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5/29/2014 1:51:32 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Prologue Episode:

She stood near the gas station, hesitant to step out of the light. She knew that to get to her house she had to cross Shaginowa Street, a breeding ground of cutthroats, prostitutes (male and female), thieves, and juvenile gang activity. Oh how she longed for the days of old, when Japan followed the old, honorable ways. In that day and age Japan was a great empire, and Japanese citizens were proud of their nation, not fearful of the violent gangs nor enslaved by the pornography introduced by the West.
She remembered how as a young girl her father would tell her the tales of Japan's glory and naval power gained during and prior to the Second World War.
"Those days are over now," she thought bitterly. And the truth was that her beloved Japan had been overrun by the Western ways, and with it came a surge in crime with no historical precedent in the island nation's long and proud history.

Breathing deeply, she took one step out of the bright light, and then another. Then she was inside Shaginowa Street, and there was no turning back.
"So far so good," she said out loud, her heart beating like a drum inside her chest.
But suddenly she was grabbed from behind by a teenage hoodlums.
"Yo MD, I got one," the assailant, named "Yay," said.
"How much dough does she have on her?" the one named "MD asked.
"PLEASE!" she wailed desperately. "I'm an old woman. I carry very little Yen on me."
"Well dat's where yo gone wrong, lady," the one named Yay said. "Yo MD, should I cut her throat?"
"No witnesses," MD reminded his partner in crime.
Yay smiled...and slit the old woman's throat.
"Dang, it wasn't a very large catch today," MD said. "Don Csareo will be displeased. Here, help me drag away the body. We'll ditch it in da river."

Meanwhile, watching from the mystical Senzu River...
"The human world is overrun with crime," he said to himself. "Wouldn't it be fun if I were to give a human the power to cleanse his country, no, the world, of crime? What if I were to give him or her the power of...a Death Note?"
With his creepy axolotl face he grinned. "Japan had better brace itself, for Airmax the Shinigami is coming!"
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5/29/2014 2:53:27 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 5/29/2014 1:51:32 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Prologue Episode:

She stood near the gas station, hesitant to step out of the light. She knew that to get to her house she had to cross Shaginowa Street, a breeding ground of cutthroats, prostitutes (male and female), thieves, and juvenile gang activity. Oh how she longed for the days of old, when Japan followed the old, honorable ways. In that day and age Japan was a great empire, and Japanese citizens were proud of their nation, not fearful of the violent gangs nor enslaved by the pornography introduced by the West.
She remembered how as a young girl her father would tell her the tales of Japan's glory and naval power gained during and prior to the Second World War.
"Those days are over now," she thought bitterly. And the truth was that her beloved Japan had been overrun by the Western ways, and with it came a surge in crime with no historical precedent in the island nation's long and proud history.

Breathing deeply, she took one step out of the bright light, and then another. Then she was inside Shaginowa Street, and there was no turning back.
"So far so good," she said out loud, her heart beating like a drum inside her chest.
But suddenly she was grabbed from behind by a teenage hoodlum.
"Yo MD, I got one," the assailant, named "Yay," said.
"How much dough does she have on her?" the one named "MD asked.
"PLEASE!" she wailed desperately. "I'm an old woman. I carry very little Yen on me."
"Well dat's where yo gone wrong, lady," the one named Yay said. "Yo MD, should I cut her throat?"
"No witnesses," MD reminded his partner in crime.
Yay smiled...and slit the old woman's throat.
"Dang, it wasn't a very large catch today," MD said. "Don Csareo will be displeased. Here, help me drag away the body. We'll ditch it in da river."

Meanwhile, watching from the mystical Senzu River...
"The human world is overrun with crime," he said to himself. "Wouldn't it be fun if I were to give a human the power to cleanse his country, no, the world, of crime? What if I were to give him or her the power of...a Death Note?"
With his creepy axolotl face he grinned. "Japan had better brace itself, for Airmax the Shinigami is coming!"
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5/29/2014 4:48:43 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 1:

He sat in his class, doodling as his teacher, Ms. Kamiya, was discussing the nature of protons, electrons, and neutrons.
His name was Krazzy Player Yagami. Krazzy was his first name, Player was his middle name, and Yagami was his last name. His family was well known; Krazzy's father owned a largely successful company which sold Soy Sauce to Western markets overseas. As a result, the Yagami family was quite wealthy.
"K.P, can you answer problem seven?" Ms. Kamiya asked.
Suddenly aware that he was being called to answer a question, he looked down at the textbook.
"17 protons," Krazzy answered.
"That is correct," Ms. Kamiya said. Then she muttered under her breath, "as usual."

As soon as school let out, Krazzy headed for the parking lot, where his family's maid would be waiting with a car.
As he walked in the grass, he noticed a book on the ground. It was labeled "Death Note."
"What the *expletive* is this?" He asked himself. "Looks like a fantasy novel of some kind. Well...finders keepers."
He picked up the book and continued on his way.

He got into the small yellow car, where the family maid, Angel O. Death, was waiting.
"Good afternoon, young master Yagami," she said. "How was school today?"
"All right," Krazzy said apathetically, staring at the strange book in his hand.
He decided to wait until he got home before starting on the book.

After passing through a normal Japanese traffic jam, Yagami made it home, where his parents and his younger brother was waiting. His sister wasn't out of school yet.
After fixing himself a ham sandwich, he went to his room upstairs and locked the door behind him. Then he turned on the TV and turned the channel to the local news.

"Earlier today the body of local resident 67 year old Anna Nicole Tamuchi was found floating on Sun River. Foul play is suspected, as the symbol of the notorious Csareo Yakuza was was carved on the back of the victim's neck."
Krazzy turned the TV off.
"Humans are *expletive*," he said out loud.
Then he turned to the strange book, which sat on his bed. He opened the book, but to his surprise all the pages were blank.
"What kind of sick joke is this?" He asked himself.
"I can assure you this is no joke."
Suddenly, sitting right next to Krazzy was...Airmax.

To be Continued...
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5/29/2014 8:14:01 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 5/29/2014 4:48:43 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Episode 1:

sounds awesome so far! Keep it up!
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5/29/2014 11:40:35 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
This was a very good read!
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

#LEARN TO SPEAK UP
#Cause I can
Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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5/30/2014 11:41:07 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 5/29/2014 11:40:35 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
This was a very good read!

Thank you.
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5/30/2014 12:33:23 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Crescendo, it's a good story. My only advice is that you take it in your own direction, so it isn't too much like the Anime series.

But it's honestly an entertaining story.
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5/30/2014 12:35:48 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 2:

Krazzy stared at the creepy looking intruder, his mouth wide open.
"Don't bother trying to alert your family to my presence," Airmax said. "I've chosen to reveal myself only to you. No one else can see me."
"Wh...who are you?" Krazzy asked, falling off his bed and onto the floor.
"I have entrusted you with a great gift," Airmax said. "The Death Note."
"You mean that book which I found on the grass at school, the one with the blank pages?"
"That's the one," Airmax said. "On first glance it appears to be a normal journal. But in reality, that book can be a weapon like no other; one that gives its user power over death itself."
"I don't understand," Krazzy said, standing up.
"Here's how it works," Airmax said. "If you write a person's name in that book,that person will die."
"Really?" Krazzy asked. "Just like that?"
"Well, it's a little bit more complicated than that," Airmax said. "When writing down the name of the person who you wish to kill, you must have a mental image of what that person looks like. Also, you should write down a time of death for that person. If you don't, then that person will die six minutes after the Death Note activates. It's also optional to write down a cause of death. If you don't, they'll die by a default heart attack. Simple, right?"
Krazzy nodded slowly. "So I have the power to kill anyone by just writing their name in that book?"
"Well, there are a few more rules. You see, I am part of a species of lifeform called a Shinigami. The Death Note's power is tied directly to my own. Therefore, it is impossible to use that Death Note to kill me. Also, using the Death Note even once will cause the user to lose his or her eternal soul."
Krazzy shrugged. As an atheist this didn't bother him too much. He figured that this power must've been created by advanced aliens. "I accept these terms of use."
Airmax smiled. "You won't regret it, Krazzy Player Yagami. Of course, one day I'll use the Death Note on you."
Then with a final laugh Airmax disappeared back into the mystical realm of the Senzu River, leaving Krazzy with a highly dangerous book. And so the game of the Death Note began..
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5/31/2014 6:12:08 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 3:

Sitting in his room alone, for five minutes Krazzy contemplated the power bestowed upon him. Should he use it, if it were to cost him his soul? Was the power even real, or was this whole ordeal an elaborate prank?
He then decided that if the power was real, he could and would use it to purge the world of evildoers.
"That's right," he said to himself out loud. "I will create a new, perfect world with the power of the Death Note and I shall become the God of the new world. I am...Kira!"

So, he got on the internet and looked up Interpol's most wanted criminals. At the top of the list was Abdul Hassan Potbelliedgeek, leader of the notorious Islamic terrorist group "Al-Zakir." Sure enough the list showed a picture of the man, so Krazzy had an image in his mind of what the terrorist looked like.
He opened the Death Note and took his clean pencil out of his backpack. Then he wrote:

Name: Abdul Hassan Potbelliedgeek
Time of Death: January 18, 2014, 5:03 PM
Cause of Death: Heart Attack

Then he wrote his name at the bottom of the page, as the signature which activated the Death Note. Upon completion of his signature the Death Note glowed orange for about two seconds.

He knew that in one minute and thirteen seconds, if the Death Note really worked, Interpol's most wanted man would be dead.
He then went downstairs to grab a snack.

Meanwhile, in a fortified compound on the Afghan-Pakistani border...

Abdul Hassan Potbelliedgeek was writing a letter to his second in command. Suddenly, his heart failed him. Being gripped with severe pain, he fell to the floor, unable to breathe. A minute later he was dead.

Meanwhile, in a mysterious observatory belonging to the United States government...

"Sir, shinigami activity has been detected along the Afghan-Pakistani border," a woman said.
The man in sunglasses flicked his small square lighter open and closed repeatedly. "So, they still come. Track it."
"Right away, sir," the woman said. "It's trail is fading, but it appears to be headed eastward, into the East Asian region."
"Sir, we've lost the signal," the other woman said.
"Hmm," the man said. "It seems this time the latest Death Note user lives in East Asia."
"What now, sir?" One of the two women asked.
"Now, we wait," the man said. "Under a new user that Shinigami will be sure to show up again somewhere else in the world. And we'll be ready."

He then walked out of the room, flicking his lighter open and closed. His name was Mikal, AKA "L," and it was his job to dispose of every Death Note and shinigami which showed its ugly face on the planet Earth.
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6/1/2014 3:00:53 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 4:

The day was January 19, 2014. It was only yesterday when Krazzy received the power of the Death Note from Airmax the Shinigami. Since then, the only person he had killed with it was Abdul Hassan Potbelliedgeek.

At 7:00 PM, Krazzy and his two siblings were brought to the fair. Krazzy's Death Note was in the car.
"So, how do you like the power I have given you?"
Krazzy turned around and there was Airmax.
"It's okay," Krazzy said. "I've only used it once."
Walking through the carnival, Airmax and Krazzy started talking. At a booth Krazzy ordered two candy apples on sticks. Then he sat down on a bench and gave Airmax one of the candy apples.
"Thanks," Airmax said, devouring the apple. "I'm still going to kill you one day, though."
"Yeah, whatever," Krazzy said. "I'm still wondering who to target next. Heck, I don't even know if it worked the first time. I haven't heard anything about a dead terrorist leader as of yet."
"Then test it out right here," Airmax said. "Go get the Death Note book out of the car and kill somebody here with it. Somebody who deserves to die."

Five minutes later Krazzy returned with the Death Note book in his hand. In his other hand was a sharpened pencil.
He looked around. After a few seconds he spotted two burly men with dragon tattoos on their arms. A clear giveaway that they were with the Csareo Syndicate, a deadly local Yakuza.
Krazzy walked up to them. "Excuse me, sirs, I see that you're with the Yakuza."
"Yeah? So what, kid?" One of them said rudely.
"May I have your autographs?" Krazzy asked.
Flattered, the one named Yay smiled. "Sure thing, kid. Do ya have anything for me to sign on?"
Krazzy opened his Death Note to the second page and handed Yay a pencil.
"Come on, man, we don't got no time for dis," the one named MD said.
"Dis'll only take a second," Yay said. Then he wrote his full name on the Death Note, unaware of what was going to happen next.
Krazzy smiled. "Thank you."
Then he walked off.

Sitting down on the bench next to Airmax, Krazzy completed the Death Note form:

Name: Yay Eightfourtwo Hagane
Time of Death: January 19, 2014, 7:25 PM
Cause of Death: Heart Attack

Then Krazzy signed his name at the bottom and the Death Note glowed orange for two seconds, showing that it had activated.
Then Krazzy ran to catch up with the two gangsters.

Watching from a short distance, Krazzy watched as Yay suddenly toppled over backwards, clutching his chest. A few moments later Yay was dead.
Satisfied that the Death Note really worked, Krazzy headed back to continue enjoying the fair.

Meanwhile, in a U.S. Government observatory...

"Sir, Shinigami activity has been detected," a woman said.
"Location: a local fair in Odaiba, Japan," the other woman said.
Mikal, AKA "L," flicked his lighter open and closed repeatedly, a habit of his. "Why does nearly everything involving interdimensional life forms have a center in that one Japanese city? Track it!"
"Sir, the signal has dissipated," the woman said. "Prior to the signal's dissipation the Shinigami did not leave the fair grounds."
"So somebody currently present at that carnival is our latest Death Note user," Mikal said, flicking his lighter open and closed. "At least we've learned where to look...Japan."

End of Episode
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6/1/2014 3:02:50 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
RlP YAY
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6/2/2014 1:56:31 PM
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Episode 5:

MD sat in the waiting room. Then he saw two men pass by, carrying the corpse of Fanath. The unlucky chap was Csareo's chief hitman, and he had failed in assassinating a certain political figure.
"What if that's how I'll end up?" MD thought. He knew that Csareo did not tolerate failure. But what had he failed at? He couldn't think of anything.
"Lord Csareo will see you now," Csareo's Secretary, Esocial, said.

Fidgeting nervously, MD entered Csareo's office. The room had traditional Japanese sliding doors. There were no chairs, as Csareo preferred to sit on the wooden floor. Csareo's ancestors had been Samurai, warriors of Feudal Japan. And Csareo was proud of his heritage.
Csareo was dressed in a kimono, with an old Japanese sword in an ornate scabbard.
"Man, yous wish ta see me?" MD said.
"Massive Dump Tategami," Csareo said slowly, amused for some reason. "My condolences for the loss of your sidekick."
"I do not know who could've possibly killed Yay," MD said.
"You mean, you don't know WHAT killed him," Csareo said. "You see, my mother once told me an old Japanese tale of creatures called Shinigami. Death gods. I used to not believe in them. I believed them to be nothing more than an old folk tale."
"And now?" MD asked.
"I have seen things happen to the men under my command," Csareo said. "Two months ago, ten of my men died at the exact same time. There were no traces of poison in their bodies, nor were there any wounds on them. In fact, the doctors listed the cause of death as a heart attack. Ten of my men died of a heart attack...all of them in less than a minute. So you see, now I do believe in Shinigami. That or an exceptionally skilled assassin. And now yet another one of my men drops dead. Why do the Death gods hate me so?"

Sitting at his computer, Krazzy looked up a list of Interpol's top ten criminals. Abdul Hassan Potbelliedgeek was still on the list, as the various world governments had yet to discover his death.
So, second on the list was Tahir Imanov, leader of a Chechen Bratva group.
So, Krazzy began to write.

Name: Tahir Mikhail Imanov
Time of Death: January 21, 2014, 6:31 PM
Cause of Death: Drowning

Meanwhile, in rural Chechnya...

Tahir Imanov stood by his swimming pool, gazing at the Russian beauty swimming.
"The water is great!" She said playfully.
Smiling, Imanov took off his shirt and jumped into the water.
Suddenly, he felt something grabbing at his leg, pulling him under the water.
"Tahir, darling, are you fooling with me? Because I'm not fooled by you pretending to drown."
But twenty seconds later Tahir Imanov was still in the water.
"Tahir?!" His ethnically Russian girlfriend shrieked frantically. "Tahir?!"
Then she got out of the water and ran to get help. But it was too late for Tahir Imanov.

"Sir, Shinigami activity detected in the Caucasus region," a woman said.
"Active the Yuggoth program," Mikal said, flicking his lighter open and closed.
"Sir, the signal has dissipated," the other woman said. "The Shinigami has escaped the Yuggoth program."
Moral, AKA "L," sighed. "It"s time we took action towards finding the Death Note's user."

Krazzy heard a door opening downstairs. He knew that his older sister, RoyalPaladin, was home.
He walked out of his room and went towards the stairway. RoyalPaladin was walking up the stairs.
"Out of my way, troll," his sister said, covering her right eye with her hand.
"RoyalPaladin, what happened?" Krazzy asked. "Did Thett do that to you?"
"It's none of your business, troll," his sister said, walking into her room and slamming the door behind her.

Looking out the window in the living room, Krazzy saw RoyalPaladin's boyfriend, Thett, about to drive off.
Angry, he headed for his room...So he could access his Death Note. He felt that this time there was someone worth killing.
But then he realized: he didn't know Thett's middle or last name. And even if he did, would it really be a good idea to kill his sister's boyfriend?
He sighed and put the Death Note under his desk. Then he decided to do his homework and watch TV later.

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6/3/2014 6:42:12 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 6:

Krazzy stared closely at his computer screen. The news had gotten out yesterday that Tahir Mikhail Imanov had died by drowning, confirming once and for all to Krazzy that the Death Note worked.
Now, the list of Interpol's top ten most wanted had been updated, with Tahir Imanov being taken off the list. Abdul Hassan Potbelliedgeek was still at the top of the list, as his death had yet to be discovered by anyone outside of Potbelliedgeek's terrorist network.
So, now second on that list was Juan Miguel Pablo, AKA "El Chupacabra," founder and leader of the infamous Chupacabra Cartel, which was involved in smuggling people across the US-Mexico border, drug dealing, prostitution, extortion, insurance fraud, assassinations, kidnappings, and jaywalking.
"Juan Pablo, you have failed this world," Krazzy said with a sinister smile.
Then he began to write:

Name: Juan Miguel Pablo
Time of Death: January 23, 2014, 6:15 PM
Cause of Death: Automobile Accident

Then he signed his name at the bottom...and the Death Note activated.

Meanwhile, in Mexico...

Juan Pablo was dining outdoors in his private villa. He heard it coming, but he didn't know what it was.
Suddenly, a truck came smashing through his walled garden, driven by a drunk American tourist.
Pablo only had time to shriek in horror before the truck hid him, killing him almost instantly.
Four hours later the world would hear of his Death.

Meanwhile, in a U.S. Government observatory...

"Sir, we have detected Shinigami activity in Mexico," a woman said.
Mikal flicked his lighter open and shut. "It won't get away this time. Activate the Yuggoth program!"
"Yes sir," the other woman said, pushing a button on her military-grade computer.

Moving quickly through the Senzu Dimension, Airmax looked behind him and saw it:
"That's Yuggoth?!" He exclaimed, still running.
Yuggoth, simply put, consisted of three bright balls of energy, together forming a rotating triangle. The three spheres were connected by cords of energy.
Airmax had heard of Yuggoth before. Since 2001 and having started in Japan, many of his kind had been killed by this weapon. The only way to survive its onslaught was to escape it. And that's exactly what Airmax planned on doing.
So, Airmax ran even faster.
After fifteen seconds he had escaped Yuggoth and he was almost back in Japan.

Suddenly Krazzy's little brother barged into Krazzy's room. "Mom wants to see you right away in the living room!"
Grassy went downstairs, where the whole household was gathered.
"It's grandmother," Krazzy's mother said. "She's getting worse. The doctors...they say, that she might pass away sometime in the next few days."
Krazzy and his younger brother were stunned. Even RoyalPaladin put down her iPhone and looked at her parents.
"We're going to go visit her tonight, so you kids get ready to go to the hospital," Krazzy's father said.

An hour later they arrived at the hospital. As they ascended up the floors in an elevator, Airmax stood beside Krazzy. Of course, only Krazzy could see or hear him.
"Why'd you bring your Death Note with you?" Airmax asked, grinning disturbingly.
"I've got an idea," Krazzy answered.
"Huh?" Crazy's father asked, looking at Krazzy.
"Nothing," Krazzy said. "I was just talking to myself."

Then they entered grandmother's room.
As his sick grandmother talked to her children and grandchildren, Krazzy stood in the back of the room. Holding the Death Note in one hand and a pencil in the other, he began to write:

Name: Sweet Tea Yagami
Time of Death: January 1, 2016, 10:00 PM
Cause of Death: Heart Attack while Sleeping

After signing his name at the bottom, which activated the Death Note, Krazzy smiled with satisfaction and closed the Death Note book.
If he was right, he had just given his grandmother another two years to live.

The next day...

Krazzy was woken the next day by his mother. She had watery eyes.
"Krazzy, grandmother died last night," she said. "Now, get ready for school."
Then she left the room.
"So, your idea apparently didn't work."
Sitting beside Krazzy was Airmax, grinning disturbingly, as usual.
Crazy then threw a punch at Airmax, but his first went through the Shinigami's head.
"Why didn't it work?" Krazzy asked angrily.
"Sorry, kid, but you mistake how the Death Note works," Airmax said. "The Death Note cannot be used to extend someone's life. If you write down your own name on a Death Note and state your time of death as being in a thousand years, you'd still die in a few decades from now. That's just the way the game works."
Krazzy sighed sadly.
"So, who do you plan on using the Death Note on next?" Airmax asked, changing the subject.
"I'll use it again on someone after school," Krazzy answered.

Then Airmax disappeared again, leaving Krazzy alone in his room.
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6/3/2014 6:48:41 PM
Posted: 2 years ago

Krazzy was woken the next day by his mother. She had watery eyes.
"Krazzy, grandmother died last night," she said. "Now, get ready for school."
Then she left the room.
"So, your idea apparently didn't work."
Sitting beside Krazzy was Airmax, grinning disturbingly, as usual.
Crazy then threw a punch at Airmax, but his first went through the Shinigami's head.
"Why didn't it work?" Krazzy asked angrily.
"Sorry, kid, but you mistake how the Death Note works," Airmax said. "The Death Note cannot be used to extend someone's life.

Poor Krazzy.... :(
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I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/3/2014 6:48:58 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Excellent as usual Bubba. Keep it up!
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6/3/2014 6:56:34 PM
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At 6/3/2014 6:48:58 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Excellent as usual Bubba. Keep it up!

Thank you. Did you recognize the DDO users who many of the characters are based on?
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6/3/2014 6:59:29 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/3/2014 6:56:34 PM, Crescendo wrote:
At 6/3/2014 6:48:58 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Excellent as usual Bubba. Keep it up!

Thank you. Did you recognize the DDO users who many of the characters are based on?

Yup! Lol! Massive, SweetTea, Mikal, JohnMaynardKeynes/Juan(something) etc...

Good idea. For my story, I'm warping all the usernames of my characters a little. XD

E.G. Endarkened- Darkened.
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"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/3/2014 8:08:49 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
"Lord Csareo will see you now," Csareo's Secretary, Esocial, said.

Just saw that.... Everyone makes me work for Jif. XD
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SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/5/2014 4:02:22 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 7:

Krazzy Player Yagami stepped inside his science classroom. Earlier today he had been presented with the news of his grandmother's death, along with the realization that a Death Note cannot be used to preserve life.

He sat down at his desk, right next to a new student.
"Hi, my name is Jonelle," she said, extending her hand for Krazzy to shake.
Krazzy shook Jonelle's hand real quick and then looked back at his desk. He had decided to bring the Death Note to school today. After all, there were plenty of jerks at his school.

A man who Krazzy didn't recognize entered the room.
"Good morning class," the man said. "Mr. Haguche has a dentist appointment scheduled, so I will be your substitute teacher today. You can call me Mr. Yuck Yuck Women. But if that's too long for you, I'd be okay with the initials YYW. I am from the United States of America, but obviously I know Japanese, as I am speaking to you students today."
He flipped over a drawing board, which had a list of names on it. The names on the list included Ayn Rand, Richard Dawkins, Karl Marx, etc.
"Can anybody tell me what all these people have in common?" Mr. YYW asked.
"They're all dead," someone answered.
Mr. YYW smiled. "No, not quite. Mr. Richard Dawkins is still very much alive. Anyone else?"
When he received no answer he turned over another drawing board to reveal the word "atheist."
"They were all atheists," Mr. YYW said. "The word 'atheist' comes from the Greek words 'a,' which means without, and 'Theos,' which means God. Simply put, an atheist is a person who does not believe in the existence of a God. Does anybody in this class believe in a god, or perhaps more than one God?"
About half of the students raised their hands.
"Well, that means half of this class consists of idiots who believe in primitive superstitions," Mr. YYW said.
Then he looked at the new student, Jonelle, who was sitting right next to Krazzy.
"You, miss...?" YYW asked.
"Jonelle Bon Misaki," she answered.
"I saw that you raised your hand, miss Misaki," Mr. YYW said. "Do you perhaps believe in Shinto?"
Jonelle Bon nodded.
"Well then, you are an idiot!" YYW shouted in her face. "You are yet another caveman who worships the sky bully. Do you also think the world is flat? DO YOU, YOU *expletive* HUH?! Right now, apologize to the whole class!"
"For what?" Jonelle asked, crying by this point.
"Apologize to the whole class because you and every other ignorant ape who worships the nonexistent sky bully continue to breed and bring more retarded offspring into this world!" YYW roared, right up in her face.
Then he lifted her out of her seat and threw her to the ground.
Then he staggered back to the front of her class.
"From now on, miss Jonelle will be referred to as 'she-ape,' because she insists on clinging to filthy, antiquated superstitions," YYW said. "Now, those of you who are not stupid, open your textbooks to page..."
Then he noticed that Jonelle was writing something.
"Hat is it?" YYW demanded angrily. "Are you passing notes in class, she-ape?"

Suddenly, YYW's face turned blue. He staggered back to the front of the classroom. He then fell to the floor, gasping for air. He clutched his chest, and then a minute later he was dead.

Twenty minutes later, the police were at the scene, investigating the mysterious death of Mr. Yuck Yuck Women. Krazzy stood outside the school, along with the other students.
"Airmax," Krazzy said angrily.
Seconds later, his creepy Shinigami acquaintance appeared.
"Airmax, did you kill that man?" Krazzy asked.
"Huh?" Airmax asked, confused. "I haven't reaped any souls today."
"I did."
Krazzy turned around. Standing there was...Jonelle Bon Misaki.

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6/5/2014 4:16:47 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 4:02:22 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Krazzy turned around. Standing there was...Jonelle Bon Misaki.

OH MY GOD!!!

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EPIC!!! I never suspected Jonbonbon do something like that!

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Have you ever watched Kaichou wa maid-sama?
Solonkr~
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which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/5/2014 4:28:27 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 4:16:47 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:02:22 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Krazzy turned around. Standing there was...Jonelle Bon Misaki.


OH MY GOD!!!

Reaction 1:
EPIC!!! I never suspected Jonbonbon do something like that!

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Have you ever watched Kaichou wa maid-sama?
No. What is that? Sounds like an anime title.
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6/5/2014 4:30:34 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 4:28:27 PM, Crescendo wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:16:47 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Reaction 2:
Have you ever watched Kaichou wa maid-sama?
No. What is that? Sounds like an anime title.

Yes it is. The girl's name is Ayuwaza Misaki.
Your last name for Jonbonbon caught my eye.

I actually just finished a debate today arguing who would make a better husband: the male protagonist from said anime or a DDO member, Kc1997.
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
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which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/5/2014 4:31:55 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 4:30:34 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:28:27 PM, Crescendo wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:16:47 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Reaction 2:
Have you ever watched Kaichou wa maid-sama?
No. What is that? Sounds like an anime title.

Yes it is. The girl's name is Ayuwaza Misaki.
Your last name for Jonbonbon caught my eye.

I actually just finished a debate today arguing who would make a better husband: the male protagonist from said anime or a DDO member, Kc1999.

I just used a random word which sounded Japanese.
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6/5/2014 4:32:55 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 4:31:55 PM, Crescendo wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:30:34 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:28:27 PM, Crescendo wrote:
At 6/5/2014 4:16:47 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
Reaction 2:
Have you ever watched Kaichou wa maid-sama?
No. What is that? Sounds like an anime title.

Yes it is. The girl's name is Ayuwaza Misaki.
Your last name for Jonbonbon caught my eye.

I actually just finished a debate today arguing who would make a better husband: the male protagonist from said anime or a DDO member, Kc1999.

I just used a random word which sounded Japanese.

Cool. Lol. I thought since this was based of Death Note that you might've seen it. It was a good anime (one of the two that I've seen XD)
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which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
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Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/5/2014 8:45:47 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 8:

There was a forest path right next to school. Grassy followed Jonelle inside.
On the path was a bench. Jonelle sat down on the bench.
"So that's what it feels like to use a Death Note, huh?" Jonelle asked.
"You mean, this is your first time?" Krazzy asked.
Jonelle nodded. "A shinigami, Ore Ele, appeared to me last He gave me a Death Note book and taught me how to use it."
"So how did you know that I'm a Death Note user?" Krazzy asked.
"I saw you at the carnival the other day," Jonelle said. "At the time I thought it was some strange kind of diary, but now I see that it was a Death Note book like mine."
Krazzy nodded. "Let's start over. Hi, I'm Krazzy Player Yagami. My shinigami is named Airmax."
"And I'm Jonelle Bon Misake, and as I said, my shinigami is Ore Ele."
They stared at each other in an awkward silence.
"Uh, what prevents either of us from writing the other person's name in the Death Note, now that we know each other's middle names?" Krazzy asked.
"How about we swear that we will never use the Death Note on each other?" Jonelle asked.
"Agreed," Krazzy said.
Then they shook hands on it.

They then walked back to the school property, where Krazzy's two nerdy friends, Romanii and Seventh Professor, were waiting.
"Where were you, man?" Romanii asked. "The police, they like, interrogated everyone here."
"Uh, I had to Pete and they didn't let me back in the school," Krazzy lied.
"You and this new girl?" Seventh Professor asked skeptically.
"I had to go too," Jonelle said.
That seemed to satisfy Romanii and Seventh Professor.
"So, uh, you two wanna play soccer with us?" Romanii asked.
Krazzy shrugged. "Sure."

Meanwhile, in a U.S. Government observatory...

"Sir, we've finished analyzing the data recovered," a woman said. "The shinigami trail, prior to dissipating, did not leave the schoolwork where the activity took place."
Mikal flicked his lighter open and closed. "Present me with a list of the student manifest. It has officially been confirmed that the latest Death Note user is a kid. And it's one of the students attending that class in Odaiba, Japan. That narrows it down to perhaps thirty people."
"Sir, what now?" The other woman asked.
"That's a good question indeed," Mikal said. "It's about time I visited Japan."
Then, with a final flicking of his lighter he left the room, chucking to himself.

Back home later that day, Krazzy stepped inside his house. Immediately his mother ran up to him.
"Your substitute teacher had a heart attack?" Krazzy's mother asked.
"Yes,"Krazzy said apathetically. "May I go to my room now?"
His mother sighed and nodded.
Krazzy then walked towards the stairs, passing by his sister RoyalPaladin, who was sitting on the couch texting.
"Hi Royal," Krazzy said. "How's Thett been treating you?"
"None of your business, troll," she said, not looking up from her phone.
But as Krazzy turned to go, he noticed a mark on her neck.

Locking the door behind him, he turned on the TV.
"Earlier today, security cameras have identified the robber of a local 7/11 as Massive Dump Tategami," the newswoman said. "The police have issued a reward for information leading to his capture."
Upon seeing the picture on the TV, Krazzy recognized him as the other Yakuza member at the fair a few days ago.
"Massive Dump, you have failed this city," Krazzy muttered with a grin.
He sat at his desk. He opened his Death Note book. He held his sharpened pencil in his hand. And then...he began to write.

Meanwhile, in a Japanese mansion...
Massive stood before Don Csareo. Sweet incense was burning in the room.
"You are on TV," Csareo said.
Massive chuckled nervously. "So I am."
"You were caught," Csareo said. "I do tolerate people who are caught. And your punishment shall be..."
Suddenly, Massive clutched his chest. He fell to his knees, unable to breathe. A minute later he was dead.
Csareo stood staring at his dead warrior. "So, the Shinigami declares war on me yet again, does he? So be it, for I shall fight back!"

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6/8/2014 2:04:39 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 9:

The date was January 26, 2014. A few days ago Krazzy had discovered that Jonelle Bon Misaki also possessed a Death Note book.
It was 6:15 PM. At Krazzy's house, Krazzy and Jonelle were doing some research.
"I think we should kill The Serb today," Krazzy said. "He's responsible for the deaths of nearly 30,000 Bosnian civilians during the Bosnian War. Also, he likes talking about the benefits of torture."
Jonelle nodded. "You've been doing this longer than I have. Go for it."
Krazzy opened his Death Note book and began writing:

Name: Milo "The Serb" Slovatlnik
Time of Death: January 26, 2014, 6:17 PM
Cause of Death: Heart Attack

Krazzy signed his name at the bottom and with an orange glow the Death Note activated.

Meanwhile, in a village in Serbia...

Milo Slovatlnik was singing "Dude Looks Like a Lady" in the shower. Suddenly, he clutched his chest in pain. A minute later he was dead.

Meanwhile, I'm a U.S. Government observatory...

"Shinigami activity detected," a woman said.
"Yes, but there's little we can do about it without Mikal's authorization to use the Yuggoth program," the other woman said. "I guess we'll just have to let this one go."

Mikal stepped foot inside the building. He looked around. The technology was a more archaic version of his organization's equipment.
This was the place where interdimensional activity crossing over into the human world was first detected by instruments, back in 1999. The Yuggoth program was developed in 2001, and it was first used on digital lifeforms which were crossing over into the human world and causing havoc. Back then the Yuggoth program was primitive, and it often did not work.
Finally, the organization once stationed here, a Japanese government sponsored organization, utilized its ultimate weapon in the fight against the paradimensional threat: Juggernaut. However, the nature of the Juggernaut program unintentionally weakened the boundaries of the two worlds, making it even easier for the threat to enter our world.
For their failures and high cost, this organization was formally disbanded in 2003. By this point the digital threat had passed.
However, the technology was preserved and maintained in the very building where the operations first took place. However, in 2004, in the interests of US national security, President Bush made an agreement with the Japanese, allowing the U.S. to copy this technology for use in U.S. Army bases. As the digital threat had largely passed, this technology was put to little use...at first.
But in 2006 the interdimensional detection equipment picked up signals coming from yet another dimension: the Shinigami Dimension. By 2009 the equipment had been recalibrated and altered to detect Shinigami activity in our world, for President Obama realized that now the Shinigami were the greatest security risk to humanity. This realization came from Light Yagami, AKA "Kira," a young Japanese serial killer who died in 2006. Since 2009 Mikal's organization had been in the business of tracking down and killing all Shinigami who showed their ugly faces in the human world, as well as retrieving and disposing of all Death Notes found in the human world, because these books were too dangerous even for the U.S. Government to be entrusted with.

Still, the older Japanese site alone contained the Juggernaut program, because the Japanese had refused to give the United States this devastating piece of technology.
That's why Mikal was here: he would resurrect the Juggernaut. With some new calibrations he would use it against the Shinigami, and therefore end this threat to humanity once and for all.
For this purpose he had assembled together many of the scientists involved with the former Japanese group, excluding its former leader.

"Anti-Shinigami Juggernaut program, trial run one," a Japanese woman in a strange visor said, from her mechanically raised platform.
The machine came to life.
"Juggernaut program at .05% power," the other woman in a visor said.
Mikal flicked his lighter open and closed. "Fire the weapon," he said in nearly flawless Japanese.

Meanwhile, Krazzy and Jonelle were sitting in Krazzy's room, watching TV. Suddenly they noticed something out the window.
"What is that tower of light coming from that building?" Krazzy asked.

"Forced bio-emergence in three, two, one," one of the two women in visors said. "Bio-emergence commencing."
From the ceiling in the nearby test room came red liquid, pouring upon the Japanese soldiers and scientists. Then a Shinigami emerged.
"Open fire!" Mikal ordered to the soldiers.
Then, twelve soldiers began unleashing their bullets upon the shinigami. It took about fifteen seconds, but the Shinigami dissipated into nothing.
"Test successful," one of the two women in visors said. "Forced bio-emergence successful. Shinigami translated to terrestrial particles. Translated Shinigami destroyed by soldiers."
Mikal smiled. "Perfect."
"Sir, before we try again we should have the red liquid analysed," the other woman in a visor said. "We don't know what it is."
Mikal nodded. "Make it so."

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6/10/2014 5:04:05 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Episode 10:

The date was February 1, 2014. Krazzy sat in his classroom, where Ms. Kamiya was going on about the difference between ionic and covalent compounds.
As of last night he had taken down every criminal on Interpol's top 10 most wanted list. He was feeling good about that. But now he'd have to find someone else to target. Life was short, and if there was life after death, using the Death Note ruined that for him. So he knew that he had to make the loss of his eternal soul worth it...through the ultimate campaign against crime worldwide.

Meanwhile, in an old building...

"Sir, an analysis of the red liquid has been completed," a woman wearing a visor said. "The lab was not able to identity the subject and as such they have declared it to be of extra-terrestrial origin as of two days ago, every scientist and soldier exposed to the substance is dead."
Mikal flicked his lighter open and closed, as he always did. "So, it seems the mystery substance is toxic. Most likely senzu water."
"Senzu water, sir?" The woman wearing a visor asked.
"The Senzu River, something out of your culture's mythology," Mikal said. "The realm of the Netherworld, where the souls of the departed go. I believe that the Shinigami are some kind of reaper species, entering our world to take the souls of the dead. It's reasonable to assume that they can kill people prior to their destined time of Death, and for some reason they're giving random humans Death Notes. So those humans can have shinigami power."
"Sir, with all due respect, you sound crazy," the woman in a visor said. "There is no Senzu River, and Shinigami is merely the official name for these unidentified extra-dimensional lifeforms."
"You may be right," Mikal said. "But either way, they've shown themselves to be a grave threat to the security of our world. It is our duty to exterminate them. It's us or them."
"I agree wholeheartedly, sir," the woman said. "But should we do so at the risk of contaminating our world with the deadly substance?"
"It'll be a small torrent," Mikal said. "It will not infect the entirety of Odaiba, much less the whole world. Now, we've waited long enough. Shall we began test run 2?"
"Yes sir," the woman said.
Then she sat down in her chair, which was then mechanically raised.
"Commence the test run," Mikal said.

While sitting in his class, he saw it again: the light coming from the tower. Curious, he stood up and walked towards the window.
"Krazzy Player Yagami, why are you out of your seat?" Ms. Kamiya demanded.
But the the other students began to notice it too, and one by one the students got up and looked out the window, each one wanting to get a close look. Finally, Ms. Kamiya herself looked out the window.
"What the *expletive* is that?" she asked, forgetting that she was in a classroom full of kids.

"Forced bio-emergence eminent in five, four, three, two..." the woman in a visor said. "Forced vio-emergence happening...now...sir, I cannot contain it! The bio-emergence is extending beyond this lab, no, rather this building!"
"Shut it down now!" Mikal ordered sharply.
The Juggernaut was shut down, and suddenly a downpour of red water descended to the ground, in a one block radius from the Hypnos Towers. Also, five shinigami bio-emerged outside.

Mikal ran towards the window and looked outside. Dozens of civilians were covered in the red liquid...and he didn't see the shinigami.
"My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened wide in shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE?!"
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6/11/2014 3:42:38 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/10/2014 5:04:05 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Episode 10:

The date was February 1, 2014. Krazzy sat in his classroom, where Ms. Kamiya was going on about the difference between ionic and covalent compounds.
As of last night he had taken down every criminal on Interpol's top 10 most wanted list. He was feeling good about that. But now he'd have to find someone else to target. Life was short, and if there was life after death, using the Death Note ruined that for him. So he knew that he had to make the loss of his eternal soul worth it...through the ultimate campaign against crime worldwide.

Meanwhile, in an old building...

"Sir, an analysis of the red liquid has been completed," a woman wearing a visor said. "The lab was not able to identity the subject and as such they have declared it to be of extra-terrestrial origin as of two days ago, every scientist and soldier exposed to the substance is dead."
Mikal flicked his lighter open and closed, as he always did. "So, it seems the mystery substance is toxic. Most likely senzu water."
"Senzu water, sir?" The woman wearing a visor asked.
"The Senzu River, something out of your culture's mythology," Mikal said. "The realm of the Netherworld, where the souls of the departed go. I believe that the Shinigami are some kind of reaper species, entering our world to take the souls of the dead. It's reasonable to assume that they can kill people prior to their destined time of Death, and for some reason they're giving random humans Death Notes. So those humans can have shinigami power."
"Sir, with all due respect, you sound crazy," the woman in a visor said. "There is no Senzu River, and Shinigami is merely the official name for these unidentified extra-dimensional lifeforms."
"You may be right," Mikal said. "But either way, they've shown themselves to be a grave threat to the security of our world. It is our duty to exterminate them. It's us or them."
"I agree wholeheartedly, sir," the woman said. "But should we do so at the risk of contaminating our world with the deadly substance?"
"It'll be a small torrent," Mikal said. "It will not infect the entirety of Odaiba, much less the whole world. Now, we've waited long enough. Shall we began test run 2?"
"Yes sir," the woman said.
Then she sat down in her chair, which was then mechanically raised.
"Commence the test run," Mikal said.

While sitting in his class, he saw it again: the light coming from the tower. Curious, he stood up and walked towards the window.
"Krazzy Player Yagami, why are you out of your seat?" Ms. Kamiya demanded.
But the the other students began to notice it too, and one by one the students got up and looked out the window, each one wanting to get a close look. Finally, Ms. Kamiya herself looked out the window.
"What the *expletive* is that?" she asked, forgetting that she was in a classroom full of kids.

"Forced bio-emergence eminent in five, four, three, two..." the woman in a visor said. "Forced vio-emergence happening...now...sir, I cannot contain it! The bio-emergence is extending beyond this lab, no, rather this building!"
"Shut it down now!" Mikal ordered sharply.
The Juggernaut was shut down, and suddenly a downpour of red water descended to the ground, in a one block radius from the Hypnos Towers. Also, five shinigami bio-emerged outside.

Mikal ran towards the window and looked outside. Dozens of civilians were covered in the red liquid...and he didn't see the shinigami.
"My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened wide in shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE?!"

You realize I am Pakistanii -__- :P Add me, add mee :P lolz
In any case you should become a write Cres, ""My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened widewith shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE"?!" This deserves the DDO Nobel Writing Prize Best Line Ever :P
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6/11/2014 3:49:24 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/11/2014 3:42:38 PM, Ajab wrote:
At 6/10/2014 5:04:05 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Episode 10:

The date was February 1, 2014. Krazzy sat in his classroom, where Ms. Kamiya was going on about the difference between ionic and covalent compounds.
As of last night he had taken down every criminal on Interpol's top 10 most wanted list. He was feeling good about that. But now he'd have to find someone else to target. Life was short, and if there was life after death, using the Death Note ruined that for him. So he knew that he had to make the loss of his eternal soul worth it...through the ultimate campaign against crime worldwide.

Meanwhile, in an old building...

"Sir, an analysis of the red liquid has been completed," a woman wearing a visor said. "The lab was not able to identity the subject and as such they have declared it to be of extra-terrestrial origin as of two days ago, every scientist and soldier exposed to the substance is dead."
Mikal flicked his lighter open and closed, as he always did. "So, it seems the mystery substance is toxic. Most likely senzu water."
"Senzu water, sir?" The woman wearing a visor asked.
"The Senzu River, something out of your culture's mythology," Mikal said. "The realm of the Netherworld, where the souls of the departed go. I believe that the Shinigami are some kind of reaper species, entering our world to take the souls of the dead. It's reasonable to assume that they can kill people prior to their destined time of Death, and for some reason they're giving random humans Death Notes. So those humans can have shinigami power."
"Sir, with all due respect, you sound crazy," the woman in a visor said. "There is no Senzu River, and Shinigami is merely the official name for these unidentified extra-dimensional lifeforms."
"You may be right," Mikal said. "But either way, they've shown themselves to be a grave threat to the security of our world. It is our duty to exterminate them. It's us or them."
"I agree wholeheartedly, sir," the woman said. "But should we do so at the risk of contaminating our world with the deadly substance?"
"It'll be a small torrent," Mikal said. "It will not infect the entirety of Odaiba, much less the whole world. Now, we've waited long enough. Shall we began test run 2?"
"Yes sir," the woman said.
Then she sat down in her chair, which was then mechanically raised.
"Commence the test run," Mikal said.

While sitting in his class, he saw it again: the light coming from the tower. Curious, he stood up and walked towards the window.
"Krazzy Player Yagami, why are you out of your seat?" Ms. Kamiya demanded.
But the the other students began to notice it too, and one by one the students got up and looked out the window, each one wanting to get a close look. Finally, Ms. Kamiya herself looked out the window.
"What the *expletive* is that?" she asked, forgetting that she was in a classroom full of kids.

"Forced bio-emergence eminent in five, four, three, two..." the woman in a visor said. "Forced vio-emergence happening...now...sir, I cannot contain it! The bio-emergence is extending beyond this lab, no, rather this building!"
"Shut it down now!" Mikal ordered sharply.
The Juggernaut was shut down, and suddenly a downpour of red water descended to the ground, in a one block radius from the Hypnos Towers. Also, five shinigami bio-emerged outside.

Mikal ran towards the window and looked outside. Dozens of civilians were covered in the red liquid...and he didn't see the shinigami.
"My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened wide in shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE?!"

You realize I am Pakistanii -__- :P Add me, add mee :P lolz
In any case you should become a write Cres, ""My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened widewith shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE"?!" This deserves the DDO Nobel Writing Prize Best Line Ever :P

Thanks, and I'll try to think of a role for you.
Yeah, Mikal had just exposed dozens of civilians to the deadly Senzu River water.
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6/11/2014 3:51:10 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/11/2014 3:49:24 PM, Crescendo wrote:
At 6/11/2014 3:42:38 PM, Ajab wrote:
At 6/10/2014 5:04:05 PM, Crescendo wrote:
Episode 10:

The date was February 1, 2014. Krazzy sat in his classroom, where Ms. Kamiya was going on about the difference between ionic and covalent compounds.
As of last night he had taken down every criminal on Interpol's top 10 most wanted list. He was feeling good about that. But now he'd have to find someone else to target. Life was short, and if there was life after death, using the Death Note ruined that for him. So he knew that he had to make the loss of his eternal soul worth it...through the ultimate campaign against crime worldwide.

Meanwhile, in an old building...

"Sir, an analysis of the red liquid has been completed," a woman wearing a visor said. "The lab was not able to identity the subject and as such they have declared it to be of extra-terrestrial origin as of two days ago, every scientist and soldier exposed to the substance is dead."
Mikal flicked his lighter open and closed, as he always did. "So, it seems the mystery substance is toxic. Most likely senzu water."
"Senzu water, sir?" The woman wearing a visor asked.
"The Senzu River, something out of your culture's mythology," Mikal said. "The realm of the Netherworld, where the souls of the departed go. I believe that the Shinigami are some kind of reaper species, entering our world to take the souls of the dead. It's reasonable to assume that they can kill people prior to their destined time of Death, and for some reason they're giving random humans Death Notes. So those humans can have shinigami power."
"Sir, with all due respect, you sound crazy," the woman in a visor said. "There is no Senzu River, and Shinigami is merely the official name for these unidentified extra-dimensional lifeforms."
"You may be right," Mikal said. "But either way, they've shown themselves to be a grave threat to the security of our world. It is our duty to exterminate them. It's us or them."
"I agree wholeheartedly, sir," the woman said. "But should we do so at the risk of contaminating our world with the deadly substance?"
"It'll be a small torrent," Mikal said. "It will not infect the entirety of Odaiba, much less the whole world. Now, we've waited long enough. Shall we began test run 2?"
"Yes sir," the woman said.
Then she sat down in her chair, which was then mechanically raised.
"Commence the test run," Mikal said.

While sitting in his class, he saw it again: the light coming from the tower. Curious, he stood up and walked towards the window.
"Krazzy Player Yagami, why are you out of your seat?" Ms. Kamiya demanded.
But the the other students began to notice it too, and one by one the students got up and looked out the window, each one wanting to get a close look. Finally, Ms. Kamiya herself looked out the window.
"What the *expletive* is that?" she asked, forgetting that she was in a classroom full of kids.

"Forced bio-emergence eminent in five, four, three, two..." the woman in a visor said. "Forced vio-emergence happening...now...sir, I cannot contain it! The bio-emergence is extending beyond this lab, no, rather this building!"
"Shut it down now!" Mikal ordered sharply.
The Juggernaut was shut down, and suddenly a downpour of red water descended to the ground, in a one block radius from the Hypnos Towers. Also, five shinigami bio-emerged outside.

Mikal ran towards the window and looked outside. Dozens of civilians were covered in the red liquid...and he didn't see the shinigami.
"My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened wide in shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE?!"

You realize I am Pakistanii -__- :P Add me, add mee :P lolz
In any case you should become a write Cres, ""My lord and savior Charles Darwin," Mikal said, his eyes opened widewith shock. "WHAT HAVE I DONE"?!" This deserves the DDO Nobel Writing Prize Best Line Ever :P

Thanks, and I'll try to think of a role for you.
Yeah, Mikal had just exposed dozens of civilians to the deadly Senzu River water.

Make me like a cool subtle sexy guy :P. In any case episode 6 was off the hook, it was amazing. :P Oi go read my poetry in my poetry debate and tell me what you think.
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