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***A Dark Day. DDO Fanfic***

carriead20
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12/19/2014 9:07:26 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Hello everyone! I couldn't wait to post this one so here you go.

https://docs.google.com...

As far as the next episode I do not know if I will be able to post it next week or not.

Previous episodes

{Episode 00}
https://docs.google.com...

If you want to sign up go find the Signups your self I don't feel like it.

See you guys next week!
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12/19/2014 9:54:03 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Woohoo! I got killed off in a fanfic!
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12/19/2014 9:55:17 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 9:54:03 AM, Vox_Veritas wrote:
Woohoo! I got killed off in a fanfic!

You didn't read it all.
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...
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12/19/2014 9:56:31 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
The greatness that was there.
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12/19/2014 9:58:06 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 9:55:17 AM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:54:03 AM, Vox_Veritas wrote:
Woohoo! I got killed off in a fanfic!

You didn't read it all.

Never mind. Apparently I was cursed and then uncursed.
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12/19/2014 10:01:38 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 9:56:31 AM, lannan13 wrote:
The greatness that was there.

Lol, what the opening quote?
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

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12/19/2014 10:21:07 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 9:54:03 AM, Vox_Veritas wrote:
Woohoo! I got killed off in a fanfic!

Wooo, i killed you! XD :p
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12/19/2014 10:22:56 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 10:21:07 AM, NiamC wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:54:03 AM, Vox_Veritas wrote:
Woohoo! I got killed off in a fanfic!

Wooo, i killed you! XD :p

*Facepalm* Read it again.
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...
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12/19/2014 10:23:50 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 10:01:38 AM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:56:31 AM, lannan13 wrote:
The greatness that was there.

Lol, what the opening quote?

That and Airmax. I loved the quote as well.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

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12/19/2014 10:26:07 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 10:23:50 AM, lannan13 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 10:01:38 AM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:56:31 AM, lannan13 wrote:
The greatness that was there.

Lol, what the opening quote?

That and Airmax. I loved the quote as well.

What are your thoughts on the story so far?
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...
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12/19/2014 10:28:57 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 10:26:07 AM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 10:23:50 AM, lannan13 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 10:01:38 AM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:56:31 AM, lannan13 wrote:
The greatness that was there.

Lol, what the opening quote?

That and Airmax. I loved the quote as well.

What are your thoughts on the story so far?

I'm enjoying it.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

Topics I want to debate. (http://tinyurl.com...)
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12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.
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12/19/2014 12:05:48 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.

Please stick with it, I promise it is not snail like.
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...
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12/19/2014 12:08:55 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 12:05:48 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.

Please stick with it, I promise it is not snail like.

Yeah, I'm definitely going to keep reading it. I mean, I love fanfics regardless, I was just a little surprised and disappointed to see that you placed lannan, of all people, in that role. If the roles were reversed with airmax being the evil master, now that'd have been freaking great. I'll stick with it though.
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12/19/2014 12:12:58 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 12:08:55 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:05:48 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.

Please stick with it, I promise it is not snail like.

Yeah, I'm definitely going to keep reading it. I mean, I love fanfics regardless, I was just a little surprised and disappointed to see that you placed lannan, of all people, in that role. If the roles were reversed with airmax being the evil master, now that'd have been freaking great. I'll stick with it though.

You should have a conversation with lannan sometime, then you'll see why I picked what I did.
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...
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12/19/2014 12:18:51 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 12:12:58 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:08:55 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:05:48 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.

Please stick with it, I promise it is not snail like.

Yeah, I'm definitely going to keep reading it. I mean, I love fanfics regardless, I was just a little surprised and disappointed to see that you placed lannan, of all people, in that role. If the roles were reversed with airmax being the evil master, now that'd have been freaking great. I'll stick with it though.

You should have a conversation with lannan sometime, then you'll see why I picked what I did.

Oh yea, he's definitely dark. I've chatted with him and have seen and heard what he is capable of. But he's no leader, or boss, thus the role of evil master seems unfitting. He'd have been a good conspirator, like the friend of the evil master who then backstabs him. It was simply seeing him in the role of "master" that made me say, "Okay, I've suddenly lost interest in this story due to the lack of realism personality-wise".
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12/19/2014 12:21:34 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 12:18:51 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:12:58 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:08:55 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:05:48 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.

Please stick with it, I promise it is not snail like.

Yeah, I'm definitely going to keep reading it. I mean, I love fanfics regardless, I was just a little surprised and disappointed to see that you placed lannan, of all people, in that role. If the roles were reversed with airmax being the evil master, now that'd have been freaking great. I'll stick with it though.

You should have a conversation with lannan sometime, then you'll see why I picked what I did.

Oh yea, he's definitely dark. I've chatted with him and have seen and heard what he is capable of. But he's no leader, or boss, thus the role of evil master seems unfitting. He'd have been a good conspirator, like the friend of the evil master who then backstabs him. It was simply seeing him in the role of "master" that made me say, "Okay, I've suddenly lost interest in this story due to the lack of realism personality-wise".

I see where you come from but you also have to remember that he is a (correct me if I'm wrong lannan) Lieutenant and is in charge of men.
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...
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12/19/2014 12:43:43 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 12:21:34 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:18:51 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:12:58 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:08:55 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 12/19/2014 12:05:48 PM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 11:59:29 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
Well, after seeing who you chose as the dark master, my interest levels just dropped. No offense, but lannan? Seeing that was a major turn-off. I always viewed fanfics as having some degree of reality to them, with the writers utilizing the characters personality irl to find them a fitting role within the story. Lannan as the evil master, who captures someone like airmax, is just absurd. It's like reading about a snail who captured a dragon.

Please stick with it, I promise it is not snail like.

Yeah, I'm definitely going to keep reading it. I mean, I love fanfics regardless, I was just a little surprised and disappointed to see that you placed lannan, of all people, in that role. If the roles were reversed with airmax being the evil master, now that'd have been freaking great. I'll stick with it though.

You should have a conversation with lannan sometime, then you'll see why I picked what I did.

Oh yea, he's definitely dark. I've chatted with him and have seen and heard what he is capable of. But he's no leader, or boss, thus the role of evil master seems unfitting. He'd have been a good conspirator, like the friend of the evil master who then backstabs him. It was simply seeing him in the role of "master" that made me say, "Okay, I've suddenly lost interest in this story due to the lack of realism personality-wise".

I see where you come from but you also have to remember that he is a (correct me if I'm wrong lannan) Lieutenant and is in charge of men.

I believe his rank is associated with his highschool drill team and JROTC programs though, not the actual military. I was ranked lieutenant when I was in military school as well, that doesn't mean I was an actual leader of men in the military.

At this point, I don't wish to bash him any further. My original point was to share my distaste after seeing lannan as the evil master, a role I personally think is inaccurate when compared to his personality here on DDO.

As I said before, I'll still read along. It wasn't enough to make me shun the entire series, I'm just more wary now as to what everyone else is going to be character-wise.
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12/19/2014 12:48:53 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 9:07:26 AM, carriead20 wrote:
Hello everyone! I couldn't wait to post this one so here you go.

https://docs.google.com...

As far as the next episode I do not know if I will be able to post it next week or not.

Previous episodes

{Episode 00}
https://docs.google.com...

If you want to sign up go find the Signups your self I don't feel like it.

See you guys next week!
Yay! This is the first time I showed up in a fanfic! :D
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12/19/2014 12:56:24 PM
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At 12/19/2014 12:53:24 PM, Comrade_Silly_Otter wrote:
Due to the zero amount of time I have at the moment, I will just ask.

Am I in this?
Could I be?

Sign up, my friend. :)
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12/19/2014 2:19:29 PM
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sig change.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

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12/19/2014 3:21:58 PM
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At 12/19/2014 9:55:17 AM, carriead20 wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:54:03 AM, Vox_Veritas wrote:
Woohoo! I got killed off in a fanfic!

You didn't read it all.

Where is the spoiler alert?

Thanks a lot!!!
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12/19/2014 5:23:55 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 9:07:26 AM, carriead20 wrote:
Hello everyone! I couldn't wait to post this one so here you go.

https://docs.google.com...

As far as the next episode I do not know if I will be able to post it next week or not.

Previous episodes

{Episode 00}
https://docs.google.com...

If you want to sign up go find the Signups your self I don't feel like it.

See you guys next week!

When will SebUK be introduced?
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12/20/2014 7:13:21 PM
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At 12/19/2014 12:53:24 PM, Comrade_Silly_Otter wrote:
Due to the zero amount of time I have at the moment, I will just ask.

Am I in this?
Could I be?

http://www.debate.org...
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12/20/2014 7:13:59 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 12/19/2014 5:23:55 PM, SebUK wrote:
At 12/19/2014 9:07:26 AM, carriead20 wrote:
Hello everyone! I couldn't wait to post this one so here you go.

https://docs.google.com...

As far as the next episode I do not know if I will be able to post it next week or not.

Previous episodes

{Episode 00}
https://docs.google.com...

If you want to sign up go find the Signups your self I don't feel like it.

See you guys next week!

When will SebUK be introduced?

When he is!
To all the people fighting a hard battle out there - life's giving you a pretty hard beating. There's no sugarcoating that, but there's no shadow that's free of light. When life sneers at you and asks, "Ready to go again?" - Raise your hand. Reach out to victory. Don't give in.

---Help Bsh and YYW see each other---
http://www.gofundme.com...