The Instigator
Blank
Pro (for)
Losing
1 Points
The Contender
Danielle
Con (against)
Winning
17 Points

Rap Battle

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after 4 votes the winner is...
Danielle
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 9/27/2010 Category: Arts
Updated: 6 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 2,466 times Debate No: 13231
Debate Rounds (4)
Comments (20)
Votes (4)

 

Blank

Pro

I have read many of the rap battle on this site. I would like to try it too.
Like this one http://www.debate.org...

Rule.
We both must compose a original personal rap in each round

If my opponent would like to start they may, or if they would like me to start that is also acceptable, anyway is fine.

Have as much fun as possible.

If my opponent would like to do some kind alternative rap battle like instead of the usual insult rap battle we can rap about a topic of each others choosing, that is also acceptable. Please use the 2nd round to tell me what kind of battle you would like. But this is a rap battle follow the rules.

This is a writing battle not a video battle, I do not have a webcam or anything so don't make a video battle.
Danielle

Con

Thanks, Blank!

Because I've had to go first in just about 99% of the battles I've done on this site, I'll allow my opponent to start the first verse. He can rap about anything of his choosing. For my first verse I will do the same, and if my opponent agrees (we can discuss it in the comments section first) maybe we can come up with some topics or themes for the next verse. If that's the case, I'll let my opponent know at the end of my round. For now I vote free reign :) Good luck to my opponent!
Debate Round No. 1
Blank

Pro

Identity theft

Look our for your info, you think your safe but u really aint though
Hackers gonna try to get your sh1t, just like sex and nymphos
It's very simple, don't share your info
People who trust internet ads are just stupid people
This ain't a joke though, people going through your trash
Trying anything to get at your cash
Just like a player trying to get yo numbers
My ID could say Danielle (if that really is your name), but my name is really Favors
Beware of your papers, put it in the shredder
Cause these b1tches are really crazy just like the Joker
You won't say im delirious by asking me "why so serious?"
When i see you broke, i be asking you just because I'm curious (sarcastically)
If someone takes your wallet, don't expect a hero
Expect when you check your bank to read a big fat ZERO
You be on the street beggin little kids to share their cheerios
The cops find these thieves as fast as Netzero
Don't trust your friends, even if you love them
Anyone can be bought, inevitable like sweat in a gym
Don't me stupid like a rapper
hackers are like a hoe with a turkey baster
You be staring at your bill screaming "That aint mine!"
Your credit cards are your babies, kidnappings a crime
People are fueled by greed, its b1tch but it's reality
Just like Cleveland and twenty three
I only got a little time to post, I'm sorry if it suck
I only got so much time so ehhh WTF
Danielle

Con

So of course I'm waiting until the very last minute to do this lol. I have just a few minutes to post and it's nearly 3AM. That said, I kind of did this in a semi-battle style, simply playing off of my opponent's first verse. I'm not sure if I want to submit a topic or just have him go again free-style, so I'll leave it up to discussion for the Comments Section (we can decide if we want to assign topics or keep it optional).

== VERSE 1 ==

Check the mirror, glorious, I like what I see
To be clearer I'm Notorious like B.I.G.
They wanna steal my thunder and take my ID
So no wonder they're going under like HIV

Yeah Danielle, that's me, like the MLB
And you're Triple A so I'm outta your league
I pass your rhymes well, they're as old as Roy
Don't Ask Don't Tell you gay Soulja Boy

... Alright that was low so let's put it behind us
But you're beneath me so you can just call me Your Highness
The thief he can try it but the I'm chief of the tribe
Have a seat, I'm the driver, you're just along for the ride

It's shotgun, keep it, but you shoot dire Blanks
My victorious secret -- I'm cute like Tyra Banks
Except admittedly I'm not America's Sweetheart
You can't get rid of me cuz I'm book AND street smart

Quick as a whip and sharp as a tack
Equipped with the wit and heart to fight back
A star from the start with no plans to stop
Sorry you're the man but I like it on top

Many try to imitate but can never duplicate me
That's why so many in a group all hafta hate me
I don't blame them one bit - I'm Miss Threatening
My alias could be Dennis cuz I'm so mennacing

So don't underestimate, that was your first mistake
Talking sh!t about Cleveland like I could relate
My papers don't need to be torn and shred
Cuz N.Y.C's where I was born and bred

A city slicker - that's why I'm a bit quicker
You spit word vomit like you can't hold your liquor
Meanwhile I was raised on the streets of New York
It's evident that I'm heaven-sent when I talk

This flow just spews out of me: strong and articulate
You're wrong if you think you can win if I spit
String you along til you break down and quit
I'ma keep singing this song and make you my b!tch
Debate Round No. 2
Blank

Pro

Yo my name is blank for those who don't know
This rap has taken a turn to becoming a diss show
L paved the way, round 2 fired the first shot with the war proposal
L i expected better, but i guess like austin powers- You lost your MOJO

I'm Blank i spit raps like fire, its very simple don't test me b1tch
All the ladies swarm me like I'm a model from Aberocrombie and Fitch
I got some over excited d1ke who's got no business on the mic
Your raps made my eyes bleed, here let me shed some light

If biggie came back to life he would die again
because he found out he got compared to a WHITE lesbian
Tyra Banks is just a copy of the Oprah Winfrey show
L is just a shining example of another b1tch who's unoriginal

Calling me soulja boy I like that, but are your forreal?
It seems like you just begging me to make you my soulja girl
haha its okay L the mic is not the only way i can give pleasure
I got something in my pants that can't even be measured

Tired of you spitting about your street smarts
Ain't that a trait for hookers - before they start?
I sat here wondering why all your raps fvcking suck and blow
I'm sorry, my bad, i mixed your raps with your career though

For all the males on DDO, L is Brooklyn's number one Hoe
making d1cks shrink for a dollar, LOOK Kids its a magic show!
This beef war has started you made it happen like Contraception
Now i gotta let my raps do the terminatin like a doctor and abortions

Your highness, step back and make way for the KING
your rule is over your just my second string
Cause I outrank you in every system known to man
WE ain't on the same level now do you understand?

You just a rookie who's got no business playing the expert mode
only way you gonna beat me is with some motherfvcking cheat codes
If rappers had jersey than i be rocking twenty three (Jordan)
I'm sorry but your just inferior at least lyrically
Danielle

Con

== VERSE 2 ==

Oh, alright... so it's time to get personal
Murk this jerk for what it's worth and then I'll
Disperse of this verse like squirt in a urinal
I drive you worse than a hearse at your funeral
Your coffin's tossed in with flowers in the back seat
You call me Austin Powers cuz you wanna shag me
Why else would you brag about heat that you pack
It must eat you alive, all those inches you lack
You've got nothing I couldn't add on with a strap
That's why Ho Ho Ho's like to sit on my lap
I could clap - even with 2 hands behind my back
Then I'd slap - you around like a snare or hi-hat
I snatch like Venus fly trap, try to fight that
I mean this, you're no match, I'm on the right track
Now look - it's obvious, your vexed up jealousy
That's cuz out of us you're the b!tch when you're next to me
All I need's a pen to beef, I'm a Titan, Tennessee
Fighting with my might cuz I'm right, it's my destiny
But I think you got all kinds of personal problems
Dude if YOUR d!ck's shrinking then I think you should solve em
And not project your issues on to other people
Just cuz I tend to get under your skin like a needle
So I'm calling you out like I'm taking the class roll
You can call me a thong cuz I expose you, a$shole
Yo listen to what I told ya, cuz you heard right
I take your sh!t over like I'm in the Third Reich
You think you go farther cuz you father the hype
But I said I'm like Biggie cuz I'm larger than life
And why'd he hate being compared to a dyke
Just cuz getting p*ssy's what we both like?
Oh, I get it, now I know you're into men
That must be why you blow with a d!ck or a pen
Your only female attention's found from a les-bian
Got the e-mail my round's due, now I impale you again
You're not my friend so don't pretend that you know me
You're like a glass window, I see through you, you're phoney
So you might as well forfeit this futile endeavor
Award me the winner cuz I'm brutally clever
And beautiful, I'll dutifully rule this forever
The usual ruse you pull's never better
Cuz - I dissect your organs like Dexter Morgan
You won't pay me a compliment cuz you can't afford em
Your sh!t is dead, post-mortem, ever boring
Overdose on the dopest dope like a moron
I'm told I'm perpetually conceptually greater
Wrote down your best ideas, that's why it's Blank on the paper

== NEXT ROUND ==

Again I'll allow my opponent to choose whatever topic he wants for the final verse. I will most likely either choose between politics or a third person story.
Debate Round No. 3
Blank

Pro

Blank forfeited this round.
Danielle

Con

Goodness gracious, it's always the same sh!t. Each day I get stronger like I weight lift. I mean, this is what happens when fools come on to me, and try rapping like a bunch of stupid wannabe's. I'm like -- a boom box the way I share these raps, but these P*SSIES are nothing but SCARDEY CATS. It's just -- a little frus-tr-ating when they try to come my way, and then once I get to rapping then okay they're M.I.A.

I've only finished a battle a couple of times cuz I cut with my rhymes -- never color in lines, I cover the crimes of other kid's lines cuz they all love mines. I mean mine... but who's gonna correct it? Those who tested me failed and lost their investment. That's the testament of this assess-a-ment. They start off strong and then I leave them des-per-ate, cuz they got it all wrong if they think they've better spit.

But enough chatting - there's plenty of evidence. Someone here started rapping and I've been the best ever since.

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Alright, clearly the above was just a joke -- I literally just wrote it as I was going on the fly lol. Basically I'm just poking fun at the forfeit but don't expect anything in this round to be judged. Instead you can award conduct points to me automatically and then for the better arguments (verses) just use the first 2 that we did in order to keep it fair and have our 2 verses competing instead of doing 3 on 2. Thanks, Pro, and good luck!
Debate Round No. 4
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Posted by TheSquadBoss 6 years ago
TheSquadBoss
The only problem with rap battles is that without a decent beat to back u up its hard to get into the lyrics.
Posted by feverish 6 years ago
feverish
Not a bad first effort from Blank up until the forfeit. A lot of assonance rather than concrete rhymes, which was interesting and sometimes worked better than others, unoriginal with Oprah Winfrey show was perhaps my favourite. L just quite a lot stronger here though, especially in round two and the forfeit based lyrics at the end were pretty good too!
Posted by Blank 6 years ago
Blank
ok lets keep it free then
Posted by Blank 6 years ago
Blank
oOo i thought what you said at the end was for me
Posted by Danielle 6 years ago
Danielle
Oh, did we agree to assign each other topics in the last round? I thought I was pretty clear that I wanted to keep it free-range all along? When I said I was planning on doing politics or third story, I meant that's what *I* was going to do for my final verse lol I said you could do your final verse on whatever you want as well. Of course if you still want to assign topics then let me know asap and I'll give you one by tomorrow morning.
Posted by Blank 6 years ago
Blank
and that was really good L a lot of the lines had me going wow ouch... haha
Posted by Blank 6 years ago
Blank
hmm i would like my topic soon L, and i guess your topic will be a rap from the perspective of a gaybasher.
Posted by Loserboi 6 years ago
Loserboi
L always the last minute poster
Posted by Danielle 6 years ago
Danielle
Actually I take that back -- I looked back at 1 of my battles with Vi, and I think we just took different approaches. She did more of a battle verse and mine was more like a non-battle verse (after all, the song I used was Big Poppa so clearly my intent was not to BATTLE lol). In that case I can say that I could definitely see why I lost by 3 points; that seems pretty fair (though I'm confident I could have done better had I posted a second round).
Posted by Danielle 6 years ago
Danielle
Yes, 3 of my 13 losses are rap battles -- one to omelet (in which he definitely out-rapped me, as his music was FAR better, but my lyrics blew his out of the water imho so that kind of peeved me), and two other times to Vi, in which I also think that my lyrics out-did her but hey I can't control people's biased votes. Did you really think she did better than me in those battles? You can be honest lol. And if you look at my verses with omelet, for instance, they weren't strictly AABB at all if I recall.
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