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Interactive Story (Chapter 5)

Oreo222
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8/22/2015 9:47:26 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Sorry it took so long
Chapter 5

I let go of Koopin. He stumbled over the sixth guy.
"Smart move," said the sixth guy.
"Hey!" shouted Danielle, "what do you think you"re doing?!"
"I can"t just let them die!" I shouted back.
"We had the upper hand!" she replied, "We had two healthy captives, compared to their dying ones."
"Thanks a lot, love," replied Airmax.
"So-sorry," stammered Danielle, "I just-"
"Keeping it real?" he said.
"You lot shut it," said the sixth guy, who I still don"t know the name of. "You gonna do the same?"
"Don"t think so," said Thett.
Now knowing his friend was safe, the other guy with the gun (still don"t know the name) pointed it towards Danielle and Thett.
"I suppose we should introduce ourselves," said the sixth guy, "now"s as good a time as any."
"You start," said Danielle.
"Alright," he said, "My name"s UtherPenguin. You can call me Uther. That"s Innoman, the one on the floor there. Freedo"s the one unconscious. Koopin"s the fellow you let go. That"s TUF, the guy with the gun."
"Hard to miss," said Thett.
"Right, and that"s Bsh1, the guy you got captive."
"Fancy meeting you here," said Imabench.
"Now what about you? What are your names?" said Uther.
We went around in a circle:
"Airmax," said Airmax, groaning.
"The name"s Imabench," said Imabench.
"Danielle," said Danielle.
"My name"s Mikal," said Thett.
Danielle looked a bit surprised at the lie, but hid it quickly.
What should I do?
Say my name or lie
What are your thoughts on the story so far? Any improvements to the voting system I could make? I"d very much like feedback.

Here"s previous chapters:
1-http://www.debate.org...
2-http://www.debate.org...
3-http://www.debate.org...
4-http://www.debate.org...
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8/24/2015 11:15:49 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
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8/24/2015 8:50:29 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
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