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Rap Lyrics describing Mental illness

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toamatt26
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 12/8/2013 Category: Music
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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Imquisitor014

Pro

I challenge anybody to write more articulate rap lyrics than my original Deception
Of Perception. Give it your best shot, ladies and gentlemen.

Deception Of Perception By Barry Hurwitz

feel the pain,
inside my brain
from psycho bitches, so insane...
hear voices, screams
themes, horrific dreams
in your mind, focused like laser beams..
feeling like your skull's on fire,
like you are about to expire,
everything's down to the wire,,,
You feel,
like nothing's real
that's the deal
it's the deception
of your perception
deception of your perception (3)...
episodes,
secret codes,
taking you down dangerous roads,
as your sanity explodes...
relationships,
sink like ships,
each one like another bad trip
let it rip....
lose many battles, but win the war
like the hammer of Thor
hardened to the core.
Feel,
like nothing's real
it's the deception
of perception
deception of perception...
toamatt26

Con

It's hard, to even think about it,
all the things that you have to think up in spit,
but you should know how it feels,
all the pain, that it fills you,
and it really deeply hurts, untill you
finally think about all this pain until its too late and it kills you!

My opponent always states,
that what the victims hate,
are all the physical pain
that makes their brain"s stain,
but what he should know
is not the physical damage that they cause,
but all the mental possibilities that are all flaws

It hurts, to wake up every morning,
thing that your useless, your nothing
knowing that everything you do best
that almost everyone else in the world can do better
That the world would do fine without you,
its better if you don"t talk
cause the world wouldn"t matter if you were there by the sidewalk!
its hard to think about what its like to have these strains,
all these thoughts that go through the brain,
all it takes is confidence
but thats the problem, they don"t have it and their loosing their sense
their self esteem is going out of the fence
all these thoughts that decrease their chance
of surviving through this life of hardships, going through their heart just like a lance

All they ever want is to be just fine
to be normal and not to worry about time
to not be considered different from lemons but limes
but being average isn"t their chime
They think their world is just an accident and crime
and thats why I"m debating this all up in a rhyme.
to speak for those to shy to chime.
Debate Round No. 1
Imquisitor014

Pro

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toamatt26

Con

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Debate Round No. 2
Imquisitor014

Pro

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toamatt26

Con

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Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by toamatt26 3 years ago
toamatt26
Well looks like my opponent didn't submit either. Vote con anyway!
Posted by toamatt26 3 years ago
toamatt26
The time limit is 3 hours.... I wont be here in another 3 hours so i guess i already lost.

Attention Voters: Please choose whoever you think has a bett round one (because i wont be here probably for round two)

Thank you.
Posted by STAGIESTCOSINE 3 years ago
STAGIESTCOSINE
hahaha!
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Vote Placed by Josh_b 3 years ago
Josh_b
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Reasons for voting decision: toamatt just seemed to be able write a song based on the simple provokation that he couldn't do it . pro seemed to have used deep thought to come up with his song, but in the end it didn't even make sense to me. his use of irony is poor.