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who else here writes lyrics?

MewxVenus
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1/31/2009 8:00:59 AM
Posted: 7 years ago
What do you write about? :)
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
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1/31/2009 4:13:13 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
haha true dat XP and...love sucking. lol
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
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1/31/2009 4:33:39 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
what?
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
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1/31/2009 4:57:51 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
ohhhhh ok
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
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1/31/2009 5:13:19 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
When I write songs, I'll usually complete my melody/chord progression ideas first, only to later write some really corny/emo crap for lyrics.
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1/31/2009 7:22:34 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
I'm just starting to write lyrics and I really want to right some epic stuff that can rival Led Zeppelin or Pink Floyd on their off days. Also, when I say "epic," I mean stuff like Achilles Last Stand or the entire DSOTM album.
When Reach fell, I came.
s0m31john
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1/31/2009 7:26:59 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
Here's a little diddy I wrote

Every breath you take
Every move you make
Every bond you break
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Every single day
Every word you say
Every game you play
Every night you stay
Ill be watching you

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every step you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Since youve gone I been lost without a trace
I dream at night I can only see your face
I look around but its you I cant replace
I feel so cold and I long for your embrace
I keep crying baby, baby, please...

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every breath you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Every move you make
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you...
theitalianstallion
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1/31/2009 7:30:01 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
At 1/31/2009 7:26:59 PM, s0m31john wrote:
Here's a little diddy I wrote

Every breath you take
Every move you make
Every bond you break
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Every single day
Every word you say
Every game you play
Every night you stay
Ill be watching you

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every step you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Since youve gone I been lost without a trace
I dream at night I can only see your face
I look around but its you I cant replace
I feel so cold and I long for your embrace
I keep crying baby, baby, please...

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every breath you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Every move you make
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you...

For some reason that sounds familiar, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Lol.
When Reach fell, I came.
MewxVenus
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1/31/2009 7:48:45 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
At 1/31/2009 7:30:01 PM, theitalianstallion wrote:
At 1/31/2009 7:26:59 PM, s0m31john wrote:
Here's a little diddy I wrote

Every breath you take
Every move you make
Every bond you break
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Every single day
Every word you say
Every game you play
Every night you stay
Ill be watching you

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every step you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Since youve gone I been lost without a trace
I dream at night I can only see your face
I look around but its you I cant replace
I feel so cold and I long for your embrace
I keep crying baby, baby, please...

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every breath you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Every move you make
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you...

For some reason that sounds familiar, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Lol.

Haha. Sting lyrics XP

Appreciate the sense of humor though.

Oh and theitalianstallion: I totally get the strive to be better than those guys. Laughed so hard when you mentioned "off days". Also, nice use of the word "epic" haha.
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
Ragnar_Rahl
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1/31/2009 9:06:21 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
I wrote something a few months ago, was very philosophical, especially for metal.

Not sure where I put it.
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MewxVenus
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1/31/2009 9:08:46 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
At 1/31/2009 9:06:21 PM, Ragnar_Rahl wrote:
I wrote something a few months ago, was very philosophical, especially for metal.

Not sure where I put it.

Haha. That sounds pretty cool :)
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
MewxVenus
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2/16/2009 5:25:33 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
Hmmm...It's weird. I used to think rap was a symbol of the decay of our society.

But really, it takes talent to write lyrics that follow such strict rhythm...even if they are about voluptuous women and fantasies about them.
: At 1/20/2011 10:42:53 PM, ccstate4peat wrote:
: I didn't say ugly stick. I said it was beyond stick, it was a paddle.
crackofdawn_Jr
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2/16/2009 6:19:38 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
Rap? Talent? Those two words are never meant to be in the same sentence together. Anybody can write poetry, and that's all rap is, poetry with music.
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4/11/2009 11:46:00 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
Me being the perverted rat that I am, I write about animals, including fantasy animals ... ah yeah and the gay side doesn't help, so I wrote a song once about unicorns.

This is a unicorn stallion's song for a unicorn mare he desires:
When I graze the sweetest grass,
It recalls my hunger for you
When at night my eyes shut at last,
In my dreams by your love I'm enraptured

When I see the sparkle in your eyes,
When I see the gleam of your horn
My heart dances and my soul flies,
But I fear in asking this we'd be torn,

Do you love me as I deeply love you?
Do you hear my heart gallop toward you?
Does Equus long for us to become two?
Or is my mere fantasy a dream untrue?

When I gaze upon the stars at night,
I wonder where below them you are
When rain seeps into my coat so light,
I feel your soul seep into my heart

When I chance a gaze upon your coat,
When my ears hear a whicker from you,
My heart warms and my soul hums a note
But I am mute with fear in asking you...

Do you love me as deeply as I love you?
Do you hear my heart gallop toward you?
Does Equus long for us to become two?
Or is my mere fantasy a dream untrue?
feverish
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4/12/2009 9:37:46 AM
Posted: 7 years ago
At 2/16/2009 6:19:38 PM, crackofdawn_Jr wrote:
Rap? Talent? Those two words are never meant to be in the same sentence together. Anybody can write poetry, and that's all rap is, poetry with music.

No offense Crack but that is a really ignorant comment.

I can understand people dismissing rap lyrics because so much of it is sexist, negative, violent, shallow etc. but to dismiss it as talentless because it it is merely poetry (like all lyrics) doesn't make much sense.
All lyrics are poetry with music.
Obviously there are good and bad hip hop lyrics, although yes the majority of modern rap is pure bs.

Also, while more or less anyone (who can write) can write poetry or lyrics, it is quite a bit harder to write something that anyone else will actually want to read or listen to.
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4/12/2009 1:21:32 PM
Posted: 7 years ago
Also, while more or less anyone (who can write) can write poetry or lyrics, it is quite a bit harder to write something that anyone else will actually want to read or listen to.

(Ripley's) Believe it or not, my ghey little unicorn song above was actually worked into an actual song by a professional musician friend of mine. :) Unfortunately he's still not pleased with his efforts to allow me to share the composed, recorded and performed version, though ... gods ... its fricking amazing, I tell you, to hear words you scribbled out worked into a beautiful song by a true maestro!
Lovetheworld4real
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9/8/2015 5:39:07 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/31/2009 7:26:59 PM, s0m31john wrote:
Here's a little diddy I wrote

Every breath you take
Every move you make
Every bond you break
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Every single day
Every word you say
Every game you play
Every night you stay
Ill be watching you

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every step you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Since youve gone I been lost without a trace
I dream at night I can only see your face
I look around but its you I cant replace
I feel so cold and I long for your embrace
I keep crying baby, baby, please...

Oh, cant you see
You belong to me
How my poor heart aches
With every breath you take

Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
Ill be watching you

Every move you make
Every step you take
Ill be watching you

Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you
Ill be watching you...

http://www.azlyrics.com...

Copy cat, i noticed. You can't hide nuttin from me;)

Unless you're on "the police" then u didn't write that song.
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Lovetheworld4real
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9/8/2015 5:41:40 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/11/2009 11:46:00 PM, PervRat wrote:
Me being the perverted rat that I am, I write about animals, including fantasy animals ... ah yeah and the gay side doesn't help, so I wrote a song once about unicorns.

This is a unicorn stallion's song for a unicorn mare he desires:
When I graze the sweetest grass,
It recalls my hunger for you
When at night my eyes shut at last,
In my dreams by your love I'm enraptured

When I see the sparkle in your eyes,
When I see the gleam of your horn
My heart dances and my soul flies,
But I fear in asking this we'd be torn,

Do you love me as I deeply love you?
Do you hear my heart gallop toward you?
Does Equus long for us to become two?
Or is my mere fantasy a dream untrue?

When I gaze upon the stars at night,
I wonder where below them you are
When rain seeps into my coat so light,
I feel your soul seep into my heart

When I chance a gaze upon your coat,
When my ears hear a whicker from you,
My heart warms and my soul hums a note
But I am mute with fear in asking you...

Do you love me as deeply as I love you?
Do you hear my heart gallop toward you?
Does Equus long for us to become two?
Or is my mere fantasy a dream untrue?

That's beautiful
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