The Instigator
Danielle
Pro (for)
Losing
52 Points
The Contender
Vi_Veri
Con (against)
Winning
55 Points

Rap Battle 2: Lwerd vs. Vi

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after 22 votes the winner is...
Vi_Veri
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 1/25/2010 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 7 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 8,248 times Debate No: 10956
Debate Rounds (2)
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Danielle

Pro

== Intro ==

Welcome to Battle 2 (which is really my first) with my wonderful opponent, Vi_Veri. I'd like to thank her for accepting this challenge and joining me in battle, as well as feverish for hosting this tournament and Mangani for judging. Also, thanks to everyone else who's participating -- can't wait to face you all -- and to those cool enough to respond with positive feedback and constructive criticism.

== Auxiliary Issues ==

1. I'm aware that this is more of a rap than a battle. I did that intentionally.

2. I would have recorded this with a webcam so I could have done something interesting with the presentation, but unfortunately my mic sucks. I downloaded this program to help with sound quality but I know it's not the best anyway. Besides, Philosophical's R1 presentation in his battle with Omelet was too much for me to handle... I don't know if I could be that cool!

3. Lol @ the random Biggie interjection in the song <3

== Lyrics ==

Hey pretty baby what'chu doing in this tournament?
Don't you know you're just for show like my ornament?
I'm the real MC; you just look good next to me
So don't forlorn a hint; I was born to spit
And you were born to look good
Get yourself a cap, Red Riding, so you know what it's like to be hood
Yeah you might like writing rap but you don't know Hip Hop
Me, I'm not a gangsta but I can hit your G-Spot
When I get your knees locked
Ya now I find a tease hot
Sleazy with degrees rocked
Not easy do these b's spot
Best sex in threes, shocked?
Cooler than the breeze, ma
We kick it like Reeboks
Flow's ill but no disease, nah
I like your double D's bra
Trouble when my freeze thaws
D's law's to get you up and down
Like a see-saw til you scream, "Please, Lawd!"
(Cuz my sexpertise raw)

I love it when you give me a massage
To the homies who know me giving Biggie an homage

I love it when you kiss me down my spine
To the girls I made squirm to confirm I am fine

I love it when you lick between my thighs
So don't stick on a disguise to win this rap prize

[ Cuz I see some ladies tonight that should be having my baby... baby ]

First and foremost let's be clear on my intentions
Roast the competition then get you honorable mention
Cuz simple comprehension's enough to note ascension
Of me over thee and anyone in between
You're lovely but I'm a lyrical machine
The Queen on this scene
Princess, you'll win less; pray for a miracle dream
The tension between us is unnecessary
So fvck the attention - get to undressing me already
I'm so dope that I made you a fiend
Let's hope that you're clean
Cuz I dunno if you heard me but tonight we're getting dirty
I'm glad that you're curvy and I know that you're purty
It's just too bad that your raps are unworthy
So Vi, why you here b? I thought I already told ya
And I'm not a liar, I'm the rider - you're the roller
I'm this DDO rap game nations sole owner
I'll finger you like a Playstation controller

I love it when you give me a massage
To the homies who know me giving Biggie an homage

I love it when you kiss me down my spine
To the girls I made squirm to confirm I am fine

I love it when you lick between my thighs
So don't stick on a disguise to win this rap prize

[ Cuz I see some ladies tonight that should be having my baby... baby ]

I'm thinking I'm the bomb and that's why I vote like one
Kidding - I like getting people's panties in a bunch
You should know that I'm good at that; I'm glad you're no hooded rat
Matter of fact, I take it back: get some blunts - help these kids RELAX
Cuz they're hating's only compensating whatever it is they lack
So they can kindly mind they biz to keep their shiz in tact
Pop quiz: Who tops this? Only you when I'm on my back!
So forget needing - I'm all that you could ever want
I'm so good at eating out you'd swear I own a restaurant
And I promise no evil whore's next
I love your body and your cerebral cortex
No need to copy my style for some shoddy vile vex
Don't forget: I don't want nobody; I just wanna kiss down your neck
Check: I don't mean no disrespect and don't you second guess
This battle's only sloppy cuz I just want your sex
Vi_Veri

Con

Because you pulled a Biggie, the most suitable way to combat it is with a Tupac :)

Some Info:

Italian translations:

Vinci = I win

Si perde = You lose

Corona reference -- sun's outer layer is called a Corona -- translation "Crown"

Enjoy

--- Lyrics ---

INTRO:

How your words curl, you sound so cute, I'm impressed
But I only need to look at you, girl, and you get undressed

CUE MUSIC:

Hey there sexy, I'm Vi
Now please don't be nervous
Is my name ringing a bell?
That's cuz you give me service
Call this a warning or it'll have to be a repeat
going easy on me mirrors the day we did meet
You were loudly spent, forget about discreet
I got a wink at the check out, had to pay for the dent
Show me like an ornament, Yeah baby I'm the star
With an iced out corona and a spliced up cigar
Slipped in your slot, thought you were coin operated
Flipped you heads or tails, you sure as hell cooperated
either way, babe, you're on your knees
doin' whatever it is I please
I'd tell the crowd the rest, but unfortunately it's X-Rated
so back to you bein' my b1tch
hell yeah you ridin' me, on my lap- I'm the rolla'
it's hard to drive and you wont let me pull over
I'll leave you Reeboks, I'll be lacin' up Adidas
"Impossible is nothing" when against your "Freestyle"
An answer to your question: You're the reason I'm here, Ma
To present the confession, and yeah I'm bein' sincere, Ma
Quid pro quo, Pro - you sold out, dear, and I'm here to take DDO
Remember it's only business, so get to bein' my secretary and blow--
Oh!
you know it's hard to record when doin' me in the studio
I score so easy, you should call me a free throw
That's right baby, I got you on your back and I'll nail
all the right buttons, I deliver faster than email
Here in the Chi we do it harder, better, faster, stronger
The reason why you couldn't stay in Brooklyn any longer
Yes, Baby, I was mafia from a very early age
drove a different car every day, never had to earn a wage
That's the original gangsta, different money, same ways
Your type blow snow, while my people blow J.F.K
"Vinci"? No, "si perde", I'll have to disagree
I have you up against the wall like the N.Y.P.D.
Doesn't look good, seems you're in a rough place
This is the easiest way to say it, I know it's hard to face
Your not so dope, at best your rhymes are bourgeois
I know why they call you L, and it's cuz I'm smoken yah

OUTRO:

No need for tension, just gimmie the gold and take your bronze
Stay classy New York, gentlemen prefer complacent blonds
Debate Round No. 1
Danielle

Pro

With many apologies to my opponent and everyone else, I will not be able to post another round at this time.
Vi_Veri

Con

Challenge me to a 1 round debate with your next round.
Debate Round No. 2
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Posted by Noradrenergic 4 years ago
Noradrenergic
Rap battles on debate.org? I would never have thought...Make it audio and I'm in.
Posted by Vi_Veri 6 years ago
Vi_Veri
Shove it, Sorrow. You shouldn't attempt to breathe.
Posted by Paris 6 years ago
Paris
Every time Vi_Veri does a battle it's always really close! She got the points from me versus Geo but I don't know about this one lol gotta love Biggie!!!!!!!!
Posted by Sorrow 6 years ago
Sorrow
Women should not attempt to rap.
Posted by feverish 6 years ago
feverish
This battle is kind of void, L didn't want to finish it and Vi has now been banned so I'm not gonna bother posting an official decision.

Obviosly L is in the next round and Vi would also be if she had not been banned.
Posted by True2GaGa 7 years ago
True2GaGa
Lol. if i were to do one of these, I'd lose, most likely because I probably have the whitest voice in the world lol
Posted by Spaztoid 7 years ago
Spaztoid
Very true, most individuals do expect a certain voice when listening to rap, unfortunately because that's the voice that rap has been done in. I actually don't hold your voice against you, as I have heard individuals with very high, "white," voices rap very well. I personally think that the depth or husk of individual voice does not make them a good or bad rapper, but the musicality of the voice does.

As I said, I think you are very lyrical, but your voice does work against you for rapping. Not a bad voice though.
Posted by Danielle 7 years ago
Danielle
Nope, I didn't take it offensively. I'm well aware that I don't have a "rappers voice." Vi does have a deeper and huskier voice than me so that works to her advantage. I'm white and I'm female so all the odds are against me :) I believe I can out-do anyone here lyrically (I'm more about content than just rhyming words though) but my voice will stand in the way and probably keep me from winning. People can try to be as unbiased as they want, but at the end of the day it's going to work against me big time. I was just pointing out that maybe if we didn't 'expect' rap to come from deeper or huskier voices that maybe it would be different, but it is what it is :)
Posted by Spaztoid 7 years ago
Spaztoid
And I can't spell...
Posted by Spaztoid 7 years ago
Spaztoid
Well, hmm, that was rather random. My comment had nothing to do with race or "sounding black." My comment said that some people weren't meant to rap, and it's true. In the same ay that some people have the natural ability to sing, dance, run, or swim, some people re giftd with the ability to rap well. I think you are very good with words, however your ability to actually prodcue the words with the correct flow didn't apeal to me as much asmanyother performaces that I have heard. I thin that Vi did a better job at actually rapping, but you did better on the lyrics. All in all, my comment was meant in jest, so I do appoligize if you took it offensively as that wasn't my intent.
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