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ordiwayselene
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nonentity
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after 2 votes the winner is...
nonentity
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 1/28/2011 Category: Arts
Updated: 6 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 3,338 times Debate No: 14581
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ordiwayselene

Pro

I was cold and hurting
lost out in the night
wandering and searching
for heaven's light

I saw the night sky clearing
when you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
what joy you would bring

From that moment on
a friendship did start
you kissed away my tears
and sheltered my heart

I bless the day God
sent him from above
But then I grew fearful
for I had fallen in love

I told you this feeling
and what did you say?
You said you liked our friendship
and that's how it would stay

I cried for a friendship I thought I lost
But then felt your warm, gentle hand
You then whispered in my ear
that by my side you'll forever stand
nonentity

Con

REMOVED nac
Debate Round No. 1
ordiwayselene

Pro

you told me lies from the start, but I always wanted to make it work, and then you broke my heart, and said it was a game. my love is not to take for granted, and that's why I hate you, you lied about stupid things, and now I see why. save the best for last, that must not be you, cause your long gone, days go by and I keep swaying my pride, now not wasting my time, actually living my life. today I'm fine, cause I'm not the one living a lie, I'm fine, I'm not wasting my time, and its all because your A LIVING LIE!!!

this is one of my originals
nonentity

Con

REMOVED nac
Debate Round No. 2
ordiwayselene

Pro

In the Heart of a Rose

In the heart of a rose,
You will see my pain,
My joys, my tears, my sorrows.
It's all here,
In the heart of a rose.

In the heart of a rose,
You will see my identity,
The who's, the what's, the there for's.
It's all there,
In the heart of a rose.

In the heart of a rose,
You will see my heart,
My love, my adoration, my exaltation.
It's all there,
In the heart of a rose.
Debate Round No. 3
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Posted by ordiwayselene 6 years ago
ordiwayselene
ANYHTING do what you want
Posted by nonentity 6 years ago
nonentity
Are we supposed to post original poems? Because a Google search of your poem shows me that it came from somewhere else. Is there a particular theme? Restrictions?
Posted by ordiwayselene 6 years ago
ordiwayselene
is that good enough 4 u
Posted by nonentity 6 years ago
nonentity
I will accept this if you extend the voting period.
Posted by nonentity 6 years ago
nonentity
What's the challenge though? Just post a poem about anything?
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Vote Placed by nerdykiller 5 years ago
nerdykiller
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Reasons for voting decision: Close debate in my opinion. RD 1 Con took the lead by a little RD 2 Con and Pro tied in my opinion RD 3 Pro took the win that round tie...
Vote Placed by Rockylightning 6 years ago
Rockylightning
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Reasons for voting decision: Grammar: Pro used incorrect spelling and grammar in some areas Arguments: I liked cons poems better.