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Blade-of-Truth
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7/15/2015 3:58:10 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
*A Smile*

If ever there was a more beautiful sign
in a manner that can truly put words to my mind
I wish to share my thoughts about you
and the effects that your stunning smile can do
The moment it happened was when my eyes met yours
we met with a smile - I was paralyzed by nerves
how could such beauty be contained in one act
did my soul just witness everything that I lack
I saw a good heart, you are smart and driven
and with passion, desire and hope - I have a mission
To compare the shine of the mid'day sun with your own
To forever plant flowers in your heart - even when alone
The deep red velvet of a fully bloomed rose
Is the only beauty in this world that can compare to your pose
the way you stand there - in charge of your self
To hold your hand I would trade the worlds wealth
As I look to the stars and think of my blessings
Look to myself - and learn from my lessons
One truth that seems to stand above all
is that the thought of you changes me
the leaves of my heart go from summer to fall
I know, in life, we both have much to accomplish
But a man can dream - and dreams can turn into a promise
A promise of faithfulness, absolute love and trust
for in life, if one strives for happiness - then love is a must
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7/15/2015 9:28:49 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Cute! I predict this one will earn you 3 blow jobs from the wife. Goob job, keep it up!
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Emilrose
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7/15/2015 9:31:11 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
QUE.

I'm going to write a poem, and make it really ugly and sarcastic.
Commentator on a picture with David Cameron and a Cat: 'Amazing what you can achieve with photoshop these days. I'm sure that used to be a pig.'

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7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....
Lee001
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7/15/2015 11:37:44 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

Sounds like some type of music to hypnotize you..
"Condoms are societal constructs created by the government to restrain 'Murican freedom!"-SolonKR

"But I jest and digress (sick rhymes, yo); every boob is equal in the eyes of the Lord."- SolonKR

"Oh Hey, Seeing Artichokes Makes Me Want to Have Sex."- SolonKR

"Yep, but anyone who touches my hair immediately ascends to the heavens..You're already an angel, so touching my hair can do nothing <3" -SolonKR

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7/15/2015 11:39:02 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:37:44 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

Sounds like some type of music to hypnotize you..

nah, i prefer drugs to hypnotize someone. 10ccs of cortizine and they are open to any suggestion
Lee001
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7/15/2015 11:40:31 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:39:02 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:37:44 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

Sounds like some type of music to hypnotize you..

nah, i prefer drugs to hypnotize someone. 10ccs of cortizine and they are open to any suggestion

It sounded so satanic... XD
"Condoms are societal constructs created by the government to restrain 'Murican freedom!"-SolonKR

"But I jest and digress (sick rhymes, yo); every boob is equal in the eyes of the Lord."- SolonKR

"Oh Hey, Seeing Artichokes Makes Me Want to Have Sex."- SolonKR

"Yep, but anyone who touches my hair immediately ascends to the heavens..You're already an angel, so touching my hair can do nothing <3" -SolonKR

My hubby Hayd <3 <3
Jedi4
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7/15/2015 11:41:35 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:40:31 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:39:02 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:37:44 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

Sounds like some type of music to hypnotize you..

nah, i prefer drugs to hypnotize someone. 10ccs of cortizine and they are open to any suggestion

It sounded so satanic... XD

eh, you can tell them to worship jesus if you want. I do after i tell them pants are evil. They walk around with no pants hahaha
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7/15/2015 11:42:42 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:41:35 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:40:31 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:39:02 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:37:44 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

Sounds like some type of music to hypnotize you..

nah, i prefer drugs to hypnotize someone. 10ccs of cortizine and they are open to any suggestion

It sounded so satanic... XD

eh, you can tell them to worship jesus if you want. I do after i tell them pants are evil. They walk around with no pants hahaha

You would like that.
"Condoms are societal constructs created by the government to restrain 'Murican freedom!"-SolonKR

"But I jest and digress (sick rhymes, yo); every boob is equal in the eyes of the Lord."- SolonKR

"Oh Hey, Seeing Artichokes Makes Me Want to Have Sex."- SolonKR

"Yep, but anyone who touches my hair immediately ascends to the heavens..You're already an angel, so touching my hair can do nothing <3" -SolonKR

My hubby Hayd <3 <3
Jedi4
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7/15/2015 11:44:53 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:42:42 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:41:35 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:40:31 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:39:02 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:37:44 AM, Lee001 wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

Sounds like some type of music to hypnotize you..

nah, i prefer drugs to hypnotize someone. 10ccs of cortizine and they are open to any suggestion

It sounded so satanic... XD

eh, you can tell them to worship jesus if you want. I do after i tell them pants are evil. They walk around with no pants hahaha

You would like that.

More than you can imagine
Blade-of-Truth
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7/15/2015 1:48:29 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 9:28:49 AM, TUF wrote:
Cute! I predict this one will earn you 3 blow jobs from the wife. Goob job, keep it up!

Lmao! Thank you :)
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7/15/2015 1:49:05 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 9:31:11 AM, Emilrose wrote:
QUE.

I'm going to write a poem, and make it really ugly and sarcastic.

Do itttt
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7/15/2015 1:54:28 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

I listened to it, but is it in English? If not, what language was that?
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7/15/2015 1:57:45 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
This poem now legally belongs to Juggle.
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And I'm much obliged to you for making it clear - that I'm not here."

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7/15/2015 2:20:34 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 1:57:45 PM, 1harderthanyouthink wrote:
This poem now legally belongs to Juggle.

Oh damn, because of the terms of service right? That's messed up... guess I won't be publishing my works from here on out if I want to keep them as my own.

I wonder if there is some legal disclaimer I can post before sharing my poems that would allow me to keep them as my own IP.
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7/15/2015 2:23:27 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 2:20:34 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 7/15/2015 1:57:45 PM, 1harderthanyouthink wrote:
This poem now legally belongs to Juggle.

Oh damn, because of the terms of service right? That's messed up... guess I won't be publishing my works from here on out if I want to keep them as my own.

I wonder if there is some legal disclaimer I can post before sharing my poems that would allow me to keep them as my own IP.

I don't quite know.
"It's awfully considerate of you to think of me here,
And I'm much obliged to you for making it clear - that I'm not here."

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7/16/2015 4:02:45 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 7/15/2015 1:54:28 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 7/15/2015 11:33:53 AM, Jedi4 wrote:
Nothing compared to mine i produced a song about it too
https://soundcloud.com...

I think im better than Bach or motsart

Rivers of blood flowing, flowing
The blood is of the enemy
Complemets the soil
Kill Kill Kill the enemy
Gut him with the sword
Rape the men
ohhhhhhh river of blood flowing flowing

Kill kill kill the enemy
My shoes are dark
My love it has....

I listened to it, but is it in English? If not, what language was that?

its in Romanian