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A Poem I wrote... hope you enjoy!

Blade-of-Truth
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3/10/2014 9:54:23 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
He likes every one of her status' it's quite amusing
obsession - minus reflection, leads to mass confusion
but let us examine further, this odd phenomenon -
of flirting with girls from a distance - and for too long.
If it is merely a friendship, that he is seeking from you
Then ask him out on a date, and watch what he will do.
He will ask if you're serious, and then quickly say yes
Then you will know he only cared for what is under the dress
No "friend" needs to remind someone - on a daily basis
that they are alive by liking every status - no matter how tasteless
The problem with you - is you enjoy the attention
and like right back with undisclosed intention
thus the cycle begins of pointless liking and flirting
until she kisses someone else, and now you are hurting
Do not fret, do not freak, do not cry, do not hurt
for a girl is as common as a speck of dirt
Chase her with all your might, if that is a must
but a slut does not deserve a minute of time nor trust
Heed my words, for someday you will find
a girl who challenges - and compliments your mind
she will not be dirt, but rather a gem
who cares not for boys, but only for men
She won't want sex, she will want to make love
She would rather stay in, than go to the club
She won't need alcohol to drown her sorrows
She will be as beautiful as the morning dew of tomorrow
She won't be jealous or need validation
and can save herself, when her self needs saving
I expect the same, from any true man
for you get what you give - the law of the land
these boys find purpose from having sex with girls
a man finds purpose in sharing his world
a boy will tell you what he thinks you want to hear
a man will hold you close, and help you overcome your fear
a boy will break some hearts, a man has already had his broken
that pain remains with him, a life-long token
If he dares to date again, he is a man ready to take the dive
and will need nothing short of a woman, to keep him alive
To know the pain of love, to experience the hurt
perhaps this is what motivates the heart-broken to make it work
If you are ready as a man, then by all means chase away
But there are three things I must do, before I allow myself to play:
I need to own some land, upon which - I may rest my bones
For how can a man find a wife without a house to make a home
Secondly, a business, I must own and find success
otherwise I might not be able to purchase my wife her favorite dress
Last but not least - I must conquer myself
for an enemy within, is not true inner wealth
Once I have done these three things, I suggest you prepare
Because if I have, and you haven't, you will never compare.
But this isn't about you, this is not a singular issue
~don't chase the wrong person, or the right one might miss you~
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GodChoosesLife
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6/25/2014 5:24:40 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
I don't believe I ever saw this, but it certainly is very true. I see a bunch of pain coming from this poem too. But I can relate.
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
LogicalLunatic
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6/25/2014 5:51:39 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
I thank BoT for writing this poem and I thank GCL for necroposting this thread.
This is a pretty good poem; it's quite entertaining while at the same time it gives relationship advice for the 90% of single adults who are searching for a girlfriend/boyfriend.
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6/27/2014 3:31:24 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
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Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
GodChoosesLife
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6/27/2014 3:33:32 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/27/2014 3:31:24 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
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Lol
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad