The Instigator
Vi_Veri
Pro (for)
Losing
79 Points
The Contender
GeoLaureate8
Con (against)
Winning
85 Points

Vi vs Geo Round 1 Feverish Rap Battle Tournament

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Started: 1/13/2010 Category: Entertainment
Updated: 7 years ago Status: Voting Period
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Vi_Veri

Pro

Round One

Check it, my flow be flawless
For Diamonds rain without rest
This is why they call me Neptune
My beat stellar, yours a mess
Introductions aren't required
For Geo has found me out
Galileo-scoped my route
Now he believes, with no doubt
I'm the puppeteer, you see
Swing the threads of string theory
Rhymes so gravitational
my big bang makes them chicks weary
Check this vibrational
Your big clang not for the hearing
Slow like black holes, flow don't end
This can't be natural, let's not pretend
Do they like you where you're from?
The the real world don't want them some
If you're happening in Vegas
Then you better stay there, Son
I'm so killah', I'm so smooth
Operator here to seduce
You're so wack your trippin' face
You just can't keep with ma' pace
Geo, see - you know the deal
Clown sees aliens - for real
They said take me to your leader
So he took them straight to me, here
GeoLaureate8

Con

Lyrics:

Yo, this is the cosmic rebirth of the greatest MC
The stellar mage performin chemical alchemy
Levitatin the seven seas and drownin all of my enemies
The entered apprentice initiated into the mysteries
I know you be thinkin cynically, but I'm not even finished see
I know it's a tragedy, don't get mad at me, rhymes are hazardly
Uttered emphatically, impacted drastically, eradicate the fallacy
The psychosomatic, the post-traumatic
Rhyme acrobatic esoteric flowmatic
Never been able can't kick the habit, this is madness, it's tragic I know
Rhymes slaughter millions like an apocalyptic cyclone
The tight flow raging psycho versed in tai bo, this a no fly zone
You might get picked out of the sky by my verbal projectiles
Checkin the hidden repository of secretly kept files
The power to control your mind like Illuminati
Drivin around findin a place to dump ya body, nobody saw me
Peep me creepin the reaper never stop sleepin
I'm deep in, yo bloody body be leakin
This is the death defyin, leave you cryin, master rhymin monster
You ain't a worthy competitor, you eliminated from the roster
You thought I was jokin when I said I would destroy you, but this is for real
I'm a professional assassin rakin the cash in, burnin you with liquid hot steel
Chasin you with a knife, I'm snatchin and hatchin ya life
Dare to battle me again, you outta be thinkin twice
I'm decapitatin yo head and stuffin it the blender
Try rappin now, get rejected like retern-to-sender, me no pretender
I'm aimin a optical blue ray and it's headin your way
I'm sendin a tropical hurricane right in front of your door way
I don't care what you say, I'm the arbiter deliverin doomsday
Your bloody body was depicted dismembered in the diagram
So I'ma complete my mission and continue rippin out your diaphragm
If you really wanna get at me then we can go
I be pickin up your body and slammin to the floor
I don't even know why you wanna battle me, I'm incredibly lyrical
I'm the greatest contender really, even though you can't hear it though
So many have tried, many have died
But my rappin technique is unparalleled
I'm finna make this lyrical battle a maniacle scary hell
This is a new kind of vernacular, far more spectacular
I'm findin new ways of attackin ya, let me get back at ya
My flow be floodin you with a deluge of epic proportions
This new type of rhymin is energetic like torsion
My rhymes are beyond sophisticated, imbeded with equations
This is the Grand Unified Hip Hop Theoretical dissertation
Debate Round No. 1
Vi_Veri

Pro

Lyrics:

(No music)

What should we chalk that s*** up to?
Schizophrenia, hyperventilation?
You sound like you're shay-ken
Good gracious, I couldn't understand a single correlation
Please! Put that nut up in a space station!
Earth can't possibly be the place for him!
Are you serious, Neo - damn I mean Geo
You sound like you're telling me fortunes,
Should I be paying you quarters, Miss Cleo?
The only flow you've got is from PMS
Your distress and wrath don't impress
you need to progress to fluid beats for success
boy just listen to some real finesse
the only way into a girl's panties is with a steady caress
Quit the Aggression, slow it down proper fashion
smooth and steady is how you make some real passion

(Music)

This is how you make love with the beat
hip hop is a woman and you've got to be sweet
Everyone's riding my melody, steadily
You're only supplying nightmares like you're Freddy
The only thing going "brrring brrring" is my telephone
they all got the hots for me, asking me bring um home
Where you from, Scotty? Beam you to the moon?
You're a monsoon? Correct, you blew more than Monica, typhoon
For give me for bangin' away at this beat as you sway
Don't topple over like London bridge
on that ridge, from the "edgy" you think you ah'
you'll just fall, down the cliff, oh boy, if only if,
something saved you from this, disastrous diss
Could of swore you were Courtney Love, from above
so f***** monstrous, please don't empty you're whole cartridge
all you'll be smokin's cigars for this
making you roll like you took a hit
I'm ecstasy, while versing me
you get freaky, and then you plea
with your talk of gutting and cutting my gut-see
for going up against this sexy lady MC

Cuz I got my mind on the money, and money's on my mind!

people just love gin and juice, cuz it's quite the excuse
to seduce these girls, and get girls for use
And crowd loved my first verse, and, this is the sequel
well everyone except for that f***** Leethal
Who's too much a p**** to submit his own spit
He couldn't excel, so he got crushed by L
Your lines so abhor-us, you sound like thesaurus
please Geo, don't! Please don't bore us! ease off the hardcore rush
And try to sound a lot more like me, and brush-
that dirt off your shoulder
GeoLaureate8

Con

Lyrics:

Yo, it's the merciless Copernicus, certified and murderous
You ain't ever heard of this, you certainly could learn from this
It's the rhyme sayer, mind bender from the time chamber
My lines greater, deadly instrumental like Slayer
The hip hop God of cosmogenesis
You askin how, so I present evidence
Ever since then, I've never had a nemesis
Nevertheless, I rip these raps, tippin hats
I'm lockin and loadin and flippin these gats
Masterin language, no anguish, I'm slangin these raps
Intensive scientific experiments prove I'm the best
So come and test, and you'll find I'm above the rest, nothin less
My astronomical anatomical, library of raps and chronicles
The Leviathan deliverin lines that make you die again
Wanna live forever, I'll freeze you in my cryogen
Rhyme accelerator, my style's hella greater
You can come into my space station via elevator
Visions of illusory hallucination mind polluted from a deluded nation
Population suffers from mass hypnosis and cognitive psychosis
I know this, the transcendental power of time gnosis
Electrifying rhymes extremely high voltage
Discover the secret doctrine from inside the box I keep it locked in
I'm mixin new rhymes and beats for this rhythmic concoction
My rhymes are infinite, you limited, beyond historical
Remote viewing the future, ahead of time like oracle
Strollin through the park every now and then with the wisdom of Tao and Zen
Too many divisions have been brought upon man
I'm the wisest of all among them
This orchestrated chaos was designed to rip your face off
I've been workin hard for this, it will definitely pay off
Explore the profundity of nothingness
Hip hop music, I can't get enough of this
Let me take you on a serpentine odyssey, no need to act modestly
Honestly, these are the greatest times to be alive, unearth the archive
Combined the greatest minds, our aim is beyond the mission to survive
The fountain of knowledge leaves me reinvigorated
Expandin my mind, dogmatic doctrines incinerated
Innovative rhymes are prolifically cryptic
My journey takes me on the path of the ecliptic
I terraform all the galaxies across the cosmos
The light bearer, illuminated anthropos
My flow is fluid like Venetian, the Druids and Phoenicians
The attainment and elucidation of the mysterium
Wakin the sleeping masses out of delirium
This is the peak of classical literary art
Architectually subtle geographical arch
Dialect monistic framework of polarity
I'm a beast, but please don't be scared of me
Ambient serenity, you ain't ahead of me
My rhymes are heavenly multiplied by seventy
Now let me take you back to the pre-deluvian era
One more time, before I unleash Peruvian terror
My technique is lawless, flawless with no error
This verse is an immaculate galactic shift
You've been dismantled can't hold a candle to this
Debate Round No. 2
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Posted by mistavega 6 years ago
mistavega
Damn Geo got some sick a$$ lyrics son I was impressed, but unfortunately your flow is completely horrid on your audibles. You're more of a textcee, I really do admire your lyrics. Unfortunately in rap battles lyrics aren't the only thing that matters. You have to be able to consistently clown the comp, kick those punch lines and rap some s***t that's actually relevant to the onslaught of your opponent.

Geo got the lyrics hands down, but VI got basically everything else. I'm to lazy to elaborate, just take my word.
Posted by HEADPHONEGUY 6 years ago
HEADPHONEGUY
Vi nuff said
Posted by Osiris 6 years ago
Osiris
**That's not how...

-Correction to my previous comment-
Posted by Osiris 6 years ago
Osiris
@Paris, That how you're supposed to judge rap battles. You judge based on things such as lyrics, flow, disses, etc. If all else fails you can at least vote according to the guidelines that are set for every debate (conduct, more convincing arguments, etc.) -sigh-
Posted by Paris 6 years ago
Paris
Well Con's lyrics in the last round were great but I vote Pro because that's the raps I'd rather listen to like on the radio and stuff B)
Posted by feverish 6 years ago
feverish
This has obviously been a really close battle and a very difficult one to call.

Most judgements were extremely even, one judge being a notable exception (no, not Leet who never gave me a proper RFD.)

The points just go to Vi but I think I would perhaps still have gone for another round with the results so close.

Vi's banning makes the whole issue pretty insignificant though and Geo is in the next round anyway.
Posted by feverish 6 years ago
feverish
Cody's official judgement:

Lyrics: Vi - Geo certainly seemed to use as much of the thesaurus as humanly possible, but big words aren't the only thing to make a rap battle; While Geo's lyrics were better in Round 2, it was too little too late; Vi's lyrics were consistently relevant, funny, and rhymed well.

Flow: Vi - Vi was riding the beat nicely in both rounds, and her voice seemed very melodic and confident, almost taunting, in both rounds. This made her verses all the more hard-hitting, as her disses were reflected not only in her lyrics, but in her vocal style. Geo, on the other hand, seemed rushed much of the time. His Round 1 was extremely fast, and very off-beat; there were also many instances in Round 2 in which he was not following the beat, though his speed improved. It's hard to appreciate the beauty of his multi-syllabic rhymes when he doesn't provide enough time for them to wash over one's ears - also, Geo had a greater tendency to make the novice mistake of putting unnecessary strain on the wrong syllables, especially on the words at the end of each line; while Vi made this mistake a few times here and there (especially in Round 2), it was hardly noticeable compared to Geo, where every instance stuck out.

Presentation: Vi - This was decided in Round 2 for me: Vi's initial and closing comments are one of the things that did it for me. While Geo went straight through the rap and stopped, Vi took the time to make those little stylistic tweaks, like the no-beat rap at the beginning of Round 2, for another example. Additionally, Geo's sound quality was absolutely awful all throughout the battle. Even had his speed been consistently acceptable, the condition of his recording equipment would have made listening to him more a burden than a blessing.

Disses: Vi - Most of Geo's lyrics were irrelevant to the battle. Honestly, I couldn't really pick up on any solid disses on his part. Vi had a lot of good one throughout, though, that were specifically t
Posted by feverish 6 years ago
feverish
Pcp's official judgement:

Lyrics:
This one goes to Geo. He had more complex rhymes and concepts and had immense creativity integrated into his verse.

Presentation:
Tied. Both were on the same field as far as presentation of the video goes.

Disses:
Vi_Veri. She had many more personal disses which I feel are more difficult to make and, perhaps consequentially, harder hitting then generic battle rhymes that I felt Geo used.

Flow:
Vi_Veri. She stayed on beat in both of her raps while Geo really only stayed on beat in Round 2.
Posted by FREEDO 7 years ago
FREEDO
If I had the ability to vote I would say Vi, hands down.
Posted by GeoLaureate8 7 years ago
GeoLaureate8
comoncents, are you kidding me? Votebomb fail, lol. I know that you've been taking points away from me by altering your votes to insure my loss on all my battles (you've done this four different times already on both battles), but this time your attempt made no difference. "Agree with Before" and "Agree with After" aren't actually worth any points, but nice try though. LMAO.
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