The Instigator
queenofmayhem
Pro (for)
Winning
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The Contender
SolSun
Con (against)
Losing
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Random Storytelling!

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after 1 vote the winner is...
queenofmayhem
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 3/21/2014 Category: Funny
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 649 times Debate No: 49662
Debate Rounds (4)
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Votes (1)

 

queenofmayhem

Pro

*Rules: I will begin the story. My opponent will pick up where I left off. Then I will pick up where he left of, etc. Each entry will be no more than 2000 characters. The ideal entries we will be looking for are creative and light, though still have a clear storyline.*

Once upon a time, in the mysterious halls of Hobby Lobby, there lived a little paintbrush by the name of Pierre. He was a very expensive paintbrush, slender in shape and vivid red in color. His smooth handle widened in the center and formed a fine point at the end. However, despite his pleasing proportions, none of the other paintbrushes wanted anything to do with him. They all had nice, soft bristles that created swoops and slashes and swirls. On the other hand, little Pierre had the terrible misfortune of being bald. He couldn't make swoops and swirls, he could only make dots. Dots were so basic, so predictable, Pierre could hardly stand it when he turned to the paper. So one night, as the manager's car disappeared for the night, Pierre decided that something was going to change.
SolSun

Con

One day, Pierre decided to hitch a ride to the People Hospital. There, he could find all sorts of things BETTER than a brush. He rolled off his shelf, and saw a jacket someone must've dropped. He rolled into the right pocket. After about 1 day of waiting, someone picked up the coat and put it on. The ride on this person was bumpy, so this person must be limping. What luck! The ride of the People Transportation Thingy was bumpy as well. Finally, he arrived at the People Hospital. The man walked in an hung up his coat on a Coat Stand. Dang it! How will he ever get to the People Hospital's supplies now?
Debate Round No. 1
queenofmayhem

Pro

It was in the dark, smelly coat pocket where Pierre got thinking. He had come to the Hospital pursuing plastic surgery, but he was beginning to have his doubts. He was perfectly content with his handle, he just needed a nice shock of bristles. It was then that it hit him. It wasn't plastic surgery he needed, it was a weave! Excitedly, the bald paintbrush threw himself from the coat and rolled away towards a salon.
SolSun

Con

Unluckily for Pierre, the salon was far, far, away. He rolled so far his body nearly worn out. When he finally arrived at the salon, he looked like trash. He saw a table with some bristles on it. How would he get up there? And, how would he get them on himself? How would he ever get fixed in his condition?
Debate Round No. 2
queenofmayhem

Pro

Filthy and defeated, Pierre looked hopelessly at his choice of weaves. They seemed to be taunting him, and his sadness grew. What did he expect? A stylist to fix a weave onto a paintbrush? He dragged himself back to Hobby Lobby and, ignoring the taunts of the other paintbrushes, he dipped his bald tip into some point. Hopelessly, and began making dots little brown dots in the shape of a dog. Pierre stared at the dog in shock. Excitedly, he began filling in more dots, then dotted grass in around it. He felt his heart racing as he created men and women and trees and boats. All with dots. It was beautiful.
SolSun

Con

Staring at the picture, he drew an Object Hospital behind it all. Suddenly, broken and tattered, he at this wonderful idea.
He sat around all day and waited. Waited and waited. About 2 days of waiting, someone saw how broken and tattered he ways. He was put in a stinky coat pocket. He hated coat pockets. Luckily, the person was heading right where he hoped. To the Object Hospital! He was starting to get hopeful. Will this guy fix him, or throw him away?
Debate Round No. 3
queenofmayhem

Pro

He worked on his painting for days, nonstop He added details in dots, all different colors. When he was finished, he took a step back and looked at his artwork. All the other paintbrushes looked at it too, in complete shock. You didn't need swoops and swirls to make art. You needed a canvas and a heart. All thanks to Pierre the bald paintbrush, pointillism was born.
SolSun

Con

Unluckily, no one would buy him because he looked like trash. One day, a man grabbed him and put him in his coat pocket. He drove far, and he finally arrived at the Object Hospital! He filled in his chipped-off spots and made him look like the best paint brush in the town! He even added bristles! However, when he arrived back at Hobby Lobby, he looked so fine, no one recognized him as he returned to the shelves!
Debate Round No. 4
1 comment has been posted on this debate.
Posted by queenofmayhem 3 years ago
queenofmayhem
I ask my readers not to be too harsh. This is just a fun activity I am doing with my little brother, mostly for the purpose so that I may obtain DDO voting privileges. :)
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Vote Placed by bluesteel 3 years ago
bluesteel
queenofmayhemSolSunTied
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Reasons for voting decision: Neat concept. Pro did a slightly better job telling a consistent story and evoking the imagery of the scenes.