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mikicat10
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The Contender
Lazy_Lipids
Pro (for)
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0 Points

Poetry Competition

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after 1 vote the winner is...
mikicat10
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 10/21/2013 Category: Funny
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 425 times Debate No: 39233
Debate Rounds (5)
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mikicat10

Con

In this debate, we will be making a poem, funny or serious, whatever we choose with each round a different line (remember it has to rhyme!).
I got out of bed and stared blankly at the wall.......
Lazy_Lipids

Pro

The wall stared back at me and said I was small..
Debate Round No. 1
mikicat10

Con

....... Embarrassed and insulted, I stormed into the hall......
Lazy_Lipids

Pro

.....And then I realized, I was not at home at all......
Debate Round No. 2
mikicat10

Con

....... because when I stepped into the kitchen I began to fall........................
Lazy_Lipids

Pro

Lazy_Lipids forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 3
mikicat10

Con

then I landed on top of a big ball
Lazy_Lipids

Pro

...the ball was on top of the mall...
Debate Round No. 4
mikicat10

Con

....where two shopkeepers had begun to brawl
Lazy_Lipids

Pro

.....who were under the influence of alcohol.

Mikicat10 I loved this debate, and the poem composed is amazing. I am so proud of US.

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Signing of, Lazy_Lipids..
Debate Round No. 5
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Vote Placed by bsh1 3 years ago
bsh1
mikicat10Lazy_LipidsTied
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Reasons for voting decision: FF by Pro. Conduct to Con. Also, Pro's R$ line reused "ball." This created a clunky and needlessly repetitive feel to that segment of the poem. Arguments to Con. Interesting premise for a debate...