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Rap Battle

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Started: 11/18/2011 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 4 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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The first round will be an acceptance of this debate. Please put:

1. why you accepted
2. experience in rapping
3. and age



1. Rapping is my hobby.

2. Spoken word performance in high school and random cyphers with friends

3. 19
Debate Round No. 1


Aight cool nigg. Let us begin.
We don't know who'll lose, and who will win.

But I gotta strange feeling down under my skin,
that i'm about to release a rapper deep within (me).

This is the first round, so i ain't trying to sin.
So i'll be smooth and soft like a violin.

I wanna see what you got. You and the hair on your chin.
I wanna know you well and where in the hell you've been.

I'm gonna let this go so round 1 can end.
Now post your rhymes and submit them, my friend.


Now I might be new to DDO,
but don't take that to heart,
cause once this battle's over you'll wish I didn't start.

My flow'll make your gut ache like crunches,
you won't see my arm swing, but you'll fvcking feel the punches.
I'll bury you under hits, like you were at the bottom of the Billboard Top 100's.

See pro says that, to find his inner rapper,
he has to drill deep beneath the surface,
too bad I'm a lyricist from my heart to my epidermis.

He claims he wants to know me,
so for a penny I'd offer him my thoughts.
But then I'd feel bad... since a penny's all he's got.
So no charge today! My wisdom's on the house:
Nobody wants to pay for your thoughts,
but we'd all drop a bill for your shut mouth.

See I'll leave you like a recalled Toyota, broken down and shaking.
Though car's problem was unintended accelerating,
when you rap, you don't press forward, you always seem to be braking!

And that's a testament to your first round,
it was soft and bland like a marshmallow cloud,
while I spat fire and poured red paint on your town,
you might as well forfeit and head back in the crowd,
cause just like this run-on sentence I'm the only one stoppin' me now.
Debate Round No. 2


Yo mane you're lost, and now You think that you're sweet,
but you don't know your weak and can't keep with the beat.

You know your rythym is trash; your setup's far from neat.
Let me teach you how it's done so you can take a seat.

You think its all about length. All you can do is go on.
You could talk trash all day- diss me eve' til dawn.

You think your words mean something. well my friend, you're wrong.
So i'm gonna stop right here, not go all night long.


Now he's going down that quality-over-quantity road,
ironically the quantity of quality in what he wrote,
sums up to a tiny bit more than zero.

With your lines so shallow, you don't even present a threat,
I could dive headfirst into a pool of your rhymes and not get my face wet.
You're so far behind, I'm in the shower and you ain't even start the race yet.

My rhythm is trash? Kid you need to recognize.
Take the time to understand my lines,
close your eyes and vocalize.
Only then you'll realize
my flow's more perfect than anything oscilloscope could synthesize.

This 15-year-old male has no experience, no feathers in his cap.
Kid can barely ride a bike, let alone grow a mustache.
I doubt you've sat in the front seat of your mom's car,
so now it makes perfect sense why he can't handle bars.

Think about that line for a minute,
actually, take three days to ponder.
You'll need all the time you can get to pick up on that triple-entendre.

See it's obvious the infatuation you've developed for me.
How you keep talking about my body hair and that I'm so sweet,
claim I'm your friend when I'm the complete contrary.
You were delusional at best thinking you could step to this heat.

Debate Round No. 3


To tell the truth man, you've stepped up the beat.
Your rythym improved. You left behind your seat.

But now I think you're coming to my favorite street.
Better hope you're prepared for this upcoming feat.

These verbal fights of ours. They're just nothing new.
You trying to hurt me. Me trying to hurt you.

In this world of ours, there's just far too few.
No one can rhyme very well, no more beats are true.

Though these disputes we have happen every day,
No one knows what's right, they don't know what to say.

We have the wrong examples, and things on display.
We put each other down bro, it's just the wrong way.

Why you puttin me down dude? Where's all the love?
Rap's not about filth when push comes to shove.

We need to compare our skill. It fits like a glove.
Then there's respect- from below and above.

Seriously mane, we should be comparing our rhymes and rhythym, not our hate.
Good luck to you, my friend.


caveat forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 4
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Posted by caveat 4 years ago
And yeah apologies again for the forfeiture... family first and all :P
Posted by caveat 4 years ago
Thanks all! :D

I really enjoy how DDO has creative "debates" like short-story battles, photography, and of course rap battles.
Posted by kyro90 4 years ago
Wow caveat was really good!
Posted by OberHerr 4 years ago
Well.....I am impressed to say the least. Nicely done, though I think CON's had more.....feeling? I dunno but I liked them better.
Posted by PeacefulChaos 4 years ago
Pro showed how there needs to be no hate. I liked how he incorporated that in his raps. But then Con showed there was nothing personal about it, it was for the sake of the debate. Conduct goes to Pro because of forfeit. Both sides produced stellar raps, I liked it! Very entertaining :)
Posted by caveat 4 years ago
Con's Round 4

Me improving is virtual certainty.
You should know by now,
after seeing me getting better and better each round.
Claiming I left my seat…
Oh, you thought I was the one sitting down?

I'm like a wolf challenged by a sheep.
I would ask you to get on my level
so you wouldn't be worthless to beat,
but you ain't even on my street,
let alone the same building as me.

I've noticed you've got rap and rap battles confused,
so allow me to educate and straighten up your views.
Battles built reputation and settled disputes,
while rap told stories of injustice and rebuke.
Since then, hip-hop's movement has grown,
and the struggles subsided,
leaving us with rap battles where no *real* conflict resided.

See, for you I've got no hate, just lyrical aggression.
We're comparing rhythm and wordplay, not fighting oppression.

You tried your hand at battling, but you didn't know the roots.
Got handled, then complained cause you didn't know what to do.
With my flow, I'll show again that I'm superior to you,
a misinformed youth with skin too thin to handle the truth.
Posted by himilkyes 4 years ago
Yeah Mane its coo
Posted by caveat 4 years ago
Whoops... I left for my family's place back home and I guess I calculated the days and hours wrong haha. Would you let me post a final verse here in the comments?
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Vote Placed by PeacefulChaos 4 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: vmpire beat me to yet another debate, lol. RFD in comments.
Vote Placed by vmpire321 4 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Hmm. I thought that CON's raps were superior, but the fact that he forfeited the last round forces me to give PRO conduct. Nice raps guys!