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10/25/2014 10:18:38 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
A/N And here it is. I was initially frightened about writing this. I had this inspiration of creating a love triangle and it felt very intriguing and I explored it. Eventually I wrote a chapter about it. So now, I can't delete it or go back. In no way shape or form is the character of Adam me. Adam isn't my real name and so I just went with the flow of my creativity. I do not have any infatuations with any of the members here just to be clear. So please don't ship me or anything like what happened in my earlier debates. I'm happy being single and completely asexual, castrated and celibate.

(I beg of you not to put high expectations from this. I am no genius like Mr. Martin)

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Chapter 1

"You know nothing Adam Snow."

'Well I do know how to fock a whore."

And he did. He thrusted himself into her and she gasped. This continued for quite some time before there was a knock on the door.

"Come in." Adam said with sweat gleaming on his face.

A man walked in, tall and slender. He wore the great armor of a Palace Knight. Golden flaps hung off his shoulders and in one arm he carried a helmet made of Endarkian gold. He nodded to Adam and his companion.

"Well if it isn't Ser Anthony of house Endark, son of Barristan Endark and the second of his name, loyal to the king and guardian of the f**king Kingdom." he grinned as his hand slid up the buttocks of the dorgish whore.

Ser Anthony was not amused. He looked impatient, as if on duty.

"My lord I - "

"I'm not a lord. I'm a bastard."

"I'm here to remind you that your brother's wedding is taking place soon."

In a jolt, he sat up from the bed.

"I thought it was tomorrow."

"My lord, it has always been today. And tonight."

Adam's face went gloomy.

"The royal wedding...' He stared at Ser Anthony. 'Tonight?"

There was a pause.

'My lord.' Ser Anthony took a bow and left the room.

The door closed behind him.

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Elizabeth hated her name. More than she hated the queen regent, Gina Crescent of house Loria. The stinking whore commanded the exile of her lord father, Fendal Mikal. Now her father worked in the cold south with the Gatherers. A mine shaft used to dig up ancient gold and metal ores.

Ever since then, the Queen has always called her by her first name in that sweet, sympathetic tone of hers. "My dear Elizabeth. I'm very sorry about your father. What a terrible incident. Please, I hope you understand that I did what any queen would have done." She had let it go then. The Queen was right. Her father was caught having an affair with one of the Lord's daughters. Mother had been devastated, crying on the floor, shouting curses at father.

But now everyone seemed to call her Elizabeth. The stewards, the squires, uncle Oberos, even her handmaiden. No one dared give her a nickname. It was not polite they said. Or calling her by the first name was informal enough. She grew sick of it as the years passed and her hatred for the name boiled inside her and grew hotter whenever anyone called her "Lady Elizabeth."

She brisked through the hallway, her black hair braided by the best handmaiden, and came up to his room. Her husband to be. She knocked at the door.

"Come in."

Elizabeth entered the room. Her husband was seated and drinking wine from a chalice.

"And what brings a beautiful lady like you to my chambers..." he poured wine into another cup. "Liz?"
She hugged him and kissed him on the lips. "Nothing my dear. I just wanted to know if you were ready for our wedding." He smiled at her and passed her the cup.

"They say weddings are a curse. Many kings have been known to be assassinated during weddings. Poisoned, slaughtered, butchered. So many ways to be killed." Liz touched the red fabric of his cloak.

"But you're not a king." She smiled back at him. "My lord."

"Please. We are to be married tonight. There is no need to call me a lord."

"Alright then. What do you want me to call you? Honey? Or how about my sweet dragon? Since I heard you were Stormborn." She fondled his hair.

"My lady, you can call me Romani."

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"Fecking bushes and fecking trees. I can't bloody hunt in here." Adam threw the spear into the ground. It stuck there. His squire, Jibber, waited patiently for him.

"Jib, bring me some ale.'

"I'm sorry my lord, your father ordered me never to allow you to drink ale or any kind of wine. Especially mead." Of course he did, Adam thought. Adam was only 18. The drinking age was officially 22 namedays now thanks to Adam's own uncle, Lord Altar who sat in the council. Any youngsters who disobeyed and got drunk would have their tongues cut out with hot pincers at the royal courtyard.

But Adam found ways. He always did.

The problem were his squires. More useless than helpful. Adam looked at Jibber and grinned.

"Say, have you ever been to a whore house before, Jib?

"No my lord." Jibber was young. Almost turning 16. But there was no law for a minimum age to enter whore houses. The people who made the laws were as perverted as the common people, Adam knew.

"Then let's go. It will be a once in a lifetime experience Jib. You will thank me later." Adam picked up his spear and moved before his squire could protest. There seemed to be no expression on Jib"s face, only a blank gaze at his master.

*

Jib followed Adam through the forest. He watched Adam slash at the "fecking" bushes. Wondered why he was so angry at them.

He understood why his master had so many squire changes. Most likely they were caught in trouble with Adam by lord Altar. Jib had heard what happened to these squires. They did not leave their duties unpunished.

Jib started to wonder why his master hadn't killed those ducks they had found a few hours ago. He had a clear shot and yet he completely missed. Saying that he had an arm injury. Yet just a while ago, when he threw the spear into the ground, it stuck deep and stayed upright.

Watching his master's back, he saw him for what he was. He saw the son of a dead lord, the unexpected nephew of Lord Altar, and a bastard. Unwanted, but indisposable.

But most of all, he noticed something else. An isolation.

A loneliness.

'My lord, may I ask you something?'

'Don't worry, Jib We're almost there.' Adam replied.

'Why are you so anxious about tonight's royal wedding?'

'... How did you know I was anxious?'

'Whenever anyone we meet mentions it, your eyes look downward. A sign of deep thought and worry.'

Adam was silent.

'My lord. What is so troubling about the lady's marriage to Lord Romani?'

Adam stopped moving and turned to face Jibber. His face devoid of expression.

'Because I love her.'

The two boys stood still. And the woods grew silent.
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A/N And that's it. Hope you enjoyed that. If you'd like to sign up for this, it's right in my sig. Thank you and have a nice day.
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10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM
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Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P
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10/25/2014 9:39:20 PM
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Also, explicit scenes are not recommended for most fanfics, because it usually means it's smut in the FanFiction world and that's how my friends and I see it. :P

In other words: Think of teh children D:>

Although I have read much, MUCH worse. XD
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10/25/2014 9:58:47 PM
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Pretty good! I second Rev's suggestions. :D I look forward to seeing more.
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10/25/2014 11:13:08 PM
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At 10/25/2014 10:45:08 PM, Mikal wrote:
the more explicit the better , go for it. Its GOT you cant sensor it

*thumbs up*

XD But I have to lol!
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10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM
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At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P
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10/25/2014 11:14:24 PM
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At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Thought you hated love triangles
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10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.
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10/25/2014 11:15:33 PM
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At 10/25/2014 9:58:47 PM, mishapqueen wrote:
Pretty good! I second Rev's suggestions. :D I look forward to seeing more.

Yes! *punches air*

Thank you! Chapter 2 will come out soon.

Btw, as you can see I don't use DDO member usernames directly so that the world is more realistic.

Is there a name I can use that connects to you. Maybe a nickname or something like that that you can identify with?
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10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P
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10/25/2014 11:16:39 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:14:24 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Thought you hated love triangles

I hate the way love triangles end. It's one of the following:
A)One of the characters die
B)Two of them die
C)All of them die
D)One of the characters go through emotional trauma
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10/25/2014 11:17:08 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

BRING IT ON
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10/25/2014 11:17:34 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:15:39 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Who's Jib?

Short for Jibber. What did you think of the story? Be honest :P
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10/25/2014 11:17:37 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:17:08 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

BRING IT ON

*coughs*
Ladies, please.
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10/25/2014 11:17:58 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:17:34 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:39 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Who's Jib?

Short for Jibber. What did you think of the story? Be honest :P

No, I mean, who on DDO? If anyone?
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10/25/2014 11:18:09 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:17:08 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

BRING IT ON

LOL! You already have what, 8 deaths by chapter 5?
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10/25/2014 11:18:16 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

But don't kill people excessively. Only if it's necessarily. :P

Unfortunately, Warped requires a lot of deaths to fit into the win conditions. V_V
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10/25/2014 11:18:50 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:17:58 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:17:34 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:39 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Who's Jib?

Short for Jibber. What did you think of the story? Be honest :P

No, I mean, who on DDO? If anyone?

Can't tell ya right now ;)
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10/25/2014 11:20:28 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:18:16 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

But don't kill people excessively. Only if it's necessarily. :P

Unfortunately, Warped requires a lot of deaths to fit into the win conditions. V_V

Yes, I can see that. Specially when it's like hunger games and there's deaths every night.
Unfortunately I think the winner goes to you. I'm going to build my characters before destroying them.

Nothing like good ol' murder
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10/25/2014 11:20:38 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:17:37 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:17:08 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

BRING IT ON

*coughs*
Ladies, please.

Bsh, pls. You haven't even seen death in Warped yet. ;D

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10/25/2014 11:21:33 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:14:00 PM, YYW wrote:
I am not mentioned...

#notreadingthis

#IDGAF

Did you sign up? o.o
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10/25/2014 11:21:50 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:18:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:17:08 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

BRING IT ON

LOL! You already have what, 8 deaths by chapter 5?

Bruh. Look at the rules in chapter 2. By the end of the first game, three thousand of the inital 5,000 players will die. MUAHAHAHA

But they were minor characters, anyway. They dun matter. ;D
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10/25/2014 11:22:37 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:20:28 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:18:16 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

But don't kill people excessively. Only if it's necessarily. :P

Unfortunately, Warped requires a lot of deaths to fit into the win conditions. V_V

Yes, I can see that. Specially when it's like hunger games and there's deaths every night.
Unfortunately I think the winner goes to you. I'm going to build my characters before destroying them.

Nothing like good ol' murder

Bruh, don't worry. Most of the main characters will survive until the end...note the "most." o3o
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10/25/2014 11:22:42 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:21:50 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:18:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:17:08 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

BRING IT ON

LOL! You already have what, 8 deaths by chapter 5?

Bruh. Look at the rules in chapter 2. By the end of the first game, three thousand of the inital 5,000 players will die. MUAHAHAHA

But they were minor characters, anyway. They dun matter. ;D

Oh my freaking god. DDO has like that amount of active members lol
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10/25/2014 11:22:57 PM
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At 10/25/2014 11:21:33 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:14:00 PM, YYW wrote:
I am not mentioned...

#notreadingthis

#IDGAF

Did you sign up? o.o

That is of no consequence...
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10/25/2014 11:23:08 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/25/2014 11:22:37 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:20:28 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:18:16 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:16:09 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:15:09 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:13:57 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 9:36:17 PM, RevNge wrote:
Ermahgerd! You're a writer in the making, good sir. ;3

I specialize in action for the most part in novels, so naturally I'd say to step up the excitement. Nothing like a good love triangle to end in the most horrible way (XD), but I'd say to go more into detail; you're somewhat vague, but other than that, keep plugging away! :P

Yup, you're pretty amazing at suspense and action.

There hasn't been any deaths which was what worried me to begin with :P

Oh, don't worry. This will be the bloodiest fanfic in the history of DDO.

Mine. Or yours? *raises eyebrow*

Let's see who wins in that category :P

But don't kill people excessively. Only if it's necessarily. :P

Unfortunately, Warped requires a lot of deaths to fit into the win conditions. V_V

Yes, I can see that. Specially when it's like hunger games and there's deaths every night.
Unfortunately I think the winner goes to you. I'm going to build my characters before destroying them.

Nothing like good ol' murder

Bruh, don't worry. Most of the main characters will survive until the end...note the "most." o3o

I look forward to that.
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10/25/2014 11:24:15 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/25/2014 11:22:57 PM, YYW wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:21:33 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/25/2014 11:14:00 PM, YYW wrote:
I am not mentioned...

#notreadingthis

#IDGAF

Did you sign up? o.o

That is of no consequence...

Patience. You will appear. How could you not?
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