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create a better story than me in 12 hours

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Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 2/11/2015 Category: Games
Updated: 2 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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oldeskoolgamer

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I can create a better story than you in 12 hours first round is acceptance
Commondebator

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"Show us your passport and a license to fly a turbo powered sleigh," states Rosy with non-stop tapping of her hand.

"I... I don"t have it with me. Please, you can"t arrest me! I"m an idol! A child"s dream!" states Santa, as a desperate attempt to avoid his inevitable arrest.

"Sir, please get in the car!" exclaims Velma.

"Look, how can you do this? Look into your Grinch infested heart and show me some Christmas spirit!",cries Santa.

"Sir, the true Christmas spirit is when you follow the Constitution and travel the U.S.A as a legal immigrant, delivering items with a proper license," Velma explains to Santa, trying reach a compromise.

Santa smiles at Velma, and with hands clenched tightly around his bag, he refuses to be cuffed. His rosy cheeks darken bright red when he overhears that the FBI is going to need more than one handcuff to cuff his obese size.

"Sir, we are going to have to check what is in there. It seems like you have delivered 300 presents already, and according to your call to the North Pole...you are going to deliver all of these presents. We need to know what you are transporting," prevails Velma with a hopeful attempt.

"This is my property! I refuse to let this go. My bag, my rights," states Santa, in a strict tone. Unfortunately, the FBI succeeded in an enduring attempt to snatch his bag. Receiving a rather psychotic thrill from this experience, Santa smiles a Grinch like smile.

" Velma!" calls out Rosy "Santa delivers more than just toys and goodies. There is meth in some of the edible items, and hallucinogens that you can inhale in all the toys we have tested so far!"

"I try my best to make a child happy," calls out Santa.
Letting out a slight sob and sociopathic laugh, Velma notices an empty syringe titled "100 mg of Oxycodone" and a poke in her skin.


This was my personal Essay and I used it for other occasions. This belongs to me. Should I extend my story or create a new one?

The main idea of this story is that Santa is an illegal immigrant. Hope you enjoy.
Debate Round No. 1
oldeskoolgamer

Pro

oldeskoolgamer forfeited this round.
Commondebator

Con

Awww

Oh well

PM me if you want to know what happens next ;P

Oh and extend
Debate Round No. 2
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Vote Placed by Zarroette 2 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Good story :)
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Reasons for voting decision: Forfeiture