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1/22/2015 9:47:28 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Level VIII: The Dawn of Midnight // Part II

"Oh, that"s right. Terra lost her father when she was a child..."

Vicksan sat up and looked about the group.
There was almost thirty members sitting around him now. They'd gone from a small band to a real community.
"The forest..." Vicksan looked at it. It was cleaner and navigable. He was clearly tired, and trying to get his thoughts together. "We need to keep that up. Clear forests don't spawn creatures over level 30. And we'll need more wood. More iron as well."
"What for?" Warem asked.
"The town. We don't know how long we'll be here. We have to prepare for the long-term. Unless you want to live in a little village for months or even a year." Vicksan sat up. Warem didn't seem to disagree with him. "We need stone. Good for us, we have a cliff. We'll carve stone out from the right side to cut out and bend the cliff around the walls of the city, that way, we have less wall to build."
Everyone, much to Vicksan's shock, seemed excited. He thought they'd complain about it being unnecessary. Instead, they were excited to have a goal... To play the game while they're stuck in it... Vicksan was happy to see everyone smiling at each other over the new plans.

"The City of Midnight." Bsh1 seemed amused. He was fond of building a massive city. "There going to be a castle?"
Vicksan wanted one, but he paused and looked at people. He saw how they reacted to see how he should reply. They seemed interesting in knowing the answer, in a hopeful way. "No. A palace. As we grow, we'll just expand outwards. I don't want to have to tear things down to build them up better. We'll starting with all the best."
"Does everyone get the same sized home?" Sokol walked up and asked.
Vicksan thought a moment. "No. I want to give people a reason to be active. Everyone gets a simple town house, and if you want more, you have to build it yourself or play an important role in making the city better. Soldiers get a larger townhouse. That way, everyone is welcomed to stay, but those who work get a better house. Besides, I can't afford the time to build everyone a mansion." Vicksan noticed people were a little less enthusiastic, but they mostly agreed. It was their job if they wanted a bigger home unless they deserved it, and they understood that.

"Okay... So we all agree. Great." Vicksan looked at them all. "Then let's set up roles and get working."

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FOREST
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Mekaiel walked a while, then sat by a tree. He thought about the last time he went out cutting wood...
He thought for a long while. He could barely remember the bot, but the more he thought, the more it all came back to him...

"You'll take the throne... And you will..." He recalled the bot saying... "You can rule over it all. You were chosen to rule it all."

Mekaiel wasn't sure who would have chosen him, but he was interested in the idea. The only question was... How does he take over?
"Whatcha ya doin' there." Sasima peaked around the corner.
"Get away. You got off lucky last time." Mekaiel warned.
Sasima laughed.
"What do you want?" Mekaiel was aggravated with her still being there.
"I wanna talk. See... I need a way to convince Vicksan I can totally stay." She bent her knees down so she was at his level.
"He won't let you stay still? Good." Mekaiel closed his eyes to rest. "Why would even care?"
"I was in the forest last night" I am entirely intent on not getting kicked out of camp" Or Midnight or whatever. I"m lucky Vicksan forgot about me." She told him. He didn"t seem to care. "Hmm. What if..." She began. Mekaiel looked at her. "What if I help make you the leader?" She smirked.
"What?" Mekaiel looked at her oddly.
"What? Don"t pretend you don"t wanna be leader... It"s kind of obvious." Sasima explained. "I"m the only one that seems to notice you"re completely jealous of Vicksan being the leader" But then again, no one else notices you." She winked. She enjoyed getting that insult out.
"Hm." Mekaiel considered. "Then I'd have you kicked out." Mekaiel didn't seem interested.
"Hm. Maybe. Or you'll have to let me stay because I know you schemed to get the leader dethroned. That's treason. You'll have to keep me." She continued to smile. It was a creative way to ensure she stayed.
"..." Mekaiel thought. It was mutual... They would both succeed, and yet they would have each other by the neck. So long as neither pulled, it'd be a comfortable arrangement. Besides, this might work. Mekaiel needed to become King, and she was sly enough to help.

Mekaiel got up. "Fine. We'll work together. I'll take the throne, and you can stay. So... how do we do this?" Mekaiel asked her.
"Throne? I like the sound of that." She thought a moment, "Hm. I'm not sure. You'll have to think that one up." Her grinned grew ever more conniving.
Mekaiel thought a moment more. "I have a plan. First, I need to visit the quarry..."
Sasima listened as Mekaiel told her most of the plan. When he was done, she left, and he begin for the cliff edge.

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CAMP
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In the far edge of the camp, Vicksan was laying out ground work for the wall. He was putting down posts first. It helped distract him from something that had bothered him since he woke up"

"Very nice." He heard coming from in front of him. He looked up to see Airmax.
"Baramir..." Vicksan called out. "I mean. Airmax. Sorry."
Airmax just stared like he wasn't sure why Vicksan apologized. "You are doing good. Build this city, and protect everyone in it. You still have over 80 players to find though."
"I know... I'm not sure how locate them all." Vicksan replied.
"I'll help. Until then, listen. There are more factions here than you can see." Airmax barely moved. He just stood there in his position, talking. His body language was incredibly monotone. "Keep an eye open."
"Who do I need to look out for?" Vicksan was concerned.
"I don't know. But don't assume too much of anyone... The factions aren't always around you. One, I can confirm, isn't even human." Airmax noted shock and confusion on Vicksan's face. "Server 112b... You know what that means?" Airmax continued. Vicksan shook his head. "B means beta. A means alpha. This is the 112nd Beta server on a Mods computer."
"This is a beta server? So... A test server..." Vicksan was interested now.
"Yes. It's like any other. But it's not authorized. Moderator 10, Demeter, created it. I can't explain it's purpose, but be aware of everything out of place."
"What about voices?" Vicksan asked.
"Especially voices. Never listen to a body-less voice." Airmax seemed serious, more so then he normally did.
Vicksan didn't reply. He thought a moment about what he was told and what he had witnessed. Finally, he asked, "What's the odds of logging off?.."
"..." Airmax thought for a minute. "The Server isn't on a computer. It's on an animated cloud." Animated clouds were clouds that could run programs, including servers, unlike normal clouds, that could only store them for download.
"And?" Vicksan asked.
"When you enter the game, your mind travels a path to the server. It can only log out via the pre-destined path, as logging your mind out through another path could end up getting it lost." Airmax thought a moment more, "Well that connection is broken. That's as much as you can know. Just understand that this server is not home. Do not get comfortable. Do not accept anything that is out of place in the server. Your goal, in the end, is to not compromise the safety of everyone else."
Vicksan looked back at the camp. "But..." He looked back, but Airmax was gone. "Hmm... I see."

Vicksan returned to working. His mind lingered on things that bothered him a great deal. Mostly, his Mother, but now he had what Airmax said to think about. But he didn't want these things to distract him. Ultimately, he had a job to do...
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1/22/2015 9:48:04 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
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TOWN SQUARE
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Sasima was sitting around the fire, trying to sleep. She knew of most the plan, but not all of it. She also knew Mekaiel was hiding things" Like a weapon" She was, after all, in the forest at the time to see.
"Hey Sasima." Bookworm sat next to her. "Why you sitting here?"
"Um" Warmness?" Sasima sat a moment to ponder if that was a real word.
Bookworm laughed a bit. "What are you thinking about."
"Stuff."
"What kind of stuff?" Bookworm was swaying back and forth on the log they used for seats.
"The nothing kind." Sasima replied.
"Um.. uh" Um okay?" Bookworm was intrigued by Sasima"s attitude. "I"m 20, how old are you?" Bookworm tried for conversation.
"Old enough to know that"s not how you ask a question?" Sasima didn't answer her.
Bookworm sat and stared for a bit" "Clearly old enough to be on a period, too. I see." She muttered to herself.
Sasima sat up quickly and spoke, "What?" She stared at Bookworm.
Warem walked up. "You two need more wood?"
"One of us does, apparently." Bookworm muttered again. Sasima stared at her more.
"Uh"" Warem stepped back, and walked away quickly.
Sasima continued to stare" Thinking about it, the fire was getting low" Suddenly Sasima began laughing aggressively. Bookworm just watched. She assumed that perhaps Sasima suddenly found the joke funny.
"Don"t think I won"t kill you later." Sasima stopped and stared into the fire. It made her feel warmer.
"... So" You never did tell me your age?" Bookworm figured she ask again.
"I"m 17. Why?" Sasima tilted her head just enough to see Bookworm.
"Just curious" I noticed something about everyone here"" Bookworm looked around at everyone working. "We"ll all from St. Louis."
That1User was on the other side of the fire. "Hm" A Local Server. St. Louis gets it"s on haunted Local Server. Take that, Kansas City."
Bookworm smiled kindly at the comment.
"You don"t know me in real life, if that's what you're wondering. Odds are, we went to different schools." Sasima got up.
"Why"s that?" Bookworm was curious.
"Did you go to a prison school?" Sasima looked down at her.
"Um" A correctional school? No""
"Then we don"t know each other." Sasima started to walk away.
"One last thing"" Bookworm asked. "Where"d you learn Cursed Traption?"
"Um?" Sasima looked puzzled.
"I can see people"s attacks. I noticed that attack in your Command Prompt." Bookworm explained. "That"s a high level curse" You aren't a mage."
Sasima looked a bit troubled. She didn"t think someone like Bookworm would have the Command Scan ability. "I found it. That"s all." She turned and continued to leave. Bookworm knew she was lying. Cursed Traption was a level 50 spell" Or" An illegal Mod... When bound to a weapon, that weapon will bound you in place until the user let's you leave. At that point, she can kill you by snapping a finger.

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EDGE OF MIDNIGHT
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Vicksan was still placing posts, when suddenly, heard a loud noise coming from the far end of the camp. Near the quarry. "What?" Vicksan went to see.

At the Quarry, Vicksan saw everyone standing around. Paramix looked over and saw him.
"What happened?" Vicksan asked.
"That." Sokol pointed. Vicksan stopped and just stared... Everywhere. Hundreds of them. "User Entrapment's. All for me."
User Entrapment were hexes. Little sigils with a name written on it. If the user who's name is on the entrapment steps on it, it collapses and explodes.
"Why?... Why would someone want to kill another person here?" Emberly asked.
"I'm less concerned about that, and more concerned about why they want me dead THIS much." Sokol looked back at the hundreds of sigils. They all came from nowhere.

"Paramix. Who can put sigils like those down?" Vicksan turned to him.
"No one saw it happen. It was done from a distance. So only a powerful magic user, or a powerful dark item." Paramix replied.
Vicksan looked at them as well. Sigil after sigil after sigil. Along all the edge. Each one made to kill Sokol... And he remembered what Airmax said...

"There are more factions here than you can see."
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1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> http://www.debate.org...

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For the Audience:
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1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?
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1/22/2015 10:15:33 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

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For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?

WHERE THE ACTUAL FVCK DID I GO D:<
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1/22/2015 12:17:26 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 10:15:33 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?

WHERE THE ACTUAL FVCK DID I GO D:<

Your character type is hard to implement lol. Your characters the annoying kid type, so I have to find places to put him in where he's annoying and funny, without being actually annoying. He's in the next episode.
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1/22/2015 12:18:59 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 12:17:26 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 10:15:33 AM, RevNge wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?

WHERE THE ACTUAL FVCK DID I GO D:<

Your character type is hard to implement lol. Your characters the annoying kid type, so I have to find places to put him in where he's annoying and funny, without being actually annoying. He's in the next episode.

I mean, I'm not that annoying...well, fine.

Still, I haven't even met mah bro yet.
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1/22/2015 4:37:52 PM
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At 1/22/2015 4:22:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Excellent! I can't really say a whole lot because I've seen the next few episodes, but excellent!

You like the editions and edits I made?
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1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

Some hardcore scheming. Love the new teamwork.
2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

Ominous. So ominous I actually was scared for the characters.
What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?
The other characters. Where did they go? I would also like to see some deaths happen pretty soon too.

Love this chapter. Your prose is improving. And the tension is increasing. The thing I liked most was the Airmax scene and the Bookworm scene. Bookworm and Sasima are hillarious, I would love to see more of them together. Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

Some hardcore scheming. Love the new teamwork.
2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

Ominous. So ominous I actually was scared for the characters.

Gooood. What do you think of the not-human part?

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?
The other characters. Where did they go? I would also like to see some deaths happen pretty soon too.

They're there. You see them more in the next two chapters.

Love this chapter. Your prose is improving. And the tension is increasing. The thing I liked most was the Airmax scene and the Bookworm scene. Bookworm and Sasima are hillarious, I would love to see more of them together.

I actually just added that scene before posting. I did a lot of adding to make context for things I added in later chapters. lol.
What did you think of what Airmax said about the meaning of the Server'sname?

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.
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1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM
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At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

Some hardcore scheming. Love the new teamwork.
2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

Ominous. So ominous I actually was scared for the characters.

Gooood. What do you think of the not-human part?
Terrifying. I want things to go from bad to worse quick!

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?
The other characters. Where did they go? I would also like to see some deaths happen pretty soon too.

They're there. You see them more in the next two chapters.

Will I be in it?
Love this chapter. Your prose is improving. And the tension is increasing. The thing I liked most was the Airmax scene and the Bookworm scene. Bookworm and Sasima are hillarious, I would love to see more of them together.

I actually just added that scene before posting. I did a lot of adding to make context for things I added in later chapters. lol.
Please add more. They're very enjoyable.
What did you think of what Airmax said about the meaning of the Server'sname?
Not good at all. If the game is a beta alpha. . . There are going to be some serious bugs and game imbalance. Bad news for Vicksan and gang.

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.
He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.
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1/22/2015 6:03:20 PM
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At 1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

Some hardcore scheming. Love the new teamwork.
2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

Ominous. So ominous I actually was scared for the characters.

Gooood. What do you think of the not-human part?
Terrifying. I want things to go from bad to worse quick!

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?
The other characters. Where did they go? I would also like to see some deaths happen pretty soon too.

They're there. You see them more in the next two chapters.

Will I be in it?

Not until Chapter 12. I have the next 3 chapters pre-made. What do you want your character's class to be? And the Personality type?

Love this chapter. Your prose is improving. And the tension is increasing. The thing I liked most was the Airmax scene and the Bookworm scene. Bookworm and Sasima are hillarious, I would love to see more of them together.

I actually just added that scene before posting. I did a lot of adding to make context for things I added in later chapters. lol.

Please add more. They're very enjoyable.

Lol. will do.

What did you think of what Airmax said about the meaning of the Server's name?
Not good at all. If the game is a beta alpha. . . There are going to be some serious bugs and game imbalance. Bad news for Vicksan and gang.

Well the game is far completed. The server is a beta server, meaning it was made and used by Mod 10 for testing something.

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.

He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.

Lol really? How so? :)
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1/22/2015 7:46:41 PM
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At 1/22/2015 6:03:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part I . ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Dawn of Midnight // Part III ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Mekaiel and Sasima?

Some hardcore scheming. Love the new teamwork.
2 - What do you think of Airmax's message?

Ominous. So ominous I actually was scared for the characters.

Gooood. What do you think of the not-human part?
Terrifying. I want things to go from bad to worse quick!

What would you like to see in the next 5 chapters?
The other characters. Where did they go? I would also like to see some deaths happen pretty soon too.

They're there. You see them more in the next two chapters.

Will I be in it?

Not until Chapter 12. I have the next 3 chapters pre-made. What do you want your character's class to be? And the Personality type?

Any class. Does bot matter to me whether I am a noob or not. But I am very intuitive. The type that tries to build something new and useful but in the end something impractical or not so pretty. My personality is the quiet observant type. I also work better alone. The other thing is that I am mysterious. I'll 'know' stuff and tell people stuf in an ominous creepy way. But I would never tell them the full information.
Love this chapter. Your prose is improving. And the tension is increasing. The thing I liked most was the Airmax scene and the Bookworm scene. Bookworm and Sasima are hillarious, I would love to see more of them together.

I actually just added that scene before posting. I did a lot of adding to make context for things I added in later chapters. lol.

Please add more. They're very enjoyable.

Lol. will do.

What did you think of what Airmax said about the meaning of the Server's name?
Not good at all. If the game is a beta alpha. . . There are going to be some serious bugs and game imbalance. Bad news for Vicksan and gang.

Well the game is far completed. The server is a beta server, meaning it was made and used by Mod 10 for testing something.
I'll pretend I understood that.

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.

He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.

Lol really? How so? :)

He's hardworking and passionate. All he cares about is the game and he seems not to care about his own life. This type of characteristic is not common in most fiction. Perhaps appearing more often in manga. I find it intriguing.
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1/22/2015 7:50:26 PM
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At 1/22/2015 7:46:41 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 6:03:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:

Well the game is far completed. The server is a beta server, meaning it was made and used by Mod 10 for testing something.
I'll pretend I understood that.

The server is for testing something that wasn't authorized.


Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.

He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.

Lol really? How so? :)

He's hardworking and passionate. All he cares about is the game and he seems not to care about his own life. This type of characteristic is not common in most fiction. Perhaps appearing more often in manga. I find it intriguing.

Good :) Although the others don't trust him.
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1/22/2015 11:53:20 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 7:50:26 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 7:46:41 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 6:03:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:

Well the game is far completed. The server is a beta server, meaning it was made and used by Mod 10 for testing something.
I'll pretend I understood that.

The server is for testing something that wasn't authorized.

O.o

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.

He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.

Lol really? How so? :)

He's hardworking and passionate. All he cares about is the game and he seems not to care about his own life. This type of characteristic is not common in most fiction. Perhaps appearing more often in manga. I find it intriguing.

Good :) Although the others don't trust him.
And why's that? He seems like a nice guy. He risked his own life to save one person.
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1/22/2015 11:59:17 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 11:53:20 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 7:50:26 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 7:46:41 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 6:03:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:

Well the game is far completed. The server is a beta server, meaning it was made and used by Mod 10 for testing something.
I'll pretend I understood that.

The server is for testing something that wasn't authorized.

O.o

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.

He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.

Lol really? How so? :)

He's hardworking and passionate. All he cares about is the game and he seems not to care about his own life. This type of characteristic is not common in most fiction. Perhaps appearing more often in manga. I find it intriguing.

Good :) Although the others don't trust him.
And why's that? He seems like a nice guy. He risked his own life to save one person.

They think that he doesn't want to log out.

As for your character, I have just the guy for you.
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1/23/2015 1:23:27 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 11:59:17 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 11:53:20 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 7:50:26 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 7:46:41 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 6:03:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:47:27 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:38:56 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 5:23:53 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 1/22/2015 9:49:17 AM, donald.keller wrote:

Well the game is far completed. The server is a beta server, meaning it was made and used by Mod 10 for testing something.
I'll pretend I understood that.

The server is for testing something that wasn't authorized.

O.o

Vicksan is awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good... I was actually scared that Vicksan wouldn't be a likable character.

He's perhaps the most interesting character next to Sasima and Mikal.

Lol really? How so? :)

He's hardworking and passionate. All he cares about is the game and he seems not to care about his own life. This type of characteristic is not common in most fiction. Perhaps appearing more often in manga. I find it intriguing.

Good :) Although the others don't trust him.
And why's that? He seems like a nice guy. He risked his own life to save one person.

They think that he doesn't want to log out.

As for your character, I have just the guy for you.

Awesome :).
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1/23/2015 8:15:30 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
I miss when people get piece by piece commentary xD
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1/23/2015 8:23:38 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/22/2015 4:37:52 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:22:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Excellent! I can't really say a whole lot because I've seen the next few episodes, but excellent!

You like the editions and edits I made?

I do indeed.
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1/23/2015 6:06:16 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/23/2015 8:23:38 AM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:37:52 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:22:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Excellent! I can't really say a whole lot because I've seen the next few episodes, but excellent!

You like the editions and edits I made?

I do indeed.

Goooooood. What was your favorite part?
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1/23/2015 8:57:27 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/23/2015 6:06:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/23/2015 8:23:38 AM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:37:52 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:22:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Excellent! I can't really say a whole lot because I've seen the next few episodes, but excellent!

You like the editions and edits I made?

I do indeed.

Goooooood. What was your favorite part?

One of the editions you made - Sasima and Bookworm conversing.
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1/23/2015 9:00:06 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/23/2015 8:57:27 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 1/23/2015 6:06:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/23/2015 8:23:38 AM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:37:52 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:22:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Excellent! I can't really say a whole lot because I've seen the next few episodes, but excellent!

You like the editions and edits I made?

I do indeed.

Goooooood. What was your favorite part?

One of the editions you made - Sasima and Bookworm conversing.

Lol I'm so glad I added that. That was everyone's favorite so far. I think you know why I added it, too.

I had no plans for the scene. I knew I had made the right choice when I decided one Bookworm's period joke and "need wood" joke lol.
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1/23/2015 9:02:38 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/23/2015 9:00:06 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/23/2015 8:57:27 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 1/23/2015 6:06:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/23/2015 8:23:38 AM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:37:52 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 1/22/2015 4:22:05 PM, EndarkenedRationalist wrote:
Excellent! I can't really say a whole lot because I've seen the next few episodes, but excellent!

You like the editions and edits I made?

I do indeed.

Goooooood. What was your favorite part?

One of the editions you made - Sasima and Bookworm conversing.

*additions

Lol I'm so glad I added that. That was everyone's favorite so far. I think you know why I added it, too.

Yup.

I had no plans for the scene. I knew I had made the right choice when I decided one Bookworm's period joke and "need wood" joke lol.

xD
Well then.