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7/9/2016 9:11:22 PM
Posted: 4 months ago
A/N: I'm going to try and revive the fanfiction market here with an interactive story. I see you're doing something similar sharing parts of your book, MWonderWolf.

Basically, at the end of each chapter, a decision has to be made, a member of this site - the character - has to choose what to do. These people's luck and wit will be tested.

Lots of terrible things are going to happen. Lots of death. There's no title to the story - yet.

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Outside - Forest

"Get the f*ck out of here."

Patrick, a scared little boy, runs deeper into the woods.

A gunshot fires, sending birds flying.

(Sofia)

"See that guy over there, shoot him!"

Mykel, a 50 year old african-american mechanic, fires the sniper.

A bullet flies and hits Sofia in the shoulder. She screams and hides behind the car.

(Mykel)

"Goddamn it. Why'd they have to attack us on the road??"

Obsim, a man with combed hair, a bandage around the forehead, steps out from the cars. He has his hands raised.

(Obsim)

"Stop, stop! We'll give you our food. Just stop!"

(Sofia)

"What the f uck are you doing Obsi?! Get your a ss back here!"

Mykel holds her back.

(Mykel)

"We've got to move, now."

Sofia's close to tears.

(Sofia)

"You're going to leave my friend? You mother-"

(Mykel)

"Think about Patrick! The kid's got no parents! If, and I bloody mean if , we get ourselves killed, who's going to take care of him?"

Obsim walks with the bag of canned goods towards the cars strewn about on the road. A masked man, with white skin and green eyes, comes with military gear.

He punches Obsim.

Obsim doubles up and falls. The bag of goods escape the bag and roll on the ground. The man calls out for more men. They come in a group of four, sliding over the roofs of the cars, all with masks.

They hold both of Obsim's arms. The masked man hits Obsim in the face with the butt of his rifle. Blood flies out of his mouth.

200 feet away, Sofia and Mykel gasp.

(Sofia)

"Obsi, no.."

Mykel holds her gently.

(Mykel)

"We gotta go!"

(Obsim)

"Please! I just want to negotiate! We have more food back at camp. But we have men who'll kill you if you try anything."

The man takes out a long machete from its sheath.

(Obsim)

"Wait.. What are you going to do with that!? Hey wait!"

Sofia shakes Mykel.

(Sofia)

"Mykel! Shoot the guy in the f ucking face, use your sniper!"

(Mykel)

"*whispering* No ammo..."

Sofia's eyes go wide.

The man swings his blade and chops off one of Obsim's arm. He screams as blood sprouts from the arm, and collapses to the floor.

The man severs his head in one smooth motion. It rolls under a car.

Sofia cries, head sunk low. Mykel looks shamefully to the ground.

(Mykel)

"Sofia..."

(Sofia)

"I know. I'm coming."


Outside - Back at the camp

Kids run back and forth between tents. There is one pickup truck parked near the small waterfall that floods the river. Sofia and Mykel appear out of the cluster of trees.

JENNIFER rushes out from a tent to meet them. The others join in.

(Jennifer)

"What happened! Where's Obsi?"

Sofia holds back her tears and grits her teeth.

(Sofia)

"He's dead. My brother's dead because of me."

One of the kids speak up.

(Daisy)

"Is mister Obsi going to heaven? He was a nice man."

(Jennifer)

"Dear... Go back to the tent, go on now."

Jennifer hugs Sofia.

(Jennifer)

"It's not your fault. Whatever happened, it's not your fault."

(Sofia)

"Yes. Yes it was."

(Mykel)

"No, it was my fault. If I was a better shot..."

(Unknown)

"What's going on? Did you find some supplies?"

The group leader, HAYD, pushes through.

(Mykel)

"Some as shole caught us rummaging around the cars. Sofia's been hit. And Obsi, thinking he could convince them. He..."

(Hayd)

"Oh no... No, this is my fault. I should've never sent you guys out there during daylight. Did... Did they follow you back here?"

(Mykel)

"No, thankfully. We covered our tracks. We- Rose, where you going?"

Sofia walks away and slips into a tent.

Hayd touches Mykel's shoulder.

(Hayd)

"Leave her."

Jennifer speaks up.

(Jennifer)

"We need a ceremonial. Our fourth one."

INSIDE - tent

Sofia puts out her gun and cleans it with a cloth. She reloads it and turns the safety off.

Hayd's shadow can be seen from outside the tent.

(Hayd)

"Hey sorry to disturb you. Just wanted to see if everything was ok. Me and the others will set up a ceremonial. Just to.. Just to let you know."

Sofia wipes her tears away.

(Sofia)

"Yeah, coming. Just a sec."

Hayd pauses for a while.

(Hayd)

"Ok."

He walks away and the shadow disappears.

Sofia stares at her gun. Unsure of what to do.
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7/9/2016 9:11:52 PM
Posted: 4 months ago
I don't really know where to take the story from here. But I have to say I feel very very sorry for Obsim's death.

I'm not too sure if Ima's character deaths get as brutal. If it is too much, pls let me know.

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7/9/2016 10:03:13 PM
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At 7/9/2016 9:11:52 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
I don't really know where to take the story from here. But I have to say I feel very very sorry for Obsim's death.

I'm not too sure if Ima's character deaths get as brutal. If it is too much, pls let me know.

No one is safe. And even I'm scared to know it.

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7/9/2016 10:06:09 PM
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At 7/9/2016 9:11:22 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:

I tried this... It was called Legacy Earth. Everyone gave one-word responses and had nothing else to say about what I had written. :/
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7/9/2016 11:00:47 PM
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7/10/2016 3:13:57 PM
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At 7/9/2016 10:06:09 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 7/9/2016 9:11:22 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:

I tried this... It was called Legacy Earth. Everyone gave one-word responses and had nothing else to say about what I had written. :/
Yeah I get what you mean bro :/. It hurts to admit that. But at this point Idgaf because I only want to inspire others to begin fanfic writing again yaknow?
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7/10/2016 3:14:52 PM
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At 7/10/2016 12:06:49 PM, MattTheDreamer wrote:
Sounds fun.
Indeed it will be.
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7/10/2016 5:17:43 PM
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At 7/10/2016 12:06:49 PM, MattTheDreamer wrote:
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Sounds fun.
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7/10/2016 9:49:13 PM
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At 7/10/2016 5:17:43 PM, I_Wanna_Rawk wrote:
At 7/10/2016 12:06:49 PM, MattTheDreamer wrote:
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