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12/17/2014 5:00:28 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Chapter 1 : Part A

It was as if time stood still in the marsh. The sounds of wildlife echoed in the distance, as if to convey a warning. Night had just wrapped it"s blanket around the sky, and the only light that could be seen was from the fireflies scattered throughout the trees. He figured it would be dark and had thought ahead. Prior to stepping down in the murky waters and entering Devils Den, he had captured a few fireflies and put them in a jar.

A low echo of something moving from behind startled him. He turned around with the jar in front of his face to see an amongle emerge itself into the depths of the marsh. Amongles are nasty creatures, and resemble snakes. Some grow to nearly 10 feet long , and their slimy scaly claws emerge from their snake like body. This one had a great deal of size to it, and just by the glance he got of it, he could tell it was nearly 9 feet long. With amongles being territorial , he knew it was best to move on.

It was not that he would have trouble killing the creature, but he had to maintain a certain degree of stealth to accomplish his mission. He knew why he was there, and nothing would stop him. This was his chance to make some quick money. He had just came to the marsh after he visited Brinenstone. Brinenstone was a lively town, that was built inside the woods of eversnare forest. It was there he learned of the Croc People, or Croconians as the people of Brinenstone called them.

Standing nearly 6-8 feet tall, this race of amphibious creatures was humanoids. Instead of skin, they had scales that reached the entire length of their body. Razor sharp teeth protrudes out from their mouth. Nearly twice as strong as most humans, they could shred most people to bits in seconds with their razor sharp claws. Their jaw pressure is strong enough to crush stone, and they can even breathe underwater for extremely long periods of time. The worse part is they are intelligent creatures. Maybe not as intelligent as humans, but smart enough to wield weapons and plan out attacks. Most of their kin lives near Devils Den and most humans stay away because of how deadly they are.

Normally the croc people are isolated from society and keep to their own, but something has been driving them from the marsh lately and they have been coming out from time to time. That is why he was here, to get revenge for what they had did to the Duke of Brinenstones Granddaughter. She had been playing on the outskirts of Brinenstone and went up to the edge of marsh to pick flowers, when a Croconian burst from the edge of the water and snapped her neck like a twig. The Duke was Speechless as he watched his granddaughter get ripped to shreds by a pack of croc people. This was so far from where they normally come, and the edge of the marsh is miles away from their Den.

The Dukes sadness quickly turned to rage and he issued a bounty for the heads of the Croconians. Every dead body that was brought to him, he would pay out 20 gold. Mercenaries had made this their hobby and took up to killing croc people in groups to collect the bounty put forth by the Duke. That is why he was there himself, to kill a croc person and claim his 20 gold. Just at that time a voice spoke up

"Jif do you think we are getting near the layer "

Jifpop let out a sigh

"I told you to shut up Bubba , you are going to make to much noise and they are going to find us. It"s already pitch black and we can"t see any"......."

Before Jifpop could finish his sentence a Razor Blade that was the length of a broad sword entered into the back of his head, and then protruded from his mouth. Bubba turned to see a 7 Foot Croconian standing over jif with a blade wedged into the back of his head.

The croc man, swung his blade upward splitting Jifs skull in two. Blood gushed all over the murky waters as the Croc Man let out a howl. More noise could be heard in the distance and Bubba knew there was more of them coming for him. The croc man stepped towards Bubba, and raised his sword in the air. Bubba knew from that moment he was going to die. He had already resigned himself to death, and got down on his knees to offer a prayer to the Gods. The blade was raised high in the air, and the croc man let our a roar as if to tell Bubba goodbye. Bubba closed his eyes and waited to wake up in paradise. He heard one final "Rawr" and then laid back to await his death. Seconds passed, and then nearly a minute had passed. Bubba was still waiting to die. He opened one eye in fear, wondering what had happened.

Right in front of him, he saw the croc man laying on the ground dead, and a man pulling a scimitar from his body. He was speechless, but managed to utter the words

"Stephen , what in the hell are you doing here"
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12/17/2014 5:21:45 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/17/2014 5:00:28 PM, Mikal wrote:
Chapter 1 : Part A

It was as if time stood still in the marsh. The sounds of wildlife echoed in the distance, as if to convey a warning. Night had just wrapped it"s blanket around the sky, and the only light that could be seen was from the fireflies scattered throughout the trees. He figured it would be dark and had thought ahead. Prior to stepping down in the murky waters and entering Devils Den, he had captured a few fireflies and put them in a jar.

A low echo of something moving from behind startled him. He turned around with the jar in front of his face to see an amongle emerge itself into the depths of the marsh. Amongles are nasty creatures, and resemble snakes. Some grow to nearly 10 feet long , and their slimy scaly claws emerge from their snake like body. This one had a great deal of size to it, and just by the glance he got of it, he could tell it was nearly 9 feet long. With amongles being territorial , he knew it was best to move on.

It was not that he would have trouble killing the creature, but he had to maintain a certain degree of stealth to accomplish his mission. He knew why he was there, and nothing would stop him. This was his chance to make some quick money. He had just came to the marsh after he visited Brinenstone. Brinenstone was a lively town, that was built inside the woods of eversnare forest. It was there he learned of the Croc People, or Croconians as the people of Brinenstone called them.

Standing nearly 6-8 feet tall, this race of amphibious creatures was humanoids. Instead of skin, they had scales that reached the entire length of their body. Razor sharp teeth protrudes out from their mouth. Nearly twice as strong as most humans, they could shred most people to bits in seconds with their razor sharp claws. Their jaw pressure is strong enough to crush stone, and they can even breathe underwater for extremely long periods of time. The worse part is they are intelligent creatures. Maybe not as intelligent as humans, but smart enough to wield weapons and plan out attacks. Most of their kin lives near Devils Den and most humans stay away because of how deadly they are.

Normally the croc people are isolated from society and keep to their own, but something has been driving them from the marsh lately and they have been coming out from time to time. That is why he was here, to get revenge for what they had did to the Duke of Brinenstones Granddaughter. She had been playing on the outskirts of Brinenstone and went up to the edge of marsh to pick flowers, when a Croconian burst from the edge of the water and snapped her neck like a twig. The Duke was Speechless as he watched his granddaughter get ripped to shreds by a pack of croc people. This was so far from where they normally come, and the edge of the marsh is miles away from their Den.

The Dukes sadness quickly turned to rage and he issued a bounty for the heads of the Croconians. Every dead body that was brought to him, he would pay out 20 gold. Mercenaries had made this their hobby and took up to killing croc people in groups to collect the bounty put forth by the Duke. That is why he was there himself, to kill a croc person and claim his 20 gold. Just at that time a voice spoke up

"Jif do you think we are getting near the layer "

Jifpop let out a sigh

"I told you to shut up Bubba , you are going to make to much noise and they are going to find us. It"s already pitch black and we can"t see any"......."

Before Jifpop could finish his sentence a Razor Blade that was the length of a broad sword entered into the back of his head, and then protruded from his mouth. Bubba turned to see a 7 Foot Croconian standing over jif with a blade wedged into the back of his head.

The croc man, swung his blade upward splitting Jifs skull in two. Blood gushed all over the murky waters as the Croc Man let out a howl. More noise could be heard in the distance and Bubba knew there was more of them coming for him. The croc man stepped towards Bubba, and raised his sword in the air. Bubba knew from that moment he was going to die. He had already resigned himself to death, and got down on his knees to offer a prayer to the Gods. The blade was raised high in the air, and the croc man let our a roar as if to tell Bubba goodbye. Bubba closed his eyes and waited to wake up in paradise. He heard one final "Rawr" and then laid back to await his death. Seconds passed, and then nearly a minute had passed. Bubba was still waiting to die. He opened one eye in fear, wondering what had happened.

Right in front of him, he saw the croc man laying on the ground dead, and a man pulling a scimitar from his body. He was speechless, but managed to utter the words

"Stephen , what in the hell are you doing here"

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12/17/2014 5:42:23 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Tips to avoiding the dreaded quotation C/P glitch:

Turn off AutoCorrect in Word for the long --, turn off the ellipsis (the ...), and turn off the horizontal rule when you type a long line of underscores and it automatically turns into a line stretching all the way across the page.

The apostrophe is also changed into a quotation mark, which has no loophole unfortunately. You can submit it if you're fine with it, but I use CTRL+F then type the quotation mark to pinpoint the original apostrophes.
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12/17/2014 6:57:47 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/17/2014 5:00:28 PM, Mikal wrote:
Chapter 1 : Part A

It was as if time stood still in the marsh. The sounds of wildlife echoed in the distance, as if to convey a warning. Night had just wrapped it"s blanket around the sky, and the only light that could be seen was from the fireflies scattered throughout the trees. He figured it would be dark and had thought ahead. Prior to stepping down in the murky waters and entering Devils Den, he had captured a few fireflies and put them in a jar.

A low echo of something moving from behind startled him. He turned around with the jar in front of his face to see an amongle emerge itself into the depths of the marsh. Amongles are nasty creatures, and resemble snakes. Some grow to nearly 10 feet long , and their slimy scaly claws emerge from their snake like body. This one had a great deal of size to it, and just by the glance he got of it, he could tell it was nearly 9 feet long. With amongles being territorial , he knew it was best to move on.

It was not that he would have trouble killing the creature, but he had to maintain a certain degree of stealth to accomplish his mission. He knew why he was there, and nothing would stop him. This was his chance to make some quick money. He had just came to the marsh after he visited Brinenstone. Brinenstone was a lively town, that was built inside the woods of eversnare forest. It was there he learned of the Croc People, or Croconians as the people of Brinenstone called them.

Standing nearly 6-8 feet tall, this race of amphibious creatures was humanoids. Instead of skin, they had scales that reached the entire length of their body. Razor sharp teeth protrudes out from their mouth. Nearly twice as strong as most humans, they could shred most people to bits in seconds with their razor sharp claws. Their jaw pressure is strong enough to crush stone, and they can even breathe underwater for extremely long periods of time. The worse part is they are intelligent creatures. Maybe not as intelligent as humans, but smart enough to wield weapons and plan out attacks. Most of their kin lives near Devils Den and most humans stay away because of how deadly they are.

Normally the croc people are isolated from society and keep to their own, but something has been driving them from the marsh lately and they have been coming out from time to time. That is why he was here, to get revenge for what they had did to the Duke of Brinenstones Granddaughter. She had been playing on the outskirts of Brinenstone and went up to the edge of marsh to pick flowers, when a Croconian burst from the edge of the water and snapped her neck like a twig. The Duke was Speechless as he watched his granddaughter get ripped to shreds by a pack of croc people. This was so far from where they normally come, and the edge of the marsh is miles away from their Den.

The Dukes sadness quickly turned to rage and he issued a bounty for the heads of the Croconians. Every dead body that was brought to him, he would pay out 20 gold. Mercenaries had made this their hobby and took up to killing croc people in groups to collect the bounty put forth by the Duke. That is why he was there himself, to kill a croc person and claim his 20 gold. Just at that time a voice spoke up

"Jif do you think we are getting near the layer "

Jifpop let out a sigh

"I told you to shut up Bubba , you are going to make to much noise and they are going to find us. It"s already pitch black and we can"t see any"......."

Before Jifpop could finish his sentence a Razor Blade that was the length of a broad sword entered into the back of his head, and then protruded from his mouth. Bubba turned to see a 7 Foot Croconian standing over jif with a blade wedged into the back of his head.

The croc man, swung his blade upward splitting Jifs skull in two. Blood gushed all over the murky waters as the Croc Man let out a howl. More noise could be heard in the distance and Bubba knew there was more of them coming for him. The croc man stepped towards Bubba, and raised his sword in the air. Bubba knew from that moment he was going to die. He had already resigned himself to death, and got down on his knees to offer a prayer to the Gods. The blade was raised high in the air, and the croc man let our a roar as if to tell Bubba goodbye. Bubba closed his eyes and waited to wake up in paradise. He heard one final "Rawr" and then laid back to await his death. Seconds passed, and then nearly a minute had passed. Bubba was still waiting to die. He opened one eye in fear, wondering what had happened.

Right in front of him, he saw the croc man laying on the ground dead, and a man pulling a scimitar from his body. He was speechless, but managed to utter the words

"Stephen , what in the hell are you doing here"

Where's the signup for this?
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12/17/2014 7:07:27 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/17/2014 6:57:47 PM, PetersSmith wrote:
At 12/17/2014 5:00:28 PM, Mikal wrote:
Chapter 1 : Part A

It was as if time stood still in the marsh. The sounds of wildlife echoed in the distance, as if to convey a warning. Night had just wrapped it"s blanket around the sky, and the only light that could be seen was from the fireflies scattered throughout the trees. He figured it would be dark and had thought ahead. Prior to stepping down in the murky waters and entering Devils Den, he had captured a few fireflies and put them in a jar.

A low echo of something moving from behind startled him. He turned around with the jar in front of his face to see an amongle emerge itself into the depths of the marsh. Amongles are nasty creatures, and resemble snakes. Some grow to nearly 10 feet long , and their slimy scaly claws emerge from their snake like body. This one had a great deal of size to it, and just by the glance he got of it, he could tell it was nearly 9 feet long. With amongles being territorial , he knew it was best to move on.

It was not that he would have trouble killing the creature, but he had to maintain a certain degree of stealth to accomplish his mission. He knew why he was there, and nothing would stop him. This was his chance to make some quick money. He had just came to the marsh after he visited Brinenstone. Brinenstone was a lively town, that was built inside the woods of eversnare forest. It was there he learned of the Croc People, or Croconians as the people of Brinenstone called them.

Standing nearly 6-8 feet tall, this race of amphibious creatures was humanoids. Instead of skin, they had scales that reached the entire length of their body. Razor sharp teeth protrudes out from their mouth. Nearly twice as strong as most humans, they could shred most people to bits in seconds with their razor sharp claws. Their jaw pressure is strong enough to crush stone, and they can even breathe underwater for extremely long periods of time. The worse part is they are intelligent creatures. Maybe not as intelligent as humans, but smart enough to wield weapons and plan out attacks. Most of their kin lives near Devils Den and most humans stay away because of how deadly they are.

Normally the croc people are isolated from society and keep to their own, but something has been driving them from the marsh lately and they have been coming out from time to time. That is why he was here, to get revenge for what they had did to the Duke of Brinenstones Granddaughter. She had been playing on the outskirts of Brinenstone and went up to the edge of marsh to pick flowers, when a Croconian burst from the edge of the water and snapped her neck like a twig. The Duke was Speechless as he watched his granddaughter get ripped to shreds by a pack of croc people. This was so far from where they normally come, and the edge of the marsh is miles away from their Den.

The Dukes sadness quickly turned to rage and he issued a bounty for the heads of the Croconians. Every dead body that was brought to him, he would pay out 20 gold. Mercenaries had made this their hobby and took up to killing croc people in groups to collect the bounty put forth by the Duke. That is why he was there himself, to kill a croc person and claim his 20 gold. Just at that time a voice spoke up

"Jif do you think we are getting near the layer "

Jifpop let out a sigh

"I told you to shut up Bubba , you are going to make to much noise and they are going to find us. It"s already pitch black and we can"t see any"......."

Before Jifpop could finish his sentence a Razor Blade that was the length of a broad sword entered into the back of his head, and then protruded from his mouth. Bubba turned to see a 7 Foot Croconian standing over jif with a blade wedged into the back of his head.

The croc man, swung his blade upward splitting Jifs skull in two. Blood gushed all over the murky waters as the Croc Man let out a howl. More noise could be heard in the distance and Bubba knew there was more of them coming for him. The croc man stepped towards Bubba, and raised his sword in the air. Bubba knew from that moment he was going to die. He had already resigned himself to death, and got down on his knees to offer a prayer to the Gods. The blade was raised high in the air, and the croc man let our a roar as if to tell Bubba goodbye. Bubba closed his eyes and waited to wake up in paradise. He heard one final "Rawr" and then laid back to await his death. Seconds passed, and then nearly a minute had passed. Bubba was still waiting to die. He opened one eye in fear, wondering what had happened.

Right in front of him, he saw the croc man laying on the ground dead, and a man pulling a scimitar from his body. He was speechless, but managed to utter the words

"Stephen , what in the hell are you doing here"

Where's the signup for this?

There is no fan fic, ima just work people in regardless of whether they want to be in it or not.

This is an actual book I am working on, Im just taking exerts and changing stuff
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12/17/2014 7:08:05 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/17/2014 7:07:27 PM, Mikal wrote:
At 12/17/2014 6:57:47 PM, PetersSmith wrote:
At 12/17/2014 5:00:28 PM, Mikal wrote:
Chapter 1 : Part A

It was as if time stood still in the marsh. The sounds of wildlife echoed in the distance, as if to convey a warning. Night had just wrapped it"s blanket around the sky, and the only light that could be seen was from the fireflies scattered throughout the trees. He figured it would be dark and had thought ahead. Prior to stepping down in the murky waters and entering Devils Den, he had captured a few fireflies and put them in a jar.

A low echo of something moving from behind startled him. He turned around with the jar in front of his face to see an amongle emerge itself into the depths of the marsh. Amongles are nasty creatures, and resemble snakes. Some grow to nearly 10 feet long , and their slimy scaly claws emerge from their snake like body. This one had a great deal of size to it, and just by the glance he got of it, he could tell it was nearly 9 feet long. With amongles being territorial , he knew it was best to move on.

It was not that he would have trouble killing the creature, but he had to maintain a certain degree of stealth to accomplish his mission. He knew why he was there, and nothing would stop him. This was his chance to make some quick money. He had just came to the marsh after he visited Brinenstone. Brinenstone was a lively town, that was built inside the woods of eversnare forest. It was there he learned of the Croc People, or Croconians as the people of Brinenstone called them.

Standing nearly 6-8 feet tall, this race of amphibious creatures was humanoids. Instead of skin, they had scales that reached the entire length of their body. Razor sharp teeth protrudes out from their mouth. Nearly twice as strong as most humans, they could shred most people to bits in seconds with their razor sharp claws. Their jaw pressure is strong enough to crush stone, and they can even breathe underwater for extremely long periods of time. The worse part is they are intelligent creatures. Maybe not as intelligent as humans, but smart enough to wield weapons and plan out attacks. Most of their kin lives near Devils Den and most humans stay away because of how deadly they are.

Normally the croc people are isolated from society and keep to their own, but something has been driving them from the marsh lately and they have been coming out from time to time. That is why he was here, to get revenge for what they had did to the Duke of Brinenstones Granddaughter. She had been playing on the outskirts of Brinenstone and went up to the edge of marsh to pick flowers, when a Croconian burst from the edge of the water and snapped her neck like a twig. The Duke was Speechless as he watched his granddaughter get ripped to shreds by a pack of croc people. This was so far from where they normally come, and the edge of the marsh is miles away from their Den.

The Dukes sadness quickly turned to rage and he issued a bounty for the heads of the Croconians. Every dead body that was brought to him, he would pay out 20 gold. Mercenaries had made this their hobby and took up to killing croc people in groups to collect the bounty put forth by the Duke. That is why he was there himself, to kill a croc person and claim his 20 gold. Just at that time a voice spoke up

"Jif do you think we are getting near the layer "

Jifpop let out a sigh

"I told you to shut up Bubba , you are going to make to much noise and they are going to find us. It"s already pitch black and we can"t see any"......."

Before Jifpop could finish his sentence a Razor Blade that was the length of a broad sword entered into the back of his head, and then protruded from his mouth. Bubba turned to see a 7 Foot Croconian standing over jif with a blade wedged into the back of his head.

The croc man, swung his blade upward splitting Jifs skull in two. Blood gushed all over the murky waters as the Croc Man let out a howl. More noise could be heard in the distance and Bubba knew there was more of them coming for him. The croc man stepped towards Bubba, and raised his sword in the air. Bubba knew from that moment he was going to die. He had already resigned himself to death, and got down on his knees to offer a prayer to the Gods. The blade was raised high in the air, and the croc man let our a roar as if to tell Bubba goodbye. Bubba closed his eyes and waited to wake up in paradise. He heard one final "Rawr" and then laid back to await his death. Seconds passed, and then nearly a minute had passed. Bubba was still waiting to die. He opened one eye in fear, wondering what had happened.

Right in front of him, he saw the croc man laying on the ground dead, and a man pulling a scimitar from his body. He was speechless, but managed to utter the words

"Stephen , what in the hell are you doing here"

Where's the signup for this?

There is no fan fic, ima just work people in regardless of whether they want to be in it or not.

This is an actual book I am working on, Im just taking exerts and changing stuff

Lol
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12/17/2014 8:36:35 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
I honestly don't know what this is based off.
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