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8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

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Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

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8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

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Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

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wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D
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8/6/2014 12:35:59 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D
Wow! I feel honored! Thank you! And glad to know that you were inspired, it lets me know and see I've been able to accomplish maybe one thing here and that's enough for me to be much appreciated for! Others have said kind things about my poems but never to the extent you gave it. Means A LOT, Ma! So thank you. :)

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Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

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Beautiful, just beautiful! Very delicately written!
True words from an inspired heart, I must say.
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
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8/6/2014 2:13:52 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 12:35:59 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D
Wow! I feel honored! Thank you! And glad to know that you were inspired, it lets me know and see I've been able to accomplish maybe one thing here and that's enough for me to be much appreciated for! Others have said kind things about my poems but never to the extent you gave it. Means A LOT, Ma! So thank you. :)


You're very welcome! ^_^ And thank you too! I liked your poems! I agree that having someone be inspired by your work is amazing :D

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Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

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Beautiful, just beautiful! Very delicately written!
True words from an inspired heart, I must say.

Thank you!! :D
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8/6/2014 2:14:27 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

----------------------------------

Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

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wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D

Thanks!! :D
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8/6/2014 2:48:08 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 2:14:27 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

----------------------------------

Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

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wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D

Thanks!! :D

lol yea kinda reminds me of my style just a bit aha :)
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8/6/2014 6:09:07 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 2:48:08 PM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:14:27 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

----------------------------------

Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

--------------------------------------------------------

wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D

Thanks!! :D

lol yea kinda reminds me of my style just a bit aha :)

Oh cool! What kind of poetry do you write?
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8/6/2014 6:52:13 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 6:09:07 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:48:08 PM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:14:27 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

----------------------------------

Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

--------------------------------------------------------

wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D

Thanks!! :D

lol yea kinda reminds me of my style just a bit aha :)

Oh cool! What kind of poetry do you write?

Lol anything really
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8/6/2014 6:53:51 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 6:09:07 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:48:08 PM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:14:27 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

----------------------------------

Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

--------------------------------------------------------

wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D

Thanks!! :D

lol yea kinda reminds me of my style just a bit aha :)

Oh cool! What kind of poetry do you write?

Lol anything really from a variety of topics
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8/6/2014 7:15:15 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/6/2014 6:53:51 PM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/6/2014 6:09:07 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:48:08 PM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/6/2014 2:14:27 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
At 8/6/2014 11:18:35 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:34:52 PM, ThoughtsandThoughts wrote:
GodChoosesLife put some really nice poetry up and inspired me to write a poem myself :D

----------------------------------

Take this feather
Wield it as a sword,
As a wing,
And maybe even as a wicker

Burn it if you have to,
Blaze it, and
Bear the golden beam over your path
But...

When it lets out, there is such a flicker
So endearing as its light,
And just as charmed by the air we breathe
Alike the flame, it reveals one world,
Yet it lives in you -
The be-DAH-bum of your heartbeat, my dear

--------------------------------------------------------

wow really nice! I really like this poem! :D

Thanks!! :D

lol yea kinda reminds me of my style just a bit aha :)

Oh cool! What kind of poetry do you write?

Lol anything really from a variety of topics

Ahaha, same here :P