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Poetry collaboration

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Started: 12/19/2014 Category: Arts
Updated: 2 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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lilmisslawyer

Pro

So I'm going to start a poem and we are going to collaborate with more until we finish. Let's have some fun!

Sitting
I think about the way life goes on
How do I move forward
Can I ever go back
I've always thought that
time travel would be fun
But why go back
I have no regrets
Well maybe a few
But then my life wouldn't
Be the way it is now
Kinryu

Con

Phoenix

Men of Hezekiah,
With peacocks flying about them.
Do they not know
The Phoenix burns them all?

In the tempest,
Do men cry out in anger.
The Phoenix caws
The cry of war.

The Marshes of Inertia,
Bogged and never moving.
Only the Phoenix flies.

The crows feast on the eagle,
The noble blood on their tongues.
The blood that will be their death,
In this the Phoenix knows.

Woe to Sodom and Gomorrah,
Who craved only flesh of the other.
The Phoenix rained fire on them,
Their only pleasure pain.

In Chaos did some men rise,
To gain all and more they desired.
Yet the Phoenix burns their ladder,
And to death will they fall.

Many a men did eat and drink,
A unquenchable desire.
Now they serve a new purpose,
To feed the Phoenix's brethren.
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Posted by Kinryu 2 years ago
Kinryu
I like dark, symbolic poetry.
Posted by lilmisslawyer 2 years ago
lilmisslawyer
ik that i want it as a debate but thanks
Posted by Commondebator 2 years ago
Commondebator
This is something for the forums, not a debate

Still. amazing idea though
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