round 1 is for acceptance
16 bars - 2 rounds of battle - no forfeits - may the best rhymer win - spell as you spit as long as it's discernable
bold words are stressed - hyphens are rests -
- - to get the flo and to also carry breaths
Come at me , dawg.
italics are comments to pro not part of rhyme
(higher pitch is what I mean by stresses) freestyle written - so bars are not metered but flowed in my head to a beat
also please don't take my raunchiness literally - I have to qualify myself as a badd a$$ BH >(sound it out) actually this rap's not intended for you - I'm pissed at my man and need to vent. I'll rebutt your rap in round 3
bold words are stressed - hyphens are rests - to get the flo and to also carry breath
I'm ready to run this with puns and stop ya dumb sh!t -
my rhymez r my religon and and my mouth iz why you'll come quick
Im 46 - yeah I talk sh!t - the only way to beat me'z with ya hand on ya d!ck - -
my fix - my rhymez are so sick - only way to save us iz to - vote 4 kasich
I gotta pu$$y but I got ballz 2 - my ballz inside me tho right next 2 my womb
not inna nut sac that could be kicked off - minez so deep ya d!ck might get lost -
then get tossed - to the curb cuz I spit this frost -
so cold'll make ya lips gloss - lick ya lips before ya spit coffs.
Your lost - I'm boss - tongues my trigger b-cuz I'm pissed off
wishing I was younger and ya type but you can kiss off
Age ain't nuthin but a number I'm getting wiser while ya just gettin dumber -
- i always stay hot like the middle of the summer - bummer
- I had to step into ya game - now i'm gonna make it rain pain -
- when I knock on your brain, I staying for my claim not the fame -
but your content is so lame, mine is so hot like a flame
- that stays lit in the morning noon and night -
- ya may say I'm old but I still gotta lotta fight.
You like a lost cause, God cursed Cane, I'm the favorite kin,
So ur religion is a lie, -- ur raps is a lie, --
Has anyone ever seen a 46 year old rapper alive?
After tonight,-- neither will I, --
Take this fuckin bar i spit - right In yo eye
Wait this is still a part the - previous rhyme
Hate to use hyphens, but just kill me some time,
Space bar space bar space bar , im still fixing to find
This mark busta hiding , whether he likes it or not!
not my best rhyme - I'm still sleepy
time to get ya flow to flow - by learnin from a pro
spit ya sh!t - kritikd me for tha nowledge i already no
ima bout to sho - - why to slo ya flo
till ya grasp tha basics you can build on az you grow
See ya copped my technique - glad to help ya write ya rhyme
hypens help descibe the beat - hope ya give me props next time
we can dis but better yet - rather would collaborate
I just wanna stop the hate - also why I aspirate
talkin sh!t about my age - turn the page - you'll be there in a decade
but I break free from the cage - nevva let em steal my wage
earned it for the dues I paid - even shine within the shade
thats why I'm a renagade - overworked but underpaid
just woke up my mindz still sleep - writing this without my wit
spitin sh!t I'll nevva quit - cuz Im real not counterfit
even meters bore me - but you can't ignore me
I'm still just a shawty - tho I'm over forty
My rhymes dont exist to fools who havent had to run from me,
A bully on the playground, ill be terrorizing kids,
So you wanna sue for what i say now, while u plagiarize my shyt.
Hate to break it to ya kid, im beyond your comprehension,
Look up what super natural means, you will long to seek perfection.
Honestly professing, my beliefs taught em lesson,
God is wisdom but she didnt listen tho the prophecies been written..
Behold, the time is coming, the man of the hour,
Pro must crazy to think she can stand against my power.
Laughin out loud at her, this class is almost over,
If u aint got skills, please stick to rapping in the shower...
my two cents, choose the best, whats it cost to you?
Vote for me, totally, give props when props is due
So the last bar , i save, for finishing this rhyne...
Until next time! Suckaz i aint hard to find.
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