The Instigator
GeoLaureate8
Pro (for)
Winning
29 Points
The Contender
AnimeFanTony
Con (against)
Losing
8 Points

Rap/Poetry Battle 2

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after 7 votes the winner is...
GeoLaureate8
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 5/5/2009 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 8 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 3,105 times Debate No: 8117
Debate Rounds (3)
Comments (10)
Votes (7)

 

GeoLaureate8

Pro

I challenge Con to a 3 round rap battle. One verse per person, per round. Must be original and written by yourself.

I will now proceed to present my first verse:

My rap style reign supreme
Far beyond anything you've ever seen
I'm able to rap at a velocity
Anti-gravity propulsion machines
That can travel at light-speed will never reach
Ring the alarm, my underground bunker has been breached
Electromagnetic scalars activated, your mind is impaired
Phaser mechanism initiated, attack me, you wouldn't dare
That's what messin with GeoLaureate will getcha
Your body will be floatin down the Rio, no regrets, you betcha
I harness the power of the Atlantean gods
No mortal man can overcome the impossible odds
I'll send you through the dark abysmal portals of a black hole
Genetically mutate your physical structure, can't you keep up with my flow?
In this world you are an insignificant little kiddy to me
I AM the Epitomy of Infinity!

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AnimeFanTony

Con

I first would like to thank my opponent for challenging this to me abd urge him not to take any insults personally. Here goes my first verse:

You sytle is nothing compared to mine
When I make my rhymes there just so divine
Man I take rap to the next level
It's in MY raps that people love to revel
Because I'm the best and everyone knows it
When I defeat you that you'll have to admit
As for the odds they dont matter to me
I overcome always of this you will see
So I ask that you for the next verse bring his best
Because against someone like me he's gonna be stressed
And he knows that everybodies completely dissing it
Because compared to me your nowhere legitimate
And in your crazy theories we're all under control
But the fact is in your heart is a whole
So to fill it up you have these crazy theories
There like something outta a crazy sci-fi series
So as class is ending indeed I must go
I'm on a level above you and you're just my hoe
Debate Round No. 1
GeoLaureate8

Pro

I'd like to thank my opponent for accepting this challenge and for the prompt response.

I will now unleash my next verse:

I'm about to destroy this battle like a thermonuclear weapon
Your defense is futile when I unleash this toxic venom
My unlimited power extends so far, the Universe bursts
My raps so deadly, I leave your body layin in a hearse
That's right folks, you heard it here first
I stay in the lab crafting devastating rhymes
One of my lines overpowers even the most divine
I possess the ability to concentrate the energy of the Sun
Absorb it into a sacred crystal, release it and watch you run
You don't know what kind of catastrophe you got yourself into
To say my name in vein is blasphemy, plain and simple
My intent is so malicious and sinister
I'll recite every religious text in reverse to your minister
And tell him he's a good listener
Call on the parishioner, have you had enough yet mister?
This verse is enough to end all life on earth indefinitely
All that will be left is the apparition of astrobiological entities
My vocal intensity reaches 180 decibels, now that's loud
Your physical construct is anatomized into a molecular cloud
You really think you can survive another round?

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AnimeFanTony

Con

AnimeFanTony forfeited this round.
Debate Round No. 2
GeoLaureate8

Pro

My opponent has forfeited the second round, but I will not hold back.

I will now proceed with my final verse:

I'm about to take this to a level beyond your capability
I blow up your facility, disrupt your tranquility
Don't pity me, is anybody feelin me?
You're no match for my advanced ability
Your futility is worthless when I step to the plate
Against me you will meet your tragic fate, there's no debate
While you spend your time spreading dire falacies
I travel at hyperspeed and colonize entire galaxies
No one in this Universe wants to battle me!
I don't care if people laugh at me
I will soon be elevated to the rank of Supreme Majesty
I will not allow any such slanderous travesty
My electrical, energetic concentrical robotic sentinel
Will lacerate your ventricle, now it's time to get technical
I transmutate as I cross through the photon belt
Into an immortal being able to make titanium melt
I pour xenobiotic substances onto your skeletal
Incredible, inevitable, your rhymes aren't even legible
My mathematical precision leaves incisions
On your mediocre rhythmatic revisions
I envisioned a much more challenging opposition
My composition counters your position like nuclear fission
Not to mention the tension of divine intervention
It's my contention that led to your suspension
You will be left behind during my ascension
to the seventh dimension of perfection
Final analysis, this is my profession
Mass destruction of Con, he has met his defeat
My final mission is now COMPLETE!

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AnimeFanTony

Con

I must apologize its true
And this debate I concede to you
I haven't been on but I'm not to blame
But I forfeited a round which brings me shame
And now I type this out in haste
Because I only have 5 minutes to waste
My parents nearly blocked this site
And I'd never get to see it's light
So I've been missing for about a week
And I have obviously past my peak
So I must end after telling my tale
My parents are coming and I just went pale
So goodbye to you and everyone here
I will remember you and hold you all dear.
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by Udel 1 year ago
Udel
Con's verses read like bad little kid poetry. pro's verses flowed better and he had better imagery, such as ringing the alarm for underground bunkers. Good thing pro won!
Posted by Mimo1991 8 years ago
Mimo1991
Good stuff man, the consciousness never fails to succeed in these situations lol.
Posted by rangersfootballclub 8 years ago
rangersfootballclub
this debate deserves a lot mare credit than its getting lol.
Posted by Danielle 8 years ago
Danielle
Feverish, I like you. Hah.
Posted by feverish 8 years ago
feverish
The deluded might of Geolaureate clearly triumphs over the weak righteousness of Tony.

Geolaureate uses more intricate rhyme schemes; whereas Tony's rhymes are all masculine (rhyming merely one syllable at a time), Geo uses feminine rhyme structures (rhyming two or three syllables in succession eg. fallacy/galaxy, battle me/laugh at me)

Rap is of course a medium of poetry designed to be heard rather than read, so an online "rap battle" can only ever be a lyric contest, if debaters posted an audio file of themselves rapping maybe results would be different, but on lyrics Geo has it, I can't vote anyway so my opinion is irrelevant of course.

*warning: comment posted while inebriated*
Posted by Mimo1991 8 years ago
Mimo1991
Ha ha yeah thats because mainstream rap is full of meaningless nonsense.
Posted by AnimeFanTony 8 years ago
AnimeFanTony
Unlike most mainstrean it's not just cursing with words thrown into it.
Logical nerd rap pwnz.
Posted by rangersfootballclub 8 years ago
rangersfootballclub
wow watch out rappers of america , you might eb replaced by rappers who words 90% of the population have never heard of lol.
Posted by snelld7 8 years ago
snelld7
lol Gangsta!
Posted by Mimo1991 8 years ago
Mimo1991
Ha ha dude i love the logical and technical verses!
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