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KingKobra
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1/12/2015 9:43:05 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood.
Look Under the bed, where the beast lurks at night.
Gentorev
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1/12/2015 4:07:51 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/12/2015 9:43:05 AM, KingKobra wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood.

Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Wylted
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1/12/2015 4:10:59 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/12/2015 4:07:51 PM, Gentorev wrote:
At 1/12/2015 9:43:05 AM, KingKobra wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood.

Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.

Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
gingerbread-man
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1/12/2015 4:51:25 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/12/2015 4:10:59 PM, Wylted wrote:
At 1/12/2015 4:07:51 PM, Gentorev wrote:
At 1/12/2015 9:43:05 AM, KingKobra wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood.

Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.

Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud

Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood
Not my gumdrop buttons!

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Gentorev
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1/13/2015 3:23:38 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/12/2015 4:51:25 PM, gingerbread-man wrote:
At 1/12/2015 4:10:59 PM, Wylted wrote:
At 1/12/2015 4:07:51 PM, Gentorev wrote:
At 1/12/2015 9:43:05 AM, KingKobra wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood.

Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.

Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud

Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

But the crystal meth could cause my death
And I aint keen on dying
Beginner
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1/13/2015 3:32:31 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

His daughter her head lay right by his side.
His wife her legs sprawl next to his thighs.
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Beginner
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1/13/2015 3:34:04 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 3:32:31 AM, Beginner wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

His daughter her head lay right by his side.
His wife her legs sprawl next to his thighs.

Since Gentorev posted first, ignore this one.
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Beginner
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1/13/2015 3:39:05 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

But the crystal meth could cause my death
And I aint keen on dying
His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.
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Beginner
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1/13/2015 3:41:57 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

But the crystal meth could cause my death
And I aint keen on dying
His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.

The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!
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Gentorev
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1/13/2015 6:05:38 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 3:41:57 AM, Beginner wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

But the crystal meth could cause my death
And I aint keen on dying
His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.

The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!

(Breath, blood) (Death, mud) (Sayeth, crud) (Meth, flood) (Death, dying) (Beth, "BLOOD?")
Crying, Sighing, Lying, Buying, Flying, Trying, all rhyme with dying,---- but Blood?

But the crystal meth could cause my death
And I aint keen on dying
His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter also------crying.

The Master will be angry---angry at us both
He only wants two sentences, So now we'll feel his wrath.
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1/13/2015 10:43:13 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 6:05:38 AM, Gentorev wrote:
At 1/13/2015 3:41:57 AM, Beginner wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

But the crystal meth could cause my death
And I aint keen on dying
His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.

The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!

(Breath, blood) (Death, mud) (Sayeth, crud) (Meth, flood) (Death, dying) (Beth, "BLOOD?")
Crying, Sighing, Lying, Buying, Flying, Trying, all rhyme with dying,---- but Blood?
Yes. There are poems in which a series of rhyming words are used and then are used again in the exact same order but in different context. So blood was intended. And Beth.. maybe I should've just used Breath, but Beth and Breath sound similar to me
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1/13/2015 11:49:20 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.
The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!
Did as my master sayeth:
Rid the world of crud.
Just another shot --ah-- of crystal meth,
while seated on this bloody flood.
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Gentorev
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1/13/2015 4:50:18 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 11:49:20 AM, Beginner wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.
The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!
Did as my master sayeth:
Rid the world of crud.
Just another shot --ah-- of crystal meth,
while seated on this bloody flood.

Four sentences----You've lost the plot
Did you hear the Master? Or just forgot?
Beginner
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1/13/2015 5:41:20 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 4:50:18 PM, Gentorev wrote:
At 1/13/2015 11:49:20 AM, Beginner wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.
The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!
Did as my master sayeth:
Rid the world of crud.
Just another shot --ah-- of crystal meth,
while seated on this bloody flood.

Four sentences----You've lost the plot
Did you hear the Master? Or just forgot?

I'll carve four more lines, and even if I'm caught
they'll still be there after I rot.
For sentences of death against which they valiantly fought,
they couldn't stop me, their death I have brought.
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Gentorev
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1/13/2015 7:04:02 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 5:41:20 PM, Beginner wrote:
At 1/13/2015 4:50:18 PM, Gentorev wrote:
At 1/13/2015 11:49:20 AM, Beginner wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath.
Covered in his blood
Celebrating the mongrels death
Sitting on his corpse here in the mud.
Doing as my master sayeth
Ridding the world of crud
Just need a hit of crystal meth
To wash me like a flood

His wife's there too, her name was Beth
Their daughter lie with them in a deep pool of blood.
The master will be happy, he asked for one death.
I gave him two more, both sunken in mud!
Did as my master sayeth:
Rid the world of crud.
Just another shot --ah-- of crystal meth,
while seated on this bloody flood.

Four sentences----You've lost the plot
Did you hear the Master? Or just forgot?



I'll carve four more lines, and even if I'm caught
they'll still be there after I rot.
For sentences of death against which they valiantly fought,
they couldn't stop me, their death I have brought.

Well, like I said, you've lost the plot
And turned this topic into rot
So now I'll leave it up to you
To shovel away your mountain of poo.
Beginner
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1/13/2015 7:05:57 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 7:04:02 PM, Gentorev wrote:
YOu know, this wasn't a poetry thing, it was only a narrative to being with, and lines arent sentences. I wrote 4 lines in one go, but lines 1&2 made up one sentence while lines 3&4 made up another. I think the first to blocs of the story were good. Half was written by me. I'm awesome. :D
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KingKobra
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1/13/2015 7:21:37 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 7:05:57 PM, Beginner wrote:
At 1/13/2015 7:04:02 PM, Gentorev wrote:
YOu know, this wasn't a poetry thing, it was only a narrative to being with, and lines arent sentences. I wrote 4 lines in one go, but lines 1&2 made up one sentence while lines 3&4 made up another. I think the first to blocs of the story were good. Half was written by me. I'm awesome. :D

Lol I noticed xD I think it came out pretty good shall we start another?
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Beginner
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1/13/2015 7:24:05 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 7:21:37 PM, KingKobra wrote:
At 1/13/2015 7:05:57 PM, Beginner wrote:
At 1/13/2015 7:04:02 PM, Gentorev wrote:
YOu know, this wasn't a poetry thing, it was only a narrative to being with, and lines arent sentences. I wrote 4 lines in one go, but lines 1&2 made up one sentence while lines 3&4 made up another. I think the first to blocs of the story were good. Half was written by me. I'm awesome. :D

Lol I noticed xD I think it came out pretty good shall we start another?

Yes. Let's.
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Gentorev
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1/13/2015 7:29:04 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/13/2015 7:05:57 PM, Beginner wrote:
At 1/13/2015 7:04:02 PM, Gentorev wrote:
YOu know, this wasn't a poetry thing, it was only a narrative to being with, and lines arent sentences. I wrote 4 lines in one go, but lines 1&2 made up one sentence while lines 3&4 made up another. I think the first to blocs of the story were good. Half was written by me. I'm awesome. :D

Post #16 was not written by Gentorev, but by Beginner, who spelt "BEGIN" as "BEING."
hannah_is_insane
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1/23/2015 11:17:02 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/12/2015 9:43:05 AM, KingKobra wrote:
Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood.

Here I am, whiskey on my breath. Covered in his blood, as I look down I see the knife I used to slash open his neck. I looked over at his dying corpse, still spitting black and red blood from his pale neck. I stood up, dropped the knife and slowly walked into the bathroom leaving a trail of bloody footprints behind. I stared into the mirror, at my pale cold face. I moved my black raven hair away from my eyes and began to wash it gently with a wet towel.

(Sorry couldn't listen to the 2 sentence thing).
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