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Started: 4/4/2014 Category: Arts
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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vampandaz

Pro

Who can write poems best on their feet? 1st round is acceptance, WHO EVER ACCEPTS MUST GIVE ME A WORD! (then I write a poem concerning that word) so if he/she said love then I write a poem about it. ANY WORD IS FINE, DOES NOT HAVE TO BE EMOTION! NO LIMIT ON POEM LENGTH, NO HAIKU'S!!!!!!!!!!!! So opponent agree and give me a word!
mimibrightzola

Con

(View on) Life
How twisted,
how mundane,
this deep dark pit splattered with the blood of suffering.
An endless cycle of pain agony and suffering.
When will it all end?
Yet what happened to the good things.
What happened to the flowers glittering under the sunshine, or the smile on your lovers face?
The flowers quickly withered.
You lover turned into rotting flesh and bones.
All of it is gone now, that the darkness has closed in.
Once it entraps you,
you will never escape.

I have a suggestion, instead of writing about the same topic for all the rounds, I want you to suggest the next topic in your response, so on and so forth.
Debate Round No. 1
vampandaz

Pro

(topic) Life ;3

I sit, alone, or not, it doesn't matter for I am far away.
a leaf falls swirling left and right being pulled,
tugged, ripped apart, and yet it makes its journey.
With its wings ripped, yet it doesn't cry
its adventure is long and gruesome.
over the period of a month or two
its membrane gets utilized taken away
to become the nurturing food to a plant
what kind of plant? any he could become
swamp grass, or a tree. either way he will be gone
a year has passed. the ground, wet from melted snow
but their in a pile of mud a plant has the
audacity to pull through and grow.
it grows tall and strong, not as tall as a tree
not as gross as swamp grass, but itself
with many small white pedals, and a yellow nose
it may have to go through hard times
with no bee's who visit, no sun in the shade
but every once in a while the sun illuminates it
bringing warmth and hope for the flower.
one day, the plant was lifted, stolen from its ground
and carried over to a large open space, with dark soil
and fertilized white beads, and she is planted.
the plant is no longer alone. it has many other plants
all wild flowers, said to be "weeds"
but look. this flower is free, with water, bees, and sun.
even though its not as big as a tree.

the next topic is depression.
mimibrightzola

Con

mimibrightzola forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 2
vampandaz

Pro

vampandaz forfeited this round.
mimibrightzola

Con

mimibrightzola forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 3
vampandaz

Pro

vampandaz forfeited this round.
mimibrightzola

Con

mimibrightzola forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 4
vampandaz

Pro

vampandaz forfeited this round.
mimibrightzola

Con

mimibrightzola forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 5
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Posted by vampandaz 3 years ago
vampandaz
why did you forfight round?
Posted by vampandaz 3 years ago
vampandaz
and wow, I love your poem!!!!!! its amazing :3
Posted by vampandaz 3 years ago
vampandaz
xD is that to me?
Posted by mimibrightzola 3 years ago
mimibrightzola
omaigosh if you become famous or something can you remember me then I will love you forever. pleaaaase <3
Posted by vampandaz 3 years ago
vampandaz
ohh okay that makes sence xD thanks
Posted by mimibrightzola 3 years ago
mimibrightzola
lol nvm, 5 rounds, I guess this might work until the end.
Posted by mimibrightzola 3 years ago
mimibrightzola
ehm, so I chose life right? so then you right a poem about life, then chose the next topic. I'll write a poem about it and choose the next topic, we'll clarify later, because 3 rounds may be problematic.

Anyways I'll be waiting :D
Posted by vampandaz 3 years ago
vampandaz
That's okay, and yeah that's what I meant, what topic should I write about?
or should I just write?
Posted by mimibrightzola 3 years ago
mimibrightzola
haha no problem, I am new to debate.org's formatting though.
Posted by vampandaz 3 years ago
vampandaz
Yay, im excited thanks for going against me :)
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