The Instigator
S98-SAMMAN
Pro (for)
Losing
11 Points
The Contender
bluesteel
Con (against)
Winning
17 Points

Rap Battle

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after 6 votes the winner is...
bluesteel
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 9/18/2011 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 5 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 2,247 times Debate No: 18374
Debate Rounds (3)
Comments (5)
Votes (6)

 

S98-SAMMAN

Pro

I look forward to a fun rap battle!!

NOW.......

IM LYRICALLY AND EMPIRICALLY GIFTED,
IMMA SURPRISE YALL LIKE WHEN OJ GOT ACQUITTED,
WHEN I BATTLE PEOPLE ITS JUST UNFAIR,
I HOLD IT DOWN AND YALL ARE UNAWARE,
I PUT MORE DAMAGE ON THE MIC THAT GAME DOES WITH 50,
ALL MY **** IS REAL AND THATS NO MYSTERY,
I WOULD KEEP GOING WITH THE RAP AND MAKE YOU LOOK EVEN WORSE,
BUT I REALLY DONT FEEL LIKE CALLING IN A NURSE

Your mind isn't loose your hanging it by one simple noose. Let it free cut the cord
Break outta the horde- run like a stallion- don't go for the gold just work for a medallion
Stay fresh and keep in stylin, keep the thoughts compilin, run like a cheetah but strike like a lion
Take them like prisoners shut em down like its Guantanamo
Droppin bombs atomic, speed super fast like sonic, watch out below GERONIMO
New years resolution for everyone is to stay fit, won't happen its bull ****
Thought until my mind implodes, ideas coming in the bulb is now lit
Like a long term disease my beat stays in your head, like its cancerous
Barbed wire fence lined with guns, don't even come close its too dangerous

You come up here thought you were going to be fought
But I come prepared my rhymes so good they seem store bought
You try to keep up with me but i'm too fast just can't be caught
Im the teacher now listen be taught so you won't always finish last
Fist clenchin your ready to lash, or you gettin ready to itch that rash?
Itunes top I get all the cash, holdin my aim steady shoot the wolf that tried to stray
No way you lost the battle never would of thought I was coming in here to win
Scheme so deadly its now the eighth, ninth, and tenth deadly sin
Runnin outta beats the I can play over in my head, intelligence is now startin to shed
Somethin rolled off your shoulders, started to convulse bro I think you lost your head
But I'm done playing dead I'm starting to come alive, now fame is what I strive
bluesteel

Con

YO . . . YO . . . YO . . .

DDO, hear me ROAAAAR!
You aint' gonna find my beats in no store.
I come straight at you from the digital underground.
My words hurt far worse, pound-for-pound.
Better watch out, I ain't pullin no punches.
So gather round and hold onto your lunches.
My rhymes are the illest of the ill.
I spew more filth than the BP oil spill.

My opponent said his rhymes sound like they'z bought in a store;
They sound more like something you'd hear from a ten dollar whore.
This little boy wants to try to be an EMCEE???
He don't have nothing bad to say against me.
I am the UNASSAILABLE, the one and only bluesteel.
I treat my opponents like dogs and make them heel!
Once I'm done, this little boy will be crying to his momma.
My words will addle your brain right into a coma.

Did you know my opponent makes his girlfriend wear a veil?
You wanna know why? Cuz she's one fugly female.
It turns out my opponent is m93's little brother.
Know how I found out? While I was plowing his mother.
And I must say, that's one fertile field.
In about 9 months, a baby boy it will yield.
And we'll name him bluesteel2, right after his dad.
And you know what's really gonna make you sad?
He'll make better beats than you when he's just a toddler.
I won't be like your daddy, I won't be no coddler.
My baby will grow up street mean and beat you upside the head.
And that's THAT! With this last stanza, I leave you for DEAD.
Debate Round No. 1
S98-SAMMAN

Pro

Thanks for accepting. I hope we have alot of fun doin this. =)

NOOOOOOWWWWW!!!!

LISTEN HERE NOTORIOUS,
IM ABOUT TO BE VICTORIOUS,
THIS BATTLE WAS OVER BEFORE IT STARTED,
THIS RIGHT HERE AINT 4 THE FAINT-HEARTED,
U COME AT ME AND THATS ALL U GOT,
...OHH YEAH I FORGOT,
UR A BIT**,
WITH UR LAME @$$ $HIT,
COME ON MAN,
U AINT EVEN SET A BATTLE PLAN,
BUT I DISTROY YOU WITH THIS,
CAUSE IM THE $H!T WITH THIS,
I BE SPITTIN FIRE ON THE MIC THEY SHOULD CALL ME THE DRAGON,
U TRY TO B HARD BUT UR LYRICS ARE SAGGIN,
DOWN TO THE FLOOR,
MAN IM SURE EVERYONE KNOWS THE SCORE.

You need to shut the he!! up, big red
Before I beat u up and send u cryin in yo bed
u think u hardcore and all that, but u aint all that
I'll prove it by beating you down to the mat
You cant rap, and thats a f***in fact
so just get off yo computer and stop yo motherf***ing act
Let real rappers do their thing, cuz they no good $h!t
if you dont that ill give u a hard hit
and im speakin the truth right there
cuz b!t*h, when you rap, on one will really care
maybe you need a vacation so get the hell outta town
and bitch dont talk $h!t to me cuz i will put the smackdown

you say my rhymes suck and sound like cr@p
b!t*h, yo the on who cant even rap
I will put the smackdown cuz thats what I do
Put b!t**es in their places just like you
you cant keep up with me and i think you know that
yo just too sad so go back to yo geek @$$ pals and chat
bro! look i'm S98!
Thats the number 1 trait!
man you all you do is talk $h!t like a little b!t*h
i bet yo a white boy with a hi pitch
i can beat up in any rap battle, any time any day
ill beat you so bad that youll have nothing left to say
nigga, this truth so just accept it
before you make a fool outta yo self and get hit
you think you can keep up with me, huh dude?
but you cant, and when u loose youll be booed!!!!!!!

ohhhhhhhhh!!!!

lol LETS C WHAT UVE GOT!!!
bluesteel

Con

I've seen Mexicans, and Vietnamese that think they black
But never as bad as this sorry sad sack.
He spent too much time praying to Mohammed
Now his beats so bad they make you wanna vomit.

Man, don't you got any ORIGINAL sh!t?
You stink worse than the ring in my girlfriend's clit.
Stop copy and pasting from the last battle you lost.
YOU whiter than Tony Danza from Who's the Boss.

This guy wants to act like he's all big and tough?
He ain't been in a fight since he come outta his mom's muff.
The only way he could make someone quiver in fear
Is with a suicide vest strapped to his big fat rear.

What kind of sorry-@ss piece of sh!t name is "the dragon."
The only thing I seen is your momma's tits, which be saggin.
You tried the whole rap thing, but it's time to quit.
With your busted-@ss beats, you'll never be legit.
It's okay Sahmir, time to go back to your taxi.
It's that time of the month, time to strap on your Maxi.

You did good writing me such a pretty poem,
But right about now it's time for you to go home
And don't come back until something dope hits you
Fvck it, you can take the mic home wit you.
So stop copying 5 cent beats off Chamillionaire
And try to show these people that you actually care.
Debate Round No. 2
S98-SAMMAN

Pro

OK So...

[ALL CAPS RAGE THIS TIME]

U SAY U GONNA PUT THE SMACKDOWN THEN DO IT,
DONT JUST KEEP RUNNING YOUR MOUTH AND SH!T,
B!TCH I DONT PUT ON AN ACT THIS IS MY LIFE,
U THE ONT THINKIN HES THE SH!T IN THIS HERE STRIFE,
B!TCH U SAY U GONNA BEAT ME DOWN GO AHEAD,
NIGGA F*CK WITH ME ULL BE HANGING BY A THREAD,
U TALK ABOUT REALL RAPPAZ BUT U AINT ONE,
U F*CK WITH ME HOMIE ULL GET OUT DONE,
NIGGA GIVE MY A HARD HIT,
I DONT EVEN GIVE A SH!T,
BECAUSE U CANT EVEN FLOW,
NIGGA U NEED TO JUST LET IT GO,
UR RHYMES SUCK AND U SOUND LIKE CR@P,
NIGGA U IN A F*CKIN TRAP

F*CK THE EAST SIDE MANE,
THIS IS A WEST SIDE THANG,
COMEING AT ME NIGGA BUT U CANT MAINTAIN,
THESE LYRICS GONNA ROCK YOUR BRAIN,
NOW U GOT 3 B!TCHES ON ME,
THEY NAMED JR F-U AND NTK,
I B LIVING THAT WESTSIDE LIFE,
IM SHARP AS A POCKET KNIFE,
U SAY MY RHYMES R WEAK NIGGA URS R CRAP,
UR A GOOD EXAMPLE Y EAST SIDE FELL OFF THE MAP,
UR FLOW IS LOOSE,
MY LYRICS ARE ADDICTING THEY SHOULD CALL IT DRUG ABUSE,
UR LYRICS ARE SMALL HOMIE MINE R MUCH BIGGER,
ANIT NO NEED TO EVEN PULL THE TRIGGER,
U SAID IT UR SELF U'S A F*CKIN CRACK HEAD,
COME AT ME NIGGA ULL BE SEEIN RED,
THATS BIG RED TO BE EXACT,
IM LIVIN THE THUG LIFE WITH THE PAPER IVE STACKED,
ALL U CAN DROP IS A MAX OF 10 BARS,
U F*CK WITH ME U GONNA LEAVE WITH SCARS,
U CALL ME A LIL BOY,
NIGGA WHAT U NEED TO DO IS EMPLOY,
A MOTHA F*CKIN BODY GUARD,
CAUSE I B BANGIN ON FOOLS WITH NO REGUARD.

GOOD LUCK, MAY THE BEST MAN WIN BRO!!!
bluesteel

Con

Nice try with that East coast rap style bullsh!t,
But you may as well have just quit.
You say East Coast rap is dead?
Fool, I'll shoot you in your head.
My boys Biggie, Eminem, and Jay-Z
Would all tend to disagree.
Your insults are softer than a pussycat,
Cuz not only that
But we all rep the place where we FROM
And you know where I come from
San Jo! Straight out the ghetto.
I know you bad at geography,
But that's WEST COAST motherfvcker, learn to read.
http://www.debate.org...

Oh by the way
I know you're gay
And I tried to fvck your sister in the sh!tter
But my dick was too big, it didn't fit ‘er.

I think I finally figured you out
Why you tryin to be a POSER gangsta in this bout…
You'd love nothin better than to go to jail
On some petty larceny epic fail.
When Big Bubba tells you to bend over in the shower
You do so GLADLY, you dainty little flower.
You say my flow is loose, at least my butthole's tight.
YOU'D give up prison tossed salads without a fight.

Didn't you listen to your last rhyme meathead?
Pay attention, you're saying the same sh!t you already said.
You just go from battle to battle with your memorized rhyme
Saying "I'm so hard, my opponent's beats suck" all the time.
Man, the only thing that's hard about YOU
Is the hard on you get from watching your "boyz" in the pool.

I agree, you bout as sharp as a pocket knife.
Fool, you ever HAD a Swiss Army in your life?
That sh!t is about as likely to draw blood
As the last cat fight you had with your "best bud."

I won't deliver the death blow, son
I'll stay my lyrical gun.
It's cuz I actually feel bad for you.
And I think our audience does too.
So the next time you have a smelly Persian cabby named Sahmir.
Give him a 5 spot from me and don't shed a tear,
This is just a LYRICAL battle he lost,
He won't have to pay the ultimate cost.
Two gladiators entered the ring, and one got knocked down,
But don't worry, I'll spare this silly little Persian clown.

Now the battles over, y'all can go and vote.
And when I win, I promise I won't gloat.
Debate Round No. 3
5 comments have been posted on this debate. Showing 1 through 5 records.
Posted by InVinoVeritas 4 years ago
InVinoVeritas
Good stuff. SAMMAN started strong and then went downhill.
Posted by S98-SAMMAN 5 years ago
S98-SAMMAN
kohai you're the one thats BS. And nice win ratio by the way.
Posted by S98-SAMMAN 5 years ago
S98-SAMMAN
Omg vote bomb!! Always on my debate!!! God shrawdera?? And really do u need to be against my religion??
Posted by kohai 5 years ago
kohai
"He spent too much time praying to Mohammed
Now his beats so bad they make you wanna vomit."

Hilareous. Actually, it is MohamMAD
Posted by InfraRedEd 5 years ago
InfraRedEd
Here's some rap for you
http://www.meetmyminion.com...
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Vote Placed by thett3 5 years ago
thett3
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Reasons for voting decision: This is a counter to the f16 conduct vote..Blue should not lose points for using "dirty words" in a RAP battle...
Vote Placed by kohai 5 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Whle con won, I am counter bombing
Vote Placed by ShrawderA 5 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: GET BIG SON!!!
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Reasons for voting decision: blue had a much better rap. I had a hard time getting into S98's raps and was able to just dive right into it, so it was more enjoyable.
Vote Placed by Danielle 5 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Con had better content (more clever lines, puns and disses) as well as a better "flow" i.e. meter and more "on-beat" rhyme scheme. I could go into further analysis, but that'd probably be a waste of time though I absolutely will upon request. Instead of penalizing Con for mentioning Pro's religion, I think it was good that he was specific in his disses as it showed he was referencing m93 directly. Pro didn't say anything to put down bluesteel specifically. A funny debate :)
Vote Placed by F-16_Fighting_Falcon 5 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Good on both sides. I'd give it 3-3 but Con used some dirty words losing conduct.