The Instigator
PresadentWalker
Pro (for)
Losing
0 Points
The Contender
Koopin
Con (against)
Winning
25 Points

who has the best story.neg must make thier own story, don't finish aff.

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after 4 votes the winner is...
Koopin
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 2/1/2010 Category: Arts
Updated: 7 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 1,968 times Debate No: 11051
Debate Rounds (4)
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PresadentWalker

Pro

The Crime
Spencer has meticulously planned out every detail of the robbery. So what could go wrong?
"Crime in our town has gone up for the seventh straight month. Police are at a loss for the reason. They are warning all citizens to be on their guard."

"Hopefully, not too much on their guard," Spencer said with a chuckle. He turned off the radio as he sat in his pickup truck. His eyes were trained on the liquor store as he watched the only remaining customer leave.

"It's show time," Spencer said to himself as he put on a black ski mask. As he walked across the empty parking lot toward the store, the young man felt powerful, in complete control of his destiny.

As Spencer entered the store, he spotted the cashier behind the counter, looking down at a magazine. "Get your hands up!" Spencer shouted, pointing a gun at the cashier, Tom.

Tom's eyes bulged out as he raised his shaking arms in the air. "Please, don't shoot."

"You do what I say and I won't," Spencer said. "Keep your hands where I can see them at all times. Go over to the front door and lock it." With perspiration dripping down his face, Tom slowly walked over to the front door and locked it. At Spencer's order, Tom drew the blinds on the large window so no one could see inside and then he flipped the small sign around to show "closed."
Koopin

Con

Once upon a time, there was a person who join Debate.org
His user name was PresadentWalker.
He liked going on debate.org and making easy wins for himself.
One day, the evil PresadentWalker decided he wold do somthing sinister, he would make a story debate and just copy it from this WEBSITE!!!! http://www.buzzle.com...

PART 2 COMING SOON!!!

BUY THE BOOK!!!
Debate Round No. 1
PresadentWalker

Pro

PresadentWalker forfeited this round.
Koopin

Con

Part two,

Hot and sticky sweat drenched from PresadentWalkers face. He knew it was all over now, the mighty Koopin had found out his secret! ‘What will I do!?!?' he thought ‘now everyone will vote against me, well there may be some vote bombers who vote for me. Atheistman and wonderwoman usually vote all seven points against Koopin! Maybe this will save the day. The only bad thing is that so many people are going to see this, and I will never win! I-' PresadentWalker had another great thought, ‘If I forfeit a round, this debate will not appear on Debate.org's home page! I will Pm this debate to Wonderwoman and Atheist man! Hopefully, they will turn against Koopin like in this debate, http://www.debate.org... where Atheistman vote bombed Koopin big time! Or this debate, http://www.debate.org... where Wonderwomen voted for the anti woman user by the name of ManOfPower. Yes, YES! I SHALL WIN THIS DEBATE!!!!'

Little did he know that Koopin had another plan…. A plan that includes OreEle, the ddo wiki, and…….TRUE2GAGA!!!

Part 3 up next.
Debate Round No. 2
PresadentWalker

Pro

PresadentWalker forfeited this round.
Koopin

Con

11:15 Pm. Monday,
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In one hand, PresadentWalker held a printed Google map image of Koopins house. In the other hand, a .50 caliber magnum revolver. He knew what he had to do...KILL THE KOOPIN!
He had been reading way to much of the lame story titled "The crime."
He had messaged WonderWoman and Atheistman, but they turned him down on his offer to vote bomb the Koopin.
He looked at the clock and shivered. In forty-five minutes, he would kill for the first time.

11:30 Pm Monday,
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Koopin knew that he had better be careful, there had been warning signs all around. Strange phone calls at night, white unmarked vans outside of his house, eerie email messages. He knew that he had to hire someone to protect him. He remembered that OreEle had been a very secretive person. He never told anyone what his meant, so he must be FBI!!!
Koopin picked up the phone and dialed his number.

"OreEle, this is Koopin. I KNOW YOUR FBI!!!!"
"WHAT!?!?!? HOW DID YOU GUESS!!!!???"
"That does not matter, I need you to check on PresadentWalker for me, he seems a little...crazy."
"Okay Koopin, but please don't tell anyone about me"

11:45 Pm Monday,
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OreEle saw PresadentWalker put eight gold bullets from his pocket and place them into the gun. OreEle listened as PresadentWalker talked to himself.
"I WILL KILL HIM FOR THIS!!! MY WIN RATIO IS ALREADY TO LOW! MAYBE IF HE FORFEITS, I WILL GET VOTES!!!"

11:50 Pm Monday,
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OreEle did not have a phone to call Koopin, so he did the next best thing. He edited Koopin's wiki page. He warned Koopin that PresadentWalker was planning an attack at 12:00! He warned Koopin to bring a gun to defend himself.

Luckily, Koopin got the message. But so did somebody else.

11:59 Pm Monday,
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The rain was failing hard as Koopin stood still, PresadentWalker's gun pointed right at him from 20 feet away.
"So this is how it is gonna end PresadentWalker?"
"Yes Koopin, it is time you die."
"You don't want to talk about it?"
"No"
"Okay then,"
Koopin drew his gun, as PresadentWalker emptied all 8.
"BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG....BANG"
Blood mixed with he water as PresadentWalker and someone else hit the ground

12:00 Am Tuesday
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"True2GaGa," Shouted Koopin, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!"
Debate Round No. 3
PresadentWalker

Pro

PresadentWalker forfeited this round.
Koopin

Con

Koopin's plan had gone so wrong, True2gaga was dead!!!
It was not how it was suppose to happen, but yet it did.
PresadentWalker was no longer a threat, for obvious reasons.

The End.
Debate Round No. 4
24 comments have been posted on this debate. Showing 1 through 10 records.
Posted by InsertNameHere 7 years ago
InsertNameHere
Hahaha! This is probably Koopin's most epic debate ever.
Posted by True2GaGa 7 years ago
True2GaGa
Ugh whatever! lol
Posted by Korashk 7 years ago
Korashk
This was probably the most awesome debate ever.
Posted by mongeese 7 years ago
mongeese
Koopin, that was just about the most epic win ever.
Posted by Koopin 7 years ago
Koopin
You were not gonna stay dead, but was tired of writing.
Posted by True2GaGa 7 years ago
True2GaGa
damnit.
I'm dead!
Posted by Koopin 7 years ago
Koopin
yep, I just wanted to get it done
Posted by Kinesis 7 years ago
Kinesis
Aww, quite a damp ending after the shocking cliff hanger in part 3...
Posted by Sniperjake1994 7 years ago
Sniperjake1994
hahaahahhahahaa. LOL
Posted by Kinesis 7 years ago
Kinesis
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!! (Not all caps)
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