelets baskin' in breathtakin in backbreakin like it's bacon
Basis for you to brace us, bashin brakin so stay blaking (1) we are as brazen

Salacious in statements slammin Satan as i'm stakin all there is in the station
Spacious in stations stammin not snakin (2) aint slatin in Gods spirit, it's salvation
Sagacious like sages shamblin in slayton, i'm skatin' cuz ballin is the standardization

Waitin's wastefulness washin wakin up til i am wastin' til the beast wakens

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Debate Round No. 2
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Posted by Truth_seeker 2 years ago
Truth_seeker
alright here goes
Posted by ShadowKingStudios 2 years ago
ShadowKingStudios
Yes.
The basic principle of alliteration dictate a bar aka line bearing two or more consecutive words with the same beginning or ending letter. The final word does not have to have the same letter as it corresponding rhyme partner.

Ok:
go get some real rap skill silly broke busta
... ... .... .... .... .. ... ... ..... ..... .... hustla

I like white women with world class whoppers
... ... .... .... .... .. ... ... ..... ..... .... ... choppers

tell the trolls to stay away from this tenacious debate
or I'll slice 'em into serrated sections to show their fate

Not Ok:
typing regular lyrics with just two matching aligned alliterated rhymes
And thinking you created a valid flip that meets the proposed guidelines

I kill you with my legendary slick skill, Brando
You know I'm a legendary real rap king, bro

The safe bet is to fill each bar up with words bearing the same letters. If the bar is phonetically strong with alliterated words the end words don't have to rhyme. For ex:

Juice Judy just gave me a jolly jigglin' jigga blowjob
After Loosey Lucy let a sticky wet lick lash my prick

Explicit, yes. But the point is the bars are so powerful with phonetically rhyming content that it doesn't matter if they end with matching rhyme words.
Posted by Truth_seeker 2 years ago
Truth_seeker
can we use the same letter but different words in more than one line?
Posted by ShadowKingStudios 2 years ago
ShadowKingStudios
Yes. See last round here for example: http://www.debate.org...
Posted by doomswatter 2 years ago
doomswatter
So basically alliterate as much as possible. Obviously not every word, since you need conjunctions and such.
Posted by ShadowKingStudios 2 years ago
ShadowKingStudios
Cat, hat, hand, man...
This is likely the rhyming pattern you're talking about.

Consonance is a form of rapping that involve the end letters of a word having the same or similar pronunciation sound. It's rapping too: got gillion; ready...revival; what, when, whip, etc. These all rhyme through their beginning first syllable.

Alliteration pertains to words beginning with the same first or last letter.

This debate had expired and I decided to reinstate it. Notice none of the alleged "rap masters" will get near this debate. It's above their intellect.
Posted by Mister_Man 2 years ago
Mister_Man
I've seen this up here for a while. I'd accept but I've never done anything like this before. I've only done some plain old raps, and not too sure how appropriate an unexperienced guy would be for something like this. Plus I don't like not rhyming stuff. If nobody accepts within a day left, then I would if you would allow?
Posted by ShadowKingStudios 2 years ago
ShadowKingStudios
The first letter of each word:

Better be bright about being brilliant.
Gotdamn, I got gillions of gifted gabs to give!
Ready to rumble with Regime in a rap revival?
Shadow is skilled in syllabic syntax, sir.
What will you write when I whip out my whip-lashing wordology?

This is not a battle rap competition. It's a lyrical mastery competition. Which, since none of the so-called DDO rappers have stepped up to, is a testament to their lack of genuine lyrical skill.
Posted by doomswatter 2 years ago
doomswatter
Which words must start with those letters? All?
Posted by ShadowKingStudios 2 years ago
ShadowKingStudios
Just do your best. It's all for fun & amusement.
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Vote Placed by RichardCypher 2 years ago
RichardCypher
ShadowKingStudiosTruth_seeker
Who won the debate:Vote Checkmark-
Reasons for voting decision: Con wasn't easier to understand than Pro, but the opposite. Seriously what is this="Seducin' slayers into sexually stringent slick n' sick superstitions Systematically slappin' sorrows from surrealistic n' silly seditions Significantly slammin' slangin' singin' n' sinnin, screamin' suppositions" vs this="Whimsical weather wrecked my weed-smokin' weekend so I wrote a war game wilder than the World of Warcraft Wandering werewolf-witches welding witchcraft wage warfare with wayward Welsh warlocks on a warpath". Pro told a semi-story, Con rambled off rhyming words. Pro more entertaining because I understood where his rhymes were leading me. Con had good rhythm but not good clarity.
Vote Placed by bladerunner060 2 years ago
bladerunner060
ShadowKingStudiosTruth_seeker
Who won the debate:-Vote Checkmark
Reasons for voting decision: An entertaining read. Well done from both sides. This is a subjective debate, and I liked the sound of Con's better enough to award the points--but both sides did a fine job!