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4/25/2015 10:12:16 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Alright you guys, here is the first episode of the fanfic I've been working on, and I hope you enjoy.

DDO Rocky Episode 1
"Club Fighter"
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Blood was spilling onto the old, moldy canvas, and it was already starting to blend in from the blood of decades past.

'Damn,' the boxer thought 'He's got my lef-'

A right hook hit him right across the jaw as he was thinking. About half of the crowd of a few dozen cheered on this hard-hitting punch. The other half was majorly pissed that their fighter was screwing up their betting. A barrage of punches kept hitting.

Left jab!

Right hook!

And one hell of an uppercut sent the boxer to the canvas.

1!

'Why even get up?'

2!

'My eye's too swollen to even see this guy'

3!

'No... I won't be knocked out... I can't stay on the ground when I'm pushed down...'

The boxer got his arms set on the ground, and was beginning to use them as a support.

4!

"Get up, you bum!!" was the scream coming from the crowd that was in fear of losing their last paycheck.

5!

The boxer was pushing up from the ground, and the smirk the other boxer had was fading quickly.

6!

The boxer put one of his legs in front of him.

7!

The boxer was starting to stand up on his legs.

8!

With a little wobble, the boxer was able to get back up, and was now ready to take more punishment and a probable loss by decision

"Are you alright to fight?" The ref asked, more as a matter of procedure than that of caring.

"I'm up. I'm ready." was what the boxer grunted through his mouthguard.

"Alright, then fight!" The ref yelled.

The other boxer apporached him with the speed of a lion chasing its prey, but was interrupted by the bell that signalled the end of the 7th round.

Each boxer went back to their corner, where their makeshift corner of older boxers and mafia members made for a not-so-productive one minute healing period.

"Alright Day, I'm going to give it to you straight." came the words of the boxer's cornerman, Voice-of-Truth, who was just taking up this duty because he was a few weeks away from his next fight, and needed a good way to earn a few bucks($30 for a win, $20 for a loss) on the side "You look like you came out of a knife fight, befause you have cuts all over. Christ, we can't clean up all of this mess, kid. You've only got one more round, and you'll lose if you let it end without knocking this prick out. Hit him with the hardest punches you got, right at his head. I want him to topple faster than a communist dictatorship. Got it?"

"Yeah, I'll... I'll get him..." slurred the words of the punch-drunk boxer.

The two boxers got out of their corners, for the bell had just rung, and the eighth and final round of the fight had begun.

The other boxer came out of his corner swinging, no doubt trying to extend his streak of knockouts. With a series of punches and hard pushes, the other boxer had managed to get his opponent on the ropes. The boxer's effort to put his hands up was futile, as his defenses were being worn down by a deadly string of combinations. The boxer's trunk was looking like a crime scene, with all of the blood coming out of the various cuts on his face. His eyes were so swollen that in the small field of vision he had, he could only make out the shape of the other boxer.

But that was all he needed.

The boxer pushed that shape away from him and forced his legs to move along with him. He started throwing some hard jabs at his retreating opponent, and now the tide of battle had changed, for the other boxer was now the one on the ropes.

A scream came from the crowd in response to this sudden change of circumstance

'Finally...'

The boxer threw hooks, first from the left, then from the right. He now could see red sparks flying out of his opponents. He threw another right hook at his opponent, this time hearing a crack from the location that the boxer had guessed to be his adversary's jaw. With a left uppercut, the other boxer now seemed to be in a daze.

Cries of both joys and anguish were barely audible to the boxer, for he was now focused on the one thing he had left to do. He cocked his right fist backed, and threw a right hook with a kind of power that would halt a speeding train right in its tracks.

With that punch, the other boxer was down. The 10 count being yelled was really just a formality, for the other boxer was knocked out cold.

With that last effort, Daytona won the fight. There was weeping coming from previously triumphant betters, dances of joy coming from the winning gamblers, and each boxer's corner seemed mostly indifferent, with Voice-of-Truth giving a small smile of pride.
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Thirty minutes later, both boxers, cleaned up a little bit, but still looking very much dazed, entered the manager's room, to retrieve their earnings from this bout.

"First, let me say something to the both of you." were the first words that came from the manager "These club people haven't seen such a gutsy and balls-out fight for a long time. You guys were top of the line entertainment, and that's why I'll double your pay for this fight."

That last bit of good news didn't impede on how irked Daytona was at something the manager said.

'Entertainment... We're more than that. We bit the $hit out of each other. We're not just entertainment...'

Nonetheless, Daytona wasn't going to refuse his pay. After all, for the kind of effort he put out for the night, he deserved every dollar that he would get.

"For you 16k, for putting up a hell of a fight against this animal, here's $200. How does it feel, finally fighting a guy with any kind of caliber?"

An angry grunt came from 16k, and the look on his face matched the sound. Daytona knew that 16k wasn't about to beat the $hit out of the hand who fed him.

"And for you Daytona, for sleeping around for seven rounds and actually boxed in the last round, here's $500."

Daytona took the money and tucked it away, knowing that if wanted to actually eat tonight, he'd just have to deal with the manager's annoying remarks.

Daytona asked the manager maybe the most valued question a club fighter could ask.

"When can I get another fight?"
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daytonanerd
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4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)
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4/25/2015 10:21:23 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)

Congrats, m8, you're going to make yourself one-shotXn0sc0p3 us all. .-.
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4/25/2015 10:23:50 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 10:21:23 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)

Congrats, m8, you're going to make yourself one-shotXn0sc0p3 us all. .-.

No, just you. ;D
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4/25/2015 10:25:06 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 10:23:50 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:21:23 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)

Congrats, m8, you're going to make yourself one-shotXn0sc0p3 us all. .-.

No, just you. ;D

;_;

/out
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4/25/2015 10:27:13 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 10:25:06 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:23:50 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:21:23 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)

Congrats, m8, you're going to make yourself one-shotXn0sc0p3 us all. .-.

No, just you. ;D

;_;

/out

Too L8
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4/25/2015 11:32:59 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 10:27:13 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:25:06 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:23:50 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:21:23 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)

Congrats, m8, you're going to make yourself one-shotXn0sc0p3 us all. .-.

No, just you. ;D

;_;

/out

Too L8

y u hate meh
daytonanerd
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4/25/2015 11:48:10 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 11:32:59 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:27:13 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:25:06 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:23:50 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:21:23 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:20:26 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:18:24 AM, RevNge wrote:
Fanfiction narcissism at its finest.

Hey, I did warn that I would be the main character right in the sign-up thread. Besides, I won't make my character too OP... ;)

Congrats, m8, you're going to make yourself one-shotXn0sc0p3 us all. .-.

No, just you. ;D

;_;

/out

Too L8

y u hate meh

I think of it more like a tough love. ;D
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4/25/2015 11:54:55 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 11:53:44 AM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 4/25/2015 11:32:59 AM, RevNge wrote:


"Just who the hell do you think we are?"
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4/25/2015 11:56:53 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 11:54:55 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 11:53:44 AM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 4/25/2015 11:32:59 AM, RevNge wrote:


"Just who the hell do you think we are?"

Rev seemed like he needed the punch
People who I've called as mafia DP1:
TUF, and YYW
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4/25/2015 11:58:35 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 11:56:53 AM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 4/25/2015 11:54:55 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
At 4/25/2015 11:53:44 AM, YamaVonKarma wrote:
At 4/25/2015 11:32:59 AM, RevNge wrote:


"Just who the hell do you think we are?"

Rev seemed like he needed the punch

Gurren Lagann logic:

You whining like a b!tch? Well, let's punch those teeth right out, and grit the ones you have left.
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4/25/2015 2:08:20 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Also, I found a fun thing on the Internet:

http://www.dailyscript.com...

It's the original screenplay to the first Rocky movie. There are a few differences between that and the movie.
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4/25/2015 2:15:51 PM
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At 4/25/2015 10:19:34 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
Episode 2, "Philadelphia", will come next week.

I read this as pedophilia by accident
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4/25/2015 9:15:32 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/25/2015 2:15:51 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 4/25/2015 10:19:34 AM, daytonanerd wrote:
Episode 2, "Philadelphia", will come next week.

I read this as pedophilia by accident

You read what you want to read.
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