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Yavneh
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Bgirlctforlife
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Poetry Battle

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Bgirlctforlife
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 1/23/2015 Category: Miscellaneous
Updated: 1 year ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 365 times Debate No: 68816
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Yavneh

Pro

Poetry battle, you can talk about any topic. We'll start second round. Good luck!
Bgirlctforlife

Con

I accept this c:
Game on!
Good luck.
By the way, sometimes my poems are dark and scary- it only makes them more interesting though.
Debate Round No. 1
Yavneh

Pro

I wake up to a gray world.
Everything the same.
Perhaps life is just a chore.
An eternal bore, an endless game.

But everyday, I wake,
Another round to play,
And so, a strange blessing,
up to the guessing, today.

Sleep's blanket fades,
Eyes open, brain on,
An open chapter,
For ever after, shall dawn.
Bgirlctforlife

Con

In the end,
There's only darkness.
The only voices,
Are the demons,
they show no fondness.
Watch the time go by,
The clock is slow in hell.
Tick tock, time is up.
The grip is fading,
The light is draining.
Drag me down,
Into this illusion.
Tick tock, time is up.
This is my end.
And I wish you luck.
Debate Round No. 2
Yavneh

Pro

Yavneh forfeited this round.
Bgirlctforlife

Con

My fear

Snakes and sharks and bugs or thugs,
are all things that I may be afraid of.
Of all my years, I've had a fear of,
not dying young, but having my loved one...
my sister die before me-
All life has in store for she,
I don't know what i'd do, but it won't be long-
Till' i'm there too.

Ff by pro. Vote con.
Debate Round No. 3
Yavneh

Pro

Yavneh forfeited this round.
Bgirlctforlife

Con

Ff from pro. I don't feel obliged to post another poem. Vote CON. Thanks for reading!
Debate Round No. 4
1 comment has been posted on this debate.
Posted by Bgirlctforlife 1 year ago
Bgirlctforlife
Ten minutes, pro.
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Vote Placed by lannan13 1 year ago
lannan13
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