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4/25/2014 6:21:56 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 5 is here: http://www.debate.org...

The people of the Kingdom gathered in the Royal Square. It was like the market square, only fancier. The gold and scarlet logo of DDO was emblazoned on the ground, and there were numerous statues of past presidents, each one standing well over fifteen feet high. TUF's was the newest of all. The stone face, as impassive as its deceased owner, studied the visitors.

Mikal stepped onto the podium and waited for the crowd to fall silent. He blinked. There were so many faces staring up at him - and twice as many eyes. He cleared his throat.

"Citizens of DDO," his voice, enhanced by Airmax's magic, boomed across the crowd. "There is no doubt in my heart and my soul that the loss we suffered last night will haunt us for eternity. TUF was a valiant and noble President. Juggle spoke directly to him, and he carried out their mandates. TUF was a man of the people. He began as all of us did. A commoner. A nobody. A man bogged down in the poorer realms of the Kingdom. But TUF was too bold and too brilliant a man to stay on the bottom. He fought his way up, out of the abyss of 2,000 ELO and into the heavens of fame."

Mikal paused to wipe a tear from his eye.

"Last night, a fiend, a true coward, attacked the Palace. He planted a bomb in the Royal Chambers. Though Airmax was able to save many of us, TUF and Cody perished in the explosion. The noble Airmax pursued the fiend that stole TUF from us. Rather than surrender and face justice, this enemy of the Kingdom chose to hurl himself from the balcony."

"That crying is baloney," Daytona whispered to kbub. kbub shrugged.

"It is with a heavy heart," Mikal continued, "that I assume the role of President, until such time as the next elections occur. I know I cannot fill TUF's shoes. I know I cannot accomplish as much as he. But I can try to be a just leader, responsible to the will of the people. I may not shine as brightly as TUF, but I can be the candle that guides you through these dark times."

"One hundred ELO points says he didn't write this speech," Daytona whispered again.

"Shh." kbub responded.

"To that end," Mikal said, "I would like to introduce General Lannan and the Conduct Enforcement Agency."

A buzz ran through the crowd as the Palace gates burst open. Row after row of soldiers clad in black and crimson armor marched in. Their formation was perfect; geometry itself could not form such lines. Each soldier carried a blade that gleamed with an unnatural emerald sheen.

"The Hammers are here until such time," Mikal announced, "as the Kingdom of DDO is once again a place of peace and prosperity." He smiled. "Forevermore."

______________________________________

CP arrived at the gates of Edb8. He glanced sideways at Imabench.

"Are you coming in?"

Imabench sniffed. "Smells too much like stupid."

"I might be in there a while."

"Don't get stupid." With that, Imabench was gone. CP sighed and pounded on the gates.

"What business do you have with the Kingdom of Edb8?" A voice called from above. CP glanced up and saw Pitbull manning the gates.

"I wish to see King Larz."

"Do you have an appointment?"

"What is he, a dentist? I want to see him!"

Pitbull glared at the remark. "Identify yourself!"

"Your king knows me," CP said. "I'm CP."

All went silent for a few moments. Then:

"Enter," Pitbull commanded. "But know this. If you strike against the Kingdom of Edb8 in any fashion, your death shall be the consequence."

"You and what army," CP muttered, quietly enough so that Pitbull couldn't hear. Then he entered the Kingdom of Edb8. This, CP reflected, was the only place capable of raising any kind of army against DDO.

And it was his job to train one.

________________________________________

"I work for the Jifpop Chronicles now, Zaradi," Bookworm said, swirling her glass. The previous night's events had delayed their meeting until the morning. "And I'd like to get back into interviewing the citizens of DDO."

"Can't you see, Bookworm?" Zaradi pressed. "This has changed everything!"

"I suppose you're right," Bookworm nodded. "I'll have to interview Mikal now." Zaradi rolled his eyes.

"We need your help, Bookworm." Bookworm stood up and offered Zaradi her hand. The light flashed across her glasses.

"Look, Zaradi, I don't want to get involved in this. Don't worry. I won't tell anyone what you're planning. But that's all I'm going to - not - do." She gave him a wry smile and departed, letting the door ease shut behind her.

Zaradi groaned and buried his face in his hands. Did other great revolutionaries have this much trouble? He could recite the list of members he had on his fingers and toes. This was ridiculous!

Zaradi was so busy musing that he missed the first three knocks on his door. He jolted upright on the fourth.

"Come in," he called, disguising the despair in his voice. Thett peered around the door.

"Zaradi?" He asked quietly. Zaradi grinned.

"Thett! What brings you here?" Thett nervously sidled into the room, wringing his hands.

"I'll do it, Zaradi. I'll do it."

_____________________________________________

"That's just fantastic," bsh1 groaned, collapsing into the same leather armchair. "We try to enjoy ourselves on our - cancelled - wedding night, and the Tower explodes."

"At least it wasn't alone," YYW remarked. He sat on the arm of the chair, beside bsh1. "Don't look so glum."

"How can I help it? YYW, we can't keep ignoring what's going on out there. TUF is dead!" bsh1 rose and began pacing. YYW stole his seat and watched him for a few seconds. "I just, I feel like we should do something."

YYW walked over to bsh1 and encircled him in his arms.

"What would you like to do?" He whispered in bsh1's ear.

"I want to make us safe," bsh1 said. "I want to put this whole revolution thing away so that we can finally get married."

"Then let's do it."

"Really?" bsh1 looked up into YYW's eyes.

"Of course," YYW smiled. "It'll take more than a revolution to separate us. In fact, it'll take more than anything this Kingdom or any other can throw at us. Nothing can separate us, bsh1. Nothing."

And any further objections the two might have had were interrupted by a kiss.

______________________________________________

OncomingStorm and Jonbonbon lay on the latter's bed. The sun had been up for hours, and in fact, the two had already left to hear Mikal's speech, but neither felt like doing anything special after that. OncomingStorm absently traced patterns on Jonbonbon's arm with his fingers.

"This has gotten out of control," she said.

"It's just stroking," OncomingStorm whispered.

"Not that," Jonbonbon laughed. Then she remembered she probably wasn't supposed to. "I mean - the outside."

"We have to listen to them," OncomingStorm murmured. "Airmax and Ore_Ele are Mods. Mikal is President now."

"Haven't you ever heard of an unjust President?" Jonbonbon pressed. "Or an unjust policy?"

"I don't want to have this argument," OncomingStorm said. Jonbonbon turned over to face him.

"Then don't. Just agree with me."

OncomingStorm sat up. He rose from the bed and walked over toward the door.

"I can't do that," he said. And he was gone.
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4/25/2014 7:01:12 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Lol...I like it. :)
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4/25/2014 7:36:42 PM
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At 4/25/2014 7:23:56 PM, Zaradi wrote:
I still think I'm gonna end up dead the second any kind of fighting breaks out.

*innocent eyes*

What ever gives you that impression?
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4/25/2014 7:46:35 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 7:36:42 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 7:23:56 PM, Zaradi wrote:
I still think I'm gonna end up dead the second any kind of fighting breaks out.

*innocent eyes*

What ever gives you that impression?

Because it's painfully obvious >.>
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4/25/2014 8:07:39 PM
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You, sir, are an amazing writer. Kudos.
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4/25/2014 8:09:34 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 7:46:35 PM, Zaradi wrote:
At 4/25/2014 7:36:42 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 7:23:56 PM, Zaradi wrote:
I still think I'm gonna end up dead the second any kind of fighting breaks out.

*innocent eyes*

What ever gives you that impression?

Because it's painfully obvious >.>

Only one way to find out.
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4/25/2014 9:05:38 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
The day Mikal cries for real will be the day I get sick of Freddie Mercury.

And also, I really don't have 100 ELO to spare for betting, haha.
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4/25/2014 10:43:24 PM
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Errmerrgurd! I am in here! I am going to go read all the episodes now. Lol.

BTW, It was awesome!
(I guess everyone really does think I stalk Zaradi now huh? Lol.)
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4/25/2014 10:44:19 PM
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At 4/25/2014 10:43:24 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Errmerrgurd! I am in here! I am going to go read all the episodes now. Lol.

BTW, It was awesome!
(I guess everyone really does think I stalk Zaradi now huh? Lol.)

You've been in a couple of them. :-)

Thanks!
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4/25/2014 10:47:19 PM
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At 4/25/2014 10:44:19 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:43:24 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Errmerrgurd! I am in here! I am going to go read all the episodes now. Lol.

BTW, It was awesome!
(I guess everyone really does think I stalk Zaradi now huh? Lol.)

You've been in a couple of them. :-)

Thanks!

Oh dear! Is my "stalking" of Zaradi in them?

*winces audibly*
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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4/25/2014 10:48:43 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 10:47:19 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:44:19 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:43:24 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Errmerrgurd! I am in here! I am going to go read all the episodes now. Lol.

BTW, It was awesome!
(I guess everyone really does think I stalk Zaradi now huh? Lol.)

You've been in a couple of them. :-)

Thanks!

Oh dear! Is my "stalking" of Zaradi in them?

*winces audibly*

You're not really stalking him. In an earlier chapter, he asked you to meet him.
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4/25/2014 10:54:38 PM
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At 4/25/2014 10:48:43 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:47:19 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:44:19 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:43:24 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Errmerrgurd! I am in here! I am going to go read all the episodes now. Lol.

BTW, It was awesome!
(I guess everyone really does think I stalk Zaradi now huh? Lol.)

You've been in a couple of them. :-)

Thanks!

Oh dear! Is my "stalking" of Zaradi in them?

*winces audibly*

You're not really stalking him. In an earlier chapter, he asked you to meet him.

*Wipes brow.*
I am gonna read them now...

*Grabs you in a ferocious hug*
Thanks for not making me a stalker!
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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4/25/2014 10:55:28 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
YYW is mine
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4/25/2014 10:55:55 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 10:54:38 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:48:43 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:47:19 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:44:19 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:43:24 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Errmerrgurd! I am in here! I am going to go read all the episodes now. Lol.

BTW, It was awesome!
(I guess everyone really does think I stalk Zaradi now huh? Lol.)

You've been in a couple of them. :-)

Thanks!

Oh dear! Is my "stalking" of Zaradi in them?

*winces audibly*

You're not really stalking him. In an earlier chapter, he asked you to meet him.

*Wipes brow.*
I am gonna read them now...

*Grabs you in a ferocious hug*
Thanks for not making me a stalker!

*hugs you back*
You're welcome!
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4/25/2014 10:56:11 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 10:55:26 PM, Romanii wrote:
Huh!? We're already at episode 6!? Damn... the last one I saw was episode 2... time to do some catching up XD

Enjoy! :-D
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4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM
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BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe
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4/25/2014 10:57:35 PM
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At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

But it's so epic and amazing! :-(

Bring it to a good end, Thett!
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4/25/2014 10:59:42 PM
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At 4/25/2014 10:57:35 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

But it's so epic and amazing! :-(

Bring it to a good end, Thett!

Haha I'll probably write another one when I'm bored but I'm getting tired of the mean girls/pirate war plot. I have some ideas...

I don't really know what to do about characters though as many are stuck being enemy pirates or high school students. The thett3 character is pretty awesome though rofl

I can't wait to see how yours ends though...who will win the war...
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"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

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4/25/2014 11:01:05 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 10:59:42 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:57:35 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

But it's so epic and amazing! :-(

Bring it to a good end, Thett!

Haha I'll probably write another one when I'm bored but I'm getting tired of the mean girls/pirate war plot. I have some ideas...

Am I in them?

I don't really know what to do about characters though as many are stuck being enemy pirates or high school students. The thett3 character is pretty awesome though rofl

He's the best character, of course!

I can't wait to see how yours ends though...who will win the war...

Oh, I think mine will be an extended thing. I'm really enjoying it, and as long as other people are too, well, then, I'm happy.
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4/25/2014 11:02:16 PM
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At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

Well if he's gonna get a monopoly on it, I might make one. *shrug* I'd just need to come up with an idea.
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4/25/2014 11:03:27 PM
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At 4/25/2014 11:01:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:59:42 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:57:35 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

But it's so epic and amazing! :-(

Bring it to a good end, Thett!

Haha I'll probably write another one when I'm bored but I'm getting tired of the mean girls/pirate war plot. I have some ideas...

Am I in them?

Haha I'll probably just make a character who's you/your father "Endarkened Sr." so that I can avoid the whole "How is a high school student doing x" thing. But yes, you will be

I don't really know what to do about characters though as many are stuck being enemy pirates or high school students. The thett3 character is pretty awesome though rofl

He's the best character, of course!

I can't wait to see how yours ends though...who will win the war...

Oh, I think mine will be an extended thing. I'm really enjoying it, and as long as other people are too, well, then, I'm happy.

Good! It's definitely really rad, I think everyone likes it
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4/25/2014 11:07:47 PM
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At 4/25/2014 11:01:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:59:42 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:57:35 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

But it's so epic and amazing! :-(

Bring it to a good end, Thett!

Haha I'll probably write another one when I'm bored but I'm getting tired of the mean girls/pirate war plot. I have some ideas...

Am I in them?

I don't really know what to do about characters though as many are stuck being enemy pirates or high school students. The thett3 character is pretty awesome though rofl

He's the best character, of course!

I can't wait to see how yours ends though...who will win the war...

Oh, I think mine will be an extended thing. I'm really enjoying it, and as long as other people are too, well, then, I'm happy.

Do you have any ideas about the direction I should go? Is the pirate thing cool, lame or somewhere in between?
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"My name is max. I'm not a big fan of slacks"- Max rapping

"Walmart should have the opportunity to bribe a politician to it's agenda" -Max

"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

: At 11/12/2016 11:49:40 PM, Raisor wrote:
: thett was right
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4/25/2014 11:09:06 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 11:02:16 PM, Zaradi wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

Well if he's gonna get a monopoly on it, I might make one. *shrug* I'd just need to come up with an idea.

Haha that would probably be awesome
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"Don't quote me, ever." -Max

"My name is max. I'm not a big fan of slacks"- Max rapping

"Walmart should have the opportunity to bribe a politician to it's agenda" -Max

"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

: At 11/12/2016 11:49:40 PM, Raisor wrote:
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4/25/2014 11:09:27 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 11:02:16 PM, Zaradi wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

Well if he's gonna get a monopoly on it, I might make one. *shrug* I'd just need to come up with an idea.

I'll buy you out.
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4/25/2014 11:10:10 PM
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At 4/25/2014 11:09:27 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 11:02:16 PM, Zaradi wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

Well if he's gonna get a monopoly on it, I might make one. *shrug* I'd just need to come up with an idea.

I'll buy you out.

You trying to bully me out of the market?
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4/25/2014 11:11:37 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/25/2014 11:07:47 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/25/2014 11:01:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:59:42 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:57:35 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 4/25/2014 10:56:24 PM, thett3 wrote:
BTW Endarkened you will have a monopoly soon, I plan to end my fanfiction in another episode or two for the time being because I'm getting bored with it. Gonna finish up the story hehe

But it's so epic and amazing! :-(

Bring it to a good end, Thett!

Haha I'll probably write another one when I'm bored but I'm getting tired of the mean girls/pirate war plot. I have some ideas...

Am I in them?

I don't really know what to do about characters though as many are stuck being enemy pirates or high school students. The thett3 character is pretty awesome though rofl

He's the best character, of course!

I can't wait to see how yours ends though...who will win the war...

Oh, I think mine will be an extended thing. I'm really enjoying it, and as long as other people are too, well, then, I'm happy.

Do you have any ideas about the direction I should go? Is the pirate thing cool, lame or somewhere in between?

I enjoyed it actually. It depends on how serious you wanted to make it. I'm working to get people somewhat invested in my characters before things start happening. >:-)

For yours, though, I actually was intrigued by the whole pirate storyline, and I did find myself hoping they get out of there. Of course, we know they will, because you're infallible. :-)