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The-Holy-Macrel
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judeifeanyi
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Poetry battle.

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judeifeanyi
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 10/31/2014 Category: Arts
Updated: 2 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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Debate Rounds (5)
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The-Holy-Macrel

Con

First round acceptance.
Second to fourth, poetry.
Fifth round finale.

Rules !!!IMPORTANT!!! :---:
1.) poetry must be about concepts and feelings. Ex: love, distress, death, life, time, being lost in feeling.

2.) poetry must be no longer than 6 stanzas and stanzas must be 4 or less in amount of lines. Lines must be within 5 syllables of each other. Exception: finale, your finale can be 8 stanzas long and can have up to 6 lines in a stanza. All rules not stated specially for finale apply to it.
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Max. Distance in syllables
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Not ok (not ok lines are marked with a(n) "#"
Stanzas can be different lengths
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Above- ok

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3.) have fun, if you do not you are disqualified.
judeifeanyi

Pro

let's flow. you begin
I accept
Debate Round No. 1
The-Holy-Macrel

Con

The best of luck to you and here it is.

I was happy once
I was a complete dunce
Then my sky turned gray
I haven't since seen a happy day

When will I see the sun
When will I finally have fun
I have no life, from myself I run
Only when I stop breathing am I truly done

But then I am desperate
And almost dead
I finally lost my head
My heart and mind were desolate

Then a blinding light
Saved me from my fright
I was found by god
By him I was truly awed
judeifeanyi

Pro

LOVE.
Every Mortal At Your Mercy Sits Like Death.
You are so pervasive. But Since Your Clarion calls,I must obey.
your deceptive techniques are far beyond the reach of men.
And ur voice draws like abbey.
Your secret is hidden in the consequence of mind, and ur trust far thrown away.
faith is like a ballon, and the lust is lost.
Love, do not deny me of this sin once that my strength shall cry.
Debate Round No. 2
The-Holy-Macrel

Con

I try to run, but i am in a trap
I am in a maze without a map
You call it love, i call it madness
You take away all my sadness

I am free
You believe in me
I can be
Anyone i want to be!

I am lost in feeling
My hard heart pelling
You have brought out my best
And now with you i am obssesed

I am free
You believe in me
I can be
Anyone i want to be!

You violated rule 2 when you used 6 lines insted of 4
I will exuse this. (rules made and stated in the very first round before you accepted it)
judeifeanyi

Pro

DEATH.
The Man Slaying Refrectory.
The Ungodly vessel of the generation.
The Hero slayer.
Lonely path finder.
Soul Killer and curse breaker.
Death!!! oh, the agony creator and lyric widower.
pains oh pains.
Debate Round No. 3
The-Holy-Macrel

Con

The-Holy-Macrel forfeited this round.
judeifeanyi

Pro

My Adversary forfeited this round but I await his return
Debate Round No. 4
The-Holy-Macrel

Con

The-Holy-Macrel forfeited this round.
judeifeanyi

Pro

Vote Pro.My Adversary opted out
Debate Round No. 5
1 comment has been posted on this debate.
Posted by The-Holy-Macrel 2 years ago
The-Holy-Macrel
Ignore the blue numbers.
1 votes has been placed for this debate.
Vote Placed by lannan13 2 years ago
lannan13
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