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would love to get some feedback for my fanfic

dynamicduodebaters
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10/15/2014 6:56:03 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
would love to get some feedback/reviews for my fanfic so I can make an even better episode next time!

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Next I will have the same three characters plus 3 new ones....

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10/15/2014 7:50:23 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
I think I like the direction you are taking it. I also think that it will become better after you have introduced the characters. Like, I wasn't a huge fan of all of your death-entrances (I can't find a better expression) but I think the real potential for the fanfic will come after you have established the characters and setting and can focus on the plot. And it will obviously be amazing if it has me in it, I mean come on.