The Instigator
NDECD1441
Pro (for)
Winning
7 Points
The Contender
JediDude
Con (against)
Losing
2 Points

Rap battle

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after 2 votes the winner is...
NDECD1441
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 8/14/2017 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 10 months ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 595 times Debate No: 103511
Debate Rounds (4)
Comments (16)
Votes (2)

 

NDECD1441

Pro

Hallo! Rap battle, usual rules, first round acceptance, 16 bars, no forfeiture. Good luck.
JediDude

Con

I look forward to rapping against you.
Debate Round No. 1
NDECD1441

Pro

Hi flying spaghetti monster guy
Explosions, let me let the toaster fly
And then im jabbing at the Jedi with a lightsaber
But at the second round, I will show you my might later

You are the weak jedi, I'm the sith lord
Strum to the beat, hear this diss chord
Then I'm whaking you all over the place with my harpcishord
You may hurt me a little but I'ma be restored

Just because I acceped your request you think I'ma show mercy?
Think you deserve to win deem yourself worthy?
But your bars, like your clothes completely dirty
Blast you from Liverpool straight to New Jersey

I already won in the first round, my bars more supreme
Turn a dream to a nightmare, force you to scream
I ain't even trying, no point to do so
What's one plus one? JediDude, "I dunno"

(Excuse if the bars are a little fast. I was listening to "Biterphobia" earlier. Fast rap is implanted in my brain)
JediDude

Con

You really so basic you listen to Eminem?
You just sitin in your den and listen to all of them?
And then I"m wondering bout that gall callin me weak,
Cause bitch, I"m kylo ren, you"re f*ckin reek.

You see, I didn"t get this physique by listenin to him shriek,
I was working on my bars, while you were takin a leak.
Now this rap "ll be lookin a bit bleak for this little sneak,
When I take your your harpsichord and break it like this little antique.

You can take your mercy and shove it up your @ss geek,
Your like Cersei, your at your peak,
But now I have amassed a dragon technique,
I"ll roast you freak, and make you wish I didn"t speak.

This time I"m the top dog, and you're just my b*tch,
Maybe you should ditch this act of being the next Eminem,
So bark up a storm, while I pitch you this next bar,
You think your a star, but you're just a thug who's been pushed in cop car.
Debate Round No. 2
NDECD1441

Pro

At least I have a home, my den covered with traps
This guy JediDude brings a bad name to rap
You are Kylo Ren, then I'ma be Rei
Oh wait I'M the jedi. At least I ain't g@y

You are the top dog? Under me anyway
You think I'm giving my best, I could beat you any day
I'm the boss around here, you ain't got any say
Work you up till midnight you leave without any pay

I'm a thug with a cop? It's opposite day!
Lifetime in jail you can't run away
Dragon technique is a traitor, it killed you they say
Survived all this while only for your skin to flay

I'm your b*itch? I'm the one fvcking you
You plead me to stop but I ain't even through
So many words to say so little bars, true?
Better watch your mouth little doggy or you may get sued.
JediDude

Con

Con's dough will get took, that's a foreclosure!

Why is he a tranny, maybe his mom’s exposure,

Don’t worry bro, you can keep your composure,

Just hope this one rap battle will be you're closure


How many bars will it take

just to lyrically rape and humiliate this fake?

you rap more like a wannabe Slim Shady,

But honestly you’re bars more frail than an old lady.



I flayed this b*tch, and all he do is bray

I castrate, mutilate, spayed and displayed to humiliate,

And all he do is serenade like some old maid!

If I wanted a freak show I’d just go to your moms stockade!


But don’t worry, we know your charade,

I mean it's the same jade zaid shady’ portrays!

I’ve sprayed you're @ss like I’m in an arcade,

Now it's time for you to go home unmade.



Debate Round No. 3
NDECD1441

Pro

I can keep my composure? I'ma take yours too
This "wannabe" slim shady ain't even through
You will notice im a rap god compared to you
Even purushadasa is nicer (but more annoying) to whom shall I sue?

I used to be a fan but now I'm an air-conditioner
Not Eminem's b*tch just listen your the prisoner
At least Masterful is good and is a good listener
Released from jail but for you, I'm the executioner

You say my bars are weak like an old lady?
You can't even get on my level, a rapping noob maybe
At least I have a role model, you ain't got anyone
I wanted a good battle and rapper, you ain't got any done

This little b*tch will regret ever having accepted
Such weak lines were not what I expected
4th round face it you dunno how to rap
I'm your b*tch? You better shut your trap
JediDude

Con

You've been dying to battle me NDE, and it's been a long wait,
but you even look at me the wrong way and it's long blades.
See saw shank, there's no escaping this sh*t, it ain't Shawshank.
Now can you picture a way beyond these bars? Or is it all hate?

I'm on a level that you never knew,
see two dimensional rappers,
depending how it shapes up on paper can be acceptable
But 3D writers go so far in depth you can literally see what he says to you.
But I'm on a different level of writing, the fourth dimensional

Timing, it's too exceptional
Fvck your sh*t, it's all skeletal

I write sh*t you never do, some people said he's a one trick pony
Well I'm correcting you

Cause your lines gotta connect two points to be one dimensional,
you're not even that.
Die mentioning (dimensional) my name next to you
Cause it something you could never measure to.

Debate Round No. 4
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Posted by NDECD1441 10 months ago
NDECD1441
Impatient huh? K then =) however im in school now so I don't think I can do it yet.
Posted by HellishPanda 10 months ago
HellishPanda
Write a rap for round 2, don't keep me waiting.
Posted by NDECD1441 10 months ago
NDECD1441
No he isn't my alt. I don't even know him.

He also voted JimShady and not me in our battle
Posted by HellishPanda 10 months ago
HellishPanda
Is djspk5 your alt NDEC? Cause he seems to vote only for you in all your rap debates with little to no content as to why her voted.
Posted by NDECD1441 10 months ago
NDECD1441
Well its okay, i set the requirement for 16 bars, if you cant reach it, I think it will be justified.
Posted by cakerman 10 months ago
cakerman
scratch that, your entire first round rap is stolen from other websites. Automatic disqualification
Posted by cakerman 10 months ago
cakerman
scratch that, your entire first round rap is stolen from other websites. Automatic disqualification
Posted by cakerman 10 months ago
cakerman
just like you stole pretty much your entire first round rap in our battle from 1 website.

"Only at the end when I was out of any other roasts" my a-s, honestly you should lose this and our battle by default for stealing.

The funny part is my ad-libbed bars were better than your stolen ones
Posted by JediDude 10 months ago
JediDude
Honestly caker, this is my first rap battle. I did do that, I'll admit it, but only at the end, when I was out of any other roasts I could use.
Posted by cakerman 10 months ago
cakerman
JediDude used bars from a King of The Dot rap battle in the final round with:

I'm on a level that you never knew, see two dimensional rappers,
depending how it shapes up on paper can be acceptable
But 3D writers go so far in depth you can literally see what he says to you.
But I'm on a different level of writing, the fourth dimensional

directly stolen from Gjonaj versus Danny Myers. look it up, it isn't coincidental. The very last few bars are also stolen directly from that rap battle. Jedi also stole:

You've been dying to battle me NDE, and it's been a long wait,
but you even look at me the wrong way and it's long blades.
See saw shank, there's no escaping this sh*t, it ain't Shawshank.
Now can you picture a way beyond these bars? Or is it all hate?

From a battle between Loaded Lux and Calicoe

Instant disqualification by my standards
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Vote Placed by JimShady 10 months ago
JimShady
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Reasons for voting decision: NDECD gets 4 points, and JediDude gets 2. Not taking into account the lines that were copied, I think JediDude actually did really good, and his rhymes and flow in round 1 and 2 were really captivating. Insults for both sides were also nice, but I feel like JediDude's outmatched NDECD's. However, the DDO rap community generally looks down upon plagiarism, and usually it results in an automatic loss. Shout-outs to songs like maybe taking a line or two from them are OK every now and then, but you can't just take 8 measures from them and give no credit whatsoever. But sense JediDude is still a young padawan, I'll give him 2 points. If he wouldn't of taken that many verses from those songs and kept it up, in my opinion he would've won. Good job to both rappers.
Vote Placed by dsjpk5 10 months ago
dsjpk5
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Reasons for voting decision: Pro's rap has a better flow.