Lyricism 101 - #1: 30 Bars
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-the best display of rap lyricism.
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What is lyricism?
-an intense personal quality expressive of feeling or emotion in an art (as poetry or music)
-the practice of writing verse in song form rather than narrative form to embody the poet’s thoughts and emotions http://www.thefreedictionary.com...
-It’s saying what your saying in a creative way. It’s the format of which your concept is presented
-A "lyricist" to me is someone who focuses their energy on making good lyrics. I don't think lyricists necessarily hafta have a real nice flow or a good rhyme scheme. With lyricists, it's more about the use of poetic devices, the cleverness in their wordplay.
Soulja Boy up in it (OH!)
Watch Me Lean And Watch Me Rock
Super Man Dat (OH!)
Then Watch Me Crank Dat Robocop
Cause in my physical, I can express through song
Delete stress like Motrin, then extend strong
I drank Moet with Medusa, give her shotguns in hell
From the spliff that I lift and inhale, it ain't hard to tell
Put applications in Comments or in a PM.
Astronomical observations'll let us bear witness to the star of David (1)
The morning star which gave us light from the life that he traded (2)
Cuz he's running his father's business, hence the living proof
Restoring us to the Adamic paradise to see the naked truth
Prophetically, there's a beast from the east, In the West there's a feast
Attentively, I set my eyes north from a fiery hell, that's why i left Greece
Jesus descended to the center of the world, precisely why he's near east (3)
Demons beheaded when he ascended unto the heavens, a High priest
Truth is relative because i'm in submission to a king who's reign is absolute
Learning from the real teacher of God, that's why i never have a substitute
Philo (4) was in a philosophical root, i'm a new recruit to the theological attribute
That's why i pay my respects when i pay tribute to the one with endless magnitude
Introspectively searching for a new perspective, projective of a new identity
imperceptibly, i'm awaiting to be perfected, protective of my own integrity
Philosophically ponderin' n' plunderin' wanderin' n' wonderin', blunderin' Periodically
Psychologically sufferin', smotherin' n' conquerin', wanderin' slumberin' physiologically
Chronologically castin' crowns on cryin' Christ, cuz i critically create a celibate causality
Theologically trashin' towns as i'm tryin' twice to typically translate a testament totality
Have i been so selfish that my heart's like shellfish? Nas exists (5), but emcees narcissists
Tryna to lyrically mimic the lyricist, make deliveries that kill beats n' leave no carcasses
Concentrate on creatively expressin' the blessin', tonality trashin' turbos, lot of turbulence
Stick to the fundamental: fund the mental, use riches to find potential
Count your blessings n' if you fall short, no worries, the rest is providential
That's what why must unite then we'll be unified, this is a unified theory
A man and his wife must dwell within purity, prototypical when you marry
Each individual must freely give as they contribute to this ecosystem
Because it's an equal system, a never ending seasonal circular rhythm
Like Romans, we seek Romanticism, no romance, lets show passion of the Christ
Lets affirm this covenant, may we never be divided, seal it by the meat that's sliced
Love is demonstrated when the soul has violated his life, as God provides his sacrifice
2. Jesus called a morning star
"I, Jesus, have sent my angel to give you this message for the churches. I am both the source of David and the heir to his throne. I am the bright morning star."
I, Brando, my M.O. is to artistically craft and code my pre-draft bars in cryptic graft odes
If I bestow you with forebode you can mathematically know how to decode my lyrical nodes
Tailored like Victorian Spode, my Machiavellian mockish modes spew Luciferian hypnotic bodes
My pessimistic poetic gloats goad you like a shepherd to goats makin' ya Sa node heat up & explode
Magniloquent-mastered Rap Kings eloquently entertain with keen words collegiately earned
And unheard by the herd of other DDO arguing nerds unconcerned about the lyricism you yearn
So I rap rhetorical riddles with Splurge, with a surge of aesthetic converge that cannot be submerged
Always avoiding a trollish urge to diverge into self-cataclysmic words that can scourge me in a purge
I articulate into nouns & verbs the thoughts you anticipate with a wait that makes you salaciously salivate
To fascinate your innate desire with debates that palpitate your heart rate similar to orgasmic ejaculates
I formulate verses to escalate and unlock the brazen shock that I rock that enemies can’t fold or knock
I’m economically hot like brokerage stock, ripped like the Rock my logic is on the dot like an African Spock
I'm an international clock ticking non stop, my debut was mocked a lot, now you shall jock—not my cock
But like a Bangkok Christian flock--my en bloc lyrical Kingdom built like Fort Knox
Don’t decry my rap vibe & inequitably deny this lyrical Apple Pie you see with your right eye
I spy like the Thai and battle cry a written manifesto guide dictated by a custom-made fly guy
If a seeker attempts to try to dishonestly imply a truth as a lie or I will tie his wig to a demise
In the sky like the Most High I'll ignore his cry as I roast him like hot rye then burn him in hot lye
He's antiquated like the Stone Age against this Lyrical Mage, "Hocus Pocus" I infect him with phage
I engage debating barricades to wage a raid and buckshot verbal rage like a sawed-off gauge
Disengage my striking curse, my birth shade will eternally fade this rube like a faded tan to beige
You backstage groupie, like old age Nicolas Cage, senile nigga, you are a previously read page
My darkness thirsty, I shadow Kings like Presley, a global phenomenon don’t test me, I show no mercy
Kickin’ like Wesley, I'm a Blade against you Truthies, infect both you beasties with obesity like Kirstie
I Juicin' my girlfriend with my Gin, my blue Bic pen my best friend like R&B then was to Boys to Men
My written rhymes blend into your mortal soul like carnal sin, again and again you shout “Amen”
Count up to 10 by then I've captivated 110 American women: singles & triplets & many twenty-ish twins
My kiss is in trend, ask Kara Lynn: do I transcend elation when I extend into her thin divided skin
Don't pretend I don't impend cause I’m a wolf to you hens, a vulture to you wrens, I brutalize cowardly men
Suspend 'em like a f@g end, conquer 'em like Eisenhower did Berlin, replay it on CNN, I close with “The End.”
a la mode -with ice cream on top or on the side
Spode -a brand of fine English porcelain
Sa node -a specialized bit of heart tissue that controls the heartbeat
goad -a verbalization that encourages you to attempt something
magniloquent -(especially of language or ideas) extravagant and lofty
diverge -extend in a different direction
en bloc -all together
phage -a disease
Presley -Elvis, King of Rock
Wesley Snipes - martial arts actor who played the character Blade in the Blade Trilogy; also a diss against Blade of Truth, Truth Seeker, & the half dozen other debaters with "truth" in their online name.
Kirstie Alley -an obese actress who can't seem to lose weight no matter what diet she does.
beastie -another name for a germ
f@g end -the time of the last part of something
Truth_seeker forfeited this round.
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Vote Placed by RichardCypher 2 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: con would have won this not for the ff. not a fan of christianity but the lyricism here was cleverer than other gospel raps. all con had to do was type pass and he would got my vote. pro was excellent but not an edge over con's lines. pro did show a better display of rhyming words with understandable description. but con gave deeper imagery. PRo cause of con's ff.
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