The Instigator
the_dark_debater_007
Pro (for)
Losing
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The Contender
lannan13
Con (against)
Winning
28 Points

Rap battle

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after 4 votes the winner is...
lannan13
Voting Style: Open Point System: Select Winner
Started: 9/2/2014 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 2 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 720 times Debate No: 61174
Debate Rounds (4)
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the_dark_debater_007

Pro

I am getting addicted to rap battling. Con can either use the first round for simply acceptance or vacate their last round, depending on preference. One round (either first or last) must be devoid of raps. Violating this, as well as forfeiture, constitutes a full loss of debate. 2,000 character limit, 72 hour debate period, and "select winner" voting style. Good luck in advance!
lannan13

Con

I accept.
Debate Round No. 1
the_dark_debater_007

Pro

thank you for accepting here is my rap: these days when I lie and go to sleep in these empty night
These doubts of mine would amplify as they try to testify to
convince me and make me wonder if I even truly do love her
Since the first day, it hurts to think about but it hurts more to sink this cloud
cause I am now on level 9, in heaven as I endeavour to spend our time together
for better but in this same petal we find, thorns we have to handle
storms we have to weather, from which we will learn to never
be separated, these are the steps to makin'
something special from two first loves
it's magic and we see through the doves
No tricks, no playin' games, so go on, claim to hate
even My brain's aim's to break, my will and my feelings
I'm too sane to make, a decision, too many dictions
and my need for assurance shifts my sense of direction
A lack of any traction, between my thoughts and my actions, it's wayward
So I'mma cast aside my fear and questions, and play near
the edge and hopefully you'll see our rings if we're ever your neigbours

Here a link to my beat : www.youtube.com/watch?v=2p6nMnypEoo#t=45
lannan13

Con

(I appologize as my Spacing doesn't appear to be working)
In the name of the Father, Son, and Holy Spirit,
You want me in a rap battle then so be it.
Unlike Jesus, you won't have a Resurrection.
How could I lose to a guy who can't get an errection?
My opponent here doesn't even know how to rap.
We can all see that his skills are cr@p.
You better watch out Dark_Debator_007,
I'm going to rain down on you like it's Armaggedon.
Like the 4 Horsemen I bring forth Death and Destruction,
I believe it's time for me to give you a proper introduction,
I'm gonna be the winner of this match, Lannan13,
Time for you to head to the guillotine.
I'm handing out so many raps like my name is St. Nick,
There's a reason that my bars are so sick.
Time for me to banish you to the Shadow Realm,
As I'm the king of the World, Yeah, I'm at the helm.

Call me Goku Cuz here comes the Spirit Bomb.
Hell I'm smoking you like Cheech and Cong.
My opponent has left like a hommer from Babe Ruth,
I'm going to win this battle and that's the truth.
Debate Round No. 2
the_dark_debater_007

Pro


Go to this web to see my rap:http://rappad.co...

lannan13

Con

(I'd like to point out that your rap link is broken and when you click on it you get an error page, also my spacing still appears to be off as these are suppose to be 4 line bars.)
Lannan13, United States Marine Corps,
'Bout to write into the Book of Lore,
Going to end your life today,
And serve your a$$ up on a silver tray.
I find it funny to you come to issue a challenge,
Cuz you're going down to zero, enjoy the plunge.
On your knees cuz I'm the Pope,
Then I'll cut you up like a line of coke.
I'll shove my size 9 boat up your Guadalcannal,
You're a chicken just like General Zhou,
I'm the face of perfection,
The real DDO Champion.
Bow down and worship me, The real Rap God,
Your rhymes and lyricical content is flawed,
You better beware of my might.
Imma win this fight.
I'm the King of this Game.
While I bask in the glory of the Hall of Fame.
Get ready for your fall,
Cuz it's Life Liberty, and Lannan13 for All.
Debate Round No. 3
the_dark_debater_007

Pro

My, my, my, so many misspelled words,
I think this guy must be high as a kite, as he flies with the birds
Bye, bye, bye, he hears in his mind as he comes back to earth
Time to die Hunger Games style, you'll "Rue" your birth

This man's flow is downright degradable,
His loss'll be found more than slightly undebatable,
I won't call him "sir", but I'll call him a lady, though
This crappy little girl gets thumbs down in the stadium

You're the "Creator"? Of what? Only crappy raps came from you
The only way I'd call you "Tyler" is if you drowned at Tippecanoe *
C'mon and step up, you can't fill my damn shoes
I wear a size eleven, you only measure a size two

So watch out DDO, Phoenix comes back with the flow
This man's in De"Nile" **, he pretends that he don't know
I can't tell if he's trying, or if he's just a troll
Cuz his lines are dying, and like Rick, I'm on a roll

Naw, this ain't Halloween, it's Nightmare on Elm Street,
Forget Freddy, your scariest Nightmare is me
Call me Jason, I'll come on Friday the 13th
And I'll smash your head so hard it'll knock out your teeth
And I'll leave you on the street as you slowly but surely bleed
And the Marines will be fewer and prouder once you leave



lannan13

Con

We fly militant, brilliant thinkers, tanks,
On the mic I'm swift so give thanks,
As a child I asked Jesus why,
You be like damn his vibe, damn this guy.

Girls out front can't wait to touch me.
So when you roll up to smoke you better be.
My world was a stepmother three years older then me.
I watch from a distance so I can see,

Work out in the yard up North, tryin' to burst out,
so come on baby let me see what you about,
Medina warriors, when we came they fucked it up.
USA edges France 3-2 in Fed Cup.

Just a plain one, tryin' to shed a little light,
Now how many MC's must I stomp tonight,
The sentencing, would of made the average crook happy.
But the rap game to me seems shady.

'Bout to be the Lockness Monster, Gimme dat three fitty.
Double homicide, they keep the fear in the city
One by one I'm knockin' you out,
Show the world what I'm about

You lost out in this battle your gone,
Just look, I won.
You rapping against me is a fvckin' joke,
And just like Porky Pig said, "That's all folks."
Debate Round No. 4
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Posted by goobalooba 2 years ago
goobalooba
pros beginning rap was weird..
Posted by 9spaceking 2 years ago
9spaceking
pro's rap is really really strange...
4 votes have been placed for this debate. Showing 1 through 4 records.
Vote Placed by ShadowKingStudios 2 years ago
ShadowKingStudios
the_dark_debater_007lannan13
Who won the debate:-Vote Checkmark
Reasons for voting decision: No lyrics in R3 is akin to Con passing you the mic & you remain silent for your 3 minutes then pass the mic back. Pro starts his 1st verse off politely which is all wrong for a battle. Con was simply more superior in lyricism. He never really tried to explain any disses, he just shot them, hard. Besides I'm a little bias, I prefer debaters to draw on real elements in their life, it gives their raps more authenticity & depth.
Vote Placed by 9spaceking 2 years ago
9spaceking
the_dark_debater_007lannan13
Who won the debate:-Vote Checkmark
Reasons for voting decision: pro used another link so conduct to con/ Con had superior raps
Vote Placed by LDPOFODebATeR0328 2 years ago
LDPOFODebATeR0328
the_dark_debater_007lannan13
Who won the debate:-Vote Checkmark
Reasons for voting decision: The link that pro provided was broken. Plus, lannan13's rap was superior compared to Pro's.
Vote Placed by bladerunner060 2 years ago
bladerunner060
the_dark_debater_007lannan13
Who won the debate:-Vote Checkmark
Reasons for voting decision: A subjectively scored debate. That said, Pro lost an entire round by trying to post it elsewhere--You only have the space of the debate, Pro, I'm not following that link. In a more formal debate, you can't use your sources in lieu of arguments, and in a rap battle you can't leave a round blank except for a link and expect to get credit for it. Overall, of what was presented, I preferred Con's to Pro's, and so award the win to Con. This is only your second debate, I think, Pro--welcome to the site and I wish you luck in your future debates! And, as always, happy to clarify this RFD.