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YewRose19298
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Rhyming battle based on stories about monsters

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YewRose19298
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 2/2/2014 Category: Funny
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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YewRose19298

Pro

It lurks in the night
it stays out of sight
it doesn't know right
and wont stand in the light

A mixture of good and ill intent
with a back that is bent
time it was lent
so it could do what it shan't

A smile of evil
eyes of the devil
it's mind can't be leveled
it must be disheveled

When it does heckle
it makes me tremble
a side of Jekyll
he didn't want to settle

When the ill side
gets to tired to abide
the lies Jekyll has lied
come out with Mr. Hyde

And though it's something I want to hide
I must swallow my pride
it is mine
The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
octo

Con

I'm sorry I shouldn't of excepted please forgive me. ;)
Debate Round No. 1
YewRose19298

Pro

Mistaks are made
but now I am on a crusade
to find ryhmes about monsters

Your ryhmes cannot be that horrible
is it realy not possible
for you to try

It is okay to make mistakes
even if it takes
all 24 hours

Perhaps it would look
like a monster from a book
a monster with no name

Maybe you would be
like a mastermind on his spree
to find his glorious science done

Frienkenstein you are
yes it may be bizare
but picture it

In your labratory
creating a story
of a monsters rythm

Frienkenstein you are
so puff a cigar
and try

It could be a monster
but as we know monsters
make good stories

Frienkenstien you are
so go so far
as to make something bizarre
octo

Con

I sorry I made a grand mistake as large as a crystal lake.
What is in the lake is what terrifys me a monster with scaly skin Horns Claws and a nasty grin.
Debate Round No. 2
YewRose19298

Pro

Nasty grin indeed
but truthfully what scares me

Is a monster who succeeds
in luring its pray for its deeds

John Harker did come
as pray, cause of his need to pay income

Real estate in London
is what he had done

But once he found Dracula
he would partake in something spectacular

With Van Helsing
he was to bring

Dracula down
and wedding bells will sound

For him and his wife Mina Muray
and their vows will they say

For Dracula is gone
and Transylvania will go on

This monster is no more
for that is for sure

His deceiving lies
would comprise

Of a monster who talked the talk
of a human but could not walk the walk

Study he did
so he could bid

Hello to London
and leave his dungeon

Study he did
but God forbid

Him means to be human
and this would be his ruin

A monster of lies
but with no disguise

Could he be seen
with a slate that's clean

Though criticize I shan't
for I can't

say the same that i not be
that monster is me
octo

Con

This seems to be the end and I only have one rhyme and that involves a monster with a grin. I will now attempt to take a verse and make it better than the first.
You see Monsters we cant understand are things that frightens me and does not make me stand in glee. Like The hound That Sherlock and Watson from London town that they fought heroically on the swampy mire they solved the case killed the beast and discovered the liar. So sorry about not making good rhymes I hope you do good on your other debates and have a great time.
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by YewRose19298 3 years ago
YewRose19298
forgot my resource.
It is the book Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.
Stevenson, Robert Louis. Strange case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. Raleigh, N.C.: Alex Catalogue, 199. Print.
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Reasons for voting decision: Pro had better rhymes and story. And, con didn't mean to accept.