The Instigator
Sylux
Pro (for)
Losing
1 Points
The Contender
Danielle
Con (against)
Winning
43 Points

Oh god another rap battle...

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Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 12/4/2009 Category: Miscellaneous
Updated: 7 years ago Status: Voting Period
Viewed: 2,146 times Debate No: 10335
Debate Rounds (3)
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Sylux

Pro

I have never done a rap battle before, ever. Period. But that doesn't mean to go easy on me. I want this to be as tooth-and-nail, nitty gritty as possible. I'll let my opponent spit first.
Danielle

Con

You want this tooth-and-nail but you haven't come at me
If you don't attack me you'll fail matter of factly
Don't bail cuz that's exactly what I'm expecting
If you don't bring your game then there's no need for reffing
It's a shame; I guess you keep forgetting the setting
Of our last debate which I'm sure you're regretting
Another day, another wannabe
They just keep coming on to me
Projecting this image you're detecting so strongly
Protecting this title they try to take wrongly
Meanwhile my style's the one that gets rewarded
Tried to buy yourself some time but you can't afford it
Running this rap game; I've already been crowned
Shunning the shame of skipping the first round
I guess you couldn't come up with anything to say to me
So I wish you good luck in trying to find ways to hate on me
Now I'm feeling dubious; I doubt that you will manage
Better call UPS cuz nucca I'm the whole package
So I'll end this verse early; give you time to digest it
I suggest you come back only when you're well rested
It's been tested: you're infected, unprotected
Like me or not, my rap skills ought to be respected
Debate Round No. 1
Sylux

Pro

Matter of factly? It's a matter of opinion!
I'mma be comin' at'cha sideways, so watch closely where I'm swingin'
And singin' and spilling out my brains and my guts,
But don't worry, yo, I got plenty more to back me up.
You say you're ready for an attack, but I don't even see a shield up,
You're swingin' crazily and angrily like a rabid dog throwin' up
'Cuz your lyrics are silly, your rhymes are from old times
And your insults are givin' me a desire to play Metroid Prime (huh?)
So take this in, to digest it, your words you will swallow,
And then you will be crawlin' around, in embarrasment you'll wallow
I'm the Harvester of Sorrow and I will come down on you like a ton of bricks
So watch it, older punk, 'cuz my spittin's gonna be sick
So sick! It's worse than a T-Virus infected undead dude,
By the end of the battle, I think that all the readers will conclude
That my rappin's the best, you're stupidly fumbling
To keep up with my zest, and your song structure'll be crumbling
You're an unwelcome guest in the house of crude humbling
That's right; I'm the best...and I will send you tumbling
Down the mountain of pain,
The hills of shame,
Better take your aim,
'Cuz I'm chargin' and your out of time, mane.
Danielle

Con

My opinion's that I'm winning
You're sinking - I'm swimming
While ya going down like the Titanic in the Atlantic
See ya getting frantic, all in a panic
Have you going manic just as I planned it
My rhymes are so combustible - they're volcanic
Yours need to be adjustable and not so mechanic
I mean you must be delirious - clearly not serious
It's not eerily mysterious that you don't come near to us
And By "us" I mean myself and my rhymes -
See, they're their own entity
I got plenty more where that came from;
Rapping's part of my identity
Bet by now you want serenity
Cuz I'm about to blow you up like you're a Kennedy
But too bad - I'm friendly but can't award you that amenity
Nucca please, I'd be glad to show you up til I am seventy
Your verse made me sick; luckily I have got the remedy:
More talent, more style, more flare, more showy
More gallant's worthwhile; I care - you know me
I'm solely stupendous - you're homely and horrendous
Hope ya don't get lonely when I lay your rapping dreams to rest
Cuz yeah they're second best and should be put to death
Glad you're not rapping this out loud - wouldn't want you to waste your breath
You tried but demurely couldn't pass the test
While I purely proved that I'm the best
You prematurely second guessed
But that was poorly done in jest
As I'm securely surely blessed
So all that talk of beating me's wishful thinking
Dunno what you've been eating but it's clear that you've been drinking
Here the only thing that's embarrassing was your phoney rebuttal
If that's all you got then dear homie you're in trouble
I don't mean to burst your bubble but
Your stuff is rough just like the stubble so put
Yourself together and come at me swinging double
Meanwhile I'm ready to go for the solo home-run
Coulda struck you out already but you know that'd be no fun
Debate Round No. 2
Sylux

Pro

YOU'RE LIKE A GREAT BIG F-CKING SPONGE... JUST WAITING TO GET SQUEEZED!!
BY THE TIME THIS RAP IS OVER... YOU'LL BE CRAWLING ON YOUR KNEES!!
'Cuz I'm hotter than embers and cooler than ice at the same time
My rappin' and rhymin' can be best described as sublime
And cruel and malicious and vicious and capricious and pernicious and seditious
I'm supernatural; factitious, expeditious judicious and cooly ambitious
I'll build you up and tear you down like amansion made of gold,
Let you think you've won and when you're done I'll come out and rip you cold
I'll go insanely crazy, and I'm coming to destroy you,
Obliterate, annihilate, eliminate, eradicate, and desecrate the fate; a new course your life will take!
A downward spiral into the dark abyss that I create,
A crude and shrewd and lewd attack I spring; oh so spate!
You got lucky this round; I'm fresh outta time
To continue puttin' you to shame with my seamless, flawless rhymes-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s....
*slithers away*
Danielle

Con

If I'm a sponge then I'm Sponge Bob; you're my retarded side kick Patrick
You deserve a raise if your job was to create a verse made my a-ss sick
What's even worse is that you probably thought that it was adequate
To be clear I wish I could make it disappear like a kids magic trick
Visiting a rhyming dictionary; looks like you lost your balls and haven't found them
Being a visionary I see that if you had to rap those words out loud -
Then you'd be bound to mispronounce them; I'm not proud
See it's not that impressive that all you did was post a lot of words that rhymed
I suggest that next time you don't waste mine if you can't come up with something fine
See I'm already painted and primed; you're tainted and haven't chimed
With the standard I've set; see I'm the one that's sublime
Kicking lyrics so divine that what you're spitting can be seen and deemed a crime
I'm a straight up gangsta; you're a wanksta - don't be fooled, there's a thin line
You're not cool, I schooled you and defined what should be considered; you got bitter and whined
You're like the lowly lyrical mobster so why bother finding harmonious words to foster?
I'm a rapping hero like DiNiro - the sanctimonious flow Godfather
Gonna blow like Pacino getting dough in a casino up near Reno, Nevada
What do you know? You're practically a zero, you're a Nada
I'm lyrically superior and you're inferior; this competition's a slaughter
The superstition is real; to battle me you're gonna need an armada
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
Oh...
I fail at interpreting emotions through text.
I didn't have much time for my 3rd round, as it was the weekend and my family is Jewish, and it's Hanukkah, and... Oi...
Posted by popculturepooka 7 years ago
popculturepooka
Nice, nice. Sylux definitely went in on the 3rd round.

Lwerd, I like your multies. :)
Posted by Danielle 7 years ago
Danielle
It wasn't sarcastic :p
Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
Nice sarcasm.
*cries*
Posted by Danielle 7 years ago
Danielle
Great 3rd round, Sylux!
Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
Naw, I got all the Dead Kennedys albums.
IT HAS JUST BEGUN.
Posted by USAPitBull63 7 years ago
USAPitBull63
"Cuz I'm about to blow you up like you're a Kennedy"

Ding. Ding. Ding. It's over.
Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
That was some hot spittin'. I dunno how I'm gonna do against that one...
Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
I'm sure you know already, but in case you didn't, the streeties use "mane" as a new way of saying "man," named after the famous rapper with no skill whatsoever, Gucci Mane.
Posted by Sylux 7 years ago
Sylux
'Kay, sure.
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Reasons for voting decision: Pros lines weren't solid while con had better imagery and structure. Pro at the end, just threw together a bunch of rhymes while con lyrically demolished Pro with her disses.
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