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10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
AUTHORS NOTE:

This is my first fanfic and I will be writing it with my good friend DarthKirones, so please applaud him. Warning they will most likely come out every week/month I really don"t know, so I am terribly sorry about that.
Each episode will be a few different character"s perspective. There will be many characters and therefore many perspectives.
Esocial is known as Annie and Endark is known as Darren.
If you would like to have an episode (or two) sign up!
Anyways, to the episode".

EPISODE 00

===============================================

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

She got up and walked for a few feet. She looked around.

In front of her, more yellow crusted land. Behind the same.

To the right, there was a large pond, and to the left".

"No way. NO FREAKING WAY" Esocial ran. Ran like she never ran before. Maybe a few miles away, she saw a group of people.

But how? She thought, running a bit slower now. How did they survive, how did I survive, how? HOW?

She ran, and ran, and ran, and FINALLY got to them. There were maybe 30-40 of them. She finally got to a person, with his back to her.

And then blackness came over her. Like a tidal wave crashing over her body.

________________________________________________________

Her eyelids fluttered open. And there stood...no way,

no.

freaking.

way.

"DARREN" She screamed.

==================================================
Location: what was CALGARY, ALBERTA ,CANADA

The boy woke up, in a lot of pain. So did his parents.

"Oh. My. God."

The boy was in a black hoodie, with glasses. His glasses were smashed and his hoodie was scratched. He looked up and saw his house was decimated. Torn in half.

His father held his mother as they both lay crying. The boy was in too much pain to cry, to focus. All was left was pain.

"A-Am I dead?"

What, what happened? The boy thought. An explosion, but I am alive! My parents are alive! It tore the house in half, but I still walk this planet! HOW?

Somehow, his computer survived and the wires, so he tried tried turning it on..

It turned on!

The boys gmail was flooded with messages from his friends, cries for help and explanations. One of the most disturbing messages was from his friend (DynamicDuoDebaters.) the message wrote "HELP! THEY ARE MELTING! IT IS ALL MELTING! MY PARENTS! MY BOOKS! ALL OF IT!"

Oh dear goodness. I wonder, if he still lives? If anyone does?

No, it couldn"t be, that explosion was bigger than anything before, and yet, the boy survived. His parents survived. There is still a chance. My friends and even my enemies may still be able to live!

I know what I have to do. I have SURVIVED. I will rebuild society. Or die trying. No matter the age, or the strength of my body! I AM A SURVIVOR!

======================================================

Location: Unknown

Endark was on his bed when it happened. Resting his eyes after a hard debate against bsh1.

The computer shook. Then the room. Then the house.

Then the world.

It was if he was behind a glass wall, looking down on the world, as if he was in a glass dome. He couldn"t save his mother. Or father. Or".

"ANNIE!" He cried.

He started to disintegrate, slowly at first. Then...darkness.

He woke with a start, on the ground".somewhere. He got up, and saw a bunch of people he didn"t quite recognize. But he felt he knew them. Somehow".

He hears a large thud behind him. Slowly turning around, darren looks.

There was his

Love

Life

"ANNIE!"

=====================================================================

Thank you all, sign-up sheet will be soon!

DDD! (And DarthKirones)
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10/14/2014 9:12:03 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Sorry the apostrophes look weird
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10/14/2014 11:28:53 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Well this turned out to be a dud. No responses, nothing. :(
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10/14/2014 11:42:04 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
AUTHORS NOTE:

This is my first fanfic and I will be writing it with my good friend DarthKirones, so please applaud him. Warning they will most likely come out every week/month I really don"t know, so I am terribly sorry about that.
Each episode will be a few different character"s perspective. There will be many characters and therefore many perspectives.
Esocial is known as Annie and Endark is known as Darren.
If you would like to have an episode (or two) sign up!
Anyways, to the episode".

EPISODE 00

===============================================

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.

...well, then. That's one way to start us off.

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.

Poor Annie :-(

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.

Poor Annie x2

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"

awwww

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

Poor Annie x3

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

She got up and walked for a few feet. She looked around.

In front of her, more yellow crusted land. Behind the same.

To the right, there was a large pond, and to the left".

"No way. NO FREAKING WAY" Esocial ran. Ran like she never ran before. Maybe a few miles away, she saw a group of people.

But how? She thought, running a bit slower now. How did they survive, how did I survive, how? HOW?

She ran, and ran, and ran, and FINALLY got to them. There were maybe 30-40 of them. She finally got to a person, with his back to her.

And then blackness came over her. Like a tidal wave crashing over her body.

So an "event" then. Hmmm. Wonder what happened...

________________________________________________________

Her eyelids fluttered open. And there stood...no way,

no.

freaking.

way.

"DARREN" She screamed.

==================================================
Location: what was CALGARY, ALBERTA ,CANADA

The boy woke up, in a lot of pain. So did his parents.

"Oh. My. God."

The boy was in a black hoodie, with glasses. His glasses were smashed and his hoodie was scratched. He looked up and saw his house was decimated. Torn in half.

Thinking of Rev for some reason...

His father held his mother as they both lay crying. The boy was in too much pain to cry, to focus. All was left was pain.

"A-Am I dead?"

What, what happened? The boy thought. An explosion, but I am alive! My parents are alive! It tore the house in half, but I still walk this planet! HOW?

Somehow, his computer survived and the wires, so he tried tried turning it on..

Of course it did.

It turned on!

The boys gmail was flooded with messages from his friends, cries for help and explanations. One of the most disturbing messages was from his friend (DynamicDuoDebaters.) the message wrote "HELP! THEY ARE MELTING! IT IS ALL MELTING! MY PARENTS! MY BOOKS! ALL OF IT!"

I see what you did there.

Oh dear goodness. I wonder, if he still lives? If anyone does?

No, it couldn"t be, that explosion was bigger than anything before, and yet, the boy survived. His parents survived. There is still a chance. My friends and even my enemies may still be able to live!

I know what I have to do. I have SURVIVED. I will rebuild society. Or die trying. No matter the age, or the strength of my body! I AM A SURVIVOR!

*cue Gloria Gaynor*

======================================================

Location: Unknown

Endark was on his bed when it happened. Resting his eyes after a hard debate against bsh1.

Trueeeee

The computer shook. Then the room. Then the house.

Then the world.

That escalated.

It was if he was behind a glass wall, looking down on the world, as if he was in a glass dome. He couldn"t save his mother. Or father. Or".

"ANNIE!" He cried.

He started to disintegrate, slowly at first. Then...darkness.

WHAT

He woke with a start, on the ground".somewhere. He got up, and saw a bunch of people he didn"t quite recognize. But he felt he knew them. Somehow".

He hears a large thud behind him. Slowly turning around, darren looks.

There was his

Love

Life

"ANNIE!"

AWWWWW YEAH

=====================================================================

Thank you all, sign-up sheet will be soon!

DDD! (And DarthKirones)
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10/14/2014 11:43:32 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 11:28:53 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
Well this turned out to be a dud. No responses, nothing. :(

It's ill-advised to put out a first episode of a fan-fic only two hours after the sign ups were even held... :P
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10/14/2014 11:56:38 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 11:43:32 PM, imabench wrote:
At 10/14/2014 11:28:53 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
Well this turned out to be a dud. No responses, nothing. :(

It's ill-advised to put out a first episode of a fan-fic only two hours after the sign ups were even held... :P

Thanks for your reply though"I thought this would dud.
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10/15/2014 8:45:58 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
AUTHORS NOTE:

This is my first fanfic and I will be writing it with my good friend DarthKirones, so please applaud him. Warning they will most likely come out every week/month I really don"t know, so I am terribly sorry about that.
Each episode will be a few different character"s perspective. There will be many characters and therefore many perspectives.
Esocial is known as Annie and Endark is known as Darren.
If you would like to have an episode (or two) sign up!
Anyways, to the episode".

EPISODE 00

===============================================

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

Sh!t.. The "makes...made" got me real bad.. :'(
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10/15/2014 9:28:26 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Buuuuuuuuuump
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10/15/2014 10:10:38 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
So...you have been struck by the apostrophe/.../-- replacement with ". I have to spend 15 minutes editing it again before I post it. >.>
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10/15/2014 10:16:29 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 11:42:04 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
AUTHORS NOTE:

This is my first fanfic and I will be writing it with my good friend DarthKirones, so please applaud him. Warning they will most likely come out every week/month I really don"t know, so I am terribly sorry about that.
Each episode will be a few different character"s perspective. There will be many characters and therefore many perspectives.
Esocial is known as Annie and Endark is known as Darren.
If you would like to have an episode (or two) sign up!
Anyways, to the episode".

EPISODE 00

===============================================

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.

...well, then. That's one way to start us off.

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.

Poor Annie :-(

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.

Poor Annie x2

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"

awwww

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

Poor Annie x3

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

She got up and walked for a few feet. She looked around.

In front of her, more yellow crusted land. Behind the same.

To the right, there was a large pond, and to the left".

"No way. NO FREAKING WAY" Esocial ran. Ran like she never ran before. Maybe a few miles away, she saw a group of people.

But how? She thought, running a bit slower now. How did they survive, how did I survive, how? HOW?

She ran, and ran, and ran, and FINALLY got to them. There were maybe 30-40 of them. She finally got to a person, with his back to her.

And then blackness came over her. Like a tidal wave crashing over her body.

So an "event" then. Hmmm. Wonder what happened...

________________________________________________________

Her eyelids fluttered open. And there stood...no way,

no.

freaking.

way.

"DARREN" She screamed.

==================================================
Location: what was CALGARY, ALBERTA ,CANADA

The boy woke up, in a lot of pain. So did his parents.

"Oh. My. God."

The boy was in a black hoodie, with glasses. His glasses were smashed and his hoodie was scratched. He looked up and saw his house was decimated. Torn in half.

Thinking of Rev for some reason...

His father held his mother as they both lay crying. The boy was in too much pain to cry, to focus. All was left was pain.

"A-Am I dead?"

What, what happened? The boy thought. An explosion, but I am alive! My parents are alive! It tore the house in half, but I still walk this planet! HOW?

Somehow, his computer survived and the wires, so he tried tried turning it on..

Of course it did.

It turned on!

The boys gmail was flooded with messages from his friends, cries for help and explanations. One of the most disturbing messages was from his friend (DynamicDuoDebaters.) the message wrote "HELP! THEY ARE MELTING! IT IS ALL MELTING! MY PARENTS! MY BOOKS! ALL OF IT!"

I see what you did there.

Oh dear goodness. I wonder, if he still lives? If anyone does?

No, it couldn"t be, that explosion was bigger than anything before, and yet, the boy survived. His parents survived. There is still a chance. My friends and even my enemies may still be able to live!

I know what I have to do. I have SURVIVED. I will rebuild society. Or die trying. No matter the age, or the strength of my body! I AM A SURVIVOR!

*cue Gloria Gaynor*

======================================================

Location: Unknown

Endark was on his bed when it happened. Resting his eyes after a hard debate against bsh1.

Trueeeee

The computer shook. Then the room. Then the house.

Then the world.

That escalated.

It was if he was behind a glass wall, looking down on the world, as if he was in a glass dome. He couldn"t save his mother. Or father. Or".

"ANNIE!" He cried.

He started to disintegrate, slowly at first. Then...darkness.

WHAT

He woke with a start, on the ground".somewhere. He got up, and saw a bunch of people he didn"t quite recognize. But he felt he knew them. Somehow".

He hears a large thud behind him. Slowly turning around, darren looks.

There was his

Love

Life

"ANNIE!"

AWWWWW YEAH

=====================================================================

Thank you all, sign-up sheet will be soon!

DDD! (And DarthKirones)

I never saw you do this to me fan fics?? Sad face dude sad face
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10/15/2014 10:17:27 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
AUTHORS NOTE:

This is my first fanfic and I will be writing it with my good friend DarthKirones, so please applaud him. Warning they will most likely come out every week/month I really don"t know, so I am terribly sorry about that.
Each episode will be a few different character"s perspective. There will be many characters and therefore many perspectives.
Esocial is known as Annie and Endark is known as Darren.
If you would like to have an episode (or two) sign up!
Anyways, to the episode".

EPISODE 00

===============================================

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.

Wat. That was sudden. .-.

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.

;_;

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.

T_______T

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.

WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

You're an as5, you know that? XD

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

D:>

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

She got up and walked for a few feet. She looked around.

In front of her, more yellow crusted land. Behind the same.

To the right, there was a large pond, and to the left".

"No way. NO FREAKING WAY" Esocial ran. Ran like she never ran before. Maybe a few miles away, she saw a group of people.

But how? She thought, running a bit slower now. How did they survive, how did I survive, how? HOW?

She ran, and ran, and ran, and FINALLY got to them. There were maybe 30-40 of them. She finally got to a person, with his back to her.

And then blackness came over her. Like a tidal wave crashing over her body.

A) Hangover
B) Drugged
C) Knocked out
D) Exhaustion

________________________________________________________

Her eyelids fluttered open. And there stood...no way,

no.

freaking.

way.

"DARREN" She screamed.

==================================================
Location: what was CALGARY, ALBERTA ,CANADA

The boy woke up, in a lot of pain. So did his parents.

"Oh. My. God."

The boy was in a black hoodie, with glasses. His glasses were smashed and his hoodie was scratched. He looked up and saw his house was decimated. Torn in half.

Oi mate. Is that me? Because I don't live in Canada. More like the opposite. XD

His father held his mother as they both lay crying. The boy was in too much pain to cry, to focus. All was left was pain.

"A-Am I dead?"

What, what happened? The boy thought. An explosion, but I am alive! My parents are alive! It tore the house in half, but I still walk this planet! HOW?

Somehow, his computer survived and the wires, so he tried tried turning it on..

It turned on!

Computer > Family

You make me seem so heartless. ;-;

The boys gmail was flooded with messages from his friends, cries for help and explanations. One of the most disturbing messages was from his friend (DynamicDuoDebaters.) the message wrote "HELP! THEY ARE MELTING! IT IS ALL MELTING! MY PARENTS! MY BOOKS! ALL OF IT!"

Wat.

Oh dear goodness. I wonder, if he still lives? If anyone does?

You know, you really are making me sound so heartless. XD

No, it couldn"t be, that explosion was bigger than anything before, and yet, the boy survived. His parents survived. There is still a chance. My friends and even my enemies may still be able to live!

I know what I have to do. I have SURVIVED. I will rebuild society. Or die trying. No matter the age, or the strength of my body! I AM A SURVIVOR!

Probably die trying. LMAO

======================================================

Location: Unknown

Endark was on his bed when it happened. Resting his eyes after a hard debate against bsh1.

The computer shook. Then the room. Then the house.

Then the world.

It was if he was behind a glass wall, looking down on the world, as if he was in a glass dome. He couldn"t save his mother. Or father. Or".

You're so cruel. T-T

"ANNIE!" He cried.

He started to disintegrate, slowly at first. Then...darkness.

He woke with a start, on the ground".somewhere. He got up, and saw a bunch of people he didn"t quite recognize. But he felt he knew them. Somehow".

He hears a large thud behind him. Slowly turning around, darren looks.

There was his

Love

Life

"ANNIE!"

DAT FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS :D

=====================================================================

Thank you all, sign-up sheet will be soon!

DDD! (And DarthKirones)

Nice first chapter! I loved it! *subscribes*

Btw, don't let the lack of replies get you down. My first story on FanFiction had only 5 reviews. Just keep plugging away at it! :D
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10/15/2014 10:17:44 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 11:43:32 PM, imabench wrote:
At 10/14/2014 11:28:53 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
Well this turned out to be a dud. No responses, nothing. :(

It's ill-advised to put out a first episode of a fan-fic only two hours after the sign ups were even held... :P

Aren't you doing a rio fanfic?
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10/15/2014 10:38:19 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 11:43:32 PM, imabench wrote:
At 10/14/2014 11:28:53 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
Well this turned out to be a dud. No responses, nothing. :(

It's ill-advised to put out a first episode of a fan-fic only two hours after the sign ups were even held... :P

lol
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10/15/2014 5:33:33 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/15/2014 10:17:27 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
AUTHORS NOTE:

This is my first fanfic and I will be writing it with my good friend DarthKirones, so please applaud him. Warning they will most likely come out every week/month I really don"t know, so I am terribly sorry about that.
Each episode will be a few different character"s perspective. There will be many characters and therefore many perspectives.
Esocial is known as Annie and Endark is known as Darren.
If you would like to have an episode (or two) sign up!
Anyways, to the episode".

EPISODE 00

===============================================

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.

Wat. That was sudden. .-.

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.

;_;

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.

T_______T

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.

WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

You're an as5, you know that? XD

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

D:>

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

She got up and walked for a few feet. She looked around.

In front of her, more yellow crusted land. Behind the same.

To the right, there was a large pond, and to the left".

"No way. NO FREAKING WAY" Esocial ran. Ran like she never ran before. Maybe a few miles away, she saw a group of people.

But how? She thought, running a bit slower now. How did they survive, how did I survive, how? HOW?

She ran, and ran, and ran, and FINALLY got to them. There were maybe 30-40 of them. She finally got to a person, with his back to her.

And then blackness came over her. Like a tidal wave crashing over her body.

A) Hangover
B) Drugged
C) Knocked out
D) Exhaustion

________________________________________________________

Her eyelids fluttered open. And there stood...no way,

no.

freaking.

way.

"DARREN" She screamed.

==================================================
Location: what was CALGARY, ALBERTA ,CANADA

The boy woke up, in a lot of pain. So did his parents.

"Oh. My. God."

The boy was in a black hoodie, with glasses. His glasses were smashed and his hoodie was scratched. He looked up and saw his house was decimated. Torn in half.

Oi mate. Is that me? Because I don't live in Canada. More like the opposite. XD

His father held his mother as they both lay crying. The boy was in too much pain to cry, to focus. All was left was pain.

"A-Am I dead?"

What, what happened? The boy thought. An explosion, but I am alive! My parents are alive! It tore the house in half, but I still walk this planet! HOW?

Somehow, his computer survived and the wires, so he tried tried turning it on..

It turned on!

Computer > Family

You make me seem so heartless. ;-;

The boys gmail was flooded with messages from his friends, cries for help and explanations. One of the most disturbing messages was from his friend (DynamicDuoDebaters.) the message wrote "HELP! THEY ARE MELTING! IT IS ALL MELTING! MY PARENTS! MY BOOKS! ALL OF IT!"

Wat.

Oh dear goodness. I wonder, if he still lives? If anyone does?

You know, you really are making me sound so heartless. XD

No, it couldn"t be, that explosion was bigger than anything before, and yet, the boy survived. His parents survived. There is still a chance. My friends and even my enemies may still be able to live!

I know what I have to do. I have SURVIVED. I will rebuild society. Or die trying. No matter the age, or the strength of my body! I AM A SURVIVOR!

Probably die trying. LMAO

======================================================

Location: Unknown

Endark was on his bed when it happened. Resting his eyes after a hard debate against bsh1.

The computer shook. Then the room. Then the house.

Then the world.

It was if he was behind a glass wall, looking down on the world, as if he was in a glass dome. He couldn"t save his mother. Or father. Or".

You're so cruel. T-T

"ANNIE!" He cried.

He started to disintegrate, slowly at first. Then...darkness.

He woke with a start, on the ground".somewhere. He got up, and saw a bunch of people he didn"t quite recognize. But he felt he knew them. Somehow".

He hears a large thud behind him. Slowly turning around, darren looks.

There was his

Love

Life

"ANNIE!"

DAT FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS :D

=====================================================================

Thank you all, sign-up sheet will be soon!

DDD! (And DarthKirones)

Nice first chapter! I loved it! *subscribes*

Btw, don't let the lack of replies get you down. My first story on FanFiction had only 5 reviews. Just keep plugging away at it! :D

Btw that was DarthKirones......
the middle section was him not you (sorry) Next episode though...
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10/15/2014 6:03:54 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
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10/15/2014 8:00:16 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
oh and BTW, my story is based on a different perspective per chapter too! Yay!
I was inspired by "Gathering of Old Men" tho.
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10/16/2014 8:31:23 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
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10/16/2014 3:59:07 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/14/2014 9:10:02 PM, dynamicduodebaters wrote:
AUTHORS NOTE:
WHY WASN'T I INFORMED OF THIS?! :O I DIDNT EVEN SEE IT O_o

Location: Unknown

And the world went boom.
Damn you start off fast xD
Everywhere people dying, dying, dying...oh the pain, the pain of seeing your friends and family just".dying, dying, dying.
O_O NOOOOOO

Just gone. The pain, the sorrow, it was too much for esocial. Too much.
Po' esocial

But then, as she saw her neighbours evaporate, she wasn"t dying. She just stood there. It was the worst feeling, oh the pain of no pain, but yet watching pain. Of her dearest family, of her dearest friends. Of just everything she knows. Just gone.
That must be painful... emotionally that is...

She tried to scream, she tried to do anything, anything to help. She couldn"t move a muscle. It was if the sorrow seeped into her brain and just shut down her life.
Aww.

And suddenly, she was disintegrating, being slowly dissolved in the fire. It was almost a relief, to die, to get away from this madness.
(

As she slowly disintegrated, she saw her last glimpse of her mother. Oh her dear little, annoying but lovable as hell mother.
*sobs*
____________________________________________

Light, a blinding light, the light of everything, everything into nothing.

She creaked open her eyes and got up. This is not a nightmare. THIS IS REAL.

"Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!" she screamed, still blinded by this immense light.

And finally it stopped. It just".stopped. Gone.

Mom. Dad. The entire family, friends. Everyone.

"Please not Endark, please don"t let him also be dead, PLEASE!"
NOOOO ENNIE NOT ENNIE TOO

And suddenly, she was up. Alive. But endark...endark".mom".dad"..all of them.

It was a crusty surface she was laying on, if it even was a surface. Kind of like the top of the I perfectly crisp apple pie Esocialbookworm"s mom makes...made".

She got up and walked for a few feet. She looked around.

In front of her, more yellow crusted land. Behind the same.

To the right, there was a large pond, and to the left".

"No way. NO FREAKING WAY" Esocial ran. Ran like she never ran before. Maybe a few miles away, she saw a group of people.

But how? She thought, running a bit slower now. How did they survive, how did I survive, how? HOW?
ENNIE?! ENNIE!!! LET IT BE ENNIE!!!

She ran, and ran, and ran, and FINALLY got to them. There were maybe 30-40 of them. She finally got to a person, with his back to her.
ENNIE?! :
And then blackness came over her. Like a tidal wave crashing over her body.
DUN DUN DUUNNN:
________________________________________________________

Her eyelids fluttered open. And there stood...no way,

no.

freaking.

way.

"DARREN" She screamed.
... INnteresing...

==================================================
Location: what was CALGARY, ALBERTA ,CANADA

The boy woke up, in a lot of pain. So did his parents.

"Oh. My. God."

The boy was in a black hoodie, with glasses. His glasses were smashed and his hoodie was scratched. He looked up and saw his house was decimated. Torn in half.

His father held his mother as they both lay crying. The boy was in too much pain to cry, to focus. All was left was pain.

"A-Am I dead?"

Poor fella
What, what happened? The boy thought. An explosion, but I am alive! My parents are alive! It tore the house in half, but I still walk this planet! HOW?

Somehow, his computer survived and the wires, so he tried tried turning it on..

YAY!
It turned on!
YAY!

The boys gmail was flooded with messages from his friends, cries for help and explanations. One of the most disturbing messages was from his friend (DynamicDuoDebaters.) the message wrote "HELP! THEY ARE MELTING! IT IS ALL MELTING! MY PARENTS! MY BOOKS! ALL OF IT!"
Aww.

Oh dear goodness. I wonder, if he still lives? If anyone does?

No, it couldn"t be, that explosion was bigger than anything before, and yet, the boy survived. His parents survived. There is still a chance. My friends and even my enemies may still be able to live!
Aww.

I know what I have to do. I have SURVIVED. I will rebuild society. Or die trying. No matter the age, or the strength of my body! I AM A SURVIVOR!
WOOT WOOT

======================================================

Location: Unknown

Endark was on his bed when it happened. Resting his eyes after a hard debate against bsh1.
LOL

The computer shook. Then the room. Then the house.
ENNIE

Then the world.
ENNIE

It was if he was behind a glass wall, looking down on the world, as if he was in a glass dome. He couldn"t save his mother. Or father. Or".
NOOO ENNIEE

"ANNIE!" He cried.
I'M HERE FOR YOU <3 LOVE

He started to disintegrate, slowly at first. Then...darkness.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

He woke with a start, on the ground".somewhere. He got up, and saw a bunch of people he didn"t quite recognize. But he felt he knew them. Somehow".

He hears a large thud behind him. Slowly turning around, darren looks.

There was his

Love

Life

"ANNIE!"

YYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
=====================================================================

Thank you all, sign-up sheet will be soon!

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10/16/2014 5:37:36 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
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