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11/26/2014 4:12:30 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Please do not post until I finish posting.

Episode 00:http://www.debate.org...
Episode 01:http://www.debate.org...
(RACE FOR SURVIVAL)
Episode 02:http://www.debate.org...
(WAR?)
Episode 03:http://www.debate.org...
(BROKEN)
Episode 04:http://www.debate.org...
(FEAR IS THE GREATEST WEAPON)
Episode 05:http://www.debate.org...
(BOND)
Episode 06:http://www.debate.org...
(TIME)
Episode 07:http://www.debate.org...
(THE SENSIBLES.)

Sign-Up Sheet:http://www.debate.org...

For once, I actually have some important things to say.

First off, thanks so much for the feedback for the first seven episodes, that was the first era of this fanfic, but now we are on to another, with new characters, new threats and new places!

Second, DDD, my co-writer and best friend is taking a leave from the fan fic, will this be permanent? I am not too sure.

Next, the series will return to it"s usual format, with one mini story from each group and a bonus POV.

Lastly, I could use some new characters to use! Please, if you have not already signed up and you like this story, then kindly put your name on the list. Thanks!

Anyways, you want writing, then here you go!

EPISODE 08: UNITED AS ONE.
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"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:14:18 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Group 01:Esocialbookworm, EndarkenedRationalist, Malacoda, DarthKirones, YamaVonKarma, Thett3, Airmax (Temporarily.)
POV: YamaVonKarma

"The damage is irreversible, not without cloning devices. We are too weak to launch an attack on Rational Madman, who I am utterly convinced is alive and has cloning technology. Besides, even if I could make Yama a new organic hand, I wouldn"t, not after what you and your sensibles did." Darth snapped at Thett. Thett now has a very large scar on her left cheek, courtesy of Malacoda.

Thett, my most loyal servant, unlike DDD, Rev and Wylted. Thett is so loyal, trying to get that kid to grow me a new hand.

"C"mon, Darth, please? You"re one of the smartest here! You can figure it out!"

Darth, still frustrated, yelled back at Thett. "I know how to regrow his hand,I just can"t! I would need a sample of his DNA, a cloning machine and something to artifically age the clone to Yama"s exact age, cut the hand off the clone and attach the hand to his body through surgery. And I'm too damn clumsy to do a surgery. I can make him a robotic hand, but it would take time. Now shut up and leave me to my peace."

Thett went back to her cabin that she shared with Yama, mumbling bad words.

"I"m going to go for a walk across the plane." Yama said

Yama had to wear a handcuff at all times, if he ever did anything "naughty" he would get an electric shock.

He saw Rev punching 9spaceking, Adam, Malacoda, and Pots having a political debate, Marie and Airmax reading, Lannan and imabench sparring, DDD and Darth flying the ship, Esocial and Krieg cooking Salmon, and Endark staring at a chess board.

I know where to go.

Yama walked over to Endark and the chess set. "Mind if I join?"

Endark looked hesitant. "Why? So you can kill my pieces?".

"Isn"t that the goal of chess?"

"No, the goal of chess is to capture the king."

"But to capture the king, there has to be casualties."

Endark was stunned. "Very well. You may play."

Endark made the first move, sliding a pawn across the table. "Have you ever wondered about the benefits of War? In history, the winning side usually takes a prize from the loser, but do they need the prize? Did the Allied powers need to take thirty-three billion dollars from Germany after the empire surrendered? Or was it to satisfy their ego? They don"t need the land, the land does not help the winner. No. It harms the loser and it does not help the winner."

Yama jumped a Knight across the field of play. "Ah, but it does. Think of all the good war has done. We have stopped those who would kill us all, including their own people. So in a way, the losers and the winners benefit. The attackers will not be attacked again, they have proven who is and always will be dominant, and the losers will not have to suffer another war. As for World War One, it"s the same thing. The Brits and The Frenchies took money away to tell Germany that they ruled supreme in the court of Europe. Not to please their egos, but to cement their power and to save lives."

Endark moved another pawn. "Really. Was Adolf Hitler becoming Fuhrer a show that the Allies were on top? Was the slaughter of so many people a sign that Germany respected Britain's dominance? Was the Declaration of War upon a country that Germany knew was protected by Britain and France, was that a show submission, Huh? Whaddya have to say about that?"

Yama smiled, moving a pawn to stop Endarks slow advance. "Is that so? Hitler admitted that he was willing to give up the war as long as he got what wanted.He did respect Britains army. He understood that there was a great chance he would lose. So he did respect their skills, and did the allies give up their crusade when the "warmonger" offered peace? No."

The two played in silence for a while.

"Checkmate." Yama uttered.

"What?"

"I accept your offer of peace. I will not continue to plague you."

Or do I? Let"s see if you continue to play the aggressor Endark, you may speak peace, but I really know what you are. But for now, peace.

=====================================================================
"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:15:47 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Group 2:Potbelliedgeek, lannan13, Wylted, Adam_Godzilla, VelCrow and imabench
POV: Pots.

*SNOOOOOOOOOOOORE*

Huh? Who is that?

Inside cabin 4, slept Adam, Pots and Vel. They each had their own, comfy beds.

Ah, right. Adam snores.

It was nearly morning. All Pots could think about was Bread, toasted until it was golden brown, then nice, yellow, soft, butter. The sizzling of Bacon on the pan, then it reaches a nice crispy state. Then some eggs, scrambled, with pretty green chives. Mmmmmm"

"Ouch!"

Adam woke up looking around. "What happend? Who died now!"

Vel got up. "Sorry, just rolled off my bed."

Like a Chicken Wing falling into breadcrumbs. Then frying to perfection, and that first bite. The crispy bread taste of the outside part, then the soft, succulent meat on the inside, and then spices strike. Salt, Pepper, Onion powder with just a touch of Garlic. Yum.

Adam then grabbed his bag, pulling out a notebook and a whole bunch of pencils. Most of the pencils had a yellow wrap around them.

Like French Fries. Cutting potatoes up into thin slivers, salting them and putting them righting the deep-frier. A few minutes later they are taken out, dried. That crunch and the fluff on the inside. Mmmmm.... I miss earth with all of those delicious foods

A few hours past. Everyone was awake at this point.

Bored.

He Walked around, seeing if there was anything interesting to do. He had no interest in debating politics again. He also did not want to do any cooking, he may love eating, but he is not a fan of cooking.

Aha!

He saw the Flight room, where people flew the plane. Inside was DDD, who was the main pilot, DarthKirones, who was the navigator and Lannan, who was the assistant pilot.

"Hey guys! Need any help?"

Darth looked up. "Yea, if you get us some snacks and a refill on coffee,then maybe you can help me out with navigation. "

Pots, the enthusiastic man he is, immediately went to the pantry.

Sweet! I am going to help fly a plane! Or spaceship, or whatever this is. Speaking of which, why do we have gravity in here? Never mind.

Pots grabbed three coffees, a box of donuts and some chips.

He entered the room, holding the treats in both hands.

"Here you go!" Pots ut the coffee in special slots,and stuffed the snacks in a cabinet.

"So, where are we going?"

Darth pressed his iPad, and a hologram appeared, coming out of the iPad.The Hologram was that of the known universe, he zoomed in a little, showing the milky way.

"That is what I am trying to figure out. We were" How do I say this? Not on Earth. We were on a planet similar to earth, but the coordinates, the amount of planets in that solar system, they are all wrong. We are in the complete opposite side of the galaxy, if you can help me pin-point my location, that would be pleasant."

Pots zoomed in. "Have you tried narrowing down the planets with earth-like characteristics? "

"There are too many, it would take too much time to find the exact distance."

"True, why don"t you enter the coordinates of Earth? It doesn't matter where we are as long as we know where we are going."

Darth looked up. "I guess that would work. Good job."

Looks the boredom problem is has been taken care of.

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"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:17:44 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Group 03:Revnge, Kreig01, 9spaceking, ElCorazonAma , DDD
POV: 9spaceking

Dear Diary.

Today was an awesome day. For breakfast I had pancakes with maple syrup. Since we don"t have a space tv, I entertained myself by throwing paper airplanes at Rev. As per holy Debate.Org IRL tradition, he punched me in the face.

Then I read a book. Seems boring? Yeah, I lied. I didn"t read a book. See? I just trolled you diary! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! So now you punch me" Come on.... Please?

Anyways. I played table tennis with Krieg, but then I got bored, so I knocked the ball into the incinerator. Apparently that was the last table tennis ball he has, so he yelled at me, and when I turned to leave he punched me in the face.

Next I wanted to go on a spacewalk, so I went and asked DDD, since he is the pilot. He told me that we needed to get back to earth, and there is no time to please me. I then turned of gravity, causing DDD to punch me in the face.

Once gravity was returned, I grabbed myself some lunch, in the form of a sandwich. Unfortunately, the sandwich did not fulfill its goal of entering my stomach, but it made a great weapon, smacking the book out of Maries hands. She gave me a bad look, but did not hit me. I spent the next hour crying in the bathroom.

However, 25 minute later I was already feeling better, and Rev was outside the door and needing to go pee badly. All the other washrooms were under maintenance, so this was the only one available. When I got out I saw that Rev peed in a bucket, he threw the contents in my face, claiming it was Revenge for peeing in his cornflakes.

A truly epic day.

-9spac-


*CRASH*

"WE"RE HIT!" Lannan yelled.

Darth, Malacoda and Endark pulled out weapons and space armor on. "Lannan, DDD, Rebv and 9spaceking, keep the ship safe, Darth, your on repair duty. Malacoda, you're with me."

The three jumped out into space.

HOLY COW! IS IT ALIENS? RUBBLE? BIRDS? RATIONAL MADMAN?

"That"s it, I"m going out to help." 9spaceking yelled.

"No. We have orders. You stay here!" Lannan thrashed.

But 9spaceking had already jumped out with a spacesuit and an energy sword.

"Oh my god""

There was a huge figure, 7 foot 6, maybe 7 foot 7. He was huge, his hair was black and untidy, very long and greasy. He also has a long beard. With gold armor and a spear.

That looks like" Me?

"MADMEN" ATTACK!"

Endark and Malacoda were floating while Darth repaired the engine. "Oh $#!%." Endark murmured as the huge spaceships approached.

"TAKE PRISONERS. ESPECIALLY THE ONE THAT LOOKS LIKE ME."

Endark turned around. "9SPACEKING! I TOLD YOU TO-"

"Save it for the trial, Judy. I"m here to help."

Individuals ships separated from the bigger ships, each carrying one person that looks an awful lot like vwv.

"Uh" Darth?" 9spaceking asked.

"Yea ?"

"Two questions. One, are the repairs done? And two, what are the odds of survival?"

"Yes and not good""

Endark activated his sword, the blade was covered in a bright blue coating. Malacoda pulled out an energy staff. Darth grabbed a blaster.

"If there is now sound in space, then how can we hear what that guy said?" 9spaceking asked.

"Not a good time!"

The small ships began to approach. The large man was floating on a piece of rubble, surrounded by a blue energy field.

Endark turned on his radio. "Go! If we survive then we will catch up! GO!"

*We are not leaving you!* Lannan responded back on the radio.

"THAT"S AN ORDER. GO!"

The ship began to move away. Soon the bright red plane was out of sight.

And now it is only four against an army of intergalactic vwv-lookalikes.

I take it back. This is not an epic day. It"s Doomsday...

TO BE CONTINUED!

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"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:18:35 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
*BONUS*

POV: Ajab.

Unfortunately, I am now the third most powerful man in the empire. 9spaceking"s clone "Jack" has been created and is now general. This is going to be difficult.

Ajab, demoted has been given a new job. Before he was demoted he was stationed with RM on the flagship. Now he was serving at the imperial capital, a planet called Madessia.

The poor men and women of DDo, tricked into believing that Earth was mutilated, their loved ones killed, and yet they magically survived. No. The so called explosion that they saw, the disintegration of their homes. No. Earth is reall-

"Sir. We await your command."

Ah. Right. The many clones of Emperor Madman have finished. Our army is now 3 Billion times stronger than before.

"Prepare for General Jack"s arrival. And get a cell ready for the prisoners. I want to speak to them once they are captured."

"Sir, yes sir!"

If he takes prisoners.

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Cliffhangers, Cliffhangers, Cliffhangers.

They must be killing you.

What will happen to Endark and Friends?

Will Ajab"s crusade to overthrow the Emperor succeed?

FIND OUT, NEXT TIME ON SURVIVOR!

DDD and DarthKirones.
"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:26:23 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:23:55 PM, RevNge wrote:
Now we're on an intergalactic mission.

That escalated quickly. ;D

Comments to come.

Yup. The series has taken a sci-fi turn.
"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:26:30 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:12:30 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
Please do not post until I finish posting.

Episode 00:http://www.debate.org...
Episode 01:http://www.debate.org...
(RACE FOR SURVIVAL)
Episode 02:http://www.debate.org...
(WAR?)
Episode 03:http://www.debate.org...
(BROKEN)
Episode 04:http://www.debate.org...
(FEAR IS THE GREATEST WEAPON)
Episode 05:http://www.debate.org...
(BOND)
Episode 06:http://www.debate.org...
(TIME)
Episode 07:http://www.debate.org...
(THE SENSIBLES.)

Sign-Up Sheet:http://www.debate.org...

For once, I actually have some important things to say.

Oh, do you now? ;D
First off, thanks so much for the feedback for the first seven episodes, that was the first era of this fanfic, but now we are on to another, with new characters, new threats and new places!

WOOT! SECOND ARC! HYPE HYPE HYPE
Second, DDD, my co-writer and best friend is taking a leave from the fan fic, will this be permanent? I am not too sure.

Shame on you for giving up on fanfiction. :3

Now can you do a crossover with me? LOL
Next, the series will return to it"s usual format, with one mini story from each group and a bonus POV.

Okay. :O

But you should try to surprise us more.
Lastly, I could use some new characters to use! Please, if you have not already signed up and you like this story, then kindly put your name on the list. Thanks!

You could always make some OCs. Try using Mikal, Bluesteel, Bladerunner, or TUF.
Anyways, you want writing, then here you go!

I never wanted it though. :3
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11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.
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11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.
"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:45:07 PM
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When they need me most, I'm handcuffed and handless.
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11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.
Equestrian election
http://www.debate.org...

This House would impose democracy
http://www.debate.org...

Reign of Terror is unjustified
http://www.debate.org...

Raise min. wage to $10.10
http://www.debate.org...
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11/26/2014 4:47:20 PM
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This is an interesting story and good read so far. May I please be in the story?
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11/26/2014 4:48:09 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:47:20 PM, That1User wrote:
This is an interesting story and good read so far. May I please be in the story?

Sure!
I will make sure to incorporate you in the story!
"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.
"Our life is what our thoughts make it."
R13; Marcus Aurelius
"When you arise in the morning, think of what a precious privilege it is to be alive - to breathe, to think, to enjoy, to love." -Marcus Aurelius
"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be." -Voltaire
"Every man is guilty of all the good he did not do. "-Voltaire
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11/26/2014 4:49:00 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Don't worry, I am working on ep9 right now and you will put aside trolling for a day or two.
"I am not religious. I am a genius. I have the Universe in my hands."
-Aerogant

"Of course a jewish baby cannibalizing a jewish mommy is fine"
-Heil being retarded

"Eradicating the baby scourge from our midsts is most certainly fun. And I am proud to be your hero. Babies tremble then they hear my name.. Airmax, the hero of baby annihilation."
-Airmax
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11/26/2014 4:49:12 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:48:09 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:20 PM, That1User wrote:
This is an interesting story and good read so far. May I please be in the story?

Sure!
I will make sure to incorporate you in the story!

Thank you!
"Our life is what our thoughts make it."
R13; Marcus Aurelius
"When you arise in the morning, think of what a precious privilege it is to be alive - to breathe, to think, to enjoy, to love." -Marcus Aurelius
"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be." -Voltaire
"Every man is guilty of all the good he did not do. "-Voltaire
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11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.
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11/26/2014 4:52:32 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.
I wonder how I am going to be portrayed.
"Our life is what our thoughts make it."
R13; Marcus Aurelius
"When you arise in the morning, think of what a precious privilege it is to be alive - to breathe, to think, to enjoy, to love." -Marcus Aurelius
"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be." -Voltaire
"Every man is guilty of all the good he did not do. "-Voltaire
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11/26/2014 4:53:39 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.

Don't forget that you think everyone's your underling. Excellent portrayal of Yama.
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11/26/2014 4:55:06 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:52:32 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.
I wonder how I am going to be portrayed.

Well, we don't know you very well, and no one in the fanfic actually knows you on the forums, as far as I can tell (that rhymed). Try posting more on the forums. :P
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11/26/2014 4:56:38 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:55:06 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:52:32 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.
I wonder how I am going to be portrayed.

Well, we don't know you very well, and no one in the fanfic actually knows you on the forums, as far as I can tell (that rhymed). Try posting more on the forums. :P

Does this mean I'm That1Noob?
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11/26/2014 4:57:36 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:56:38 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:55:06 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:52:32 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.
I wonder how I am going to be portrayed.

Well, we don't know you very well, and no one in the fanfic actually knows you on the forums, as far as I can tell (that rhymed). Try posting more on the forums. :P

Does this mean I'm That1Noob?

LOL, what if that's your new nickname in the fanfic? XD
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11/26/2014 4:58:44 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:12:30 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
By the way, Darth, I hope you have the end planned out and everything. Usually it's much easier when you think of the end before writing. I have some trouble with the beginning, though, as you probably have seen from my delay in the sixth and seventh chapters. LOL
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11/26/2014 5:00:51 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:57:36 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:56:38 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:55:06 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:52:32 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:50:12 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:48:15 PM, That1User wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:47:12 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:42:11 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:37:03 PM, 9spaceking wrote:
wow nice...I really dislike this "me" tho. I wonder why they chose to clone me.

Probably to bring out the inner Jack... And to use him as a weapon of mass destruction.

cool. Still, I don't like how much I'm portrayed as a trolling idiot who likes getting punched all day long. I try to care for SOME people.

Lol. I don't think most people would like to be portrayed that way.

I'm (from what I understand) a psychopathic supersoldier. I love it.
I wonder how I am going to be portrayed.

Well, we don't know you very well, and no one in the fanfic actually knows you on the forums, as far as I can tell (that rhymed). Try posting more on the forums. :P

Does this mean I'm That1Noob?

LOL, what if that's your new nickname in the fanfic? XD

That would be funny! XD Perhaps I will be a generic noob at the start of the fanfic, a tabula rasa, and the more forum posts I make outside the story the more my character develops in the story.
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"When you arise in the morning, think of what a precious privilege it is to be alive - to breathe, to think, to enjoy, to love." -Marcus Aurelius
"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be." -Voltaire
"Every man is guilty of all the good he did not do. "-Voltaire
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11/26/2014 5:01:04 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 4:58:44 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:12:30 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
By the way, Darth, I hope you have the end planned out and everything. Usually it's much easier when you think of the end before writing. I have some trouble with the beginning, though, as you probably have seen from my delay in the sixth and seventh chapters. LOL

I have a few ideas. I kinda adapted my best idea for the end in Ep7, with Yama vs Endark, only in my mind it would have been RM vs Endark and RM would have died instead of having his hand chopped off.
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11/26/2014 5:01:06 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Shameless advertisement: anyone got an xbox one?
People who I've called as mafia DP1:
TUF, and YYW
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11/26/2014 5:03:45 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 5:01:04 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:58:44 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 11/26/2014 4:12:30 PM, DarthKirones wrote:
By the way, Darth, I hope you have the end planned out and everything. Usually it's much easier when you think of the end before writing. I have some trouble with the beginning, though, as you probably have seen from my delay in the sixth and seventh chapters. LOL

I have a few ideas. I kinda adapted my best idea for the end in Ep7, with Yama vs Endark, only in my mind it would have been RM vs Endark and RM would have died instead of having his hand chopped off.

Bruh, you need more twists than that! And dat spoiler tho. :P

Surprise us! And this is a really great fanfic (seems like JBB's Star Debate), so I hope it doesn't end too soon. If it does, then I'll be keeping an eye out for a sequel. ;D
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11/26/2014 5:04:19 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 5:01:06 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
Shameless advertisement: anyone got an xbox one?
No.
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"All Hail the Virtual Boy!"
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"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be." -Voltaire
"Every man is guilty of all the good he did not do. "-Voltaire
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11/26/2014 5:05:13 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 11/26/2014 5:01:06 PM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
Shameless advertisement: anyone got an xbox one?

I'm more of a PC gamer. Why?