Rap battle

This is a rap battle against guitargod. Guitargod claims that rapping takes no talent, if this is true, then he should rap just as good as me.

haha, ok(i will write an example of your average rap song)
nick nack patty wack
bich, get me my crack
if you dont, hell will break loose,
ill hang you by a f-cking noose,
youl scream and kick but wont get loose,
people will stop and stare
as i pour gassoleen on your hair
light a fire, i dont care
then ill get the f-ck out of there
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now a rap to my oponent-
the aff is in deep sh-t
he better beable to take a hit
ill blow your f- cking mind
set off a nuke and let it shine
blow you the f-ck up, then ill resign
your body they will not find
now lets here your rhyme

I recorder my rap.

this is rap, who cares about spelling
all that matters is what keeps selling
and i never said i wanted legalization
drugs are bad, its a common fact
i dont know how much dope youve had
but smoken dopes pretty sad
but enough of that now
when we are done, your the one
who will kneel and bow
ill come down like a bomb, cuz your raps pittifull
destroying your song, desemating your sole
cuz the aff just sucks
looks like hes out of luck
your own words you will suck
falling in failure
landing in the muck
you just got served on a platinum plate
youve just lost this debate

wow, that was the best you could do?

it was longer than yours, and im not used to writting lyrics in a format that sound good when they are rapped.

okay, sorry about my rap for round three. I thought I was typing that in the comment box.
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I posted my rap for round three in the comment box if you want to hear it.
I recorded.

did post mine, it's in the comments to