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Mikal
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4/21/2015 12:22:17 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Our story begins in a grimy bathroom. This place was even more disgusting than your typical boys bathroom ever since the schools janitor, Malcolmxy, had resigned in disgrace. This was the kind of place that made one think of athletes foot, unscrubbed toilets and urine sodden flooring from the moment of entrance.

To be more specific, our story begins on the floor of this grimy bathroom where three members of the football team were holding down Rev, a clever loner with a big mouth. To be fair to the members of the football team, Rev had boasted about sleeping with all of their mothers at the same time and actually had the evidence to back up that boast. As a result, his hair was now soaked with disgusting toilet water and he was absorbing blows left and right. A bell could be heard from somewhere in the hallway.

"Mikal, we"d better get out of here. People will be coming in now." The words came from Thett, a well muscled all American boy endowed with intellectual gifts that even exceeded his athletic ones.

"Good. They should see this. No one talks about MY mother that way!" He accompanied each word with a punch.

As soon as Mikal finished, Blade-of-truth, the captain of the team, stood Rev up and delivered to him a roundhouse kick that would make Chuck Norris proud, slamming him into the wall. To Revs credit, he took it like a champ. That was the last blow the players managed to get in as Zaradi, a bulky wrestler, stumbled into the bathroom as he did during every passing period. Zaradi had to pee a lot because he had undiagnosed prostate cancer, but that"s a story for another episode. Oh, and if you didn"t want spoilers don"t read that last sentence.

"What"s going on here?!" Zaradi demanded in a booming voice. Zaradi hated bullies"growing up as the only wealthy kid in a poor school, "Z-money" had been bullied mercilessly for the crime of not buying his clothes from Walmart.

Zaradi was helping Rev to his feet before any of the players could answer, and between the look on Zaradi"s face and his considerable bulk, the players knew it was time to get out of there.

As they exited the bathroom, Rev spoke for the first time since the start of the attack.

"Hey, Mikal." Mikal turned around.

"I fucked your mom."

With that, Rev slammed the bathroom door in his face.

--------

"RationalMadman, you know what I"m going to say."

Airmax, the school principal, peered over his desk, his long white beard shifting as he smiled benevolently, a twinkle in his eye. Despite his considerable age, he still exuded an air of great power and confidence. He looked exactly like Dumbledore, only extremely handsome. He looked like Dumbledore if Dumbledore was a Roman god--if Dumbledore had looked like this, Grindlewald definitely wouldn"t have become evil, because he would focus all his ambition on winning and keeping this guys heart, instead of murdering his sister.

Rational looked up from his phone. On the screen, pterodactyl porn could be seen and heard. He did this purposely to annoy Airmax but unbeknownst to Rational, Airmax was a wily veteran of the porn industry before he turned his considerable talents towards education and was thus unbothered.

"1227 aint gettin into heaven!" Rational spat, trying to intimidate Airmax with his rap abilities and the subtle acknowledgement that he knew the man"s birthdate.

Airmax again smiled gently.

"Be that as it may, you cannot keep showing up to our school after your expulsion. To be frank, your presence makes every female in the school uncomfortable after the skirt lifting incident and your attempted assault on Imabench, and given your lack of clothing on your previous seven attempts to enter this school, I could easily pursue legal action. The only reason I haven"t is because"well, I pity you." Airmax glanced at the area between Rational"s legs, which had only recently been covered, with acute sympathy.

An awkward silence followed.

"YES! Give me your comet, dinosaur boy!" screeched a woman from the 80s.

The porn had not stopped playing on Rational"s phone.

With one last, furious glare at Airmax, Rational stood.

"You haven"t seen the last of me."

--------

Alone with a handsome boy in an abandoned classroom, an attractive brunette in a skimpy Catholic schoolgirl outfit was on her knees. Gutter minded people would"ve perceived this as the beginning of a rather exciting porno but, to the disappointment of the handsome boy, those people would"ve been wrong. The girl was praying.

"Thank you Jesus for bringing us together so we can praise your name. We thank you for this day, and for allowing us to have an education. We thank you for allowing us to be alone together..because"because we can pray better that way! We thank you for giving us this room to praise thee, a room with a comfortable couch that we can..can sit on to pray. Thank you for bringing me another fellow faithful to help start the Bible study club, and thank you for making him so incredibly handsome with those shoulders and that hair and those eyes that make me want to"to praise your name even more. Amen."

Blade gave something of a smirk. His plan to get with the most beautiful and most prudish girl in school was well on its way to success.

--------

"We are DDO, we aren"t Jews! We love DDO, how bout you?" The cheerleaders punctuated each word with a wave of their pom-poms. As typical with these things, to any outsider it would"ve appeared to have been a successful session but in a High School clich", the head of the cheer leading squad, debatability, still found a reason to be a cruelly belittle her fellows about it.

With a heavy heart, Cermank walked away from the practice to the parking lot. A wave and a smile from Thett as he got into his "69 Camaro did something to brighten her spirit. He was just so cute. Her mind drifted off into a fantasy in the backseat of that car"which is way it took her a solid three seconds to realize someone was in the backseat of her car.

" """

_____________________________________________________

He stood there pondering his past. He had short hair and was screaming at the top of the lungs

"repent or perish, we are all visions of our creator"

This was Brad aka BOG. Raised on an amish farm as a child he suffered a near fatal accident at the hands of a cow. He was milking the cow, and was kicked in the head. He went into a coma for a year. Upon waking up he believed he was God himself, and the one true prophet of GOD. He also suffered from a terrible case of terets. After waking up in the hospital bed he thought he would die some day because he needed to be silenced, and witnessed to everyone he saw.

He walked up to bullish

"You sir need God in your life, understand that I am the one true prophet....... I LIKE CHEESE"

Bullish responded

" Would you go away you hedonistic bast*rd. All of you Christians are the same

BOG smirked and replied

" I am not a Christian, I am God himself and your a vision...... TATOR TOTS"

Bullish shook his head and walked way cursing under his breath.

___________________________________________

Such was a typical day at DDO High School.
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4/21/2015 12:41:17 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 12:22:17 PM, Mikal wrote:
Our story begins in a grimy bathroom. This place was even more disgusting than your typical boys bathroom ever since the schools janitor, Malcolmxy, had resigned in disgrace. This was the kind of place that made one think of athletes foot, unscrubbed toilets and urine sodden flooring from the moment of entrance.

I didn't know DDO High was this ghetto. LOL @ Malcolm. XD
To be more specific, our story begins on the floor of this grimy bathroom where three members of the football team were holding down Rev, a clever loner with a big mouth. To be fair to the members of the football team, Rev had boasted about sleeping with all of their mothers at the same time and actually had the evidence to back up that boast. As a result, his hair was now soaked with disgusting toilet water and he was absorbing blows left and right. A bell could be heard from somewhere in the hallway.

NOOOOOO

y u hate meh ;_____;

and y me a dik
"Mikal, we"d better get out of here. People will be coming in now." The words came from Thett, a well muscled all American boy endowed with intellectual gifts that even exceeded his athletic ones.

lol
"Good. They should see this. No one talks about MY mother that way!" He accompanied each word with a punch.

owie

y u hate meh

and again y me a dik
As soon as Mikal finished, Blade-of-truth, the captain of the team, stood Rev up and delivered to him a roundhouse kick that would make Chuck Norris proud, slamming him into the wall. To Revs credit, he took it like a champ.

y everyone hate meh
That was the last blow the players managed to get in as Zaradi, a bulky wrestler, stumbled into the bathroom as he did during every passing period. Zaradi had to pee a lot because he had undiagnosed prostate cancer, but that"s a story for another episode. Oh, and if you didn"t want spoilers don"t read that last sentence.

LOL
"What"s going on here?!" Zaradi demanded in a booming voice. Zaradi hated bullies"growing up as the only wealthy kid in a poor school, "Z-money" had been bullied mercilessly for the crime of not buying his clothes from Walmart.

roflmao

This is gold.
Zaradi was helping Rev to his feet before any of the players could answer, and between the look on Zaradi"s face and his considerable bulk, the players knew it was time to get out of there.

Thanks m8
As they exited the bathroom, Rev spoke for the first time since the start of the attack.

Oh dear God.
"Hey, Mikal." Mikal turned around.

Wat
"I fucked your mom."

XD

Wait, how'd you get that uncensored?
With that, Rev slammed the bathroom door in his face.

Forever alone http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net...
--------

"RationalMadman, you know what I"m going to say."

Oh hell no.
Airmax, the school principal, peered over his desk, his long white beard shifting as he smiled benevolently, a twinkle in his eye. Despite his considerable age, he still exuded an air of great power and confidence. He looked exactly like Dumbledore, only extremely handsome. He looked like Dumbledore if Dumbledore was a Roman god--if Dumbledore had looked like this, Grindlewald definitely wouldn"t have become evil, because he would focus all his ambition on winning and keeping this guys heart, instead of murdering his sister.

Wat
Rational looked up from his phone. On the screen, pterodactyl porn could be seen and heard. He did this purposely to annoy Airmax but unbeknownst to Rational, Airmax was a wily veteran of the porn industry before he turned his considerable talents towards education and was thus unbothered.

roflmao
"1227 aint gettin into heaven!" Rational spat, trying to intimidate Airmax with his rap abilities and the subtle acknowledgement that he knew the man"s birthdate.

I knew RM was RxR.
Airmax again smiled gently.

"Be that as it may, you cannot keep showing up to our school after your expulsion. To be frank, your presence makes every female in the school uncomfortable after the skirt lifting incident and your attempted assault on Imabench, and given your lack of clothing on your previous seven attempts to enter this school, I could easily pursue legal action.

Accurate description.
The only reason I haven"t is because"well, I pity you." Airmax glanced at the area between Rational"s legs, which had only recently been covered, with acute sympathy.

LOOOOOOOOOOOL
An awkward silence followed.

"YES! Give me your comet, dinosaur boy!" screeched a woman from the 80s.

roflmao

That was a terrible but genius innuendo.
The porn had not stopped playing on Rational"s phone.

With one last, furious glare at Airmax, Rational stood.

"You haven"t seen the last of me."

._________________________.

That sounded suggestive.
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4/21/2015 12:51:49 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 12:22:17 PM, Mikal wrote:
Our story begins in a grimy bathroom. This place was even more disgusting than your typical boys bathroom ever since the schools janitor, Malcolmxy, had resigned in disgrace. This was the kind of place that made one think of athletes foot, unscrubbed toilets and urine sodden flooring from the moment of entrance.
Ugh

To be more specific, our story begins on the floor of this grimy bathroom where three members of the football team were holding down Rev, a clever loner with a big mouth.
Yup.
Sounds about right.
To be fair to the members of the football team, Rev had boasted about sleeping with all of their mothers at the same time and actually had the evidence to back up that boast. As a result, his hair was now soaked with disgusting toilet water and he was absorbing blows left and right. A bell could be heard from somewhere in the hallway.
EWW REV
UGH

"Mikal, we"d better get out of here. People will be coming in now." The words came from Thett, a well muscled all American boy endowed with intellectual gifts that even exceeded his athletic ones.
Lol Thett

"Good. They should see this. No one talks about MY mother that way!" He accompanied each word with a punch.
Mikal XD

As soon as Mikal finished, Blade-of-truth, the captain of the team, stood Rev up and delivered to him a roundhouse kick that would make Chuck Norris proud, slamming him into the wall. To Revs credit, he took it like a champ.
Poor rev XD
That was the last blow the players managed to get in as Zaradi, a bulky wrestler, stumbled into the bathroom as he did during every passing period.
Yeah right XD
Zaradi had to pee a lot because he had undiagnosed prostate cancer, but that"s a story for another episode. Oh, and if you didn"t want spoilers don"t read that last sentence.
Undiagnosed?

"What"s going on here?!" Zaradi demanded in a booming voice. Zaradi hated bullies"growing up as the only wealthy kid in a poor school, "Z-money" had been bullied mercilessly for the crime of not buying his clothes from Walmart.
Awww

Zaradi was helping Rev to his feet before any of the players could answer, and between the look on Zaradi"s face and his considerable bulk, the players knew it was time to get out of there.
BROMANCE ALERT BISHES

As they exited the bathroom, Rev spoke for the first time since the start of the attack.

"Hey, Mikal." Mikal turned around.

"I fucked your mom."

With that, Rev slammed the bathroom door in his face.
Rev... wow XD

--------

"RationalMadman, you know what I"m going to say."

Airmax, the school principal, peered over his desk, his long white beard shifting as he smiled benevolently, a twinkle in his eye. Despite his considerable age, he still exuded an air of great power and confidence.
LOL
He looked exactly like Dumbledore, only extremely handsome. He looked like Dumbledore if Dumbledore was a Roman god--if Dumbledore had looked like this, Grindlewald definitely wouldn"t have become evil, because he would focus all his ambition on winning and keeping this guys heart, instead of murdering his sister.
LOLLLLLL
BUT HEY- Grindlewald didn't murder his sister intentionally, IIRC

Rational looked up from his phone. On the screen, pterodactyl porn could be seen and heard. He did this purposely to annoy Airmax but unbeknownst to Rational, Airmax was a wily veteran of the porn industry before he turned his considerable talents towards education and was thus unbothered.
LOL

"1227 aint gettin into heaven!" Rational spat, trying to intimidate Airmax with his rap abilities and the subtle acknowledgement that he knew the man"s birthdate.
XD

Airmax again smiled gently.

"Be that as it may, you cannot keep showing up to our school after your expulsion. To be frank, your presence makes every female in the school uncomfortable after the skirt lifting incident and your attempted assault on Imabench,
Bench probs wanted that- omg- SHIP THEM
and given your lack of clothing on your previous seven attempts to enter this school, I could easily pursue legal action. The only reason I haven"t is because"well, I pity you." Airmax glanced at the area between Rational"s legs, which had only recently been covered, with acute sympathy.

Well then

An awkward silence followed.

"YES! Give me your comet, dinosaur boy!" screeched a woman from the 80s.

The porn had not stopped playing on Rational"s phone.

With one last, furious glare at Airmax, Rational stood.

"You haven"t seen the last of me."

Good :)

--------

Alone with a handsome boy in an abandoned classroom, an attractive brunette in a skimpy Catholic schoolgirl outfit was on her knees. Gutter minded people would"ve perceived this as the beginning of a rather exciting porno but, to the disappointment of the handsome boy, those people would"ve been wrong. The girl was praying.

TF ROFL

"Thank you Jesus for bringing us together so we can praise your name. We thank you for this day, and for allowing us to have an education. We thank you for allowing us to be alone together..because"because we can pray better that way! We thank you for giving us this room to praise thee, a room with a comfortable couch that we can..can sit on to pray. Thank you for bringing me another fellow faithful to help start the Bible study club, and thank you for making him so incredibly handsome with those shoulders and that hair and those eyes that make me want to"to praise your name even more. Amen."
OMG
WTF Mikal

Blade gave something of a smirk. His plan to get with the most beautiful and most prudish girl in school was well on its way to success.

DUDE
NO
--------

"We are DDO, we aren"t Jews! We love DDO, how bout you?" The cheerleaders punctuated each word with a wave of their pom-poms. As typical with these things, to any outsider it would"ve appeared to have been a successful session but in a High School clich", the head of the cheer leading squad, debatability, still found a reason to be a cruelly belittle her fellows about it.

Nah

With a heavy heart, Cermank walked away from the practice to the parking lot. A wave and a smile from Thett as he got into his "69 Camaro did something to brighten her spirit. He was just so cute. Her mind drifted off into a fantasy in the backseat of that car"which is way it took her a solid three seconds to realize someone was in the backseat of her car.

" """
Oh yikes D:

_____________________________________________________

He stood there pondering his past. He had short hair and was screaming at the top of the lungs

"repent or perish, we are all visions of our creator"

This was Brad aka BOG. Raised on an amish farm as a child he suffered a near fatal accident at the hands of a cow. He was milking the cow, and was kicked in the head. He went into a coma for a year. Upon waking up he believed he was God himself, and the one true prophet of GOD. He also suffered from a terrible case of terets. After waking up in the hospital bed he thought he would die some day because he needed to be silenced, and witnessed to everyone he saw.

He walked up to bullish

"You sir need God in your life, understand that I am the one true prophet....... I LIKE CHEESE"

Bullish responded

" Would you go away you hedonistic bast*rd. All of you Christians are the same

BOG smirked and replied

" I am not a Christian, I am God himself and your a vision...... TATOR TOTS"

Bullish shook his head and walked way cursing under his breath.

... well then...
___________________________________________

Such was a typical day at DDO High School.

Ctrl + F 'Annie'
No results found.

Ctrl + F 'Endark'
No results found.

#ragequit
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4/21/2015 12:54:56 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 12:22:17 PM, Mikal wrote:
Our story begins in a grimy bathroom. This place was even more disgusting than your typical boys bathroom ever since the schools janitor, Malcolmxy, had resigned in disgrace. This was the kind of place that made one think of athletes foot, unscrubbed toilets and urine sodden flooring from the moment of entrance.

To be more specific, our story begins on the floor of this grimy bathroom where three members of the football team were holding down Rev, a clever loner with a big mouth. To be fair to the members of the football team, Rev had boasted about sleeping with all of their mothers at the same time and actually had the evidence to back up that boast. As a result, his hair was now soaked with disgusting toilet water and he was absorbing blows left and right. A bell could be heard from somewhere in the hallway.

"Mikal, we"d better get out of here. People will be coming in now." The words came from Thett, a well muscled all American boy endowed with intellectual gifts that even exceeded his athletic ones.

"Good. They should see this. No one talks about MY mother that way!" He accompanied each word with a punch.

As soon as Mikal finished, Blade-of-truth, the captain of the team, stood Rev up and delivered to him a roundhouse kick that would make Chuck Norris proud, slamming him into the wall. To Revs credit, he took it like a champ. That was the last blow the players managed to get in as Zaradi, a bulky wrestler, stumbled into the bathroom as he did during every passing period. Zaradi had to pee a lot because he had undiagnosed prostate cancer, but that"s a story for another episode. Oh, and if you didn"t want spoilers don"t read that last sentence.

"What"s going on here?!" Zaradi demanded in a booming voice. Zaradi hated bullies"growing up as the only wealthy kid in a poor school, "Z-money" had been bullied mercilessly for the crime of not buying his clothes from Walmart.

Zaradi was helping Rev to his feet before any of the players could answer, and between the look on Zaradi"s face and his considerable bulk, the players knew it was time to get out of there.

As they exited the bathroom, Rev spoke for the first time since the start of the attack.

"Hey, Mikal." Mikal turned around.

"I fucked your mom."

With that, Rev slammed the bathroom door in his face.

--------

"RationalMadman, you know what I"m going to say."

Airmax, the school principal, peered over his desk, his long white beard shifting as he smiled benevolently, a twinkle in his eye. Despite his considerable age, he still exuded an air of great power and confidence. He looked exactly like Dumbledore, only extremely handsome. He looked like Dumbledore if Dumbledore was a Roman god--if Dumbledore had looked like this, Grindlewald definitely wouldn"t have become evil, because he would focus all his ambition on winning and keeping this guys heart, instead of murdering his sister.

Rational looked up from his phone. On the screen, pterodactyl porn could be seen and heard. He did this purposely to annoy Airmax but unbeknownst to Rational, Airmax was a wily veteran of the porn industry before he turned his considerable talents towards education and was thus unbothered.

"1227 aint gettin into heaven!" Rational spat, trying to intimidate Airmax with his rap abilities and the subtle acknowledgement that he knew the man"s birthdate.

Airmax again smiled gently.

"Be that as it may, you cannot keep showing up to our school after your expulsion. To be frank, your presence makes every female in the school uncomfortable after the skirt lifting incident and your attempted assault on Imabench, and given your lack of clothing on your previous seven attempts to enter this school, I could easily pursue legal action. The only reason I haven"t is because"well, I pity you." Airmax glanced at the area between Rational"s legs, which had only recently been covered, with acute sympathy.

An awkward silence followed.

"YES! Give me your comet, dinosaur boy!" screeched a woman from the 80s.

The porn had not stopped playing on Rational"s phone.

With one last, furious glare at Airmax, Rational stood.

"You haven"t seen the last of me."

--------

Alone with a handsome boy in an abandoned classroom, an attractive brunette in a skimpy Catholic schoolgirl outfit was on her knees. Gutter minded people would"ve perceived this as the beginning of a rather exciting porno but, to the disappointment of the handsome boy, those people would"ve been wrong. The girl was praying.

"Thank you Jesus for bringing us together so we can praise your name. We thank you for this day, and for allowing us to have an education. We thank you for allowing us to be alone together..because"because we can pray better that way! We thank you for giving us this room to praise thee, a room with a comfortable couch that we can..can sit on to pray. Thank you for bringing me another fellow faithful to help start the Bible study club, and thank you for making him so incredibly handsome with those shoulders and that hair and those eyes that make me want to"to praise your name even more. Amen."

Blade gave something of a smirk. His plan to get with the most beautiful and most prudish girl in school was well on its way to success.

--------

"We are DDO, we aren"t Jews! We love DDO, how bout you?" The cheerleaders punctuated each word with a wave of their pom-poms. As typical with these things, to any outsider it would"ve appeared to have been a successful session but in a High School clich", the head of the cheer leading squad, debatability, still found a reason to be a cruelly belittle her fellows about it.

With a heavy heart, Cermank walked away from the practice to the parking lot. A wave and a smile from Thett as he got into his "69 Camaro did something to brighten her spirit. He was just so cute. Her mind drifted off into a fantasy in the backseat of that car"which is way it took her a solid three seconds to realize someone was in the backseat of her car.

" """

_____________________________________________________

He stood there pondering his past. He had short hair and was screaming at the top of the lungs

"repent or perish, we are all visions of our creator"

This was Brad aka BOG. Raised on an amish farm as a child he suffered a near fatal accident at the hands of a cow. He was milking the cow, and was kicked in the head. He went into a coma for a year. Upon waking up he believed he was God himself, and the one true prophet of GOD. He also suffered from a terrible case of terets. After waking up in the hospital bed he thought he would die some day because he needed to be silenced, and witnessed to everyone he saw.

He walked up to bullish

"You sir need God in your life, understand that I am the one true prophet....... I LIKE CHEESE"

Bullish responded

" Would you go away you hedonistic bast*rd. All of you Christians are the same

BOG smirked and replied

" I am not a Christian, I am God himself and your a vision...... TATOR TOTS"

Bullish shook his head and walked way cursing under his breath.


___________________________________________

Such was a typical day at DDO High School.

Ok mikal I'm going to have to respectfully ask you to leave me out of this. 1) because i'm not too fond of the way you write and I'm going to ask you civilly NOW, and 2) you ignored zaradi's request which is really disrespectful so i'm serious: Leave me out, or this will not be civil anymore
Epsilon: There are so many stories where some brave hero decides to give their life to save the day, and because of their sacrifice, the good guys win, the survivors all cheer, and everybody lives happily ever after. But the hero... never gets to see that ending. They'll never know if their sacrifice actually made a difference. They'll never know if the day was really saved. In the end, they just have to have faith.
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4/21/2015 12:57:17 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 12:54:56 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 12:22:17 PM, Mikal wrote:
Our story begins in a grimy bathroom. This place was even more disgusting than your typical boys bathroom ever since the schools janitor, Malcolmxy, had resigned in disgrace. This was the kind of place that made one think of athletes foot, unscrubbed toilets and urine sodden flooring from the moment of entrance.

To be more specific, our story begins on the floor of this grimy bathroom where three members of the football team were holding down Rev, a clever loner with a big mouth. To be fair to the members of the football team, Rev had boasted about sleeping with all of their mothers at the same time and actually had the evidence to back up that boast. As a result, his hair was now soaked with disgusting toilet water and he was absorbing blows left and right. A bell could be heard from somewhere in the hallway.

"Mikal, we"d better get out of here. People will be coming in now." The words came from Thett, a well muscled all American boy endowed with intellectual gifts that even exceeded his athletic ones.

"Good. They should see this. No one talks about MY mother that way!" He accompanied each word with a punch.

As soon as Mikal finished, Blade-of-truth, the captain of the team, stood Rev up and delivered to him a roundhouse kick that would make Chuck Norris proud, slamming him into the wall. To Revs credit, he took it like a champ. That was the last blow the players managed to get in as Zaradi, a bulky wrestler, stumbled into the bathroom as he did during every passing period. Zaradi had to pee a lot because he had undiagnosed prostate cancer, but that"s a story for another episode. Oh, and if you didn"t want spoilers don"t read that last sentence.

"What"s going on here?!" Zaradi demanded in a booming voice. Zaradi hated bullies"growing up as the only wealthy kid in a poor school, "Z-money" had been bullied mercilessly for the crime of not buying his clothes from Walmart.

Zaradi was helping Rev to his feet before any of the players could answer, and between the look on Zaradi"s face and his considerable bulk, the players knew it was time to get out of there.

As they exited the bathroom, Rev spoke for the first time since the start of the attack.

"Hey, Mikal." Mikal turned around.

"I fucked your mom."

With that, Rev slammed the bathroom door in his face.

--------

"RationalMadman, you know what I"m going to say."

Airmax, the school principal, peered over his desk, his long white beard shifting as he smiled benevolently, a twinkle in his eye. Despite his considerable age, he still exuded an air of great power and confidence. He looked exactly like Dumbledore, only extremely handsome. He looked like Dumbledore if Dumbledore was a Roman god--if Dumbledore had looked like this, Grindlewald definitely wouldn"t have become evil, because he would focus all his ambition on winning and keeping this guys heart, instead of murdering his sister.

Rational looked up from his phone. On the screen, pterodactyl porn could be seen and heard. He did this purposely to annoy Airmax but unbeknownst to Rational, Airmax was a wily veteran of the porn industry before he turned his considerable talents towards education and was thus unbothered.

"1227 aint gettin into heaven!" Rational spat, trying to intimidate Airmax with his rap abilities and the subtle acknowledgement that he knew the man"s birthdate.

Airmax again smiled gently.

"Be that as it may, you cannot keep showing up to our school after your expulsion. To be frank, your presence makes every female in the school uncomfortable after the skirt lifting incident and your attempted assault on Imabench, and given your lack of clothing on your previous seven attempts to enter this school, I could easily pursue legal action. The only reason I haven"t is because"well, I pity you." Airmax glanced at the area between Rational"s legs, which had only recently been covered, with acute sympathy.

An awkward silence followed.

"YES! Give me your comet, dinosaur boy!" screeched a woman from the 80s.

The porn had not stopped playing on Rational"s phone.

With one last, furious glare at Airmax, Rational stood.

"You haven"t seen the last of me."

--------

Alone with a handsome boy in an abandoned classroom, an attractive brunette in a skimpy Catholic schoolgirl outfit was on her knees. Gutter minded people would"ve perceived this as the beginning of a rather exciting porno but, to the disappointment of the handsome boy, those people would"ve been wrong. The girl was praying.

"Thank you Jesus for bringing us together so we can praise your name. We thank you for this day, and for allowing us to have an education. We thank you for allowing us to be alone together..because"because we can pray better that way! We thank you for giving us this room to praise thee, a room with a comfortable couch that we can..can sit on to pray. Thank you for bringing me another fellow faithful to help start the Bible study club, and thank you for making him so incredibly handsome with those shoulders and that hair and those eyes that make me want to"to praise your name even more. Amen."

Blade gave something of a smirk. His plan to get with the most beautiful and most prudish girl in school was well on its way to success.

--------

"We are DDO, we aren"t Jews! We love DDO, how bout you?" The cheerleaders punctuated each word with a wave of their pom-poms. As typical with these things, to any outsider it would"ve appeared to have been a successful session but in a High School clich", the head of the cheer leading squad, debatability, still found a reason to be a cruelly belittle her fellows about it.

With a heavy heart, Cermank walked away from the practice to the parking lot. A wave and a smile from Thett as he got into his "69 Camaro did something to brighten her spirit. He was just so cute. Her mind drifted off into a fantasy in the backseat of that car"which is way it took her a solid three seconds to realize someone was in the backseat of her car.

" """

_____________________________________________________

He stood there pondering his past. He had short hair and was screaming at the top of the lungs

"repent or perish, we are all visions of our creator"

This was Brad aka BOG. Raised on an amish farm as a child he suffered a near fatal accident at the hands of a cow. He was milking the cow, and was kicked in the head. He went into a coma for a year. Upon waking up he believed he was God himself, and the one true prophet of GOD. He also suffered from a terrible case of terets. After waking up in the hospital bed he thought he would die some day because he needed to be silenced, and witnessed to everyone he saw.

He walked up to bullish

"You sir need God in your life, understand that I am the one true prophet....... I LIKE CHEESE"

Bullish responded

" Would you go away you hedonistic bast*rd. All of you Christians are the same

BOG smirked and replied

" I am not a Christian, I am God himself and your a vision...... TATOR TOTS"

Bullish shook his head and walked way cursing under his breath.


___________________________________________

Such was a typical day at DDO High School.

Ok mikal I'm going to have to respectfully ask you to leave me out of this. 1) because i'm not too fond of the way you write and I'm going to ask you civilly NOW, and 2) you ignored zaradi's request which is really disrespectful so i'm serious: Leave me out, or this will not be civil anymore

or i'll just force you onto my
Epsilon: There are so many stories where some brave hero decides to give their life to save the day, and because of their sacrifice, the good guys win, the survivors all cheer, and everybody lives happily ever after. But the hero... never gets to see that ending. They'll never know if their sacrifice actually made a difference. They'll never know if the day was really saved. In the end, they just have to have faith.
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or i'll just force you onto my fanfic because space deaths are ugly
Epsilon: There are so many stories where some brave hero decides to give their life to save the day, and because of their sacrifice, the good guys win, the survivors all cheer, and everybody lives happily ever after. But the hero... never gets to see that ending. They'll never know if their sacrifice actually made a difference. They'll never know if the day was really saved. In the end, they just have to have faith.
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4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM
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just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events
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4/21/2015 1:06:42 PM
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At 4/21/2015 12:54:56 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:

Ok mikal I'm going to have to respectfully ask you to leave me out of this. 1) because i'm not too fond of the way you write and I'm going to ask you civilly NOW, and 2) you ignored zaradi's request which is really disrespectful so i'm serious: Leave me out, or this will not be civil anymore

What did Zaradi request? I didn't read the thread, we just threw people in...but I really doubt Zaradi will be mad
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"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

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4/21/2015 1:07:25 PM
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At 4/21/2015 12:54:56 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:

Ok mikal I'm going to have to respectfully ask you to leave me out of this. 1) because i'm not too fond of the way you write and I'm going to ask you civilly NOW, and 2) you ignored zaradi's request which is really disrespectful so i'm serious: Leave me out, or this will not be civil anymore

Matt asked me to leave him out because of the shots I was going to take. His character was done in a way where it was not the intent of his original one. I did it that way on purpose. It's only going to be major people in DDO anyway for a long time so no worries
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4/21/2015 1:07:58 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

y u hate meh

I'm going to die before the first day of school ends. .-.
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4/21/2015 1:08:49 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:06:42 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 12:54:56 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:

Ok mikal I'm going to have to respectfully ask you to leave me out of this. 1) because i'm not too fond of the way you write and I'm going to ask you civilly NOW, and 2) you ignored zaradi's request which is really disrespectful so i'm serious: Leave me out, or this will not be civil anymore

What did Zaradi request? I didn't read the thread, we just threw people in...but I really doubt Zaradi will be mad

He didnt want me to take shots at him. But you did his character in a way he will be cool with
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At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...
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MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

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At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that
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"My name is max. I'm not a big fan of slacks"- Max rapping

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"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

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BoG with tourette's... perfect
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4/21/2015 1:11:41 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:07:58 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

y u hate meh

I'm going to die before the first day of school ends. .-.

I think your character is pretty BA tbh...
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"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

: At 11/12/2016 11:49:40 PM, Raisor wrote:
: thett was right
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4/21/2015 1:12:12 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 1:11:01 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that

The setting, the characters

Just from that first fanfic you wrote anyways
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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4/21/2015 1:12:57 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 1:11:41 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:07:58 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

y u hate meh

I'm going to die before the first day of school ends. .-.

I think your character is pretty BA tbh...

Maybe a DA. What fool goes up to the whole school football team and says that I screwed all of their moms? I'm just lucky TUF wasn't there. >.>
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4/21/2015 1:13:08 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:11:59 PM, RevNge wrote:
This hurt my feelings. /out

Nah, just kidding. I'm not like Cyber. ;D

why u fuk my mom
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At 4/21/2015 1:13:08 PM, Mikal wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:59 PM, RevNge wrote:
This hurt my feelings. /out

Nah, just kidding. I'm not like Cyber. ;D

why u fuk my mom
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"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

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4/21/2015 1:14:48 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:12:12 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:01 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that

The setting, the characters

Just from that first fanfic you wrote anyways

DDO BK didn't really have imagery. Imagery is supposed to describe the stimulation of physical senses--it's not necessarily required for a good story, and sometimes it conflicts with the author's style of writing.
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4/21/2015 1:15:45 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:13:08 PM, Mikal wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:59 PM, RevNge wrote:
This hurt my feelings. /out

Nah, just kidding. I'm not like Cyber. ;D

why u fuk my mom

Because she's a MILF m8
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4/21/2015 1:16:12 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 1:13:56 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:13:08 PM, Mikal wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:59 PM, RevNge wrote:
This hurt my feelings. /out

Nah, just kidding. I'm not like Cyber. ;D

why u fuk my mom

At 4/21/2015 1:15:45 PM, RevNge wrote:
Because she's a MILF m8
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4/21/2015 1:16:33 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:14:48 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:12:12 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:01 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that

The setting, the characters

Just from that first fanfic you wrote anyways

DDO BK didn't really have imagery. Imagery is supposed to describe the stimulation of physical senses--it's not necessarily required for a good story, and sometimes it conflicts with the author's style of writing.

Thett3 is a genius

with me giving him the plot and thett3 writing, this will be gold
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4/21/2015 1:18:34 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:17:08 PM, daytonanerd wrote:
Is the name 'DDO High' a subtle marijuana reference?

That'd be a beautiful plot twist.
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4/21/2015 1:19:10 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:14:48 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:12:12 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:01 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that

The setting, the characters

Just from that first fanfic you wrote anyways

DDO BK didn't really have imagery. Imagery is supposed to describe the stimulation of physical senses--it's not necessarily required for a good story, and sometimes it conflicts with the author's style of writing.

Not that- the royal and thett one
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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4/21/2015 1:20:15 PM
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At 4/21/2015 1:19:10 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:14:48 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:12:12 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:01 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that

The setting, the characters

Just from that first fanfic you wrote anyways

DDO BK didn't really have imagery. Imagery is supposed to describe the stimulation of physical senses--it's not necessarily required for a good story, and sometimes it conflicts with the author's style of writing.

Not that- the royal and thett one

lol don't remind people of that
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"My name is max. I'm not a big fan of slacks"- Max rapping

"Walmart should have the opportunity to bribe a politician to it's agenda" -Max

"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

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Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/21/2015 1:18:34 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:17:08 PM, daytonanerd wrote:
Is the name 'DDO High' a subtle marijuana reference?

That'd be a beautiful plot twist.

+1
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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At 4/21/2015 1:19:10 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:14:48 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:12:12 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:11:01 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:08:57 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/21/2015 1:05:33 PM, thett3 wrote:
just so everyone knows how this was done: I wrote all the parts except for the BOG part at the end (because I don't really know anything about him), but Mikal is the one who came up with the structure of events

You did?

Because you'd have been more descriptive...

I don't think so. I'm pretty bad at imagery...and at every type of writing except for really lame humor that's so lame it's funny really. If you mean more descriptive of myself well...there's plenty of time for that

The setting, the characters

Just from that first fanfic you wrote anyways

DDO BK didn't really have imagery. Imagery is supposed to describe the stimulation of physical senses--it's not necessarily required for a good story, and sometimes it conflicts with the author's style of writing.

Not that- the royal and thett one

Wat