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Sola.Gratia
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4/22/2013 8:30:44 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
A Friend's Heart
A single heart keeps it real.
It's not all about, "how you feel".
This heart is like a dear friend.
That strives to do well in the end.
Although, this friend is never sinless.
Doesn't mean that a life is worthless.
A friend's heart is but a rare gift.
Even though they'll pass as a soon swift.
Care, concern, kindness are good traits.
Humor, laughs, playfulness are great awaits.
This friend's heart is a fleeting vapor.
But, alas- this heart is truly a savor.
Beautifully crafted a friend's heart is.
Sprinkling friendship flows as a fizz.
A friend's heart is amazingly a blessing!
To my friend's heart Im addressing!
"What is sin? It is the glory of God not honored. Holiness of God not reverenced. Greatness of God not admired. Power of God not praised. Truth of God not sought. Wisdom of God not esteemed. Beauty of God not treasured. Goodness of God not savored. Faithfulness of God not trusted. Commandments of God not obeyed. Justice of God not respected. Wrath of God not feared. Grace of God not cherished. Presence of God not prized. Person of God not loved. That is sin." ~John Piper
Smithereens
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5/11/2013 11:33:03 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
3 of my best friends have Aspergers syndrome, so this is fitting:

I see you have a problem mate,
it's stuck inside your brain.
Right now its altering your fate
and causing you some pain.

Don't look at me and rage away,
Since I've done nothing wrong.
No need at all for me to say
this poem will not be long.

Your patience will endure as yet
while I talk about your life.
But if its false then my own bet:
I'm causing you some strife.

You never look me in the eye,
your social language sucks.
If I had to announce goodbye,
you'd just wish me luck.

The problems all go on and on,
but the one that is the worst:
you are absolutely stubborn,
a rare and horrid curse.

I apologise if this was blunt,
But I'm justified you see.
You'll never see this poem you runt,
So I shall do what suits me.
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Smithereens
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5/11/2013 11:37:40 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 4/22/2013 8:30:44 PM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
A Friend's Heart
A single heart keeps it real.
It's not all about, "how you feel".
This heart is like a dear friend.
That strives to do well in the end.
Although, this friend is never sinless.
Doesn't mean that a life is worthless.
A friend's heart is but a rare gift.
Even though they'll pass as a soon swift.
Care, concern, kindness are good traits.
Humor, laughs, playfulness are great awaits.
This friend's heart is a fleeting vapor.
But, alas- this heart is truly a savor.
Beautifully crafted a friend's heart is.
Sprinkling friendship flows as a fizz.
A friend's heart is amazingly a blessing!
To my friend's heart Im addressing!

Neat, that's skill right there. Now try to picture a hardened tattooed bikie criminal writing this to his friend.
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Sola.Gratia
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5/12/2013 1:03:02 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/11/2013 11:33:03 PM, Smithereens wrote:
3 of my best friends have Aspergers syndrome, so this is fitting:

I see you have a problem mate,
it's stuck inside your brain.
Right now its altering your fate
and causing you some pain.

Don't look at me and rage away,
Since I've done nothing wrong.
No need at all for me to say
this poem will not be long.

Your patience will endure as yet
while I talk about your life.
But if its false then my own bet:
I'm causing you some strife.

You never look me in the eye,
your social language sucks.
If I had to announce goodbye,
you'd just wish me luck.

The problems all go on and on,
but the one that is the worst:
you are absolutely stubborn,
a rare and horrid curse.

I apologise if this was blunt,
But I'm justified you see.
You'll never see this poem you runt,
So I shall do what suits me.

Wow very deep sternness there my friend.. Very nice rhyme though :)
"What is sin? It is the glory of God not honored. Holiness of God not reverenced. Greatness of God not admired. Power of God not praised. Truth of God not sought. Wisdom of God not esteemed. Beauty of God not treasured. Goodness of God not savored. Faithfulness of God not trusted. Commandments of God not obeyed. Justice of God not respected. Wrath of God not feared. Grace of God not cherished. Presence of God not prized. Person of God not loved. That is sin." ~John Piper
Sola.Gratia
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5/12/2013 1:04:08 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/11/2013 11:37:40 PM, Smithereens wrote:
At 4/22/2013 8:30:44 PM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
A Friend's Heart
A single heart keeps it real.
It's not all about, "how you feel".
This heart is like a dear friend.
That strives to do well in the end.
Although, this friend is never sinless.
Doesn't mean that a life is worthless.
A friend's heart is but a rare gift.
Even though they'll pass as a soon swift.
Care, concern, kindness are good traits.
Humor, laughs, playfulness are great awaits.
This friend's heart is a fleeting vapor.
But, alas- this heart is truly a savor.
Beautifully crafted a friend's heart is.
Sprinkling friendship flows as a fizz.
A friend's heart is amazingly a blessing!
To my friend's heart Im addressing!

Neat, that's skill right there. Now try to picture a hardened tattooed bikie criminal writing this to his friend.

Lol okay? What's your point there buddy?
"What is sin? It is the glory of God not honored. Holiness of God not reverenced. Greatness of God not admired. Power of God not praised. Truth of God not sought. Wisdom of God not esteemed. Beauty of God not treasured. Goodness of God not savored. Faithfulness of God not trusted. Commandments of God not obeyed. Justice of God not respected. Wrath of God not feared. Grace of God not cherished. Presence of God not prized. Person of God not loved. That is sin." ~John Piper
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5/12/2013 1:24:43 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/12/2013 1:04:08 AM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
At 5/11/2013 11:37:40 PM, Smithereens wrote:
At 4/22/2013 8:30:44 PM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
A Friend's Heart
A single heart keeps it real.
It's not all about, "how you feel".
This heart is like a dear friend.
That strives to do well in the end.
Although, this friend is never sinless.
Doesn't mean that a life is worthless.
A friend's heart is but a rare gift.
Even though they'll pass as a soon swift.
Care, concern, kindness are good traits.
Humor, laughs, playfulness are great awaits.
This friend's heart is a fleeting vapor.
But, alas- this heart is truly a savor.
Beautifully crafted a friend's heart is.
Sprinkling friendship flows as a fizz.
A friend's heart is amazingly a blessing!
To my friend's heart Im addressing!

Neat, that's skill right there. Now try to picture a hardened tattooed bikie criminal writing this to his friend.

Lol okay? What's your point there buddy?

What do you mean by 'okay?' It shouldn't be possible. It was a compliment if you didn't catch it btw.
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Sola.Gratia
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5/12/2013 1:31:04 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/12/2013 1:24:43 AM, Smithereens wrote:
At 5/12/2013 1:04:08 AM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
At 5/11/2013 11:37:40 PM, Smithereens wrote:
At 4/22/2013 8:30:44 PM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
A Friend's Heart
A single heart keeps it real.
It's not all about, "how you feel".
This heart is like a dear friend.
That strives to do well in the end.
Although, this friend is never sinless.
Doesn't mean that a life is worthless.
A friend's heart is but a rare gift.
Even though they'll pass as a soon swift.
Care, concern, kindness are good traits.
Humor, laughs, playfulness are great awaits.
This friend's heart is a fleeting vapor.
But, alas- this heart is truly a savor.
Beautifully crafted a friend's heart is.
Sprinkling friendship flows as a fizz.
A friend's heart is amazingly a blessing!
To my friend's heart Im addressing!

Neat, that's skill right there. Now try to picture a hardened tattooed bikie criminal writing this to his friend.

Lol okay? What's your point there buddy?

What do you mean by 'okay?' It shouldn't be possible. It was a compliment if you didn't catch it btw.

The 'okay? Was my way of saying yea sure like you said it shouldn't be possible :p so agreeing with you. And thank you kindly dear I knew it was a compliment and my apologies for not even giving any gratitude for it. So thank you my dear for your kind compliment :)
"What is sin? It is the glory of God not honored. Holiness of God not reverenced. Greatness of God not admired. Power of God not praised. Truth of God not sought. Wisdom of God not esteemed. Beauty of God not treasured. Goodness of God not savored. Faithfulness of God not trusted. Commandments of God not obeyed. Justice of God not respected. Wrath of God not feared. Grace of God not cherished. Presence of God not prized. Person of God not loved. That is sin." ~John Piper
Smithereens
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5/12/2013 1:47:11 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/12/2013 1:31:04 AM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
At 5/12/2013 1:24:43 AM, Smithereens wrote:
At 5/12/2013 1:04:08 AM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
At 5/11/2013 11:37:40 PM, Smithereens wrote:
At 4/22/2013 8:30:44 PM, Sola.Gratia wrote:
A Friend's Heart
A single heart keeps it real.
It's not all about, "how you feel".
This heart is like a dear friend.
That strives to do well in the end.
Although, this friend is never sinless.
Doesn't mean that a life is worthless.
A friend's heart is but a rare gift.
Even though they'll pass as a soon swift.
Care, concern, kindness are good traits.
Humor, laughs, playfulness are great awaits.
This friend's heart is a fleeting vapor.
But, alas- this heart is truly a savor.
Beautifully crafted a friend's heart is.
Sprinkling friendship flows as a fizz.
A friend's heart is amazingly a blessing!
To my friend's heart Im addressing!

Neat, that's skill right there. Now try to picture a hardened tattooed bikie criminal writing this to his friend.

Lol okay? What's your point there buddy?

What do you mean by 'okay?' It shouldn't be possible. It was a compliment if you didn't catch it btw.

The 'okay? Was my way of saying yea sure like you said it shouldn't be possible :p so agreeing with you. And thank you kindly dear I knew it was a compliment and my apologies for not even giving any gratitude for it. So thank you my dear for your kind compliment :)

pshht, the difficulties of an online conversation, np, its a poem well written.
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5/17/2013 6:10:42 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
You are my one and only best friend,
This poem is over and this is the end.
Live for the present, for it is a gift.

I surveyed 100 women and asked them what shampoo they used when showering, 98 of them said: How the hell did you get in here?
TULIP
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6/21/2013 3:03:57 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 6/15/2013 1:51:23 AM, Rhett_Butler wrote:
I have no friends.

Now you do :)
"We conclude that our salvation is of The Lord. He is the One who regenerates us. Those whom He regenerates come to Christ. Without regeneration no one will ever come to Christ. With regeneration no one will ever reject Him. God's saving grace effects what He intends to effect by it. ~ R. C. Sproul
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6/21/2013 3:17:31 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
There once was a girl named Rachel
Who went to the spa for a facial
They said, "You are a Jew
So we can't serve you."
She replied, "Don't you know, I'm biracial?"
"Not to know of what things one should demand demonstration, and of what one should not, argues want of education." ~Aristotle

"It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." ~Aristotle
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6/21/2013 3:17:51 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
Yeah, I suck at poetry.
"Not to know of what things one should demand demonstration, and of what one should not, argues want of education." ~Aristotle

"It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." ~Aristotle
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6/21/2013 3:19:01 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
None of it is true either. But I had to deal with the hand I was dealt, i.e. words that rhyme with Rachel.
"Not to know of what things one should demand demonstration, and of what one should not, argues want of education." ~Aristotle

"It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." ~Aristotle
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6/21/2013 3:27:34 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 6/21/2013 3:17:31 AM, philochristos wrote:
There once was a girl named Rachel
Who went to the spa for a facial
They said, "You are a Jew
So we can't serve you."
She replied, "Don't you know, I'm biracial?"

Lol how cute haha!! And that's fine., I think most of the ones that were written are fake or made up lol.. Mine wasnt though.. I have that poem to my friend that's currently in Hawaii.
"We conclude that our salvation is of The Lord. He is the One who regenerates us. Those whom He regenerates come to Christ. Without regeneration no one will ever come to Christ. With regeneration no one will ever reject Him. God's saving grace effects what He intends to effect by it. ~ R. C. Sproul
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7/18/2013 3:08:14 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
I liked to think that I'm your trusty friend
I liked to think you think the same of me
But then I realized at our friendship's end
We both are mired in deep misanthropy

So let's be honest, break your etched front
I'm nothing more than just another runt
To me who sees the world objectively
You matter only if you profit me

The truth I wanted to divulge to you
(A thing I thought I'd in this message note)
Is that your value has decreased to poo
There's not a reason left for me to dote

I'm moving on to newer realms of life
One without you : goodbye my former wife
Senpai has noticed you.
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7/25/2013 10:38:08 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 7/18/2013 3:08:14 AM, Beginner wrote:
I liked to think that I'm your trusty friend
I liked to think you think the same of me
But then I realized at our friendship's end
We both are mired in deep misanthropy

So let's be honest, break your etched front
I'm nothing more than just another runt
To me who sees the world objectively
You matter only if you profit me

The truth I wanted to divulge to you
(A thing I thought I'd in this message note)
Is that your value has decreased to poo
There's not a reason left for me to dote

I'm moving on to newer realms of life
One without you : goodbye my former wife

Wow.... Very deep and blunt...
"We conclude that our salvation is of The Lord. He is the One who regenerates us. Those whom He regenerates come to Christ. Without regeneration no one will ever come to Christ. With regeneration no one will ever reject Him. God's saving grace effects what He intends to effect by it. ~ R. C. Sproul